Date: 29 Jan 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 26:Returning to Beautiful Normal
Great chapter! Progress!!!
Date: 27 Jan 2014 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 26:Returning to Beautiful Normal
Edward and Bella are back. They are playful again.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 26:Returning to Beautiful Normal
Who would of thought such a simple thing could be so beautiful.
Date: 25 Jan 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 26:Returning to Beautiful Normal
Finally!
Date: 23 Jan 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 26:Returning to Beautiful Normal
I love these two!!
Date: 23 Jan 2014 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 26:Returning to Beautiful Normal
Loved it, can't wait to read more.
Date: 23 Jan 2014 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 26:Returning to Beautiful Normal
Looking forward to more
Date: 23 Jan 2014 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 26:Returning to Beautiful Normal
So wonderful. Who knew a haircut could be so great? Cannot wait for more!
Date: 07 Jan 2014 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 25: Selfless
That was really beautiful.
Date: 31 Dec 2013 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 25: Selfless
That was amazing! I really loved it! The journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step! I really felt like that applied to this chapter :)
Date: 30 Dec 2013 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 25: Selfless
Looking forward to more
Date: 16 Nov 2013 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 24: Unobstructed Paths
That was really nice of them to fix all the pictures.
Date: 11 Nov 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 24: Unobstructed Paths
I love your stories. They are so raw and full of emotion. Sometimes I have to re-read a line to "get" it but I do eventually and I love it.
Anyone who has complained about how these two navigate their derailed life, is clearly missing the point. When life as you know and plan it falls apart, getting on track to something just as wonderful yet different is extreamly difficult and terrifyingly emotional.
Thank you for sharing.
Date: 11 Nov 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 24: Unobstructed Paths
I am glad that Edward is coming back.
Date: 11 Nov 2013 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 24: Unobstructed Paths
Looking forward to more
Date: 04 Oct 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 23: Declarations
I am so happy that Bella is doing well and that she stood up to Edward by making him go home and clean up.
Date: 03 Oct 2013 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 23: Declarations
Oh wow, that was amazing! I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 01 Oct 2013 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 23: Declarations
Loved it, can't wait to read more.
Date: 01 Oct 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 23: Declarations
I think Edward is finally getting it. I hate that Bella had to be hurt to wake him up from his pity party.
Date: 01 Oct 2013 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 23: Declarations
Looking forward to more
Date: 01 Oct 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 23: Declarations
so sad that it took this to make a change...but a change it did and now his head is outta his ass and they can start moving forward.
Date: 09 Sep 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Sound of Waking Up
I am so glad that Charlie stands by Edward and woke him up to his love for Edward. He needed a good kick in the pants for his self loathing.
Date: 07 Sep 2013 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Sound of Waking Up
Charlie is amazing. And I'm so glad that Bella woke up. Hopefully this will finally be the positive turn Edward needs. Maybe now he will get help for all his problems.
Date: 05 Sep 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Sound of Waking Up
im kind of torn here. i dont think she should forgive so easily he broke her and he played on her insecurities and ran with them. dont get mewrong i love edward but jeez man he needs to get a grip already over twenty chapters of angst . this is only story i read full of angst and idk why since i have long ago given them up but this one is diff. theres no manwhore edward or cheater edward i am so over that. this one is all angst but the storyline is soooo different and i dont think its been done before kind of reminds me of impact another beautiful story without the unnecessary bs hope theres more soon.
Date: 05 Sep 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Sound of Waking Up
Aw, that was amazing! I am still here, and will be here until the last chapter/epilogue :D
Date: 05 Sep 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Sound of Waking Up
Well he gets it now.Men so blind.
Date: 04 Sep 2013 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Sound of Waking Up
I absolutely LOVE this story please update again soon
Date: 04 Sep 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Sound of Waking Up
I just love this story!!!!
Date: 04 Sep 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Sound of Waking Up
Great chapter,cant wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2013 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Sound of Waking Up
I love this story and can't wait for the updates. You have very successfully showed the anguish present in both Bella and Edward also showing the never ending love between them. But now is the time for forgivness and healing and I can hardly wait.
Yes I love this Charlie, so understanding and loving.
Date: 04 Sep 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Sound of Waking Up
Looking forward to more
Date: 28 Aug 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 21: Clarity
Oh Edward. I hope there will not be legal ramifications for what happened. Because as stupid as he was it was a accident. And I really hope Bella wakes up and kicks his ass back into shape.
Date: 21 Aug 2013 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 21: Clarity
I know Emmett means well but was the ounch needed. And also its all god to talk the talk and be all in the know. But he does not know hoe dward is feeling so he has no right to don play or make fun of edwards mental state.
What he wemt through is life changing, is he sayinh he'll wake up and act like nothings changed?
Date: 20 Aug 2013 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 21: Clarity
I hope he goes to jail
Date: 20 Aug 2013 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 21: Clarity
OH MY GOSH!!! I cannot wait to see what happens next for these two!
