Date: 22 Mar 2019 10:22 AM Title: Charlize and Rosalie
I wish you would update your story
Date: 15 Mar 2018 8:05 AM Title: Revealed Truths
OMG..........
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2018 7:36 AM Title: Karen
Well they can't be soft and me mafia... I love it
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2018 7:23 AM Title: school
I really love how possessive Terry is. He is crazy about Tifany
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2018 6:45 AM Title: Isabella
I was hoping Edward's looks would be more........He's cute but not WOW
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2018 5:35 PM Title: Wattpad
I tried typing in your name lots of different ways and sone names of your stories. Nothing is coming up.
Author's Response:
have you did captial I in ilia and capital A in adams no spaces
Date: 14 Mar 2018 7:34 AM Title: Sorry!
Thank you for letting me know and I just added the link in my bio
Date: 14 Mar 2018 5:30 AM Title: Sorry!
Can you add a link to your new account in your bio here. I'm having trouble finding your account.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 11:57 PM Title: Thoughts
She is smart and I hope that she is the way ou for the rest of the girls.
Date: 15 Jul 2014 8:59 PM Title: Thoughts
Man, you just couldn't let the chapter end on a good note with Edward & Bella. Edward is asking a lot of questions about her family...is he planning on finding them & killing them or finding her dad & sending her to him to keep her safe?
Date: 15 Jul 2014 8:40 PM Title: Revelations
She is losing it! Granted I think I would too knowing what she knows & what she has to do. Everytime Edward calls her Love it gives me hope that just maybe he won't kill her but then I have to tell myself don't fall for that trap.
Date: 14 Jul 2014 5:38 AM Title: Thoughts
Hopefully, she gets away! All these fuckers are seriously demented!
Date: 13 Jul 2014 9:23 AM Title: Thoughts
Do any of these girls have a happy ending or don't die?
Author's Response:
yes I will say that there will be endings. That would suck If I just murdered them all though.
Date: 13 Jul 2014 8:32 AM Title: Thoughts
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 12 Jul 2014 7:06 AM Title: Revelations
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 06 Jul 2014 5:58 AM Title: Revealed Truths
HOLY CRAP! This came completely out of left field! You have an amazingly sick mind! I can't wait to see if Isabella gets away..... I'm still in shock. I might even have nightmares.
Author's Response:
lol hahaha I'm sorry I mean I had to make it interesting whats a good story with a little bit of twists and turns?
Date: 06 Jul 2014 5:17 AM Title: Amanda
Yummy is all I can say!
Date: 06 Jul 2014 4:51 AM Title: Karen
Wow! Mason is super scary!
Date: 03 Jul 2014 6:42 AM Title: Revealed Truths
Well, shit, I really did not expect that! There has to be a way to stop it from happening. It is not making anyone happy so WTF????
Date: 03 Jul 2014 1:03 AM Title: Revealed Truths
lookign forward to more
Date: 24 Jun 2013 12:47 PM Title: Amanda
Love and hope you can continue soon
Date: 29 May 2013 5:41 PM Title: Amanda
You and me both! He is all kinds of yummy!! I hope she getsoutsafely!!!
Author's Response:
i know when i first saw that pic i looked at for at least ten minutes! lol Thanks for the review
Date: 29 May 2013 3:20 AM Title: Charlize and Rosalie
I really like your story. It's a bit dark and a whole lot of dirty. Keep it up can't wait to see where you take this.
Author's Response:
Thank you and I am so glad you like!
Date: 28 May 2013 10:21 AM Title: Amanda
looking forward to more
Date: 27 May 2013 10:28 PM Title: Karen
y isnt edward interested in bella?
Author's Response:
umm he is lol i just didn't go into specifics with them because It was Karens point of view. The boys pick the girls they want and then they buy them. It will all be explained in later chapters. Thank you for your thoughts
-sinister!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:48 AM Title: school
so it comes across that terry is an ass...but then is an awesome loving boyfriend..yes, we now know he is a jealous dude, but....is he the type that will hurt her, beat her, rape her.....if she doesn't obey or want him?
Author's Response:
lol all that will be answered in the next few chapters
thank you for your review
Date: 30 Nov 2012 4:32 AM Title: school
thank you for the fast update cant wait for more
Date: 29 Nov 2012 9:25 PM Title: school
They have a crazy life!
Date: 29 Nov 2012 9:17 PM Title: Isabella
Edward is hot....and big (gulp)!!!
Date: 29 Nov 2012 9:13 PM Title: Charlize and Rosalie
I tried to pm you...just wanted to suggest a beta to double check for tech errors, spelling, punctuation etc. The story itself is interesting it is dark, I'm waiting to see if there are eventual consequences for those actively involved in this form of sex slavery.
Author's Response:
yeah definitley just hit me up at sinister.thing@aol.com :D
Date: 29 Nov 2012 9:12 PM Title: Tifany
Poor Tiffany! I love your pictures and back stories on each girl!
Date: 29 Nov 2012 9:09 PM Title: Charlize and Rosalie
Interesting!
Date: 29 Nov 2012 7:18 PM Title: school
looking forward ot more
Date: 28 Nov 2012 3:14 PM Title: Alice
This is a great story so far please keep it coming
Date: 28 Nov 2012 2:12 PM Title: Isabella
Now that's what I'm talking about I like the way you think keep the updates coming
Date: 28 Nov 2012 1:53 PM Title: Tifany
Love it love it keep it coming
Date: 28 Nov 2012 1:08 PM Title: Charlize and Rosalie
Very good start can wait to ready next chapter
Date: 28 Nov 2012 12:45 PM Title: Alice
looking forward to mroe
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:53 PM Title: Tifany
Who is E.S.?
Author's Response:
He is the owner of the club as well as Edwards father. There will be more description of him in the future chapters, and tell you who he really is.
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:23 PM Title: Isabella
yuck-mean rough edward-graphic, non consensual sex-descriptive & effective writing but story is a turn off
Author's Response:
sorry you don't like it. but not everyone is going to like it .
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:46 PM Title: Isabella
looking forward to more
Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:43 AM Title: Isabella
That was HOT!!! Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it
Date: 06 Jun 2012 8:47 PM Title: Tifany
great part! love it! more please!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 8:46 PM Title: Charlize and Rosalie
great start! more please!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2012 12:04 PM Title: Tifany
WOW
Author's Response:
... i am curious of what you mean!
Date: 30 May 2012 5:19 PM Title: Charlize and Rosalie
write more!!!