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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:41 PM Title: Drumsticks and Penalty Kicks

so cool!!!!! im going to read the sequal now ;D

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 9:41 PM Title: Drumsticks and Penalty Kicks

Loved it

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 6:02 PM Title: Belle

This sounds like a great story! I've added it to my favorites along with the sequel. I plan to read this before I begin the sequel!

Reviewer: FluffyLiz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:49 PM Title: Ariel

New sticks?  With a note asking her to finish the song - except that would reveal him as a stalkery guy with a fixation LOL

Reviewer: FluffyLiz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:22 AM Title: Donald Duck

I'm hoping this story is posted elsewhere, with a shedload more reviews, because 39 is a joke.  I was trawling for stories here as I've joined the FanFiction.net boycott this weekend, and even though I've got a gazillion stories PDF'd and on my Kindle, I thought I'd check out what was here.  The first 2 chapters have certainly piqued my interest, so I will definitely keep reading.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 3:14 PM Title: Drumsticks and Penalty Kicks

Just read the whole thing. I loved it!!! The last chapter was perfect!!!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2012 3:37 AM Title: Princess Aurora

OMG.............I could hardly stand it! I LOVED this chapter. I can't for the sequel ;-)

Reviewer: keola Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2012 7:47 PM Title: Princess Aurora

yay!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2012 5:06 PM Title: Princess Aurora

Beautiful meeting!!!  I love it.  can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TwilightDramaTeach Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2012 3:36 PM Title: Princess Aurora

Ok, I guess I could be called a creepy stalker without a number, as I have been religiously reading this story.  This chapter was so incredible good that I had to send you a review!  Loved it!!!!!

Reviewer: AlliSweets Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2012 2:27 PM Title: Princess Aurora

OMG!! beautiful just beautiful! ! ;0)
ohh and Happy Birthday!! Thank u shareing this story! =)

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2012 9:03 PM Title: Mrs. Potts

I'll be glad when they finally offcially meet :-)

Reviewer: Isabellamae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2012 7:36 PM Title: Buzz Lightyear

Great, just awesome they are soo cute together, well u know what I mean. 

Happy Mothers day :) 

Reviewer: AlliSweets Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2012 2:40 PM Title: Nala

Bella is so cute!love the chap. Thanks again!

Reviewer: AlliSweets Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2012 4:00 PM Title: Simba

OMG!! these 2 are soooo adorable!! Just love them.. can't wait for tomorrow! Thx ufor writing! =0)

Reviewer: TwilightDramaTeach Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2012 4:08 PM Title: Geppetto

Have been reading quietly but had to leave a review for this chapter.  It was extremely well written and made me cry.  If you can put yourself in the story and feel the emotions of the character you know it is a great story!  Nice job!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2012 8:41 PM Title: Quasimodo

Mmmmm....seems like Eseme is already making plans for her son and his friends to take care of Bella. I'm glad ;-)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2012 9:30 PM Title: Donald Duck

this story shoudld have more reviews

Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2012 3:37 AM Title: Cinderella

i love your story. it shows pure, sweet love.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2012 6:09 PM Title: Belle

well this pulled me in.  I didn't want to start something that wasn't completed but i just had to!  can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2012 12:49 PM Title: Violet Parr

I am in love with this story and E/B. thanks for he frequent updates

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2012 1:47 AM Title: Chip 'n' Dale

Awwww Jasper is such a good friend, even when he's making fun of Edward!

Can't wait for Em's reaction.

Looking forward to tomorrow!!

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2012 1:46 AM Title: The Alley Cats

Well, that was a typical party I think.  I liked how understanding his parents, well, Dad, is about the fact that there might be some beer there, but just to make sure they are responsible.

I'm rather proud of Creeper for avoiding the come hither of Heidi.  Tramp!  Not that it was hard for him, seeing as he is totally enamored by Bella ... but still!  Good boy!!

Jasper ... what can we say about him!  Creeper must've been drunk babbling and spilled the beans!  This should be good!!

