[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2015 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 72
THANK YOU !! :) this story was AWESOME!!! ;) major tissue warning through out though ;) i LOVED these characters ;D
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 72
Lovely ending to a wonderful story.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 66
oh that was so sweet!
Date: 14 Nov 2012 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well Carlisle told him more than anyone. Why doesn't he just say I am broke down in Bump no where Egypt and the car repair place said 3 days. The woman is a waitress in a resturant where he uses the phone and eats. She also has a big mouth and not many customers.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 65
Awesome! He's so sweet. :-)
Date: 25 Sep 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 63
Aww, so cute!
Date: 12 Aug 2012 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 63
This just made me laugh. Hard. We had pretty much that very scenario play out in our home with our son. Darn these cooridinated children!
Date: 04 Aug 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 62
So sad now that Charlie was gone...especially during Father's day. :-)
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 59
You know how sweet Edward is?
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 57
Beautiful as always...*sniffles*
Date: 09 Jun 2012 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 57
just love this story. keeps reminding me how precious life is. love, enjoy every moment. another great chapter. thank you for sharing. :)
Date: 17 May 2012 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 51
I love how you portray Edward and Bella. It's rare to encounter this teenage love.
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 50
Very well done, great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 48
Beautiful...as usual, very poetic.
Date: 11 May 2012 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 48
Funny chapter. :-) I wonder what he'll name the baby. :-)
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 46
Amazing writing hitting exactly the right note...so...sweetly.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 45
Just started this today and have to say this is so much more then a drabble. It is a well thought out, exqusitely planned and excuted piece of work, well worth the read. Thank you, I look forward to the rest of this beautiful little story.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 44
Soft and smooth wedding night.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 43
That was great fun, very unconventional and impatient.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 42
Oh I so liked that chapter it made me smile and laugh.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 41
She is only naughty when he asks her to be.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 37
Like the idea of Bella day.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 36
Charlie was so right about E
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 35
Grief is always cold...Edward is hot and sweet.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 34
They are so funny together...
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 33
Very, very good, hahahaha...
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 32
It is amazing how in so few words you can build a vast setting and fill it.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 31
Got her where he had dreamed of getting her.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 28
Aw God this is too much...crying again...that was so amazing.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 27
Beautifully described.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 26
The way you use words makes me smile...what a reunion scene...ponient.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
O.K. crying now...beautiful end.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
Little does he know.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 21
Excellent chapter, gritty and sweet all at the same time.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
You should be...no I don't mean that, great depth of feeling in this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
Very nice...take that girl
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
Clever old Dad and love the last line...hints from all sides.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
Good old Carlise and riddles.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
Misunderstandings, don't you just love them.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think she is confused about that...sad
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
Tell him to come back.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
Think he has a funny way of looking at things.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
Lovely way of explaining part of their story.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice bit of dialogue...very emotional.
Date: 06 May 2012 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 45
Edward... glad he's giving the letter to her now. :-)
Date: 03 May 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 43
It is. I have to laugh at Edward, too.
Date: 03 May 2012 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 42
Lol! Everyone must be wondering where the bride and groom are.
Date: 29 Apr 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 41
That was quick! They just got engaged.
Date: 28 Apr 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 40
Hilarious chapter. Couldn't stop laughing.
Date: 21 Apr 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 36
Edward is just sweet. Bella needs to realize that it's okay to need someone.
Date: 20 Apr 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 35
So sad. Crying over this chapter.
Date: 17 Apr 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 33
Home! :-) Edward and Bella time. I like it. :-)
Date: 14 Apr 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 31
Omg I have no words. Well a few awesome, great, I thInk this story is going great places the way you write makes it ... Now I have no words can't describe it.
Date: 12 Apr 2012 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 29
All this time, Edward knew. What does Bella have to say for herself now that she knows that he knows? When's the wedding?
Date: 10 Apr 2012 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 28
Edward is so sweet. What is Bella afraid of again?
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 27
Tears, my tears make me sad. What a beautiful chapter. So beautifully written. I thank you.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 27
This story is so amazing! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed for every chapter, as I have been reading from my phone and it doesn't allow me to review. I don't understand why more people aren't reviewing...it'd made me laugh, cry, and laugh some more! I promise when I update my stories to send all my readers your way! This is an awesome story that deserves more attention! Thanks for sharing and I can't wait to read more!
Krazi
Xoxo
Date: 07 Apr 2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
Just wanting to go up and down that Edward finally made it. Likely, Charlie would be dead by the time they get back.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 26
This story is so beautiful and realistic. I love it and look forward to you updates. It deserves a
Thousand wonderful reviews.
Date: 06 Apr 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 25
Sad. Charlie is dying. This is a bittersweet chapter.
Date: 05 Apr 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love the cliffhanger. I want to know what Edward would do now that he finds out. :-)
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
He better not be in a wreck where he doesn't remember her but does remember right now girl. I'll die!
Date: 04 Apr 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 23
they are so romantic!!!! Don't we all wish all guys were like this Edward : )
Date: 04 Apr 2012 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
Sweet. I think Bella is taking this out of proportion. Edward obviously loves her.
Date: 02 Apr 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 21
Exciting! Hopefully, it will pick up the pace next chapter. :-) You know. Away from the annoying girl.
Date: 31 Mar 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 20
What happened with the annoying girl? You know. The one that's trying to get Edward's attention.
Date: 31 Mar 2012 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 19
This was one of the most interesting stuff I've read in Twific. Needs more love. :-)
Date: 28 Mar 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
Whew! Some relief from right now girl
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2012 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
Eu não confiaria tanto assim rsrs
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2012 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm speachless
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm here watching an Edward almost explode due to an educationwith this woman he says not all the time and that nobody intrudes onconversations he had with someone on the phone. I he had lost hiseducation there long ago, since she stepped in for the first time. Nowstill have to wait four days to get back to Bella and family. Does this girl anyone would purposely sabotaging his car? may be right.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
You have to give her a chance to explain it
Date: 25 Mar 2012 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
loving your story!
Date: 25 Mar 2012 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm reading and excited to read about whats coming next. :)
Date: 25 Mar 2012 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm reading and can't get enough! Sorry I haven't told you before! Keep up the good work!