Date: 18 Jan 2021 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
This was such a fun story. I learned so much about your son's disease. Hope all is well with your & your family?
Date: 10 Oct 2016 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
I am a little late to fanfiction. I just found you and your stories. Love this one so much. You are a very talented writer.
Date: 26 Sep 2016 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery
Poor Bella Jeebus!
Date: 26 Sep 2016 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
M'kay Charlie chief of police please let your daughter your baby girl love and raise her son with a man who slaughtered his parents (at gun point or not...fucked) with his cray cray brother. No words!
Date: 26 Sep 2016 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
So ding dong Seth's dna dad is a psycho and Rosalie something is off.
Date: 25 Sep 2016 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
Oh Bella let it go or seek help sweets.
Date: 25 Sep 2016 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 17 Emotional Confrontation
So she's not crazy or bitchy but emotionally irrational instead. Still hoping I will like her at some point. Fingers crossed!
Date: 25 Sep 2016 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 14 Demands
I want to like Bella because I am team Edward & Bella all the way but she is so not likeable at this point. I usually only feel this negative about Rosalie. Is she going to turn a corner? God I hope so...
Seth is cute-cute!
Date: 25 Sep 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes
Sorry crazy ass Bella you threw the Choo the ramifications are on you.
Date: 25 Sep 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
Bella's bitchiness is overkill when the president is asking her for her input on the bill that will help her son. The president is not her ex (insert assholes name here)and I think Edward is being more than fair given her assult. Also even if you didn't vote for the president the office of the president deserves respect and she is a bit out of control. JS
Date: 25 Sep 2016 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
You can't hate Edward because fic or no fic assulting the president with or without cameras is jail time, your kid removed, Alice fired and humiliated Charlie forced to retire. Rose is a bitch as per use but also doing her job protecting and working the angles for her boss. Bella's however justified she feels is wrong and should be happy for the alternative. JS
Date: 23 Apr 2016 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
Great read. Thank you for writing.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
You're killing me over here. I so badly want to sneak over chapters to find out who it is?
Date: 17 Nov 2015 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
I started reading this story on ffn but switched to here when your A/N said you toned down the lemons over there, lol.
Anyway, I really enjoyed reading the story and I loved the ending. There was one thing, though, I waited through most of the story to be addressed. When Bella first threw the shoe, Jasper told Edward how expensive the pair was. Bella was fighting for financial aid while she appeared to be rich enough to spend crazy amounts of money on shoes. That impression even deepened when she wore Alice's designer clothes to work. I can't believe the topic of her apparently having enough money to buy expensive clothes but not enough to pay for her son's nutricion never came up. I decided to imagine, though, that she and Edward discussed it at some point which just wasn't written.
Thanks for writing and sharing this entertaining story.
Author's Response:
It wasn't discussed between her and Edward as it didn't need to be discussed between them, but it was explained. The shoes and clothing belonged to Alice who allowed Bella to borrow them. The pieces Bella owned were handed down to her or gifted to her.
Date: 04 Jul 2015 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
AWESOME!!! story and ending ;) thanks so much for sharing this on here so i could read it all over again ;) i hope your rl is going great as well ;D
Date: 24 Aug 2014 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
Great story, not only for the love between Bella and Edward, but of family and friends. It got pretty scary in spots, but I had faith you would get us through! Hope your boys are both well and happy, especially Cayden. Thanks for teaching us all a little about his condition.
Date: 24 Aug 2014 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1
Nice wedding, fabulous honeymoon and the landslide reelection! Life sounds pretty good for them now, especially with Seth's adoption by Edward. I had no doubt that Bella would head up a foundation for FPIES.
