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Reviewer: LadyGrelka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 3:33 AM Title: My Turn

Wonderful, I not only liked your character development but the story as a whole was was wonderful. And damn, but possessive Carlisle is sexy as hell.  Very well written story, and on a side note I don't supose that you are planning to take your talent into the Aro/Bella world do you? I would love to see more story's with that pairing, and I just have a feeling that you would do a great job, that's not to say I am not a huge Carlisle/Bella fan, because I am, but I do have an obsession with Aro as well as Carlisle lol.

Reviewer: Merina Green Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2012 3:41 AM Title: Presents

I enjoyed that game so much!  A great variation on "twenty questions"! I've never seen it done so well, or with such good questions-  they really revealed a lot about your Cullens.

 

Also, my Father in Law was a Dr.   He once told us he could write an entire book called "Things I have Pulled out of People's Asses" - and he's always been a doctor in Small Town America!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 8:15 AM Title: From Pain to Pleasure

SIMPLY WONDERFUL!

Reviewer: azwhalestail Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 1:29 AM Title: Friends

more please.  don't make us wait to long.

Reviewer: agipe Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:16 PM Title: Blood

Hmm. I am def curious! Looking forward to seeing where this story goes! 

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 12:08 PM Title: All I Really Want

An interesting turn of events. 

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 2:34 PM Title: All I Really Want

Finally, they get Edward out of their lives.  LOL

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2012 3:14 AM Title: Meeting

Some powerful shut at the end.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2012 3:13 PM Title: Meeting

This chapter left me speechless!  WOW I can't say I've ever read anything like it.  Please update soon!!!!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2012 1:49 PM Title: Meeting

About time that Carlisle did something punish Edward. Thank you for the update. I am enjoying your story.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2012 1:21 PM Title: Restraint

You did an amazing job keeping with everyone's personallity in this chapter.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2012 1:39 PM Title: Restraint

Wow! That was different, emotional ... Need to digest.

Edward by the way is toast.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2012 7:22 AM Title: Restraint

Edward struggles in two ways. One he wants to control things. Two he wants Bella. He will use the means at hand to get the job done.  That is the hole school discussion, his ideas about her life.  He has to understand that in a family you have to abide by each person's own wishes for their lives as adults.

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2012 4:41 AM Title: Blood

Well, this is a good beginning to the story!  I can't wait to see what happens next!  I already want to smack Edward around a bit :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 5:34 AM Title: Water

sigh

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 2:22 AM Title: Water

That damn Vicky is getting on my nerves now.  LOL

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 14

Edward wants what he ruined. He also wants what Carlisle has.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2012 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 14

He is dangerous to Bella no matter how you look at it.  At least for now anyway.

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 14

could we just hand Rose a torch right about now?

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2012 4:19 AM Title: Void

Every one of her parents killed. How awfull. And  to have Edward, better know as Chester the Molester to comfort her.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2012 1:34 AM Title: Void

Damn that was to short!  LOL



Author's Response:

Ha!  I actually added about 3000 words when I rewrote it.  I guess I should have added another couple thousand.  Seriously, I understand,  I think the same thing when I'm reading someone else's story.  When I'm writing my own, I feel like it's really long when it's only a few thousand words.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 11:16 PM Title: Confessions

Edward needs to be whipped with a wet noddle for acting like the baby that he is.  I know much can't hurt him, but you get my sentiment!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2012 1:25 AM Title: Dark

O.M.G., what have Edward done.  Carlise is going to rip his dead heart out.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2012 9:26 PM Title: Dark

Excellent chapter ... I have a strange suspicion that Carlisle is going to go ballistic when Edward confesses.

 

Hope you are feeling better.

Reviewer: scareDcat Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2012 10:49 AM Title: Dark

Oh Edward-what did you do?

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 6:30 PM Title: Pain

THAT WAS DIFFERENT.  I LOVE ME SOME EM.  lol

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 5:20 PM Title: Presents

One of the best chapters and gift exchange I've ever read or heard of!!!!!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 3:41 PM Title: Pain

Excellent ... And a unique gift ...refreshing.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 7:06 AM Title: Presents

What a fantastic round of Q&A. The Qs were well planned and theAs wonderful. I especially loved Carlisle's protection of Bella. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  I added the protection at the last minute.  It seemed fitting.  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 1:20 AM Title: Presents

I did like this chapter.... I really did. You did well.  Now I am glad you are moving Carlisle and Bella toward each other. Lets get this show on the road!

 

Edward is 17 in his emotional state and was raised with the silver spoon up his ass.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your continued support of my story.  Bella and Carlisle have some more obstacles to overcome, but be patient.  I do plan on getting them there.

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 1:02 AM Title: Presents

Really unique chapter.  I have never heard of this tradition, but it helped to understand the characters so much!



Author's Response:

I actually just made this tradition up.  I had some things that the characters needed to say to one another and this seemed like a good way to get all the stuff said.  I also had fun coming up with Emmett's questions.  Bella's so innocent, but Emmett has hardly any inhibitions.  I liked his questions and answers.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2011 12:46 PM Title: Pictures

love Esme

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2011 12:45 PM Title: Revelations

good riddence Edward and don't come back until you are off you maniacal jaunt!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2011 12:44 PM Title: Truth

GIRL POWER!!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2011 12:43 PM Title: Liar

great chapter

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2011 12:43 PM Title: Shattered

 I never, ever, EVER that I would ever say THIS about EDWARD CULLEN - but WHAT A PRICK!!!!

(enjoying the story)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2011 12:39 PM Title: Blood

I really enjoyed this chapter

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2011 3:35 AM Title: Watching

Okay moving right along her. Carlisle and Bella.  Edward wants to control Bella. He is attracted to her. He is so full of himself, he can not admit to anything truthfully.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2011 3:15 AM Title: Revelations

my 2 CENTS... I think that while the ass hole is gone. Bella needs to be changed. Why I don't care what you come up with an accident, illness etc. She and Carlisle fall in love and that alone willl burn Ed up!  Bella will be beautiful and no available and that will cork him. HA

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2011 2:57 AM Title: Truth

He probably just dazzled her before he raped her.

Reviewer: newmommyak Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2011 12:27 AM Title: Watching

Really enjoying the story so far!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2011 8:14 PM Title: Blood

it seems so innocent but i don't think it will be very soon.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2011 1:56 AM Title: Truth

O.M.G.,  I hoped he didn't, but I guess he did!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2011 1:31 AM Title: Liar

Hum, Edward seems to be a big jerk with his family as well.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2011 12:59 AM Title: Shattered

You are right Edward is a bastard with a capital B.  I hope he does redeem himself later in this story.



Author's Response:

Don't want to give anything away, but I'm of the opinion that all people (vampires) are capable of change and redemption.  I'm not saying that he won't have a hard time, but don't lose hope for him.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2011 12:50 AM Title: Blood

This is interesting so far.  I do like E&B, but I am starting to like B&C as well.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2011 8:01 AM Title: Truth

Just finding your story. It's different and I'm intrigued. I look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it,

Reviewer: lindsaywin Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 10:43 PM Title: Liar

really nic story so far-corker of a break up letter



Author's Response:

Thank you, and yes, the break-up letter was horrible.  I needed it to be much more horrible than original Edward's break-up in New Moon for where I'm going with this story.

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 3:13 AM Title: Blood

I think it sounds like a great story!  Bella and Carlisle are an interesting pairing! Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I like to play around with the characters, but it's purely for my own enjoyment.  I posted it in case others might like it as well.  I'm glad that you do.

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