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Date: 10 Jan 2023 2:36 PM Title: Outtake Eleazer's POV from chapter 37

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 2:25 PM Title: Epilouge

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 38

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 37

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 36

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 35

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 34

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 33

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 32

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 31

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 30

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 29

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 28

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 27

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 26

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 25

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 24

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 22

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 21

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 20

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 18

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Date: 11 Mar 2015 10:52 PM Title: Epilouge

I am so glad I found your story complete. Your had me from the beginning to the end.  I enjoyed it so much. Thanks for sharing. Only one thing left to say, "Well written, well done"

Reviewer: lyssmcgrath Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2014 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

One of my favorite stories and I am gonna read it again!

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Date: 18 Jan 2014 2:52 PM Title: Outtake Eleazer's POV from chapter 37

Loved it all. Meg

Reviewer: Alybethed Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 37

holy fucking migget on a stick!

Reviewer: BAGHERRA Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 5:25 PM Title: Outtake Eleazer's POV from chapter 37

J'ADORE MERCI

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 3:37 AM Title: Outtake Eleazer's POV from chapter 37

Great loved it

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:49 PM Title: Outtake Eleazer's POV from chapter 37

Poor Denalis...must've been hard to see Irina join the enemy and do such horrible thing to avenge her mate....

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:47 PM Title: Epilouge

That was an awesome fight!! Really love it when the Major or the God of war comes out to play!! That's one hell of a fighter...and how brilliantly he deceived Alice...!! Good thing he remembered the promise he made to Bella...otherwise their fight wouldn't have ended so well...

Oh Peter just HAD to take the opportunity to shock them... *lol*

 

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 38

Esme made the right decision...but I think they should've made them swear an oath, too just to be sure...but I guess there's no time for that now, seeing as their enemies already arrived...!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 37

So cool that Ben froze the wolves and Bella refused to free them...she is right, Ben won't ever learn if she corrects his mistakes but it's not very nice for the wolves... *lol*

Oh Tanya again...trying to steal a mated vampire away...and a gay one at that...she really needed to learn some respect, no one better than Bella's beast ^^

Oh wow, that prophecy is a heavy burden to bear...the peace of the vampire world is resting upon her shoulders...and her mate's and brother's...good thing she has so many trustworthy allies...

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 36

Wow, this Andre has a really awesome gift!! And so useful, they were even able to sneak into Maria's camp...that's some very important information they gained...!!

 

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 35

Wow, so Esme has s gift too with her extraordinary sense of smell...that's not bad!! But the poos woman was completely left in the dark by her mate...that must've been quite the shock...

And the nerve of Carlisle...to be proud of what they did and angry about their failure in keeping Bellla controlled...liked that she decapitated him...if I were her I'd burn him, too...

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 34

Oh no, Rose didn't just cal Esme and Carlisle?? The bitch...she so got what she deserved...I like the australian girls though it's a tadbit difficult for me to understand sometimes.. *lol*

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 33

Wow, Jasper put his wish to kill Lucy to rest pretty fast...I understand they still hate each other, but a truce will hopefully suffice for now...

Wow, Maria has 85 newborns?? WTF?? How does she controll them all?? This will be a very hard fight for them...

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 31

Wow, so many swore that oath to Izzy?? Incredible!! At least they know now that they can trust Lucy not to betray them...but if her and Jasper will overcome their past...that will be hard...but it will have to be done...in the dace of war they must stand united to win...

Izzy always the one to surprise...the first vampire to pass out... ^^

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 30

Oh, poor Lucy...Glad Bella was there to share her pain and ease it a little...! It's always good to have close friends...but like I feared, Jasper didn't react well to her and she just as bad to him...wonder how they will resolve that...

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 29

OHHH, Maria's sister!! WOnder how Jasper will react to THAT!! I doubt that will go over well...but he'll get over it, at least I hope so...

Oh Rose really fucked that one up...messing with Bella's kids...wonder if they'll be able to make that better...

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 28

Now that was the best fucking way possible for her to remember everything...while making love with her mate...! I'm almost glad she didn't regain in back erlier...!! <3

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 27

So fucking curious about their 'master plan'...about Alice, Carlisle, Esme and Edwards role...and who else is involved...Glad Emmet and Rosalie were not part of it and get a chance to prove themselves!!

 

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 26

It's a good thing Bella was finally able to release all the pain...now she'll be better able to focus on the future and the impending fight...does it mean she got all her memories back? Seemed like it...

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 24

Oh my...hope they'll be able to pull her from her spiritwolf mindset...I guess calling Moon helped her...at least now she knows she can trust them and to let them in...

