[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2015 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 35
Hi , have not been on fan fiction in a long time, I am so happy to a happy ending. Made me cry..
Hugs xxxooo
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
Really liking this story. The pacing is great. I like that Jasper hasn't shutdown from Edward. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2014 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start! Looking forward to reading it.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 34
THANK YOU for not killing the dog!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
Wow, the boys shot the shit outta the Volturi! and Jazz blew them up! woot woot!! BuhBYE!!! :)
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 32
OK, fuck avalanches! the boys need to be helicoptered outta there, stat!! There must be a flat place where they can meet a chopper. This is nuts! Jasper can't even shoot! oi!
If the dog gets killed, I am gonna be inconsolable. :((((((
Haha, James! got what you had coming, you prick! You too, Sluttina! hmph.
p.s. Save Alec!
Date: 04 Dec 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 26
Hi, I'm gulping up this story but have been a negligent cow about reviewing. Sorry! promise I'll give you an epic review soon. :)
WTF is going on with FF? I stopped reading on Twilighted cause I got sick of them editing stuff, and taking so long...FF was a site where you could get some delightfully-juicy slash...and now they've gone all moral majority? WTF??? I'm a grown up, damn it - I don't wanna read G-rated crap! ugh.
Glad to find your story here, cause I'm loving it!! I blew off homework yesterday to read it, and here I am again! gah! :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
Declaring their love brought a tear to my eye.
Very nice lemony love scene.
~LL
Date: 28 Nov 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thanks for the "dark" warning...it'll be a HEA, right?
~LL
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's hard to believe that this is your first story. It's so compelling.
I'm not one who enjoys a lot angst but I'm trusting your genre description that it's more drama than angst. On to Ch. 2
~LL
Date: 11 Nov 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 35
Gonna miss your boys. Superb story.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just found your story on TWC... really like it so far. Do you update timely?
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 34
so glad Alec made it too!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 34
Absolutely fantastic build up and battle. Thank heavens Alec is okay. One of the best battles I have ever read.
I am going to miss your boys.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 34
Aww so glad all the baffles got killed or maimed and arrested. At least the boys got out of it ok and they no longer need to hide. & Alec is ok, so glad he didn't get shot.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 33
OMG, I hopethe Feds and the cops get there just after the hit squad get there. I hate to think that edward and jasper could get hurt out there on their own with no help. As for Aro I hope feds also manage to take out the three of them as well. Thks for the update Debbie
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 32
Aw such a sweet proposal and right at new year too. I know this will be the best start to the new year after this it can only go downhill for a short period of time. At least until some of the goons are killed.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 31
Well at least James won't be telling on the boys again. Carlisle was quick at informing the boys of the news and they have some kind of protection even if jasper can't shoot. I just hope the Calvert isn't too far behind the volturi.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 32
WUHOOOOOO - yay the boys are getting married. Beautiful chapter, what a way to bring in the new year.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 31
Sorry I have been quiet - I've been away on holiday. Loved the chapter. Everyone's gearing up for the final showdown. Hell yeah - Jasper Rambo'd up - awesome imagery.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oh dear, I hope the boys saw demetri - but then that would put them in danger too. Glad James got what was coming to him, sly bastard, but at least he can't continue to be a spy in the camp any more. Demetri really is a piece of work. Thks for the update, Debbie
Date: 09 Sep 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 30
OMG the drama continues. I love what you are doing with it.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 29
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
It's times like this that I wish your story was complete and I could read the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2012 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 27
Omfg I can't wait for the next chapter!! Just watch out for those typos and grammar errors
Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 27
Almost looks like their life in isolation might come to an end. Such a shame, just as they were having fun… :-)
So far I'm just loving this story!!!
I just have a technical question: How come Jasper has his own phone? Did Edward have a spare one?
Date: 26 Jul 2012 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 27
I'm reading it on FFiction and I left you reviews there (as ArekWhitlock)..It's easier for me reading and reviewing there..
I'm so worried for Jazz now..
Rashell
Date: 15 Jul 2012 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thank you for updating so soon. It is heartening to see Japser give comfort to Edward. I am still on edge and biting my nails.
