[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 22
wonderful
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2015 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
beauty and the beast
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
poor Bella to be owner by Edward lol
Date: 14 Jun 2012 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
Such a different concept on a story involving Bella and the Cullens. I enjoyed it immensely and couldn't stop reading it. I have a pulled muscle in my neck that wouldn't even stop me!!! HA.
Edward was different but the same and Bella was Bella, thinking to hard...reacting the wrong way...and then Duh, it hits her and she is trying to fix what she's done! Typical right?
Loved it! Great Job.
Hugs, Stephanie
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
What an incredibly beautiful story. Kudos upon kudos for writing it. You should've had many more reviews than you had. Thank you so much!!!!!
Date: 11 Feb 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story. I really enjoyed it. Can't wait to read more of your work.
Thanks
Date: 09 Oct 2011 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 14
This is an awesome story. I cannot help but notice however, there are some of the same lines in here as in the movie Ever After.
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh, thank-you so much for writing your story; I really loved it. =)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 21
Awwww, I love it. =)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh how I love a good romantic story, and yours just fits the bill... =)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
Well crap; I should have realized that Edward couldn't tell Bella that he loved her too, even if he does feel it. I think the pain and betrayal he still feels for what Tanya did to him is still fresh. I'm sure he'll come around soon enough. ;)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh Bella, I think Edward might just surprise you. ;)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love the hotness of these two, but I'm going to be waiting for the other shoe to drop. A shoe we'll call Rosalie...
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 15
I can't wait for Rosalie to be put in her place.
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yay, that went better than I expected it to. =)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
This is not good. If and when Edward finds out that Bella had anything to do with JB, he'll flip out and be reminded of Tanya's betrayal.
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh cripes, leave it to that damn golddigging Rosalie to ruin things.
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 11
*Giggles* So Bella has unwittingly cast a spell over our Edward, has she? :D Oh, and I want to beat the crap out of those little harpy servants.
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
What's he going to say? I can't wait to find out. =)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 9
I wonder if Edward knew she was a virgin, or if he just assumed that she wasn't one. I can't wait to see how he acts towards her now. Will he go back to his brooding or will he be nicer.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
*Giggles* Oh this is really fun! ;)
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2011 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
I can't wait to have the mystery that is Edward Cullen revealed. =)
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm loving your story so far, very much. =)
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2011 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oooo, let the party begin! This should be fun. =)
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2011 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well at least she's away from bitchy, nasty, gold-digging Rosalie; is she better off with seemingly hard-ass Edward? I guess time will tell. ;)
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2011 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
So if Bella's not going to be a slave, why did Edward buy her? And why did he pay so much for her? Hmmm.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2011 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so excited to read your story! =)
Date: 23 Mar 2011 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
I don't understand why Bella didn't ask why Edward would want to be dancing with his servant. She has to find that waaay weird.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oooooohhh does he want to marry her ??? hmmm we'll just have to wait and see wont we about 2 seconds it takes for the next chapter to load. hahahahah
Still a very interesting chapter including some background info on Jasper - he's a major part in the story but we know just a little about him. Will there be outtakes from the story? (or are they out there and I've just not seen them?)
Date: 15 Mar 2011 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm of 2 minds when it comes to Rosalie, as Emmetts just gotta be loved by everyone to some degree... and you want him to be happy but in this case I feel sorry that he's hurting but I'm glad Rose was taken to the train station.
I'm starting to go through labour of devotion with drawls and i'm not even to the last available chapter ... God help me when I get to chapter 20.
Arrrrrrrrrrrrhhhhhhhhhh. So should I start begging for more chapters now or should I wait a bit longer?? ( I don't like begging authors for chapters as I feel like it interupts the creative writing process and distracts them)
Oh I um noticed in some of the chapters that here are a few words that have been mispelled or are in the wrong context eg - she fling her arms around me, when it should have been she flun her arms around me. I know its nothing major but if you a perfectionist then I thought you might want to know. Uh sorry if you didn't want to know.
Great chapter btw.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
What decade does this story revolve around?
Date: 15 Mar 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
I know that I'm up to ch 14/20 but I don't know if the story is finished - I didn't look at that part I just read the blurb thingy and was like I have to read this. But this chapter sorta feels like and ending which is silly cos theres still 6 chapters but still I had to check what chapter I was actually reading.
The last few chapters have been really interesting esp the fights between Edward and Bella. I can't get over how bad guy like you've made Jake, I'm team Switzerland and don't read stories specificly for good or bad characters but this Jake is still interesting for a 'bad guy' will we hear any more about Seth and Leah? I was thinking that maybe on her way out Bella might have knocked over a candle... and the place light up but then all the ppl who work for Jake would loose their jobs ect...
Date: 15 Mar 2011 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
I thought her hands were bound as she was pulled up onto the stage but when she was sitting in the coach she rested her arms on her knees. (I think)
You have me hooked just from this chapter I can't wait to read the next - I may not review every chapter unless I have questions or I really want to point out something I really enjoyed, I find it kinda redundant to write 'loved it want more' ect.
I really did love this chapter though.
Great work :)
Date: 12 Mar 2011 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
thanks for the great story i love it!!
Date: 11 Mar 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 13
not good ed is going to think you betrayed him... not good at all..
Date: 11 Mar 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh bella don't listen to her..rose you are a bitch and when ed finds out what you did you are in for it big time
Date: 11 Mar 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
not good .... poor bella
Date: 11 Mar 2011 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
ioh bella you lucky girl... what does ed have in store for you... no bc so you might be pregers... hummmm where is this all going?
