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Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 16

fab chapter hope she can stay strong.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 18

I had at least as much fun reading as you had writing this one! Hope you enjoyed your weekend! It's so sweet to kind of 'watch' them fall in love with each other. The fair was marvelous and sounded like a lot of fun. Also sounds as if Seth has found someone who will be important in his life. Hope there aren't too many repercussions from that meeting!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 18

:)

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 17

Marvelous...simply perfectly marvelous!  It also moved he story along well.

Reviewer: anncarol Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 17

Poor Mrs Clearwater is worried about her gay son and the implications for the rest of his life.  I wonder what she will think if Leah gets a new crush and want to engage in a no holes bared relationship with this one too now that (we are assuming) Edward is unavailable.

It will interesting if she thinks the inevitable illegitimate baby produced will just blow over in a few weeks.

 Love this story.

XOXO

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 17

:)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

Quite a lovely trip to the ocean! Glad that Mrs. Hale spoke as she did to Edward's mother, since she's still a bit leery of what groes between her son and Bella. Now Emmett's proposed, there will be another wedding. Soon, I hope there will be a third!



Author's Response:

I love the images of Victorian seaside. I love Mrs Hale too, she's grown as a character in her own right.

Reviewer: anncarol Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 16

I love all their little indulgent selves.

XOXO

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 16

:)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 16

Bella knows what she wants, and Edward does too, though he tries to be correct. I'm sure passion will overtake them soon, and I'm also sure Leah will try to ruin things between them!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 15

loved it!



Author's Response: Thank you xxx

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 14

poor daddy C. hehe....

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 9

Totally not liking Esme at the moment.  What a self righteous, pompous, stuck up, bitch!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 2

super sweet edward and such an endearing Alice!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Seems interesting...looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 15

:)

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 15

wow!that was scorchin hot dry humpin!need a fan to cool down.fab chapter.update soon

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 15

Beautifully seductive and sensual!  There should be no containing them now!  Kudos!



Author's Response:

Thank you. xx

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 15

You did a lovely job of portraying their first hesitant steps into sensuality. Edward and Bella love one another and this magnetic pull between them is only going to get stronger as they explore it. Ask Jasper and Alice!



Author's Response:

Lovely review, (again ) thanks k1942 xx

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved the lemon. Curious about Leah, though. Do we need to worry about her or is her interest in Edward a non-issue? 



Author's Response:

Be worried, she's just biding her time! **cue evil laugh** mwha ha ha! ;)

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 14

fab chapter bet carlisles face was a pic lol.go bella i wouldn't make it easy for him either.have a lovely holiday.



Author's Response:

Ah bless ya! Thanks for all the lovely reviews you've left, they're much appreciated.

My holiday was great, thanks xx

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 13

poor bella.fab chapter.hope he catches up with her.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 12

yey hes back.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 11

wow go edward bella has defo made a lasting impression on him.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 10

hope esme does see sense.fab chapter go alice.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 9

awww that was so emotional.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 8

omg!!!so glad edward and jasper showed up when they did and marcus dessrved everything he got and worse for what he did to angela.fab chapter so emotional.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 7

omg hope someone saves bella.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 6

awww bless him.hope hes ok and rose too.fab chapter

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 14

I hope your holiday is your best ever!  Sorry for not reviewing more often, but RL and vacations interrupted.  I did keep up with my reading however, and love this story a lot.  The camparisons drawn with each couple are striking and your characterizations are spot on.  Poor Dr. Cullen!  What a way to discover your daughter is in love!  I both felt for him and wanted to laugh at the same time.  Leah following Edward about in the dark is somewhat concerning - pity poor Jasper!  Stuck behind the burgundy drapes!  Again, thank you for all your hard work.  I'm looking forward to much more!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your lovely words, they're very much appreciated.

Hopefully you'll see the characters change as the story progresses and love and their experiences change them. Yes, poor old Dr. C, Alice is a real handful, but she'll be soon Jasper's problem....perhaps that's what Dr. C realised!

I haven't finished with Leah yet...she's just waiting in the wings for her opportunity.

My holiday was enjoyable and I'm ready to start writing again...I missed it! Hope you enjoy ch15. Take care xxx

Reviewer: anncarol Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter. xx

Reviewer: anncarol Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great Story, Edward is still a bit of a spoiled brat.  xx

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 14

Dr. Cullen wasn't very pleased to find Jasper in Alice's bed, but rose to the occaisionrather well. Everyone is happy about the engagement of these two. Wonder how it will go when Rosaqlie tells them she wants Emmett, and then Edward and Bella do the same!