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2012 1:42 AM Title: Baloo

OH!  Should we just call it fate that he was able to find her that way.   "I was wandering through the forest one night and POOF there you were and I just HAD to keep drooling over you for the last month or so ... no biggie!"

I'm captivated by what they are saying to each other.  I hope they keep writing to each other for a while before they meet!

Okay - her playing "Someone is Watching Me" cracked me up ... yeah, that's all for you, Creeper.  No worries there!

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2012 1:36 AM Title: The Sorcerer's Apprentice

Okay, that dream was cool as hell.  I could totally see it in my head, perfectly.  I loved the music notes floating around their heads.

I must admit that I swooned when he said, "She's my Bella."

He's such a sweetheart, even if he is a stalker.

Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chip 'n' Dale

Can't wait to read Bella's POV

Reviewer: SpunkyBookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2012 1:47 PM Title: Basil of Baker Street

WOOT!

 

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 3:41 PM Title: Fa Mulan

I LOVE that she addressed him as "CREEPER."  That's just funny AND that she says she likes that better than calling him his number.

DG sound so lonely.  Even though it is unconventional, this friendship will be good for both of them I think.

I'm totally picturing in my head him sitting on his bed doing the girl squeal and it's cracking me up!!

Can't wait for tomorrow!!  What is this great suprise we are going to have??

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 3:32 PM Title: Captain John Smith

Creeper is rather cute trying to figure out what to say to her, yet not scare her off at the same time.

I loved his hint about sugar cookies being his favorite.  "Just so you know, in case the thought ever crosses your mind **toe in dirt*  sugar cookies are my favorite."  I can totally see him doing that LOL

So he asked her a bunch of questions that we all want the answers to, now to see if she answers!!!

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 3:28 PM Title: Woody

Um!  Well, he's a teenaged boy, I'm surprised he held out this long!  He needed it and it was freaking hot as hell, too!

I love the little peek into what Jasper and Em are doing on their day "off."  You keep the story well-rounded by giving us those little glimpses.

It was awesome seeing him play.  We knew he did, but to see him playing is something else.

Can't wait to see what he says in his letter!!

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2012 3:24 PM Title: Bashful

Awwww she wore a t-shirt for him!  How cute is that!!

You just keep doing what you're doing, Creeper, and she will learn to trust you!

She'll play for you!!

I kinda have to laugh at him.  He really does talk to himself a lot.  Are we sure he's not a mental patient and this is all a fantasy? hehe

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2012 6:44 PM Title: Vixey

Hehe!  I love what he thought she might call him and then whipped out the "Creeper!"

We finally have communication!  DG is so brave to have written him back, but I think she's searching for a friend, even if he is a little creepy!  He's not really creepy, but only we know that right now.  Hopefully she will find that out, too.  I think my favorite line in her letter is, "I'm trying really hard not to be, but I'm still scared of you."

She just lays it out there and I think that is a good way for Edward to know he needs to take it slowly with her.  He's smart enough to figure that one out!

Edward's question to her is perfect.  It would be what I would want to know!!

Can't wait to learn more!!

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2012 6:38 PM Title: Ace Chicken Little Cluck

I had to laugh at how Edward got rid of the guys.  Don't those boys have food at their own house?  Maybe they just really like being in a house without parents and E's house provides that right now.

I felt so bad for him when he thought about someone else being with his girl.  His reaction was extreme, so that should show him that his feelings for her are more than lust.

Him saying if the doors were closed, that he would be done was rather disheartening.  He might say he was done, but I can't help but wonder if he wouldn't have been drawn back to her.  Luckily, we'll never have to know because those doors were open for him ... and a notebook waiting for him!

Can't wait to see what Bella has to say!!

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2012 11:43 PM Title: Huey, Dewey, and Louie

LOL those boys are funny!  Typical boys, I'm guessing!