Date: 19 Aug 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 21: Clarity
Looking forward to more
Date: 19 Aug 2013 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 21: Clarity
That is a pretty big reality check for Edward...he finally got what he though he wanted! Maybe all the people that turned there back on Edward will finally see that the best part of him is Bella. Thanks for the update...cursing Edward right now for his stupidity, but hopeful people like Emmett andEsme will finally help, and not take no for an answer.
Date: 07 Aug 2013 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 20: Shattered
OMG! I hope that Edward doesn't hurt Bella with the bat. Because there will be no coming back from that. He will never forgive himself, even if Bella does. Or maybe it will be a wake up call. It's all so sad. I really hope some happy is coming soon. They both really deserve happy.
Date: 02 Aug 2013 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 20: Shattered
OH MY!!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2013 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 20: Shattered
It is time for Edward to grow up and stop having tantrums. He needs counciling. Bella needs to bring some one in, so Edward can't not go to the therapist. He can ignore, but therapist know how to deal with this situation.
Date: 27 Jul 2013 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 20: Shattered
damnit Edward, damn you boy!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2013 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 20: Shattered
Oh No! This makes me so sad
Date: 25 Jul 2013 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 20: Shattered
he needs some severe counseling!!!!!
Date: 25 Jul 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 20: Shattered
Looking forward to more
Date: 22 Jul 2013 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 19: A Moment of Weakness
Bella needs to stay strong. She has to stay more stubborn than Edward. It will be tough, but she knows that he is doing this out of love. She might need to talk to some one to get a little support. Edward won't go, but Bella can go to find out how to help him.
Date: 16 Jul 2013 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 19: A Moment of Weakness
Oh what a stubborn ass. Maybe Bella needs to show Edward that even if the pipe won't work, that the internal equipment is just fine. She needs to make him see a urologist who will tell him that even if he can never get it up again on his own, there are pills to help that. And all it would take is a little needle to make their home have little feet running up the stairs.
Date: 07 Jul 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 19: A Moment of Weakness
another great chapter, cant wait to read more
Date: 06 Jul 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 19: A Moment of Weakness
Looking forward to more
Date: 06 Jul 2013 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 19: A Moment of Weakness
Oh wow, that was amazing :) I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 28 Jun 2013 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 18: Whispered Words
Sometimes it takes me a couple of days before I read my updates because this story breaks my heart. I want to hug and nut punch Edward at the same time. Your writing truly captures the frustration of the characters. HEA? God I hope so.
Date: 21 Jun 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 18: Whispered Words
I hope Edward starts to heal mentally soon. Bella is being so strong putting up with his bad behavior. She knows he is hurting so much. That is true love. Charlie probably does need to have a good talk with Edward. He needs someone or something to smack him out of his funk.
Date: 20 Jun 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 18: Whispered Words
I'm glad that fate took Bella away longer. Maybe this will be the start of something good. Maybe this is what Edward needed to stop his stupid ideas.
Date: 19 Jun 2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 18: Whispered Words
Oh wow, that was amazing :) I really cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 18 Jun 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 18: Whispered Words
Wow this story is amazing.
Date: 18 Jun 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 18: Whispered Words
I think she has amazing strenght to take all of Edward's bullshit and not kick his ass. JS!
But love the story, the fact he was so worried at the end showed how much he truly loves her. Wonder if he realised that??
Looking forward to more! :)
Date: 18 Jun 2013 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 18: Whispered Words
I love this story...I hope they can get to common ground and will Edward ever regain any ujse of his legs.
Date: 17 Jun 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 18: Whispered Words
looking forward to more
Date: 17 Jun 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 18: Whispered Words
Still love this story....!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2013 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 18: Whispered Words
oh my god. this story seriously breaks my heart.
Date: 02 Jun 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 17: Hovering
Oh Edward is so misguided right now. I understand him wanting Bella to have everything and thinking that he can't give it to her. But no matter what happens with his legs or dick (sorry that sounds horrible) they can still have everything. They can still have babies and a happy life.
Date: 28 May 2013 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 17: Hovering
great story. cant wait to read more.
Date: 27 May 2013 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 17: Hovering
Love the story, would love to see a prequel of the relationship maybe when this one is completed?
Date: 26 May 2013 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 17: Hovering
Oh wow, that was amazing. I really cannot wait to see what happens next :)
Date: 26 May 2013 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 17: Hovering
looking forward to more
Date: 21 May 2013 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 16: Irrational
wow he is stupid .. im looking forward to the next chdater
Date: 06 May 2013 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 16: Irrational
Bella better find him a therapist and fast. He is sacrificing himself for her what he thinks is her happiness, but it is his depression. Bella only wants him. She won't be happy without him. Edward can't see past his broken body. Bella needs to find help for him fast. He needs to talk to another athlete who was injured and find out how he learned how to live again. Edward will die without Bella. He is actually preparing for his death by pushing Bella away. He wants her to find a new life, so she won't care if he is gone.
