Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 86
I will be curious to see if Bella laughs out of the other side of her mouth when she realizes the truth of Edward's words.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 85
I can tell from the teaser that Bella isn't buying this story from Edward. She thinks he's being silly, I guess. Little does she know, it's only the bald truth!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 84
It's always worse when it's your children, isn't it? Way more than if it's you, I think. It always hurt me to see my baby get her shots, I felt each one, though I don't get bothered by injections on my person. Crazy, huh? So far so good with Edward's explanation.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 83
I certainly admire this girl's courage and determination. Hope it's enough to get her through Edward having to tell her what he is and why he can help her in her mind.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 82
Makes you wonder why a few things can't just be easy, instead of so damn difficult! It has to be more restful for Edward's mind to finally have an off switch, at least.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 81
Poor guy, between a rock and a hard place at the moment!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 80
The trust is building, little by little. Now if they can just figure out what to do to fix this mess, there may yet be a happy ever after!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 79
Bella has a lot of things to learn about Edward and everything else, but the most important thing is how they are so much stronger together than apart! They just flat need each other!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 78
How in the world did you continue to write this when you were so sick? I sure hope you take better care of yourself!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 77
You clever girl, you! To have Edward's power evolve this way is genius! Probably tied some way to Bella being in his life now, I'm sure!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 76
Even Edward Cullen must get fed up to his back teeth with all the thoughts he's forced to listen to .
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 75
More and more reawakening of Bella's body, both in a good and bad way!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 74
It isn't any wierder than anything else in this story, so go for it! I love that Bella is trying to save herself!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 73
Bella is one of the most stubborn people ever! Edward has a big job ahead of him, gaining back her good graces!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 72
What he fears could happen, if she won't let him back in, all right!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 71
It would seem Miss Swan is not reacting well to the information she forced out of Edward! She had best grit her teeth and deal with it!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 70
Man up Edward and tell your love the bitter truth! I think she can take it, since she's getting better all the time.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 69
Watch out, kids, you may find yourselves in difficulties in a minute!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 68
Not a good idea to try going home again, at least not for Bella. I'm glad Edward thought of his meadow, it is the place for calm and ease .
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 67
Makes sense to me that she would want to go home, even if everything is different now.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 66
You really are a naughty little tease, aren't you?
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 64
I'm just happy with any progress Bella makes, so it's all good!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 63
That's pretty scary stuff Alice is seeing. What if something were to happen to Bella and Edward? My heavens, that would devestate the Cullens, for sure.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 62
Of course Carlisle isn't an ass! Shame on anyone who thinks so! He's Edward's father, for all intents and purposes, and loves his son! Plus he's a caring, dedicated doctor, so there!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 61
How you have time to go to school, work, care for a child and write is amazing to me! Add in a road trip and family reunion, and I'm exhausted! I have total admiration for you!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 60
Had an idea that their kissing would be sort of magic, and sure enough!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 59
The girl still has problems trusting even Edward, I see. I guess she needs more information , or something, before she shares any more of hers.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 58
Come on, Bella, 'fess up and tell the man where you go! If you can't be honest with him, how are you ever going to get well?
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 57
I hope you got to see Graceland, we did, a few years ago and loved it! Of course, my husband and I grew up with Elvis, we're really old! I hope Bella confesses where she goes, it would help Edward help her!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 56
Boy, that shield of hers is really something! Up it goes, and Edward just disappears behind it!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 55
Every bit of progress is great and wonderful that Charlie was there to see it! It's going to be more and more difficult to pry Edward away from Bella's side, especially now.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 54
I have one idea, please let Bella tell Edward where she goes when she disappears, so he can help her out of that damn car!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 53
Sure would be nice if Bella could transfer that toe move thing to her real body, while her dadwas there. He would be overjoyed, to say the least!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 52
Bunch of wimps! Just kidding! I know some just can't handle the chapters being like this. How very interesting that Edward was shielded and didn't know it! I see how that could be dangerous, around other vampires, at least. No defense!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 51
This powerful connection between them must be the reason Edward can be in Bella's mind part of the time. Now that Eleazar has discovered she's a shield, maybe it will help them all find a way to bring her back.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 50
Just when Edward was getting Bella to open up to him, evidently Carlisle screwed it all up! What in the world would he do that for?
