[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2018 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can’t wait for Edward
Date: 15 Mar 2017 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
great frist chapter, liking this so far, but one thing Emmett has 2 t's not 1
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 37
Wow! Thanks so much for completing this awesome story I'm off to read the sequel now ;D
Date: 29 Oct 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 37
This was a great story! Thanks for sharing..
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 37
They deserve their happily ever after.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 35
Where have the lemons like that been??? :) after reading YOM, I was surprised every scene wasn't like that. ;)
Can't wait to read the sequel to this!!!
Thx :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 29
Jeez!!! These two are killing me!! How much more angst and stupidity on their part will I have to endure? Enough is enough already!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2013 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow is all I can say!!! I'm SO glad I am reading this story!! Love how u write!!! Thx!
:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2013 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 37
That my dear was a perfect ending to a wonderful story. Thank you!! Can't wait to read the sequel!
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2013 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 30
Thank God ladies!! So happy that they are together now...
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2013 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 17
My heart is breaking for these 2 beautiful souls.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh noooooo!!! Alex is a nice guy so far, but I was hoping that Edward & Bella would make things work...what is up with Edward?
You are still doing an awesome job with your story!!
Date: 28 Nov 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 10
amazing chapter! Poor Bella!
Date: 28 Nov 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 20 Jul 2012 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 37
i effing love this story..it drove me crazy but i like tht it had substance it wasnt all fluff after they met. i hate stories where they immediately fall in love and its all rainbows amd sandcastles. GREAT STORY!
Author's Response:
Thanks, if you liked this one you should check out the sequel. :)
Date: 15 Jul 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 37
Thank you for this wonderful story!
Date: 15 Jul 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 36
no words. they got their happy ending....
Date: 15 Jul 2012 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 34
jane's words seem insincere considering her outburst at the news of Edward and Bella's marriage....
Date: 15 Jul 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 33
oh I wish you would put more details into your lemons....other than that, i have no complaints. the story is great!
Date: 15 Jul 2012 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 32
oh no! Too dangerous! he could choke her out before help arrives! I love that they're together and happy but things could go wrong!
Date: 14 Jul 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 31
I think this will get pretty ugly before it all turns out OK....
Date: 14 Jul 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 30
Hooray! I am so happy for them......but I suspect we haven't seen the last of Alex yet...
Date: 14 Jul 2012 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 29
Lets hope the baby looks like him....I know it's his...please let them be together at the end....
Date: 14 Jul 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 28
It has to be Edward's child! I can't believe she is still with Alex. Somebody kill him, please?
Date: 14 Jul 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 27
how could she say she loved Edward and not believe him? does he still want her after all this? Alex needs to receive some retrubution for all he has done. Bella needs to see what kind of man she has gotten herself tangled up with....
Date: 14 Jul 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 26
Alex? Jane? who would know to punch him out like that?
Date: 14 Jul 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 25
I know she is cheating, but he is her soul mate and Alex played dirty to get her. I know that technically doesn't make it OK but, holy shit, a person needs to follow their heart sometimes and convention be damned! I wonder what nasty business Alex will pull out of his hat in order to try to keep Bella?
Date: 14 Jul 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 24
you are too funny....of course you know everything!! I'm glad that Alice and Rose dragged her away to show her this cottage. She needed to know how he really felt. Now she needs to know about Alex and what he did....and why he is so nervous about her going to the wedding. I am spending my Saturday finishing this story as I have to know what happens!
Date: 14 Jul 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
I am waiting for when she finds out what her husband is really like! How he had Edward beaten up back then....just let him show his true colors just once to her....
Date: 14 Jul 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 22
This can't be it for them! I have a feeling, after a lot more drama and angst, that they will find each other again. I will keep reading with that hope in mind.
Date: 14 Jul 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 21
I like the alternate Bella/Edward POVs. It gives a fuller view into what is going on. So Jane thinks Edward is into her, huh? What a way to get revenge on Alex! Now Edward is famous and not so powerless as before maybe he can fuck up Alex instead of the other way around.
Date: 14 Jul 2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
Alex commands her?? OK now I know I was right about that asshole! He will end up abusing her. Just wait until she finds out that it was him who had Edward beaten up and who threatened him and Bella if she didn't marry him. Of course, you wrote this so you know. I am just guessing. How am I doing? I know you won't tell me. It's OK. I can read one more chapter tonight then I'm going out. I will finish this tomorrow!
