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Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2021 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

This was such a fun story. I learned so much about your son's disease.  Hope all is well with your & your family?

Reviewer: debb8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2016 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

I am a little late to fanfiction. I just found you and your stories. Love this one so much. You are a very talented writer.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery

Poor Bella Jeebus!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story

M'kay Charlie chief of police please let your daughter your baby girl love and raise her son with a man who slaughtered his parents (at gun point or not...fucked) with his cray cray brother. No words!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners

So ding dong Seth's dna dad is a psycho and Rosalie something is off. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go

Oh Bella let it go or seek help sweets. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 17 Emotional Confrontation

So she's not crazy or bitchy but emotionally irrational instead. Still hoping I will like her at some point. Fingers crossed!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 14 Demands

I want to like Bella because I am team Edward & Bella all the way but she is so not likeable at this point. I usually only feel this negative about Rosalie. Is she going to turn a corner? God I hope so...

Seth is cute-cute!

 

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

Sorry crazy ass Bella you threw the Choo the ramifications are on you. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

Bella's bitchiness is overkill when the president is asking her for her input on the bill that will help her son. The president is not her ex (insert assholes name here)and I think Edward is being more than fair given her assult. Also even if you didn't vote for the president the office of the president deserves respect and she is a bit out of control. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

You can't hate Edward because fic or no fic assulting the president with or without cameras is jail time, your kid removed, Alice fired and humiliated Charlie forced to retire. Rose is a bitch as per use but also doing her job protecting and working the angles for her boss.  Bella's however justified she feels is wrong and should be happy for the alternative. JS

 

 

Reviewer: NPattz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2016 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

Great read. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: NPattz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2016 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time

You're killing me over here. I so badly want to sneak over chapters to find out who it is?

Reviewer: Payton79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2015 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

I started reading this story on ffn but switched to here when your A/N said you toned down the lemons over there, lol.
Anyway, I really enjoyed reading the story and I loved the ending. There was one thing, though, I waited through most of the story to be addressed. When Bella first threw the shoe, Jasper told Edward how expensive the pair was. Bella was fighting for financial aid while she appeared to be rich enough to spend crazy amounts of money on shoes. That impression even deepened when she wore Alice's designer clothes to work. I can't believe the topic of her apparently having enough money to buy expensive clothes but not enough to pay for her son's nutricion never came up. I decided to imagine, though, that she and Edward discussed it at some point which just wasn't written.
Thanks for writing and sharing this entertaining story.

Author's Response:

It wasn't discussed between her and Edward as it didn't need to be discussed between them, but it was explained. The shoes and clothing belonged to Alice who allowed Bella to borrow them. The pieces Bella owned were handed down to her or gifted to her.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2015 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

AWESOME!!! story and ending ;) thanks so much for sharing this on here so i could read it all over again ;) i hope your rl is going great as well ;D

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

Great story, not only for the love between Bella and Edward, but of family  and friends. It got pretty scary in spots, but I had faith you would get us through! Hope your boys are both well and happy, especially Cayden. Thanks for teaching us all a little about his condition.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1

Nice wedding, fabulous honeymoon and the landslide reelection! Life sounds pretty good for them now, especially with Seth's adoption by Edward. I had no doubt that Bella would head up a foundation for FPIES.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends

The proposal was lovly, with friends and family present, but the celebration was even better! Edward was so careful and solicitous of his Bella, making love to her in the water to relieve the pressure and make it more comfortable for her! What a guy! The remodeled nursery for Seth was the best surprise, until the news he wanted to adopt Seth!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery

I have a sneaking suspicion he's about to propose! Doing it in conjunction with Seth's birthday is sweet, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story

No wonder Bella is confused, what with Royce being James and vice versa. He told her a bunch of lies  and some truth, she just has to sort through it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death

Everyone else knew him as James Hunter, the guy who was the source of the threats that drove Bella towards the White House, and Edward.  Now that he's dead I guess it doesn't matter what you call him! More important, by far, is Bella's recovery and of course, Edward's!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession

I'm confident you won't let Bella die before Edward gets to her, so prove me right!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth

Really smart to have a teddybear in the carseat and a recording of Seth in the car! Kind of sad that Em was the one that killed Rose/Vicki, he really loved her! Now Edward better sprout wings and get to Bella in time!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations

That is just sick! And a really good plot twist! There are probably people like them in this world, but I hope to never meet them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions

No offense to Prezward, but he was so emotionally involved, he couldn't think straight! Luckily, Emmett is his good friend and can understand why he was attacked. Someone had to take charge as Edward couldn't!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions

Okay, now I want Royce dead! The miserable bastard obviously needs killing, hurting Bella and doing God knows what to Rose! I'll bet Emmett would tear him limb from limb if he could!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted

I am curious  as to why this asshole took Rose along with Bella and tried for Alice, too? Can't wait to see what he wants from the president!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day

So it was the guy who got her pregnant and walked away! What the hell does he want now?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time

Good for Carlisle for owning up to being wrong about his treatment of Bella! This must make for much happier relations all around! I'm glad for all of them! I guess I'm just slow, but it finally dawned on me that mystery man might be Seth's sperm donor!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners

I'm sure that Bella will do well at the state dinner, and I know she is so happy about the rapport between Edward and Seth. This mystery guy is starting to really scare me since it sounds like he's ready to do away with Bella!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

I'll bet Edward was proud of Bella for standing up to his snob of a father, and proud of his mom for getting along with Bella and Seth!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes

Lots of important stuff coming up soon, the couples dinner, the parents dinner and biggest perhaps, the state dinner with the Queen!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

I was proud of Edward for firing Lauren Mallory, the skank! He and Bella are doing great, but that seems to really tick of mystery man! Sounds like he has bad plans for them both in the future! I hope he doesn't hurt defenseless little Seth!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

It's great that Seth likes Edward so much, since he doesn't take to everyone. Edward's dad is unnecessarily an ass, and his mom is a sweetheart! I figured the press would be all over this budding relationship, they can't seem to help themselves! I think it's lovely that Bella and Edward are falling in love, and he wants to be there for Seth!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

This really sounded like a great first date"out"!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

I was afraid the stalker creep was watching that happen since he said one of the cameras he monitored was in that storage room on the third floor! How slimy of him to watch them, he should be ashamed! Bella and Edward on the other hand were great! Can't wait to see where he's taking her on their date!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss

I did read Hear Me and loved it! Their fist dinner together started out okay, too bad it had to be disrupted! Stupid airline pilots! Darling little talk between Seth and Edward!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change

I really think Rose has decided to be nice to Bella, since she seems to make the president happy! I wonder why Nahuel was sent to trash Bella's home and what he was searching for in her room?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

It was a pretty good start to their relationship, all things considered. This probably can't be any kind of "normal" dating situation!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

I'm waiting for Bella's reason for ending that kiss too! Locking the door makes it look like Edward is about to find out. He is most likely to be a bit upset over the press conference as well. Then there are his parents, who may be upset over Bella, period! By the way, good for Rose and Em!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 25 A New Home

Bella's heart is touched by Prezward's caring for her and Seth's safety. With her place being trashed, it's a good thing she has a place to stay. Too bad it plays into the mystery man's plans also!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 24 Sisterly Conversations

Why not, if it was good enough for Bill Clinton, why not Edward Cullen? I really want to know why the creep is sending this Nahuel to Bella's house, obviously to do harm! I hope Jasper really likes Alice, and also loves shoes!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 23 Alternate Arrangements

Mystery indeed, since I can't imagine why this guy wants Bella out of her house! He seems to think Rosalie is his type, plus calling Bella a bitch seems like he doesn't care much for her! I'm holding my breath about Bella's reaction to Edward's confession!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 22 PJs and Ringing Phones

Tiny possibilty the threats come from Seth's sperm donor. Otherwise, no idea! It will come out that Rose did all the arrangements in Edward's name, trying to sweep Bella under the rug! Alice and Jasper must mean something to each other, but what?Great about your boy, even if it was a while ago!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 21 Handling Things