Date: 12 Nov 2012 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 49
The outfits sound just right, and the comfy couch and fluffy pillows aren't bad, either. Now if she leans into him, Edward will be thrilled!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 48
What do you suppose shy little Bella wants to wish for now? He he! As if we didn't know! What we all would wish for, Edward and maybe a kiss!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 47
Can't wait to see what sly little trick Edward has up his sleeve! The properties of theWhite Room are certainly amazing!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 46
What a cool place to be, in a way! You just wish for what you want or need! If they figure this one out , it will be a minor miracle!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 45
Good thing Edward remembered to wish for a medical kit, so he could keep Bella from bleeding out!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 44
Lord! Bella and her aversion to blood! It's so ironic, seeing as how she falls for a blooddrinking vampire! It is good that she's making progress getting out of the car wreck, though! Kind of an, every little bit helps, moment.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 43
Boy, I must be brain-dead, not noicing the ties to those movies. Guess I just get too wrapped up in Bella and Edward, and this one is getting to me!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 42
I realize Carlisle doesn't want their cover compromised, but he's going to have a tough time convincing Edward to leave Bella, even for something so important.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 41
This story of yours is giving me new respect for the powers of the mind, for sure. She needs a chair to sit in and rest and poof!, there it is! Love to know what else they can conjure up between them!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 40
Ahh, progress! At least the exchange of names, and reassurance that he's not going to take her to hell.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 39
What an appropriate word, bat channel, as you drive us all bats, waiting to see if contact can be reestablished between Bella and Edward!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 38
You're such a little tease! Can't wait to hear what Eleazar has to say about Miss Bella and her ability to keepEdward out of her thoughts. Maybe he can even figure out why he can hear her now and then?
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 37
Makes me want to root for her, too! Bella's a very strong, determined young woman.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 36
I'm truly at a loss as to why Edward's connection to Bella comes and goes, ebbs and flows, sort of. Has to be frustrating all the way around, two steps forward and one step back! At least they spoke to each other!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 35
How great that Bella is moving around, on her feet, at least in her mind! Even better that she sees Edward and says something to him! Such progress!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 34
Funny nobody thought to utilize Jasper's gift, until now. I guess it takes even a vampire time to think of everything! I sure am glad that Jasper can feel Bella's determined to find a way to get out of her mind's grip.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 33
There's life in the girl, yet! It's great that she has decided to keep fighting and looking for a way out. Who wouldn't fight for angel Edward?
Date: 12 Nov 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 32
This has to be so frustrating for Edward, to have a bit of hope, and have it snatched away. He's trying so hard to hold on to his mate, now that he knows that's what she is.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 31
It is comforting to know Bella is in there somewhere. Now, if only they can find a way out for her, that's the big hurdle!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 30
Well, it's probably inevitable that Bella would think Edward was an angel, as she thinks she may be on her way to Heaven. I'm also wondering what has Alice so optimistic, that she's hiding from Edward?
Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 29
Here's hoping Charlie and Edward take to each other, especially as they may be related someday. I sure hope there's some way for Edward to get through to Bella and draw her back to life again.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 28
I'm sure Charlie will believe Carlisle's story about Bella's heart rate. Why wouldn't he? I hope Edward hears more of Bella's thoughts, but won't be holding my breath, just in case!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 27
Luckily, Carlisle knows better than to bet against Alice, and this time it really paid off for Edward!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 26
I get that these cliffies are really caused by the shortness of your chapters. Otherwise, I'd have to hurt your feelings, and yell at you to cut it out!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thank heavens for Alice's gift! Run Carlisle, and save Bella for your son!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 24
I know they didn't find your hiding place, as you went on to write more chapters! Good for you, and good for us readers!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 23
That was almost enough to make me cry, too, as she lay there praying and saying goodbye. Poor little thing! Hang on, help is on the way!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 22
Of course he kissed her, it may be his only chance, after all! I think Bella has decided she's dying and is letting go. Let's hope Edward can convince her not to go!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
I noticed Bella's heart changed when Carlisle said Edward's name. This must mean she can hear something in the prison of her own mind.
Date: 11 Nov 2012 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 20
I've been wondering if Bella could hear Edward, so now we know! Can't wait to see how long it takes for her to realize she's not dead! Because of the harrowing experience she's had, it's no wonder her mind has her trapped!
Date: 11 Nov 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
Now the real work of bringing Bella back will begin! Good that Jasper, Alice and Emmett kept Edward from blowing their cover.
Date: 11 Nov 2012 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
This is a chapter of Edward's long life that he just can't bring himself to quite believe. I'm sure it will come to him before long. Just as this mystery melody will be revealed soon!
Date: 11 Nov 2012 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
The only thing about this story that bothers me is I can't read any faster! That's not your fault, I know, it just makes me mad at myself!
