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Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

I was crying towards the end of this very moving story...

beautiful...

TY

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 5

Beautiful...



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2012 3:37 PM Title: Outtake / Epilogue

I loved this story. You had me crying, again. Bella and Edward met his mom. I think her husband is still in purgatory. Now that she is in heaven, she might be able to put in a good word.



Author's Response: I agree with you. In most circumstances, not all I suppose, when someone takes their own life they cannot be in their right mind, and God would never hold what they did in that state against them...I don't know. Edward Sr. probably wasn't in his right mind for a long time and acted in despair in the end....but he still needed to answer for all the other wrongs he'd done in life... but I like to think that he and his wife were reunited eventually....if that's what she needed to make her heaven complete. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2012 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

sounds like a lot of the douche bag dads from that time.



Author's Response: at least one anyway....

Reviewer: starburst_listerine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 5

i'm a blubbering mess.

brilliant.



Author's Response: Thanks very much. Sorry it made you cry...but I think it was probably unavoidable. Glad you liked it though.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2012 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 5

A simple and true story,liket the real life stories,but so powerful due to the emotions that the words bring out to the reader.In my opinion it is an amazing and emotional story that honors the memory of your dear father.Thank you for posting it.



Author's Response: Thanks you so much! My Mom liked the story....Dad probably would have thought me silly and sentimental...but between you and me, I think he would have liked it as well. ;)

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2012 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 5

OMG! I am crying like a baby right now.  That has got to be the sadest, bestest,  and most loving ending ever.  You are very good at this writing stuff! I will lok forward to to reading you other stories.

Maria

 



Author's Response: Thanks very much! Even though it was a sad ending, i tried to make it hopeful.

Reviewer: starburst_listerine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

holding my breath

chewing my nails

love it, update!!!



Author's Response: Thank so much! I'm glad you like it so far

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2012 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 3

This is really good! Can't wait for more! :)



Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you like the final chapter

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