Date: 12 Jun 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Making babies is supposed to be fun!
The family dynamic in this story is a never-ending delight! This baby will truly be a blessed event if the Cullens have anything to say about it!
Date: 12 Jun 2013 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 37 - a new kind of normal
That last scene at the Purple Cow was a riot! Poor Bella, I didn't know whether to laugh or cry for her! She is about to have another meltdown, it looks like, thinking Edward won't want a baby now! Bree's little contretemps was kind of a surprise, so there's lots of drama going on! Life in Hope Springs is never dull and boring, that's for sure!
Date: 11 Jun 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 36 - “Going to the chapel and we’re…” (Or are we?)
The wedding was wonderful, but the honeymoon was out of this world! You absolutely outdid yourself and I loved every bit of it!
Date: 11 Jun 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Finding the way back
I'm with you on that feeling about anonimous flaming, it's just cowardly! The Cullen men are who they are and you kind of have to love them for it, even if it drives you a bit crazy! I really liked that Edward and Bella went to Craig and Betty and talked things out. That was the smart thing to do, as was the torrid night they had in Burlington!
Date: 11 Jun 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 34
What a huge mess! You nearly gave me a heart attack with the whole Erin thing!! I hope to hell Bella loves Edward enough to forgive him for all the agony this drug sting has caused! Eri is an evil little bitch and almost got what she wanted!
Date: 11 Jun 2013 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Making Plans
The whole process is fascinating to see unfold, and I can't wait to read more! Bella still has some insecurities but is getting better all the time. It kind of shocked her to learn how well off the Cullens really are and what they wanted to contribute to the wedding, but I'm glad that was straightened out. It sounds like it will all work out pretty well! Boy, are they all going to be a busy bunch!
Date: 11 Jun 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Absence makes the heart grow fonder?
I'm glad that Bella is ready to look through her father's stuff and see who she came from. I'm kind of excited to see what's there myself!
Date: 11 Jun 2013 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Birthday wishes
What a fabulous way to propose! It was even great that the whole bunch showed up to share in the joyous occaision! It was so cute that Edward was so nervous, I loved it all!
Date: 11 Jun 2013 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Moving on - Enough is enough!!
Talk about making your life unnecessarily difficult! Edward is the master at that, for sure! It turns out Carlisle had the answer to fixing things, or letting them fix themselves. This family is is just flat amazing, the way they look out for each other.
Date: 11 Jun 2013 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Time flies and then it's Christmas again
The Cullens should have believed Bella that Esme would be okay when she heard the story of Mark Watson-Smythe. I must admit I was proud of the guys for beating the crap out of him! I'm glad Esme and Carlisle are ome again and Christmas was great, too! Kind of sad that Edward put greatgrandmother's ring away until a better time!
Date: 11 Jun 2013 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Here comes trouble....
Poor Bella, I swear she can't get a break sometimes! Do you know how thrilled I am that Roscoe chewed hell out of that pig professor? Thank God everyone got to her in time, and she defended herself to boot! I only wish she didn't feel like all this crap was her fault! It was heartbreaking for Edward to have to doctor his woman like that and care for her hurts!
Date: 11 Jun 2013 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 27
I think it's about time Bella decided to do something about Mark, and the timing couldn't be better for the Arizona cop to showup! Combined with Edward, Jasper and Emmet, plus her friends from school, the professor is really in for it! I absolutely cannot stand people like him, arrogant bastard that he is!
Date: 11 Jun 2013 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Mama said there'll be days like this...
If Dash has noticed Mark being an idiot, then maybe Bella's not wrong to be uneasy about him. I kind of wish she would tell Edward about how Mark makes her feel. The girl has enough on her plate with school and worries about Carlisle and Esme being away for three months. Besides, it would give Edward pleasure to break that guy's nose, just for pestering his woman!
Date: 11 Jun 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Moving on
The trip to Montreal sounded great and made me wish I could have gone with them all! I'm worried why Bella has started having nightmares and hope it's something that Edward or Jasper can help her with! I did briefly wonder if Mark's persistence had any bearing on those bad dreams. I have an uneasy feeling he's going to be a problem sometime!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Honour thy father
I can kind of see why this chapter would have been tough to write, it was bit tough to read! The ceremony was nearly overwhelming, but the history the guys shared with Bella was just right! I loved when Bella straightened them all out about Edward, enjoyed that almost as much as he did! This whole time in Phoenix was amazing as well as necessary.