Date: 24 Aug 2014 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends
The proposal was lovly, with friends and family present, but the celebration was even better! Edward was so careful and solicitous of his Bella, making love to her in the water to relieve the pressure and make it more comfortable for her! What a guy! The remodeled nursery for Seth was the best surprise, until the news he wanted to adopt Seth!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery
I have a sneaking suspicion he's about to propose! Doing it in conjunction with Seth's birthday is sweet, too!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
No wonder Bella is confused, what with Royce being James and vice versa. He told her a bunch of lies and some truth, she just has to sort through it!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
Everyone else knew him as James Hunter, the guy who was the source of the threats that drove Bella towards the White House, and Edward. Now that he's dead I guess it doesn't matter what you call him! More important, by far, is Bella's recovery and of course, Edward's!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
I'm confident you won't let Bella die before Edward gets to her, so prove me right!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
Really smart to have a teddybear in the carseat and a recording of Seth in the car! Kind of sad that Em was the one that killed Rose/Vicki, he really loved her! Now Edward better sprout wings and get to Bella in time!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 42 Revelations
That is just sick! And a really good plot twist! There are probably people like them in this world, but I hope to never meet them!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 41 Following Directions
No offense to Prezward, but he was so emotionally involved, he couldn't think straight! Luckily, Emmett is his good friend and can understand why he was attacked. Someone had to take charge as Edward couldn't!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions
Okay, now I want Royce dead! The miserable bastard obviously needs killing, hurting Bella and doing God knows what to Rose! I'll bet Emmett would tear him limb from limb if he could!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 39 Abducted
I am curious as to why this asshole took Rose along with Bella and tried for Alice, too? Can't wait to see what he wants from the president!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 38 Spa Day
So it was the guy who got her pregnant and walked away! What the hell does he want now?
Date: 24 Aug 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 37 Daddy Time
Good for Carlisle for owning up to being wrong about his treatment of Bella! This must make for much happier relations all around! I'm glad for all of them! I guess I'm just slow, but it finally dawned on me that mystery man might be Seth's sperm donor!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
I'm sure that Bella will do well at the state dinner, and I know she is so happy about the rapport between Edward and Seth. This mystery guy is starting to really scare me since it sounds like he's ready to do away with Bella!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two
I'll bet Edward was proud of Bella for standing up to his snob of a father, and proud of his mom for getting along with Bella and Seth!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes
Lots of important stuff coming up soon, the couples dinner, the parents dinner and biggest perhaps, the state dinner with the Queen!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies
I was proud of Edward for firing Lauren Mallory, the skank! He and Bella are doing great, but that seems to really tick of mystery man! Sounds like he has bad plans for them both in the future! I hope he doesn't hurt defenseless little Seth!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 32 Outed
It's great that Seth likes Edward so much, since he doesn't take to everyone. Edward's dad is unnecessarily an ass, and his mom is a sweetheart! I figured the press would be all over this budding relationship, they can't seem to help themselves! I think it's lovely that Bella and Edward are falling in love, and he wants to be there for Seth!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night
This really sounded like a great first date"out"!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
I was afraid the stalker creep was watching that happen since he said one of the cameras he monitored was in that storage room on the third floor! How slimy of him to watch them, he should be ashamed! Bella and Edward on the other hand were great! Can't wait to see where he's taking her on their date!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss
I did read Hear Me and loved it! Their fist dinner together started out okay, too bad it had to be disrupted! Stupid airline pilots! Darling little talk between Seth and Edward!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change
I really think Rose has decided to be nice to Bella, since she seems to make the president happy! I wonder why Nahuel was sent to trash Bella's home and what he was searching for in her room?