Date: 11 Mar 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
hum what does he have in store for her? i don't think a maid dresses up and goes to a party especially with the master's mother's jewels? hammmm
Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
I really thought he found her mother.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
She played right into that one.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
Had a feeling about Rose.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 8
Understand why he hates Jacob. Did he buy her as a sex slave?
Date: 05 Mar 2011 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
What does he have in mind?
Date: 05 Mar 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Know she's frightened but so far, it doesn't seem too bad.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great story! Thank you for writing and sharing.
Date: 17 Nov 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
That was wonderful..
E/k
Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 14
Well I am glad she broke Jacobs nose. I am sure all hell is going to break loose when Edward finds out about Rosalie.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 9
ok I was a little dissapointed in the lemon I could not even tell if either one of the came. And she said she had never been touched by a man but you didn't write anything about him breaking her hymen so it was not as I expected.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
well now were are getting somewhere. lol. That was sneaky of him to have her give him a bath. lol.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
WOw that massage was really getting hot huh? lol.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
hhmmm are they vapires in this story? I didn't think so since their eyes are colored but who knows?
Date: 08 Aug 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
My, My Edward has such a temper. lol. I know R/L is hard believe me I know. Still we all need to have a geat away sometimes and I know for me, it is reading these stories. My life really sucks and this is my escape so when I ask for an author to do a sequel its not just because I enjoy reading its because it helps me. Kind of like my therapy. I know it sounds weird but it the truth. I understand that you dont want to make one but I thought I would explain my reason too.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
I can imagine how beautiful bella looked in that gown. She sure couldn't really teach her everything in a few hours.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
Well we finally meet Edward. Too bad he is an ass. But at least he is not as bad as Rosalie.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
Again I am really enjoying this story but the chapters are really short. I did go and look at your other stories but I see that they are all just one shots. I see this is the only one that really had several chapters and I truly love a LONG story so I am hoping that you will consider and do a sequel.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story looks very interesting. I am already depressed as I see you have already ended it. I am already attached and its only the first chapter. I was wondering if you plan on doing a sequel to it?
Author's Response:
Kitschisme and I have decided that the story should be left where it is. We both put our hearts and souls into this story, and while we had wanted to continue on with a few extras, real life has made that increasingly difficult. I do hope that you enjoy what we've done with the story, though.
Date: 04 Aug 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
uhhh i understud the unspoken statement on that one ''all kind of urges'' lmao!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
OMG, what an amazing story. This was truely a love story. I loved it so much. I would love to have read this from Edwards POV. I bet it would have been interesting. He seem to have so many pinned up thoughts. He was so silent in the background. I was especally pleased with Rose's part. She was a horrible person that needed to be taken down a few notches in when which you did. Thank you for entertaining me by giving me something to read. I look foward to reading other of your publishings.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this. That means a lot.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
that was a good story i liked how it ended and how everything worked out
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 22
I am not sure if this is the ending of the story but I have to say if it is what an ending.
Every thing she never thought she wanted she got.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 21
Ohhh I did not see that one coming when I started reading this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
Yay, about time Edward, see was not that hard...
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 19
Ohh Rose is still there, I hope Emmett has her jumping though hoops like a poodle dyed a horrible pink colour.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 18
So Edward can't say I love you yet, totally understand about with what that wendh did to him.
Hopefully soon Edward will realise what he is able to say and do because he is stronger than he thinks.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wow, a day out to go shopping with Edward turned into a disaster with an wicked man and Edward was the hero in the end again.
What will Edwards say once he comes out of his shock.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
I guess that saying "I am your always" is as close as either of them are willing to get to saying I love you.
I like Roses punishment, I think I would like to see Emmett with Angela I think they would make a cute couple. Seeing as you are at chapter 22 I shall find out soon enough.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh how beautiful that they are willing to love each other faults and all.
Someone by the name of Rose is in trouble.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, I am amazed that Bella still has not said anything about Rose. I am sorry but he should be told what a lying bitch she is.
I really do hope he does not loose the house. It does not belong to Rose just because she think she is the shit, she is definitely runny shit.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
So Edward likes her but does not want to be seen fucking the help is that how this is going? I am just a little lost.
So I am guessing that he had feeling for her but does not want to admit them, Bella on the other hand feels used but now is unsure how he feels. God I hope I have this correct.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
I have only read 10 chapter so far and I like how you have set this, it is a beautiful victorian story and I am loving it. I cant wait to see what Edward says, but I am on the fence of wether I am going to like it or not.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
I loved it. Great story. :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2010 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 22
I really enjoyed reading this story.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
In chapter 2 you state Emmett is youngest, in this chapter you indicate Emmett is the oldest. Would you mind clarifying the birth order?
Date: 10 Apr 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 22
This was so sweet! I really enjoyed it. Great job!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2010 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so glad to see you're over here at this site. I really like how this site has been created, similar to Twilighted.net, but MUCH easire to read.
I read your story it its entirety on fanfiction.net. I must tell you how much I truly enjoyed reading your fan fic. It was simply beautiful, some chapters made me feel really worried for Bella, but I truly loved it.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 22
I loved your story. Thank you for sharing it.
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2010 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
I must tell you how much I truly enjoyed reading your fan fic. It was simply beautiful, some chapters made my stomach upset and nervous, but I truly loved it. I haven't read one which was set in that time period, but you did a wonderful job and hope to read more from you. THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME READING and the happy ending as I love happy endings. Hope to hear from you as I am new to this website and have not received any responses to my reviews. Just know that your story was beautiful. Thanks again. Sherri. My e-mail is pinkpathr@bellsouth.net if you wish to correspond with me.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I'm new to this site as well. The website I had posted all of my stories on previously is deleting a lot of the M rated stories so I needed a place to put them all.