Date: 10 Jun 2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Summer Time
I just knew Charlies old friends and colleagues would be wonderful guys! It sure scared Bella to think about going back to Arizona but I'll bet she's glad now she did! It sounds like she and Edward are having a great summer, by the way!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Easter Eggs and New Faces
I can see the improvements in their relationship all the time, slow and steady though they are! The wonderful thing is that her love for Edward gives Bella the courage to overcome so many things! I can see why this story was nominated for an award, it's just wonderful!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!
I have a hunch that now they know how good they are together, it will be much more difficult to be apart! The three days, and nights, were wonderful!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?
I hope everyone else felt like this chapter was well worth the wait, because I sure did! These two are so in love with each other that it just rolled off them and right onto Jasper and Alice, and Emmett and Rosalie! Everybody benefits from the powerful feelings between Edward and his Bella!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons
I figured that English professor was trying to get closer to Bella, but Edward rather pointedly marked his territory! Can't wait for them to be together at Stowe! Bella needs to also realize just how amazing her academic career has been so far!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."
I have to ask even after all this time, did you ever get back your stolen car?
This was a really good chapter, since it not only was their first Christmas together, but a big step in their relationship! Maybe now Rose and Alice will quit sticking their noses in to Bella and Edward's business!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 17 - First dates and Ice skates
I get such a kick out of those two talking about everything! Picturing the skating is good for a few chuckles too!
Date: 09 Jun 2013 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Mistletoe and Bar fights
Well, thank the dear Lord Edward saw what was happening and went after Bella and Kyle! It's a wonder he didn't kill the little bastard for drugging Bella and especially what he planned to do to her! That would have been unspeakably cruel, considering her history! Lucky Edward is so attuned to her and was watching!
Date: 09 Jun 2013 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 15 - One step forward...
Ther's a tiny part of me that wants Edward's family to butt out! Where do they all get off telling him and Bella what to do and how to do it? At the same time, it's kind of cute that everyone cares enough to interfere! I guess they only want them to be happy.
Date: 09 Jun 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 14 - 'On the first day of Christmas...'
This will only be a total diaster if Edward fails to explain his reasons and they both fail to talk frankly to each other.
Date: 09 Jun 2013 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Time waits for no man (or woman)
I'm so impressed that Edward and Bella are both doing the right thing for themselves and for each other. It takes a lot to deny yourself instant gratification and do what needs to be done , instead. Hopefully when they get back together, they will be on the right path!
Date: 09 Jun 2013 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Revelations and Goodbyes
I can certainly sympathize with your tears while writing this chapter, hell, me too! They can't either one help their feelings, but the timing is terrible, so I guess they just have to hurt for a while, as shitty as that is!
Date: 09 Jun 2013 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 11 - TO SIR WITH LOVE?
Okay, I'm dying of curiosity here! What did Emmett just lift out of that box that shocked Bella into saying a cuss-word in front of Esme?
Date: 09 Jun 2013 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 10 - New Beginnings and First Dates
What a wonderful opportunityand it looks like Bella will avail herself of it, too. That author's note didn't sound too encouraging, however. I really don't want Bella to suffer greatly, again, I think she's done quite enough of that already! Let the girl have some happiness in her short life, already!
Date: 09 Jun 2013 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
I hate that Bella had to go through that, but at least she had Edward to rely on and Dr. Kebi to help. It must have been fate that Rosalie was there to empathize with her! It's almost like the baby wasn't meant to be, though Bella will mourn it anyway.It was great that she and Edward talked it all out, too.
Date: 09 Jun 2013 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
Just when she was about to draw a peaceful breath, it looks like Bella is losing this baby! This is sure to change a few things, I hope not in a horrible way! Reading some of the stuff that happened in her short life, it's no wonder Bella feels a hundred years old sometimes!