Date: 14 Jul 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
oh Fuck! will he be aloof? will she? what will Alex do? I'm glad you made the time jump so we didn't have to hear Edward's misery. Although he has been seen with a few blondes, hasn't he? Is it all for show or has he moved on....?
Date: 14 Jul 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 18
I knew it! Alex Volturi is evil! Oh I can't wait to see him get what's coming to him....you have over half the story to make this right, to have them wind their way back to each other.....I can't wait to see who or what will take Alex down.....
Date: 14 Jul 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 17
this hurts me, I can imagine how they feel...I can't believe you did this! Alex will turn out to be an abuser, I just KNOW it!
Date: 14 Jul 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
No, this is just wrong! He will turn on her, I can just feel it! What happened to Edward? Why did he do that? Yikes, this story is just going in the wrong direction! It's always darkest before the dawn, right?
Date: 14 Jul 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 15
still enjoying the story and wishing for a HEA...
Date: 14 Jul 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
you need to find a way to keep them together, you hear me! I want my HEA....please, Bee....you have a lot more chapters left in this story....find a way, please? I really hate Alex and think he will show his true colors to Bella soon....
Date: 14 Jul 2012 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 13
i can't stand that they will have to part! you have to do something! maybe you already have and I will just have to read and find out.
Date: 14 Jul 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
A screaming orgasm sounds wonderful! If I still drank, I would surely try one. Why did she give her parents Jacob's name? What purpose will that serve? I hope her scheme to get a talent scout to discover Edward works. How can her parents force her to marry that pig, Alex! she will be miserable! Is there hope for our lovebirds yet? I really love a HEA.....j/s
Date: 13 Jul 2012 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
I want a screaming orgasm too! oh, wait, my lover already gives me those....LOL! Hooray for Bella for standing up for Edward like that! Alex is a pig!
Date: 13 Jul 2012 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
c'mon. can't she just have who she loves? this isn't feudal europe, is it? an arranged marriage fcs? would her parents cut her off if she stayed with Edward? does she care about money more than love? if she does, then she doesn't deserve him!
Date: 13 Jul 2012 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
of course she is every bit in love with him as he is with her. he needs to make it big in music and make a lot of money then her parents might accept him. maybe.
Date: 13 Jul 2012 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love our Edward....I would say yes, money or no money....she will see.
Date: 13 Jul 2012 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 7
i'm glad she's going home with him. she will realize that she can't live without him...eventually...
Date: 13 Jul 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
you surely gave us a very abbreviated lemon for Bella and Edward!! I know, you are the writer and it is your perogative....so Edward has fallen for Bella, huh? I don't think she can stay away for long....what will her parents think? does she care?
Date: 13 Jul 2012 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
ok so our 2 protagonists are now going to satisfy their carnal desires....i have trouble believing that this will stay a 1 night stand. i think they will fall....
Date: 13 Jul 2012 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
does he really sleep with different women every night? and he wants Bella too? Hmmmm....these characters are all whores, aren't they? what fun!
Date: 13 Jul 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
He does want her....do you usually write HEAs?
Date: 13 Jul 2012 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
yep, Bella fucked up big time. she didn't like it when guys went after her just for her money now she's offering money to Edward? WTF? Methinks Edward won't stay away for long, though....
Date: 13 Jul 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
pretty hot first chapter, beegurl....i like this because it is a completed fic and I have liked others of yours....didn't you write "Worship"? are you the same writer?
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the reviews but nope beegurl isn't me. I'm bee1982. I think beegurl is above me on the auhtor list, but hey I'm glad you've found PWF. :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is an all time favorite!! :)
Author's Response:
Oh, how we both love our barward! :-)
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Damn why sleep with Jake (gonna puke) let him down and screw Edward :) in a very good way
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 30
I dont understand exactly what Alex did .. did he beat her up or did he rape her too ??
Author's Response:
He just beat her, he didn't rape her.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 8
love edwards pov, more.
Date: 02 May 2012 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 37
I loved your story. It was agonising and amazing how many times they just dindn't make it...
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bella is pregnant?
Such lack of communication, Edward had no faith in the love of Bella, and Bella was not strong enough to resist the plans of their parents.
Alex is sweet to Bella, but I think this will change.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2012 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 37
loved your story!