Author's Response:

Ah bless him, Alice is going to make him grey before his time. But as with E&B, R&E- Jasper and Alice should be together, and I'm a romantic, as for the coupling of the others....I'm going to have to get creative. ;) Thanks xx

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 13

:)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 13

Edward's back and Bella isn't going to make it easy on him to make amends, especially now she knows his mother 's role in his departure. I sure hope Jasper remembers that he saw Leah skulking through the house that night!



Author's Response:

She should make him suffer! A little bit anyway, Esme needs to suffer alot ;). Yeah, Leah what's she up too?

Reviewer: HelenaTeixeira Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

moooooore 



Author's Response:

:) Thanks xx

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

OMG I'M SO GLAD HE CAME BACK I HOPE HE AND BELLA CAN TALK AND SHE CAN FORGIVE HIM FOR LEAVING HER. AND I'M SURE HE JUST MAYBE A BIT PISSED OFF WITH HIS MOTHER WILL HE FORGIVE HER WILL SHE FORGIVE HERSELF. CAN BELLA FORGIVE HER FOR TALKING EDWARD INTO LEAVING HER.



Author's Response:

I'm sure he has ways of making her forgive him...he's Edward Cullen;)

Reviewer: sanjyp Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 12

I'm loving this story.  Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying, I will post every week, twice if I have enough chapters to play with, I like to work in front, so I can make changes if necessary....you didn't really need to know all of that!! XX

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

I am so happy that Edward came back, he will consiguirá resist his love for Bella?
Great chapter.
Kisses.

Author's Response:

....Resist his love for Bella- what a lovely way of putting it.

Glad you're still enjoying xx

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 12

Drink lots of fluids and get lots of rest and you'll feel better! This was a really good chapter, detailing Bella's recovery. Emmett and Rosalie are getting along well and Alice and Jasper. Now if only Edward can mend fences with Bella, everyone wil be happy. Except Leah, of course, she's jealous of Bella already!



Author's Response:

I had an early night- it works wonders xx

Glad you enjoyed the chapter...I always get a little anxious when I post to how it will be recieved, this site is not as receptive as FF at the moment, I seem to be doing x3 better over there?

Having fun with Leah's character...think I'll have her meddling abit...hehehe. xxxx

Reviewer: Twitish Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 12

great story

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 11

I'M SO GLAD EDWARD GOT OUT OF THERE



Author's Response:

My first attempt at this chapter, he stayed and took part....I couldn't sleep properly until I re-wrote, so glad I changed my mind

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 11

Thank heavens  Edward came to his senses before he did something he would forever regret.  I'm thinkingthat the decision he has made is to man up and go home to tell Bella he loves her, I hope .



Author's Response:

First attempt at writing this, he fully participated with the action, it was out of character and felt so wrong...I couldn't sleep until I put it right. Lets hope he can make things right with Bella. :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 11

:)



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;)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)

Reviewer: anncarol Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 10

Can't say how much I love this story.  I'v got my bases covered in case FFNet get up to any funny business again.  You never know what will set them off.

Luv XOXO

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 10

I give Carlisle points for supporting his wife's decision to send Edward away from Bella, despite disagreeing with that decision. I'm glad he told her not to interfere beyond this once. Alice got pretty worked up about her brother leaving. Hopefully, that had no bearing on her decision to make love with Jasper. That's not something to do in a fit of pique!

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Or she's an elitist hiding behind good intentions. 

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 9

Chapter gorgeous! So sad that Edward is going, but I'm sure that time will strengthen Bella.
At that time the differences would be sufficient enough to separate them, but certainly will not be far from Edward, he will fight for your love?
Thanks for the extra chapter.
Kisses.

Author's Response:

What a lovely review, thank you so much. I do like how you try to find the positive, even when things are looking bad. xx

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 9

I am so ashamed of Esme's devious manipulation of her son! They both are going to rue the day they gave in to their bigotry. It will make no one happy and cause nothing but pain and sadness. I feel like shaking my finger at them both!



Author's Response:

You go ahead and shake your finger, frown aswell. ;) Great review xx

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 9

What?!! 

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 9

Esme, you bad person, you. 



Author's Response:

...or does she think she is being a good mother?

Reviewer: keola Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 9

:-( shame on esme



Author's Response:

I'll make her, make it up to you...one day ;)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 9

:)



Author's Response:

**ta**

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 9

Oh so sad, this was hard to read.  I hope there will be a HEA.



Author's Response:

Yes, I hereby promise that this story will be a HEA...after some angst and messin with your emotions ;)

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 8

Nice chapter! Edward is so charmed by Bella, I think he will fight against this much love.
Kisses and thanks.