Date: 09 Jun 2013 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 7
No wonder Carlisle was furious with Jasper, that was a really bad time to ask those questions of Bella. She's almost come clean about herself, all but the baby. She still believes it would be taken from her so she has to guard it fiercely!
Date: 09 Jun 2013 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 6
It must be pretty obvious if his family notices how taken with Bella, Edward seems to be! The poor girl is still about half afraid of everyone and everything. I'm really hoping the Cullens can help her learn to trust and find peace in her life!
Date: 09 Jun 2013 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
I know this could get a bit hairier, but just what Bella has let slip, what she's remembered so far is enough to make your heart hurt! This poor kid has never had a break in her life and she sure could use one. If she can just let the Cullens help her, I'm sure she would be happier!
Date: 09 Jun 2013 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 4
Those big brown eyes have hooked him, it seems, plus that bottom lip. Edward feels his fate coming down the road to get him, I think. Can't wait to see what Bella thinks of Edward, once she gets to know him that is.
Date: 09 Jun 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Are we there yet?
Yes indeed, I can see it now, this girl is going to cause some tears to fall from my eyes before this story comes to an end!
Date: 09 Jun 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S
I like the Cullens already, even judgemental Edward, who from the sound of it should not judge! Love his house, especially that bath of his!
Date: 09 Jun 2013 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
It's a sad thing that there are a lot of Bellas in this world, throw-aways, never had a decent break in their lives, kids. You not only have my attention, but a little tug on a heartstring or two, so I'm looking forward to the trip to Hope Springs!
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
That was such a beautiful story, I laughed and cried through
most of the story. You are such a great writer, thank you
for sharing this story with everyone!
Melissa
Date: 29 Apr 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
I loved it, I cheated and waited till it was finished!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2013 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 10 - New Beginnings and First Dates
Awesome story. Most chapters I have tears in my eyes, a good cry.
This is written very well. Good job.
Date: 13 Apr 2013 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
Great first chapter, really draws me in.
Date: 02 Apr 2013 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
AMAZING!!!!! I absolutely LOVED this story! So beautiful! Thank you for sharing it with us.
Date: 27 Mar 2013 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
Hi,
I just started reading this story.
Well, what do I say?
Chpter one - wow , tough subject you chose. So much potential, so much trouble, so many things unspoken, but what we know is heavy stuff.
What bothers me a bit - I'm german, so english is not my first language and even though I understand it quite well, sometimes I have to look words or phrases up to get the meaning. Sadly, in this first chapter there were quite a lot of mistakes, like some words double, some missing, so I had a hard time reading it, what took the "flow" of the story out.
I did read some chapters of people like us, and did not have these problems in that story, so I will stick with it and hope the next chapter is easier to read for me.
So, Bella is 18 and pregnant, Edward is 28. Honestly, I don't know how to feel about that. 28 and 38, I would not have a problem with the gap, but Bella so young? Well, I think I just have to read on if I can figure them out in a romantic relationship or not :D
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2013 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 10 - New Beginnings and First Dates
Your story has been on my TBR list for awhile so I decided to take the plunge and begin reading it. I read to chapter 10 and noticed it was 1 am. My eyes were tired and I needed to sleep. Iam reviewing these first 10 chapters 8 hrs later but I figured I could write a review after the fact.
To say I love your story is an unstatement but I do. Your Bella is a tough little cookie but I see someone who with the right motivation can achieve anything she puts her mind to. Even though she has had it rough in her life thus far she hasn't given up. I can't wait to see how the offer for Bella to go back to school by Esme and Carlisle goes. I think she will do great things once she gets going.
I have laughed and cried during my reading but I have enjoyed this story very much. I know it is only make believe but it makes me wish little Town of Hope Springs was real. ; )
All of the Cullen clan have been great and so inviting including your Edward. I can't wait to see what comes next. The slow burn between your E&B has been wonderful to read about. Makes me giddy to see how their future will bring . A pierced and tattooed Edward is also great but add in a motorcycle and a leather jacket..wow..ohh baby!!
Well thanks for writing and sharing this little tale. I will get back to reading now.