Date: 11 Nov 2012 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
Charlie is a good father and a good man. I figured he would make the right choice and let his girl go where the help was. That small nagging voice in his mind most likely a tiny warning that the Cullens are a bit 'different'!
Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm crossing my fingers that Charlie goes along with Carlisle's suggestion. Bella gets to stay in Forks, near her father and Carlisle gets to try to help her and last but not least, Edward gets to have her near! Everybody is happy, except Rose, of course.
Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
I was afraid of Bella's shield being the real barrier to Edward's gift! Of all the problems to face, this is the biggest stumbling block to healing Bella's injury.
Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
It seems that Edward has accidentally found a way to strengthen their connection, by physically touching her while speaking. Maybe that's what it's going to take to reach her.
Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 12
Even if Charlie looks for another solution, he probably won't find one. Plus, he needs to learn to never bet against Alice's visions! Sweet of her to remind them all that Edward never asks for anything, and sweeter still of Jasper to promise to hunt twice a day! Edward has a really supportive family!
Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
It would come as no surprise to have Rose object to this plan, as she usually hates putting her family in jeopardy. It's good of Edward to think of helping Charlie with the medical bills, too. Maybe if Bella is with Edward all the time, he'll have a better shot at helping her find her way back.
Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
It better happen, if it's what is best for Bella. Edward wouldn't mind having her around 24/7, either! He should pay attention to his father's idea of Bella being his mate. After all, father knows best, right? ( you may not be old enough to recognize that, but I sure am!) lol!
Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
I knew all long the Cullens would do their utmost to help Bella and Charlie!
Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
Yeah, one look, and one listen, and he's a goner! I'm guessing the unfamiliar melody is Bella's Lullaby, too!
Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
This has got to be the one time for Edward to be able to hear Bella's thoughts! It can literally save her life, by bringing her back!
Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wonder what Edward's idea was? The experiment seems to have gone okay, since he didn't drain Bella. There is a small window to find a way to help her, since the insurance is running out soon.
Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
I can think of few things more terrifying than to be trapped in your body, with no way to communicate with the rest of the world! Poor Bella!
Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
That's the thing about insurance companies, they're in business to make money, not to be nice. It just is how it is, and not much we can do about it. Feel bad for Charlie, though, he wants his daughter back, obviously. I'm betting the Cullens can be of assistance with this!
Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bella, what a horrible thing to happen! Of course, as soon as Edward sees her picture, it's over, he's hooked!
Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
Are you serious? Of course he'll be able to help, that's the voice he heard calling, "Hear me!" This is such a different way for them to meet, and I'm looking forward to where you are going with it!
Date: 11 Nov 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
That voice in his head, coupled with the mouth-watering scent, has to be Bella!
Date: 09 Nov 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 120
Sec in the white room! Well sort of
Date: 06 Nov 2012 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue
This is so fantastic!! I love how everything worked out!!! :)
Date: 06 Nov 2012 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 74
Makes as much sense as any thing else. She DOES need to "help herself" get out.....
Date: 06 Nov 2012 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue
Congratulations on this amazing last ff story. Good luck to you in normal world writing. I am a big supporter of ff authors when they go " straight " so please let me know.
I have loved all your stories. Good luck. I'll miss you.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue
I love it! I never saw this coming, but I love that Bella will always have Charlie now. This is such a great story! Thanks so much!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue
Thanks for such a great story. I enjoyed reading it. Best of luck with writing your original fiction and keep us posted as to when you will be published!
~N
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue
I'm sad to see this story end but it was a great ending to a great story. I'm also glad that Charlie was changed so that Bella can forever have him in her life. Perfect! I'm so glad to hear your son is doing better and good luck with her original fics. If they are anything like the stories you have posted here, then there is no doubt you will be a success.
Thanks, Maria
Date: 04 Nov 2012 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue
That was a great finish to a wonderful story Thank you very much. I am going to miss you and your strenth. I have learned from you and I thank you. I wish you the best of luck in everything you do. Teresa Roberts.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue
Thanks for sharing this story with us.
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2012 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue
wow and thanks for such a great story. I`m looking forward to reading more of your ff and original stories. :)
Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue
Loved the ending... Charlie cahnged too:) Good luck with your future endeavours.
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue
LOVED IT. GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR WRITING.
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue
Wonderful epilogue, I love this story. :)
Date: 03 Nov 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 131 Epilogue
I really liked this 'happy ever after' chapter. It was the longest one......loved it ;-)