Too bad there are so many prying eyes present. It might be fun to see Edward's response to Bella's gratitude!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack

This is getting awfully creepy, with that last awful rant from Bella's phone stalker! Sure galvanized her dad to help get them out and hide. It looks like it will take the power of the presidency to keep her and Seth safe!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures

I sure hope Cayden went through that test without problems! As for the prez and his aid, Miss Bella, they definitely have something, maybe a problem, they are not sure what!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go

Now I'm really curious as to who fathered Seth! It was a real sad story , about Brady, but I'm glad Bella finally saw she was hating the wrong person, when she blamed Edward for Brady's death. I'm also glad that she will continue to work with him and admits, to herself, that she feels something for him!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 17 Emotional Confrontation

Now we're getting to the bottom of this hate thing! It all becomes much more clear, now that Bella has spilled how much she cared for Brady, and how much she enjoyed that kiss!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 16 Close Encounters

That was exciting and not too surprising! I know they both have thought about it, no matter how they deny these feelings to themselves! Rosalie is doing her best to squelch any spark between Edward and Bella. I have no clue why Alice isn't attracted to Jasper, nor why Emmett and Rose aren't an item!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 15 Searching for Connections

Surely that can't be the problem? If they had been that close to each other, one or both  should remember it! Bella's apparent dislike of his sure seems to bother the heck out of Edward!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 14 Demands

That was close! If Emmett hadn't interrupted, who knows what would have developed?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 13 Diverting Disaster

I kind of think Bella has a problem with the way the prez has acted since taking office, saying one thing to get elected and doing another once there! Sort of like the real man in the Oval Office! Politicians are notorious for doing that kind of thing! Even Edward himself was thinking that he's fallen into bad habits since taking office and going along to get along! P.S., glad your boy got better back when you wrote this, he's blessed to have a mom so caring and watchful of all his health problems!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 12 Barbie Bella

This is getting really interesting, with Alice being added to the mix, and the two of them going to work together Monday. Even more, I'm looking forward to Saturday and Bella bringing Seth to the SWhite House with her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 11 Arrangements

It's difficult to understand why his parents would treat him like that, questioning his actions and motives. Guess you're always a child to the people who raised you!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move

I know Bella feels she is the agrieved party here, but she better stop and think for a minute, that Edward could have been a whole lot nastier if he had wanted to be! He's offered her a job when he didn't have to and is putting up with her rudeness and disrespect a lot more than I would have done!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes

Sounds as if Stanley couldn't take the heat and let Bella go, rather than upset his customers. Too bad people have to have a knot in their tails over stuff like this! Life sure would be better if we all took a minute to listen to each other!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

Dear Lord. I forgot about the nuts out there! Poor Bella, she didn't do anything to deserve that nasty threatening message!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules

I knew they could come to some sort of understanding if they put their minds to it. They both seem to be stubborn as a couple of mules, so are well matched!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

Actually, I'm not very impressed with either the president or Seth's mom! They are both angry at the other and not being very nice to boot! I have hope they will both calm down and act like grownups!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency

No good ever comes of overhearing part of a conversation! Poor little Seth! What an awful thing to have to live with! You sure have my sympathy for your son having this FPIES!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home

I'm thinking that Seth's vomiting on the president is a result of his medical issues, and his mother will be explaining those soon! She was panicked when she found out her dad fed Seth pancakes, so I'm guessing that is part of the problem!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations

Quite the first impressions, if his thinking is anything to go by! I wonder what Ms. Hale's problem is?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here

Oh, oh, she thinks his form is luscious? This ought to be an interesting interview!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly

I'm getting a vibe here of people not knowing all the facts and perhaps jumping to conclusions!

Reviewer: KdanielleB Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 23 Alternate Arrangements

Hi I jus love UR story and just wanted to say I hope both your boys and school was going well !! Thanks for writing a amazing story..

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here

LOL.  Yeah she sure has a bit of explaining to do!

