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Reviewer: Krystle Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2023 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Krystle Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2023 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2017 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue

thank you so much for keeping your stories posted for us to read as many times as we can ;) i loved reading this one again and having charlie become a vampire with tanya as a mate!!! wow!!!! i hope your rl is continuing to get better and your in my prayers ;D

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue

I loved your story.

Reviewer: JDRAST Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue

Hello.  What a terrific story!  I just loved it!  The plot was ingenius!  And I loved the HEA. Thank you for the entertaining read!  Best of luck in your professional career as an author.  Thanks, Suzan Noerr

Reviewer: jmthorn Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue

This was a really great story I love how you brought Charlie in to become a vamp

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue

Wow. I was shocked by Charlie. It just makes it that much better that they get to have eternity together since truthfully they had seemed to of gotten the short end of the stick through there human life. 

 

This was really a great story and I look forward to reason what you come up with in the future. I have also enjoyed getting to know you. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 125

I hope no one is home. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 119

Bella talks in her sleep. I wonder if that was out loud or was that kept in her head. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 118

Bella really has embraced their relationship now. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 115

Awwww is right. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 114

Charlie is like the father every girl wishes for. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 111

Man that must sting her laughing like that. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 105

Hi I had tried to pm you but it was disabled, I was caught off guard by what you just said about your baby. I have never posted before about your personal life because i know these things have happened months ago, but this one i couldn't ignore. 

I was told I had eosinophilic esophagitis 2 years ago. I have life long asthma, allergies to every tree, moss, animal and such but around the time I got pregnant I started having horrible reactions to foods that I have never had a problem with. I just thought it was due to my pregnancy. Then I started having more problem with food getting stuck still didn't think much of it, you know eating fast because of my daughter things like that. I also have a horrible calcium decency and cysts in my mouth that caused problems with my teeth, so I bruised that off as well. It wasn't until I had a complete blockage of my esophagus and was hospitalized that we discovered the problem. 

The normal adult esophagus is around 20cm wide, mine was at 11 because of the rings caused by EE. I also have a hiatal hernia which does wonders for my asthma. I was told to get allergy tested again and it came back that I am allergic to peanuts, dairy, and soy. Things that I have eaten all my life. I had noticed signs but I mistook not being able to breath with my asthma not my esophagus closing up. I take allergy medicine 2 times a day and my one asthma medication has a allergin in it as well, which my doctor believes is why I never went in full anaphylactic shock. 

I have had my esophagus widened twice as of my last endoscopy, I've had 6, my esophagus is at a 16. If your son does have this and you would like to talk to someone that has it as well and can maybe answer any questions you may have please feel free to message me. I hope the little guy is alright.

Denise

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 103

Wow! While I never thought that Charlie would judge them like other people would but to hear him defend them is really amazing. I hope Bella listens to him, it was really good advise. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 100

I'm glad she was finally forced to recognize the truth. Now everything can start playing out like its meant to be. She was silly to try and fight it. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 91

Yeah. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 90

Oh that chapter was amazing. It was heartbreaking and yet hopeful at the same time. I have no idea if it will work, seems a little to easy. But it still seems to be going in the right direction. 

 

Im also amazed at how your Edward differs from the real Edward. Your Edward actually wants Bella to change. That should make for less drama. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 85

I love how to the point Bella is. And Edwards word vomit was great. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 80

I wonder what Edward is thinking. I have some interesting ideas there are hundreds running through my head it makes me even more interested to see where you will lead them. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 77

Wouldn't that be amazing for Edward if he could shut off this Powers whenever he wanted. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 75

Thank God I don't have a weak stomach. I'm at work on my lunch break. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 73

See she is going to fight even harder now. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 72

Typical male thinking bella can't do it without him. Lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 71

That was a very powerful reaction. I wonder how long it will be before Bella lets him in again. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 70

Wow didn't see that one coming. 

 

On another note this is review # 1900. Yeah

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 69

Mental sex. At least she can't get pregnant that way. Lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 67

It is so amaing the things that they are doing in her head. It is such a twisted sense of reality and I can't wait to see just how far you will take it. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 60

What a first kiss. I don't know if I'm disappointed that it was on her mind or not. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 54

I love the snow white reference. Lol. It was really great that Charlie was there when Bella was moving her foot. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 53

It really is great seeing Bella fight for herself. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 47

It's great how Edward is helping her. It is amazing to see them together like this. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 43

It's great that Jasper is sounder standing and helpful. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 41

The mind is such a complex organ. I am really enjoying this. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 35

I'm glad Jasper was there because I was afraid everyone was going to think Edward was losing it. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 33

Yeah. She's fighting. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 30

Oh so Bella is making Edward out to be her angle. I guess it is fitting. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 29

I wonder if Edward was informed that it was her favorite book or if it was just luck.  

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 27

Thank God for Alice. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 23

I'm clapping can you hear me. Lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 22

I hope the current that is between them will convince her she's still alive. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh I hope it's just the stress of the move affecting her heart. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 20

Ah so she can hear the music. It's sad that she's misinterpreting the source. It was a really haunting chapter. But also a relief knowing that Bella is still there. Even if she is lost. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 19

I wonder if Edwards piano playing will help in Bella's healing. Music has been proven to help patients with autism and other disorders. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 15

As a parent I know I would do absolutely anything for my child. I don't see Charlie being any different. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 11

Well I can guess Alice will be all for it. Rose will hate the idea. Emmett may find it fun. While jasper will have his reservations but agree because it will make Alice happy. 

