Date: 09 Jan 2012 10:07 AM Title: Epilogue Be Mine
Awww - I love it! This is such a sweet story! I did notice one thing though that I thought I should point out. About 1/3 of the way through the 2nd chapter, there is a couple of sentences that are actually from the 1st chapter and don't belong. I can't tell if there is something else that is actually missing, but I think there is. It's the part where Edward is telling Bella that they didn't have sex the night before. Other than that, it was wonderful!! Thank you for sharing this story! I will definitely be looking to see what else you've written! :)
Thank you very much for pointing that one out to me. I fixed the chapter now, and it should now show the missing two lines.
I can't help bu townder if the site just hates my guts of if it hates MS Word lol.
I'm glad that you enjoyed this little one. If you like the Christmasy B/E AH fic, you can take a peek at "Once Upon A December". I think you might enjoy it, too.
Have a wonderful week, and thank you for reading and reviewing!