= )
Date: 13 Feb 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 34
The min my fiancee stopped touching me IE:cuddling, is the min my ass would of told him i dont think he wants to arry me and then my ultimatium would been bellas....based on edwards behavior my wedding would of been called off already. And if edward would of told me our relationship is over like he told bella i would of left there would be no coming to find me later he would of found me & my stuff gone & all thats left a note with the engagement ring on top
Date: 13 Feb 2013 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Finding the way back
Yes the cullen men got off easy...if bella did what edward did edward would of threw a fit!
Date: 03 Feb 2013 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
wow. just wow. thanks for sharing.
Date: 03 Feb 2013 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Time waits for no man (or woman)
Loving this story! I think Edward has a great birthdate, he shares it with my son and father.
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Time waits for no man (or woman)
So what made you change both edwards and bellas bday?
Date: 01 Feb 2013 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
So did she lose her virginty willingly or was she forced
Date: 30 Jan 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 39 - And baby makes three!
Love the way you write lady. Sorry to take so long to read this, but thrilled I got to read it all at once. Read the first 2 chapters of FLO and love it and can't wait to read chapter 3, but wanted to enjoy this one to its fullest first. lol, Cheri
Date: 30 Jan 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Making babies is supposed to be fun!
Truthfully I don't think Edward could stop Alice and Rosalie! Time will tell! Love this story! lol, Cheri
Date: 29 Jan 2013 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 37 - a new kind of normal
OME, best chapter yet!!!! Wonderful - Cheri
Date: 28 Jan 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Making Plans
Easy-pesy? Now that is scary! lol, Cheri
Date: 28 Jan 2013 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Birthday wishes
Could not have been more perfect! lol, Cheri
Date: 27 Jan 2013 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Honour thy father
it was a good chapter, i am glad she found her roots, but things happen for a reason and i think that she was protecting the other kids in the rawlings care, from the rawlings themselves.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2013 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Here comes trouble....
Just plain love the way you write! lol, Cheri
Date: 26 Jan 2013 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Honour thy father
What a wonderful chapter to a beautiful story. Your talent amazes me! lol, Cheri
Date: 23 Jan 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!
i think your story is good so far but i would challenge you to find other material than bad drunken behavior, being funny. having said that your very creative and i've enjoyed your different stories that youve shared with us. thankyou.
Date: 06 Jan 2013 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Mistletoe and Bar fights
I'm losing interest in the story; its too slow moving for me but good so far move em along already
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
What a truly inspirational story. I loved it, and can't wait for what is next.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
wow that was a hell of a story. i am so glad i got to come along for the ride. it was a story of happiness and sadness. of coming to terms of growing up and falling in love. learning how a family works. i am so glad bella got to be in a loving and caring family. she also get to meet and learn about her original family and that she was loved but things took a turn. she had alot of heartache but in the end her heart was filled with love.
i so love this story and thank you for writing. i look forward to future stories. thanx
Date: 28 Dec 2012 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
i'm not really good at giving revieuws. but i seriously loved this story and it kinda makes me sad to see it end. oh well i just have to start to read it again..
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2012 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Making babies is supposed to be fun!
so thrilled that they are expecting. love the doctors taken care of bella. she has the best
thr girls looking out for their bella the cullens are a great family
so love this story and how far they have come and how much love this family has
love it
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 39 - And baby makes three!
For a little break from PLU you gave us a great story, to say I'm grateful is insufficent.
Pimm x
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
loved the epi!!! great to see how everyone is doing in ten years :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 39 - And baby makes three!
great ending, what a wonderful loving family to find, Bella is one lucky girl. I can't believe it's almost over, what a ride, but as always this was amazing, thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2012 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
I'm gonna miss this story. These characters just took me for an amazing ride. If you ever did a future take I would so be down to read Edward having to walk his oldest down the isle.
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2012 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 39 - And baby makes three!
Oh you so scared me here, I was crying like crazy! You can't separate them now. But all is well and good now.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
loved it
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2012 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
Love this story! Such a beautiful message. Can't wait to read more of your works.