 

I am so greatful I found this story tonight. I am also a single mom and am stuck watching Hop for the 10th time. I am hiding my iPhone while sitting here with my daughter reading it. Lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 9

Carlisle has a big house. Sure it's full of vampires but that can't be helped. Lol Plus who should make a better nurse and caring, loving caretaker then Esme. Then there is Edward who will he able to help her like no one else. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 5

This is truly heartbreaking. The poor thing. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

I started writing a one shot story that has Edward doing something similar. The medical situation is not the same at all and the patient is not Bella. I just thought that I should maybe mention it just in case. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow that was quite powerful. I like the third person approach. 

Reviewer: Adelheity Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 6

Short chapters are ok for me :)

Reviewer: Adelheity Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

I like everything till now, maybe not so much Charlie, because his presence in a story is always a further complication, since when Bella decides to stay with Edward she will have to live with the loss of her father and he with hers.....so..uff

Reviewer: Adelheity Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

I´m extremly curious where this story will lead. I´ve read so many stories about E&B.....love your first chapter so far :)

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

loved it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue

Needless to say how very much I loved this story, and everything of yours I've read. I wish you the very best of luck with your original fiction, and even more luck with your little trooper, Cayden Take care and I'll think of you as I watch the last Twilight film next week!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 130

Really curious as to whether he bit her in the throes of passion! That was a great love scene, by the way, you did a terrific job!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 129

What a sweet, caring and considerate lover! We should all be so fortunate!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 128

You're killing us here!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 127

Crossing my fingers Emmett doesn't show up right about now and ruin everything!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 126

The wondrous beauty of first love, it's truly an amazing thing!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 125

All right, it's about to happen, and I couldn't be happier for them both!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 124

Edward Cullen, horny teenager, and chivalrious vampire lover! What a marvelous combination!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 123

That declaration from Bella has to overjoy Edward, if that's a word. It surely will make him happy beyond words.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 122

I think our boy is finding out what most seventeen year old boys suffer through.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 121

Rosalie is who she is, but she's not nasty or mean, so no shock she told Edward what she did.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 120

Regardless of her decision on immortality, I've no doubt they will want to experience in reality, what took place in their white space.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 119

All good things come to he who waits, and who's waited longer than Edward Cullen?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 118

Yes indeed, merely putty in her little hands! As it should be when you love someone that much!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 117

Shame on you! Leaving those poor children in that compromising position! lol

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 116

Wonder what Bella would have done if Edward showed up in their white room wearing what he did in the shower? Interesting thought!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 115

AS I told you before, I have always been a Charlie Swan booster! What a guy! And how sweet  to declare their love in front of him and the Cullens.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 114

This comes as no shock to me, I've always been a Charlie fan. He's a great dad to Bella, and has a lot of common sense.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 113

I am very curious as to that conversation. What would Charlie have to talk to Bella about? Or rather what would she have to say to her dad, that Edward shouldn't overhear? Alice can be a pain sometimes!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 112

I sure don't see Bella's attitude as unreasonable, she can't help how she feels, all things considered.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 111

I can see where Bella is just going to have to learn to take some things on faith! That or learn to not care if she breaks Edward's heart!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 110

Really loving take-charge Bella! Shocked Edward, for about a second!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 109

Sounds like a regular relationship, getting to know one another and sharing themselves, so to speak. Just like any other couple.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 108

Bella is at least open to the idea of immortality. That has to be a step in the right direction.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 107

Oh boy, he actually said the words! So he's not afraid to tell her how much he wants her to be with him forever!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 106

Holding good thoughts and wishes for Cayden. It seems so unfair that someone so small and defenceless should be so burdened! Take a little care of you, too as well as your child. Okay, I'm off to read more!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 105

Don't you dare apologize for the lack of a teaser! You have more than plenty on your plate at all times, and more so right now! It boggles my mind how you manage to get so much taken care of in a day's time! I'm absolutely in awe, and thank you so very much for all you do! I sure hope the people in your real life say it at least once a day! Okay, off the soapbox and on with the story!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 104

I think Bella is about to learn of her own considerable talents!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 103

Well, hooray for Charlie Swan, what a guy! I wonder if his little girl is as brave and clear-eyed as he is?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 102

Don't tell me Charlie suspects what they are? I know he's a good cop, but that's a stretch to think he would let vampires care for his child!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 101

I suppose he must settle for what he can get, right now , anyway. Sound like she may just need time to process.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 100

Shows what happens when you try telling yourself lies for too long. The truth will always come out, no matter how you try to deny it.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 99

Yep, he's forcing the issue and making her face the truth, regardless of whether she wants to or not!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 98

I think he's tired of her putting him off, by ignoring everything they went through to rescue her.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 97

Not too bad for starters, I guess. Maybe they just need time to get used to each other, build up that trust again.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 96

Probably a very natural reaction on Bella's part. Look what she's been through this whole year!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 95

There they go again, not communicating! Sometimes those two make me crazy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 94

Baby steps. I can see this is going to be a process, and not a fast one.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 93

Guess she isn't making any of this easy for the Cullens, especially Edward.  I must say that's gratitude for you!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 92

No wonder Alice had a sly smile on her lips, she texted Charlie, didn't she?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 91

This just has to be the most important moment of Edward and Bella's lives! Crossing fingers and heading for the next chapter!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 90

Well, at least he got her out of that hellish wreck! I think she's about to wake up for real, at least I hope so. A little gratitude wouldn't go amiss, either.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 89

If you have Bella reject Edward and all that he is, I can see those villagers coming back with their torches and pitchforks again!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 88

Stubborn Bella isn't going to give up without a fight. She wants desperately to be right, I can tell!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 87

Of course they haven't had the conversation about diet yet, so there's that to look forward to!

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