Date: 15 Jul 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 27
I tried to review over on ff, but was unable too.
I'm glad Carlise was able to get a hold of Edward and Jasper and tell them what's going on. I'm glad Edward and Jasper have each other to get through all this crap! Great chapter! Thanks so much!
Date: 15 Jul 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 26
My heart is pounding, and my nerves are on edge. My nails have gone and yet I can't wait until you post another chapter.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 25
Awww you scene sounds like something out of a Thomas Kinkade painting. Absolutely beautiful.
Your boys love each other so much - its wonderful.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 25
what a lovely christmas! :-)
Date: 05 Jul 2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 25
Journée tranquille, douce mais tout ce qui fallait pour ces deux garçons avant la tempête qui risque d'arriver bientôt.
Parfait, à bientôt.
Date: 03 Jul 2012 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 20
Lovely fic. Cant wait to read what happens next. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks!!
Catherine
Date: 03 Jul 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
i was reading this on ffn of course we know whats happening there. i was so happy to find you here. so i figured id read itr from the beginning again. thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
LOL... I've been doing the same thing with all my favorite reads! I've got it all over here now and will continue to post on both sirtes.
Catherine
Date: 02 Jul 2012 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 20
loved it..
can't wait to read chapt.25:))
I was reading on FFiction:))
Rashell
Author's Response:
Thanks, Sweetie. 25 is up.
Catherine
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
For your first story it is great. really enjoying it. I hope jasper wasn't involved with the slave trafficing. I hope he is as innocent as he appears. great job. melissa
Author's Response:
Thank you! Just finished transferring all the chapters I had on FF over here... up to 25.
Catherine
Date: 07 Jun 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
totally love this story..I'm reading it on FFiction but I'm not a member there and I'm leaving some love here:))
Totally loved chapt 23:)) Paul is dead..James is so dark..
Thnk UUUUU!!
Can't wait for more:))
Rash
Author's Response:
Thank you!... I have it all caught up now... posted 5 chapters today. Enjoy.
Catherine
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
Seem like everyone is moving but I have been reading this here all along
Author's Response:
Cool....please... just don't expect 4-5 chapters every week! *yikes!* I try to get at least one a week, but don't always succeed... *smile*
Catherine
Date: 04 Jun 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 15
Good to have you here - I'm doing the same with Hostage. It takes a bit of getting used to, but we'll get there.
Author's Response:
Oooooo I LOVE Hostage! Yup, it's different, but I like the idea of pics in the story. Now I just have to either find some that fit the story or create some...Hmmmmm
Catherine
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2012 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 30 Apr 2012 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
I wish it was longer. Another great chapter.
Author's Response:
Sorry.... sometimes it just won't go any farther.... but I try! Thanks!
Catherine
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
interesting to hear some of the other side-but miss the lovin!
Author's Response:
Getting back to them right away. Thanks!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
NICE.........
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2012 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
awwww they are falling so hard, so fast! love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah.. they just can't resist... who could?*grin*
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
ahhhh slow is good-so much needs to be healed first.....
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to comment! Yeah... they need time to get to know each other a bit more and let this relationship develop.
Catherine
Date: 12 Mar 2012 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ended up with a little steam. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment! Yup, got a little relationship budding here.
Catherine
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2012 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
Tear drops... following.. So Beautiful..
hugs Leona
Author's Response:
Awww.. thank you. I love everyone who is reading this and reviewing...seems like everyone likes it. Brightens up my day! Makes the hours spent writing it worth it all!
Catherine
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2012 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
The caring heart that Edward is showing is Jazz is almost down right heartbreaking.. I just want to but a bubble around them so they can heal..
your story is beautiful, but scary too.. But I believe that they were ment to be..
Hugs Leona
Author's Response:
Thank you, Leona! Yeah... big, ol' softie me... I even cried as I wrote some of this. These two belong together and will be.
Catherine
Date: 09 Mar 2012 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
You made me cry.. sad but Beautiful too......... Wow
Date: 05 Mar 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love seeing them bond. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I appreciate your comments. Hope you keep on enjoying the story!