Author's Response:

Not done with the angst just yet....lovely review thanks xx

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 8

So sad, but so sweet!



Author's Response:

That's what I was aiming for...Thanks xx

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 8

:)



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 8

Well hallelujah, Marcus is dead and can't hurt Bella ever again! It's as I suspected, that murdering bastard killed poor little Angela, and would have  done the same to Bella, if given the chance. Thankfully the men got there in time, and rescued her. Now we just have to get Edward to change his thinking about appropriate marriage prospects, the little snob! He better listen to his heart and not his prejudices.



Author's Response:

Passionate review, love it. Thanks

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 7

Please tell me you aren't planning to leave Bella to the tender mercies of Marcus!! If that's what is about to happen to that poor child, I may have to bleach my keyboard, as well as my brain, and maybe vomit a little! I'm getting an idea Marcus is who killed Angela and traumatized Bella all those years ago.  Crossing my fingers and hoping for the best, I'll see you later.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

Do not let anything happen to Bella. I hope that the Cullens have someone to pick her up. Kisses and thanks.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 6

:)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 6

Emmett is so pleased to have this wonderful opportunity. He and Bella will have a way to get away from Marcus, if they can live on the Cullen estate. Now, if the horse doesn't hurt him , he's about to save the beautiful Rosalie.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 5

WOW, I'm on edge here.  This is very hard to read.  I know you say this will have a HEA, but I'm afraid would happen in the meantime.



Author's Response:

That's good for me to know, sorry :S but I'm having the desired effect on someone, but I do promise a HEA.

Thanks for the review. xx

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)



Author's Response:

;) ta

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 5

His writing is so precious and the way you describe your characters me fascina.Espero Carlisle help Bella and Emmett.
I already love your story.
Kisses, Ludmila.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the lovely compliment.

Kisses britchick69, Michelle xx

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 5

Trust a pleasant lunch to be ruined by their awful uncle! I'll bet he wouldn't have gotten away with his rude, drunken behavior if Emmett had been there to defend Bella. If Dr. Cullen were to hire Em to care for his horses, what a blessing that would be! Especially the part about keeping Bella safe!



Author's Response:

I don't think Marcus would have been shouting off if Emmett had been there, he truly is a bully, Bella is an easy target.

I love it when readers write what they think might happen, and it's hard not to write what does happen, I have up to ch 10 penned in. Thanks for a great review

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 4

I'm not smart enough to see what point you are going to make, but look forward to whatever it is. Edward and Leah both enjoyed it, she to satisfy curiosity, and he to obtain relief from a dream. So far, so good . It's too bad Edward thinks Bella is beneath his notice, because he notices, whether he wants to or not!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and I'm glad you're looking forward to what I have planned, hope I don't disappoint xx

Reviewer: BrieFree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 3

Does Bella ever speak? will she pursue Edward ? What happens?



Author's Response:

Soon honey, all will be revealed ;)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2012 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh Edward, shame on you! Just because Bella is a gypsy, that's no reason to look down upon her and think she's inferior. I sense that life may be about to get rather dangerous for Bella and all concerned. Would that I were wrong, but I fear I'm not!



Author's Response:

He is ashamed of his prejudices, but it is early 1900's so by that time he is progressive.

Yes things are going to get dangerous, hold tight. xx

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 3

Good chapter. Edward needs to get over himself. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. He will....eventually ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 2

Somebody needs to do away with Uncle Marcus, he's just plain evil! What is the reason for Bella not speaking, is she mute?



Author's Response:

You Uncle M down to a 'T,' the reason for Bella not talking will be revealled soon.

Thanks for reveiwing, hopefully I'll see you again soon.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

There's always been prejudice against the Romany, for avery long time, anyway. Bella has had an interesting reaction to being helped by Edward. What could it be, hmmm?



Author's Response:

could it be his yumminess? (is that a euphamism I wonder?)

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

Glad to know that there will be a HEA.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2012 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

This story is very iteresting.  I'm not familiar with this subject so I am looking forward to reading it.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love it so far and would really love to read more!   I hope you'll continue!  

Why is Bella mute?   Can she speak or does she choose not to?   I can't wait for more, so please update soon!



Author's Response:

I promise to finish what I start.

The reason why Bella doesn't talk will be reveiled in the next couple of chapters.

 Thanks for reviewing. xx

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)



Author's Response:

hello again, nice to have your approval, :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2012 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow, that was amazing...even if I beta'd this, I still loved it!  I cannot wait to see how the next one is received :D



Author's Response:

Ah bless! Always so supportive, best beta ever!

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