Date: 23 Aug 2014 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom
It was a pretty good start to their relationship, all things considered. This probably can't be any kind of "normal" dating situation!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference
I'm waiting for Bella's reason for ending that kiss too! Locking the door makes it look like Edward is about to find out. He is most likely to be a bit upset over the press conference as well. Then there are his parents, who may be upset over Bella, period! By the way, good for Rose and Em!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 25 A New Home
Bella's heart is touched by Prezward's caring for her and Seth's safety. With her place being trashed, it's a good thing she has a place to stay. Too bad it plays into the mystery man's plans also!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 24 Sisterly Conversations
Why not, if it was good enough for Bill Clinton, why not Edward Cullen? I really want to know why the creep is sending this Nahuel to Bella's house, obviously to do harm! I hope Jasper really likes Alice, and also loves shoes!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 23 Alternate Arrangements
Mystery indeed, since I can't imagine why this guy wants Bella out of her house! He seems to think Rosalie is his type, plus calling Bella a bitch seems like he doesn't care much for her! I'm holding my breath about Bella's reaction to Edward's confession!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 22 PJs and Ringing Phones
Tiny possibilty the threats come from Seth's sperm donor. Otherwise, no idea! It will come out that Rose did all the arrangements in Edward's name, trying to sweep Bella under the rug! Alice and Jasper must mean something to each other, but what?Great about your boy, even if it was a while ago!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 21 Handling Things
Too bad there are so many prying eyes present. It might be fun to see Edward's response to Bella's gratitude!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
This is getting awfully creepy, with that last awful rant from Bella's phone stalker! Sure galvanized her dad to help get them out and hide. It looks like it will take the power of the presidency to keep her and Seth safe!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
I sure hope Cayden went through that test without problems! As for the prez and his aid, Miss Bella, they definitely have something, maybe a problem, they are not sure what!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
Now I'm really curious as to who fathered Seth! It was a real sad story , about Brady, but I'm glad Bella finally saw she was hating the wrong person, when she blamed Edward for Brady's death. I'm also glad that she will continue to work with him and admits, to herself, that she feels something for him!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 17 Emotional Confrontation
Now we're getting to the bottom of this hate thing! It all becomes much more clear, now that Bella has spilled how much she cared for Brady, and how much she enjoyed that kiss!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 16 Close Encounters
That was exciting and not too surprising! I know they both have thought about it, no matter how they deny these feelings to themselves! Rosalie is doing her best to squelch any spark between Edward and Bella. I have no clue why Alice isn't attracted to Jasper, nor why Emmett and Rose aren't an item!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 15 Searching for Connections
Surely that can't be the problem? If they had been that close to each other, one or both should remember it! Bella's apparent dislike of his sure seems to bother the heck out of Edward!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 14 Demands
That was close! If Emmett hadn't interrupted, who knows what would have developed?
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 13 Diverting Disaster
I kind of think Bella has a problem with the way the prez has acted since taking office, saying one thing to get elected and doing another once there! Sort of like the real man in the Oval Office! Politicians are notorious for doing that kind of thing! Even Edward himself was thinking that he's fallen into bad habits since taking office and going along to get along! P.S., glad your boy got better back when you wrote this, he's blessed to have a mom so caring and watchful of all his health problems!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 12 Barbie Bella
This is getting really interesting, with Alice being added to the mix, and the two of them going to work together Monday. Even more, I'm looking forward to Saturday and Bella bringing Seth to the SWhite House with her!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 11 Arrangements
It's difficult to understand why his parents would treat him like that, questioning his actions and motives. Guess you're always a child to the people who raised you!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move
I know Bella feels she is the agrieved party here, but she better stop and think for a minute, that Edward could have been a whole lot nastier if he had wanted to be! He's offered her a job when he didn't have to and is putting up with her rudeness and disrespect a lot more than I would have done!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes
Sounds as if Stanley couldn't take the heat and let Bella go, rather than upset his customers. Too bad people have to have a knot in their tails over stuff like this! Life sure would be better if we all took a minute to listen to each other!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
Dear Lord. I forgot about the nuts out there! Poor Bella, she didn't do anything to deserve that nasty threatening message!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
I knew they could come to some sort of understanding if they put their minds to it. They both seem to be stubborn as a couple of mules, so are well matched!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
Actually, I'm not very impressed with either the president or Seth's mom! They are both angry at the other and not being very nice to boot! I have hope they will both calm down and act like grownups!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
No good ever comes of overhearing part of a conversation! Poor little Seth! What an awful thing to have to live with! You sure have my sympathy for your son having this FPIES!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
I'm thinking that Seth's vomiting on the president is a result of his medical issues, and his mother will be explaining those soon! She was panicked when she found out her dad fed Seth pancakes, so I'm guessing that is part of the problem!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
Quite the first impressions, if his thinking is anything to go by! I wonder what Ms. Hale's problem is?
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
Oh, oh, she thinks his form is luscious? This ought to be an interesting interview!
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
I'm getting a vibe here of people not knowing all the facts and perhaps jumping to conclusions!
Date: 31 Jan 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 23 Alternate Arrangements
Hi I jus love UR story and just wanted to say I hope both your boys and school was going well !! Thanks for writing a amazing story..
Date: 13 Jan 2014 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
LOL. Yeah she sure has a bit of explaining to do!