Reviewer: ggf83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

I loved this so much. Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to write it! :)

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

Enjoyed the ride!!! Throwing the red Jimmy was priceless!!! :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 16 Close Encounters

I'm just glad she quit calling him Asshat!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

Kick ass story, loved every chapter of it.

Reviewer: VioletVirgo79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home

OMG...projectile vomit, that was priceless!  lol 

I already love baby Seth/your Cayden.

~LauraLeigh

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

Son like father Edward was the best for them and you got to love the Jimmys lol.  Thanks so much for a wonderful story.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1

what a wonderful life love it sad it is almost over what a wonderful ride Thanks

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends

That was perfect I hope she will be able to carry a child for them

Reviewer: ellaward Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2012 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly

just finished reading this story. It was great.

I like the ending, Seth going in his dad's footsteps. I love the bond between them.

Good story.

 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly

Bon je commence la lecture et pour le moment j'aime bien !

Reviewer: shadowbride Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

lovely ending :)

Reviewer: shadowbride Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency

wow, that's some mean list of playstuffs and food that your son needs to aviod - it must be really hard work for you.  My own eldest son had some allergies as a baby - some foods and still comes out in hives and his face swells if he touches latex or is bitten by an animal fly/exthma, asthma, hey fever.  I know he can now self check foods and knows when he is starting to feel ill but hos syptoms are very minor compared to what your son risks.  I pray that your son does outgrow these allergies and that he and yourself never have to go through what your bella and seth have.

Going to read some more now.

Reviewer: Jabsjb Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

I loved this story! I really liked Edwards character-you did a fantastic job.  THank you

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

Ugh, perfect ending!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

I love this ending. Seth thanking his Mom for having the urge to throw a shoes at the President was priceless. It is perfect they are still one big happy family with all the agents that protected them. I will miss this story! Great jib...thanks so much.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends

I love all of it! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

I loved the story. You tied up everything nicely except the future of Vanessa or did I miss it? I will miss this story.

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

Whoop!!! Love the ending. Hope your son continues to follow in your Seth's footsteps. Meg

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

His dad is an ASS! Love Bella, she rocked!

Meg

Reviewer: justwanttoread610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

Just awesome!  Thank you for taking us on this amazing journey!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

I just loved this story!!  Thank you so much for sharing it with us!!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

Thanks awesome chapters

Reviewer: CourtneyLeighCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

Amazing story!! :D

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

Sorry to see it end.  Very well done !!!!!

Reviewer: MaddieLovesDuke12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions

Yea vote for Edward!!! He's going to take care of it. 

Reviewer: MaddieLovesDuke12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

No No Team Edward everyday.  Bella needs to chill and let him help her and her help him with this stupid bill.   Rosalie is Rosalie typical.  I like Jasper's and Emmett's roll.  I knew Jacob had to be in there somewhere.  Hopefully we won't hear from him much.  Thanks for the story  MLD12

Reviewer: MaddieLovesDuke12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency

Wow! Talk about an education.  You really have to be on your toes.  keep up the good work with your son.  God bless you and your family.  MLD12

Reviewer: MaddieLovesDuke12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations

Good Story!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: MaddieLovesDuke12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here

Good story.  I'll have to admit.  Edward as president. ok.  Thank you for this one too  MLD12

Reviewer: MaddieLovesDuke12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly

So I changed storys.  I like them when I don't have to wait.  I get Impatient.  This story is good so far.  Course Alice would have  $600 shoes.  But it's Bella's son right  Keep going with Hear Me please and I'll read this one  MLD12

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

I sit here crying after reading this chapter. Having the ending in Seth's pov made it the perfect ending. I am sorry to see this end. Oh and thanks for finding someone for Emmett. I will miss this story. Thanks, Maria 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

What a perfect way to cap off the lives of our beloved, illustrious Cullen family! Well done.
Best wishes for your Original Fiction.
May life imitate art for your son. Hoping Cayden out grows the stressful FPIES as Seth did.
Thank you for sharing your talent.

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

Your story is amazing and I'm so sad that it's over, but that was such a wonderful ending. :)

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