Date: 25 Dec 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
Another brilliant story - loved this journey. Merry Christmas :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
You know I have a lot of stories in my favorites here and on FF that I keep up with, but there are only a few that I make sure to keep when they are completed so that I can go back and read again. This will be one of those stories. It had eveything a great story should have. Angst, humor, bad guys, and even POV's from Rosco and Apples, which was some of my favorite POV's and most of all unyielding love. I'm sad to see it end but you gave these two a great ending. That last chapter before this one had me a little worried for a minute, but I should have known it better. Thanks for the great story and I look forward to you next one.
Have a very Merry Christmas and a safe and Happy New!!
Maria
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2012 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
I absolutely fell in love with this story. I will admit that the first two chapters were rough for me to get into but after that I could not put this story down. Thanks for sharing all your wonderful thoughts with us.
Date: 25 Dec 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
That was amazing! I really loved every bit of it :D Such a perfect "ending" for them! By the way Bella, 32 isn't too old to be having babies ;) My mom had me (her first) at 36, almost 37 and had my brother at 41! :D
Date: 25 Dec 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
Another well done story... I enjoyed it very much and look forward to your next project.
I wonder if it have time to reread PLU?
Date: 24 Dec 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
I am sorry to see this story end! It is such a wonderful story and I just love it! Future outakes would be awesome! Maybe when they have their last child and udate on the family. Thankyou so much, you have such a gift for writing and can't wait till your next one! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Date: 24 Dec 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
Wonderful end to this great story. Loved it from word 1. Ty for writing and sharing with us.
Date: 24 Dec 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 39 - And baby makes three!
great chapter. Glad they boys were mostly unharmed in the accident. Sweet baby name (and normal too). First time mom's tend to be a bit coo-coo.
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 39 - And baby makes three!
Sad to see it ending, but I loved reading it through the completion. One of my favorite stories by far. Thanks, Kasi~
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
Michele~ this has been one very amazing and wonderful story and I am so thankful to you for sharing it with all of us. Just wonderful! Loved the whole thing. Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
Bravo!
Date: 24 Dec 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 39 - And baby makes three!
Awesome chapter!!! You captured so many of the real emotions that new mothers experience. So sad to see it end but happy for more people like us!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 39 - And baby makes three!
Beautiful wrap!
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW ITS OVER!!!!!!!!!!! IM GONNA CRY I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
I laughed, I cried, it was a wonderful story, I will probably read it again and again.
Date: 24 Dec 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
Thank you for sharing your story. I eagerly looked forward to each chapter, and enjoyed it immensely. I'm sure I will read it all again soon.
TripX
Date: 24 Dec 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
loved loved the ending sad to see them go but looking forward ot your new story
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
:) loved this story. Thank you. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you.
Date: 24 Dec 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
omg I am a little teary now....hmmm future take how bout when Edward catches anna beth and quill in a clinch for the first time lol I see comedic gold there!
Date: 24 Dec 2012 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 39 - And baby makes three!
and there life rolls on with all the ups and downs that real life has. She has a fantastic support system and that kid is going to be awesome lol. Michele I hate that they are going to, but I know you will still write and I will follow lol. These last two stories have been ajoy to follow Thank you so much for sharing your talent.
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 39 - And baby makes three!
:)
Date: 24 Dec 2012 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
Thanks for sharing this wonderful story. Really enjoyed reading it and sad that it has come to an end.
Date: 24 Dec 2012 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
What a wonderful ending!
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 39 - And baby makes three!
This story has been great enjoyed it so much
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...
Absolutely love this stry. So sad that it had to finish. Love the antic's of the the kids. Did you by chance name the newst (fourth) child of Edward & Bella? Would have love to know what they called him.
Looking forward to the next story from you.
Kayla
Date: 24 Dec 2012 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 39 - And baby makes three!
That was amazing! GAH! I really loved it! I cannot wait for the epilogue! I noticed two small errors within this...and please don't think they are nitpicky. "Esme laughed, "Well who did you think I would say? Bobby Fley? No thank you! I think that the younger men have all the goods." It should be "Bobby Flay". Also, here, "The only smudge on the horizon was that none of her phoenix family had been able to get away to come and see the new addition but Bella Skyped once a week and she emailed dozens of photographs." Phoenix needs to be capitalized :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 37 - a new kind of normal
Great chapter I really love all of Bella's over-reactions they are kinda hilarious.
Gonna missed this when it's complete.
Pimm x