Date: 20 Aug 2013 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
I loved this so much. Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to write it! :)
Date: 07 Aug 2013 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
Enjoyed the ride!!! Throwing the red Jimmy was priceless!!! :)
Date: 16 Jan 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 16 Close Encounters
I'm just glad she quit calling him Asshat!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
Kick ass story, loved every chapter of it.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
OMG...projectile vomit, that was priceless! lol
I already love baby Seth/your Cayden.
~LauraLeigh
Date: 19 Sep 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
Son like father Edward was the best for them and you got to love the Jimmys lol. Thanks so much for a wonderful story.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1
what a wonderful life love it sad it is almost over what a wonderful ride Thanks
Date: 19 Sep 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends
That was perfect I hope she will be able to carry a child for them
Date: 13 Sep 2012 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
just finished reading this story. It was great.
I like the ending, Seth going in his dad's footsteps. I love the bond between them.
Good story.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
Bon je commence la lecture et pour le moment j'aime bien !
Date: 02 Sep 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
lovely ending :)
Date: 01 Sep 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
wow, that's some mean list of playstuffs and food that your son needs to aviod - it must be really hard work for you. My own eldest son had some allergies as a baby - some foods and still comes out in hives and his face swells if he touches latex or is bitten by an animal fly/exthma, asthma, hey fever. I know he can now self check foods and knows when he is starting to feel ill but hos syptoms are very minor compared to what your son risks. I pray that your son does outgrow these allergies and that he and yourself never have to go through what your bella and seth have.
Going to read some more now.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
I loved this story! I really liked Edwards character-you did a fantastic job. THank you
Date: 27 Aug 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
Ugh, perfect ending!
Date: 25 Aug 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
I love this ending. Seth thanking his Mom for having the urge to throw a shoes at the President was priceless. It is perfect they are still one big happy family with all the agents that protected them. I will miss this story! Great jib...thanks so much.
Date: 25 Aug 2012 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends
I love all of it! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 23 Aug 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
I loved the story. You tied up everything nicely except the future of Vanessa or did I miss it? I will miss this story.
Date: 21 Aug 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
Whoop!!! Love the ending. Hope your son continues to follow in your Seth's footsteps. Meg
Date: 21 Aug 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two
His dad is an ASS! Love Bella, she rocked!
Meg
Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
Just awesome! Thank you for taking us on this amazing journey!
Date: 20 Aug 2012 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
I just loved this story!! Thank you so much for sharing it with us!!
Date: 14 Aug 2012 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
Thanks awesome chapters
Date: 14 Aug 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
Amazing story!! :D
Date: 14 Aug 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
Sorry to see it end. Very well done !!!!!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
Yea vote for Edward!!! He's going to take care of it.
Date: 13 Aug 2012 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
No No Team Edward everyday. Bella needs to chill and let him help her and her help him with this stupid bill. Rosalie is Rosalie typical. I like Jasper's and Emmett's roll. I knew Jacob had to be in there somewhere. Hopefully we won't hear from him much. Thanks for the story MLD12
Date: 13 Aug 2012 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 5 Emergency
Wow! Talk about an education. You really have to be on your toes. keep up the good work with your son. God bless you and your family. MLD12
Date: 13 Aug 2012 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
Good Story!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
Good story. I'll have to admit. Edward as president. ok. Thank you for this one too MLD12
Date: 13 Aug 2012 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly
So I changed storys. I like them when I don't have to wait. I get Impatient. This story is good so far. Course Alice would have $600 shoes. But it's Bella's son right Keep going with Hear Me please and I'll read this one MLD12
Date: 13 Aug 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
I sit here crying after reading this chapter. Having the ending in Seth's pov made it the perfect ending. I am sorry to see this end. Oh and thanks for finding someone for Emmett. I will miss this story. Thanks, Maria
Date: 13 Aug 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
What a perfect way to cap off the lives of our beloved, illustrious Cullen family! Well done.
Best wishes for your Original Fiction.
May life imitate art for your son. Hoping Cayden out grows the stressful FPIES as Seth did.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 13 Aug 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
Your story is amazing and I'm so sad that it's over, but that was such a wonderful ending. :)