Date: 06 May 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 16: Irrational
Such a sad chapter. I hope Bella or someone talks some sence into him
Date: 05 May 2013 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 16: Irrational
Oh my heart hurts now
Date: 05 May 2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 16: Irrational
While I absolutely hate this. You knew it was coming. But hopefully they will be able to turn his thinking around soon. Because no matter what he says or tries to do Bella is never going to stop loving him. I just hope he doesn't order her away.
Date: 05 May 2013 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 16: Irrational
Stupid stupid man.
Date: 05 May 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 16: Irrational
I can't begin to imagine the anger and frustration someone goes through processing this kind of change in themself. Please don't let him win.
Date: 04 May 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 16: Irrational
this story breaks my fucking heart.
Date: 04 May 2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 16: Irrational
Oh wow, that was amazing! I really loved this. I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 04 May 2013 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 16: Irrational
ur scaring me . his pushing her away and hurting her i hope she doesnt give in. i have a bad feeling his gonna do something so hurtful and shes gonna give up i really hope u dont split them up and no love triangle but i dont think bella would do that. ur chapters are killing me so depressing.please when r we gonna see the light at the end of the tunnel.
Date: 15 Apr 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 1: Double Play
Yeah! Feeling is slowly coming back.
Date: 14 Apr 2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 15: Up and Down
I'm confused. Did he dream it?
Author's Response:
No dream, it was real. :)
Date: 14 Apr 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 15: Up and Down
I'm so gla md that Bella was able to coax that out of Edward. Because just maybe as the nerves are coming back he needs to not stress about it because that will make it never rise. I'm so happy they had that together.
On a serious level though. Edward can still give her children even if his erection never returns. A doctor can extract his sperm.
Date: 12 Apr 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 15: Up and Down
SO amazing :) I have missed these two :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2013 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 15: Up and Down
WILL EDWARD EVER BE ABLE TO HAVE SEX WITH HIS WIFE AGAIN?
Date: 11 Apr 2013 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 15: Up and Down
Amazing! He's making progress at least physically. If only he would mentally. So hard on himself. Very unselfish lover, both of them.
Date: 10 Apr 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 15: Up and Down
looking forward to more
Date: 10 Apr 2013 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 15: Up and Down
I love this story!
Date: 10 Apr 2013 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 15: Up and Down
Edward has come so far. but he is getting depressed because it is taking so long. He is getting tired, but Bella still has faith.
Date: 10 Apr 2013 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 15: Up and Down
Hay, he got a woody! That's great news!
Date: 10 Apr 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 15: Up and Down
GREAT CHAPTER! I was confused? did he aactually feel her giving him pleasure or was he imagining it?
Author's Response:
Not imagined, absolutely real. :)
Date: 31 Mar 2013 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 14: A Beautiful Mess
:)
Date: 22 Mar 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 14: A Beautiful Mess
This story is just so beautiful. I literally fight the urge to cry it is so beautiful! The love that Bella has for Edward is beyond words, and so is Edward's towards Bella, though he needs to bring the wall down his guilt has built.
I will be anxiously awaiting the next update. Please give us one soon! Thank you so much for this one!
peach
Date: 21 Mar 2013 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 14: A Beautiful Mess
I am so proud of both of them for finally talking from the heart and being brave enough to show their weaknesses and strengths.
Date: 21 Mar 2013 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 14: A Beautiful Mess
Looking forward to more
Date: 21 Mar 2013 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 14: A Beautiful Mess
I hope that Bella can help him in the way he needs. Beautiful things can happen with the right amount and kind of stimulation. 6 years at Shriners hospital in Philadelphia taught me that.
I love this story. I hope you are well and will be waiting with baited breath for more.
Date: 19 Mar 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 14: A Beautiful Mess
This is truly a touching story of epic love! Great read so far. Can't wait to see more. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 18 Mar 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 14: A Beautiful Mess
That was aamzing! I really loved this so much! I have a question. Will Edward and Bella have children in this story? Just curious :)
Date: 18 Mar 2013 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 14: A Beautiful Mess
He's getting there
Date: 18 Mar 2013 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 14: A Beautiful Mess
Wow, I am so moved by this story.
Date: 18 Mar 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 14: A Beautiful Mess
this story is so bittersweet!!!
Date: 18 Mar 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 14: A Beautiful Mess
Wonderful chapter.. Love Charlie!
Looking forward to more Bella and Edward :)
Date: 17 Jan 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 13: Choices
Edward has a hard time realizing that Bella loves him no matter what happens to his body. She loves his spirit. What hurts her the most is when he pushes her away due to embarressment or regret. These are things she does not care about. She loves him.
Date: 17 Jan 2013 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 13: Choices
looking forward to more