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 23

Wow, she took 5 days to change??? That's one hell of a lot time...Just hope she'll regain her memory...

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 22

Oh thank god they woke up...You had me really worried for a few minutes...I'm glad they found Bella in time to save her even if it was a close call...at least she's changing now...

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh wow, Sam really lost it...good thing he didn't hurt her more...

 

Omg, I hope Jasper and Peter will be ok!! I mean she didn't burn them...Surely if they survive to be torn apart and repeatedly they'll survive having a hole punched through their chest...Bella can't lose them... *worried*

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 20

Yeah, Paul getting stuck in a tree and landing in a pile of bear shit...that's as disgusting as it is hilarious!! *rofl*

but not very nice to hightail it out of the rez and leave Bella alone woth Emily...

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 19

OMFG it's ALICE??? Why would the tiny bitch do something like that?? What ever did Bella do to her to make her stoop so low to  someone to kill a small child??? So glad Bella was able to save her...And tear a human apart to write a message with their blood...wonder who else is involved in that shitstorm...

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 18

I like how easily the wolves accepted the Bella's vampire family!! =) They'll need to stick together to get out of this fight alive...So Ben and Tia will switch diet?? Will Garrett, too? I like this hunting criminals a lot better than this veggie vampire thing...but hey, it's their choice...

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 17

Such a sweet and romantic moment...confessing their mutual love and sharing their first kiss in beautiful clearing... *sigh*

Loved tht Char and Peter placed a bet about who would initiate the first kiss...seems like char knows Bella a bit better than Peter ^^

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 16

Yay, they finally recognized their mating bond!! And she even kissen him!! =) Loved it!!

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 15

Amazing how fast she was able to teach Ben to create water with her help!!! Bet they can learn so much more from each other...

And they'll make a great family!!  ^^

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 14

Ohhh so cute!! Seems like love at first sight for Bella and the kids!! =)

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 13

Like I said more amazing by the second....great idea to have Ben and Tia come for a visit! Bet it will do Bella some good, to have someone with similar powers around...and someone she can take care of...!

 

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

That's one heartbreaking story...after all she went through she also lost her fiancé...and in such a gruesome way...she is one strong girl to not break down completely but keep going...!

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 11

Bella is such a badass!! Loved the way she kicked the asshole's ass!!

 

They are so hilarious when they're drunk!! *rofl*

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 10

Bella on the mechanical bull...must've been a sight to behold!! I bet it looked hot as hell!! ^^

I like that Jasper is finally starting to think about the differences in past Bella and present Bella and what it might mean!!  And it's great that he acknowledges his attraction to her more and more. ^^

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 9

Charlotte is absolutely lovely!! I adore that girl!! Her memory of her little sister was soo sweet!! And I'll say it again, the way she delt with Bruce was awesome!!

Bella's powers get more amazing by the second with every show of them she makes...!

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 8

Cool how many diffenrent colors Isa's eyes can be!! Really beautiful!!

I'm impressed how many gifted and powerful vampires Jasper and Peter know!! And such useful gifts at that! ^^ I totally love that the blind girl got her sight back and all her senses doubled after her change! That's a wonderfuö case of poetic justice!!

 

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 7

Yeah, I love that your vamps can get drunk!! That's gonna be so much fun!!

I love how well Charlotte and Isa get along!! They are both such strong girls...plus they have the guys wrapped around their fingers ^^

So great how Char just like that broke Bruce's nose...served him right for being so pushy...!

Totally understand Isa...I'd so space out at such a view, too...

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 6

Bella's elemental-powers are really awesome...all the things she could do...!

It's every prankster's dream...Emmet will have a field day with all that shit when he finds out ^^

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

Yeah, I like how Bella handed his ass to Jasper...! He needed to hear that...Glad hee seems to take it to heart and really think about it all...!

 

Poor Bella...can't even begin to understand the pain she must've felt after setting the house on fire with Charlie in it...so heartbreaking...

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 4

Charlotte is also very cool!! I love Peter and Charlotte!! The pictures in the beginning of the chapter are your Peter and Charlotte? Good choice!!

Bella is cool...she just like that slapped Jasper...I guess for not taking better care of himself? The girl is great!!

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 3

I like Peter and his 'knowing shit' gift!! He is really cool and such a good friend/brother to Jasper. ^^

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow, the Pixie is such a bitch...I don't know why some people treat others like shit...does it make them feel better about themselves?? I'll never understand...Poor Jasper...Hope he finds his way back to the strong soldier he once was...

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really love the new improved Isabella Swan!! Her new tough attitude is cool!!  ^^ (have already been at chapter 4 when i decided to review them all *lol* )

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