Jasper is going to end up getting pushy if Edward doesn't spill the beans soon. I think he would only get pushy if he felt Edward is in trouble.  He's such a great friend!

I'm so glad that Edward is going to go see his Drummer Girl!  He's probably going to need to be determined!!

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2012 9:38 PM Title: Angel

Aw!  Bella seems so lonely and sad.  She says everyone leaves her ... wonder what that means exactly.

I'm so glad she sees Creeper's gift differently in the light of day and isn't so scared of him!

Hopefully she will open the doors again for him.

She says to Maggie, "This isn't Phonenix."  So is that where she came from before?

Hmm ... you answer some questions and leave us with others to ponder!

Until tomorrow!

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 3:24 PM Title: Flower

Okay, I need to take this step by step!

Those boys have been friends for a long time.  Edward's 17 and they have been together since they were 8-years-old.  It's not wonder Jasper can get a read on Edward when he's acting funny!

Good for Edward trying to keep his focus on what he's been working toward all his life.  Girls are so distracting :)

I can't believe he finally saw her somewhere in town ... AND he got to hear her voice.  That should ramp up the images he has in his head of her!  I thought for sure he was going to talk to her ... big chicken! I mean, he could have walked up to her in the store and told her he was her creeper and she could have beaned him with a can of ... beans!

And yes, I guess we know where he'll be tonight ... stalking his heart's desire!

Can't wait 'til tomorrow!!!

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 3:17 PM Title: Penny

That poor girl!  I would be scared, too!

So ... we find out some things about Bella's house AND the fact that Drummer Girl is in fact Bella.  Well, you never know, it could have been Angela or something *shrug*

I feel awful for our Drummer Girl.  It seems like she is dealing with a load of pain in her house and now her place of escape has been intruded upon.

Hopefully things will work out and she will find out what we all know ... Creeper is harmless and just obsessed!

Maybe once she finds that out, she can have a new form of escape in Creeperward!

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2012 5:27 PM Title: Piglet

Awww!  Poor Creeper!  My heart hurts for him, but really, what was she going to do?  I can't see her walking out into the driveway saying, "Come out, come out, where ever you are!!"

YUP!  I'd be slamming those doors closed to and then I'd probably have to change my pants!

Creeper, you can peek on me anytime, honey!

I'm glad he's not giving up though!!

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2012 5:25 PM Title: Aladdin

I LOVE the Drum Fairy reference ... that was classic.

No, someone telling me that he won't hurt me wouldn't freak me out at all!  *sarcasm*

I wonder how Drummer Girl is going to react to coming into her "safe" place and seeing that someone has intruded!

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2012 5:24 PM Title: Prince Edward

Awww ... at least he KNOWS he's insane and kind of admits it!  I think it's great that he got those sticks, even if it was for selfish reasons of just wanting the rest of that song.

NOW - how is he going to GIVE them to her?

Oh, Prince Edward ... be the hero!!

Reviewer: Meddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2012 5:22 PM Title: Ariel

So Edward is going to go get her new sticks!  Will he give them to her in person?

I love his mental ramblings.  He knows what he is doing is wrong, but he can't stop himself.  Poor dude!

I love all of her different t-shirts.  Is there a significance to them?

I think creeper needs to bring a stool to sit on!!

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2012 5:19 PM Title: Donald Duck

Emmett and Jasper are hilarious!  They are great friends, even if they are a pain in the ass!

I wonder why she is so sad, and if maybe meeting Edward could make her life better.

 

Reviewer: Meddie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2012 5:16 PM Title: Belle

Edward is a stalker!  It sounds like he has a thing for his drummer girl!

It's a good thing his parents are out of town, otherwise he wouldn't be able to like a phantom in the night!

Great start!

Reviewer: AlliSweets Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2012 2:37 PM Title: Piglet

well first let me say i already love this story! I do feel a lttlel bad for edward... but if i were bella i would of some the same thing. Can't wait to see what happens next. Thx =)

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