Catherine
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 7
thank goodness, some comfort at last for Jaz-well done.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah.. poor baby... he needs someone to love him!
Catherine
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
love it
Author's Response:
Awww.. thank you so much!
Catherine
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
God I hope that he is know with Edward.. There are a lot of sick ppl on in this world.. Poor Jasper.. God I hope Edward will be able to help heal him emotionally.. he will need all the love and understanding..
Hugs Leona
Ps.. awesome chapters but scary.. But at least we know what happen to jasper.. His poor parents..
Author's Response:
Thank you! These last few chapters were hard to write, but we needed to know what happened to Jasper. It's gonna get better.
Catherine
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow.. this is getting scary.. Man how did they know so fast? My heart is breaking for Jasper. How sad he lost his family. Not sure If I want to read what happen to him.. mmm. Well see you in a few.
Hugs Leona
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comments! Yes, Jasper has had a rough time, but it's getting better. Hang in ther!
Catherine
Date: 20 Feb 2012 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
I liked hearing Jaspers story. Can't wait for some Edward and Jasper getting to know each other.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your comments! They really brightewn up my day! More Edward and Jasper interaction coming up soon.
Catherine
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow.. That was really sad about Angla. I can see why He had enough.. I could not live with someone death on my hands. Even if I hated them.. Well that not quit true.. I believe guys like Demtie deserved to die..
God I would what went wrong? I know he said he new phone was not bugged, but what about his parents.
This a wonderful story.. scary thou..
I want to to thank you for the worning about the next few chapters.. So sad and scary..
Hugs Leona
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying Jasper's side of the story. I felt we should know how he got into that snow bank. Yeah, the next couple will be on the dark side, but it will get easier after that.
Catherine
Date: 30 Jan 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Jaz......sounds like he just found out what happened to his parents. Good thing Edward is there for him.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking time to send your comments! Means a lot to me. Yeah, it's good that he had someone... we all need that sometimes.
Catherine
Date: 30 Jan 2012 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
This story is really great so far. I don't mind it getting dark.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thank you for taking the time to send your comments... brightens my day!
Catherine
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2012 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thank you for the warning.. I have depression, and there are days I can't read sad chapters...
This was a really awesome chapter..
you made me cry at the end.. God I just want to Hug them both.. I am scaried they will get hurt in the spring... I hope Edward and his Dad will have a plan by then..
God Poor Jasper..
Hugs hugs Leona
Author's Response:
I';m sorry you suffer from depression... I do, too. Reading and writing FF helps me a lot. The next couple of chapters will be intense, but Chapter 5 is the one where you might have a problem...
Take care and thanks so much for taking the time to send me your comments. Means more to me than you'll ever know!
Catherine
Date: 29 Jan 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
This seems like it's going to be a great story i'm looking forward to reading more.
Hope you update again soon :)
Jessee
Author's Response:
Thank you! I plan (hope) to update weekly.
Catherine
Date: 23 Jan 2012 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really great first chapter. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I should be able to update weekly...I hope!
Catherine
Date: 23 Jan 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Omg! Why is it so hard for me to be the 1st person to comment?! I guess it can't be helped. Your work is just too well written and wonderful for me to hoard. Damn it...I'm going to have to take you out, so no one else can have you. *evil laughter*...followed by guilt...nevermind share your gift with the world I can handle it.
~#1 biggest fan~
Author's Response:
ROTFLMAO!!! Thank you Sweetie!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Your story is beyond words Beautiful!.. You can feel the compaison that Edward feels for Jasper.. the unconditional Love..
you just want to cry and at the same be joyful that Alec and Edward saved Jasper from dieing..
You have done a fantastic job for being your first chapter of your first story..
A+ in my books.. I can't wait for more..
Author's Response:
Thank you ! I hope to post weekly.
This is actually my 2nd story...I oposterd a much shorter story over on FF. It's my first here. I have another in the works as well and will be posting it soon.
Catherine
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
can not wait for more! Intriging start!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope to update weekly.
Catherine