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Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2013 12:08 AM Title: Giving Titles

Way cute...

Reviewer: thatbitchcalledkharma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 12:09 AM Title: An ending is just another beginning

OMG! I fucking LOVED this story!! So glad you are doing a sequel. I loved everything about it; the drama, all of the smoking hot citrus, the romance, the angst, the humor, and the crazy people! It's sooooo goood it's adictive.

Reviewer: thatbitchcalledkharma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 10:43 AM Title: Giving Titles

Smoking hawtness and they weren't even naked! You rock!!!! Lol! I am sooooo loving this story! Truly enjoying the mystery and suspense and I loves me some drama (well other peoples anyway ;P )!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 12:14 AM Title: An ending is just another beginning

My man loved that i read this whole story in one day, because all the build up of those lemons made him a happy man lol

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 4:42 PM Title: Stormy with a ray of Hope

You did good!! I certainly did not want Edward locked up but I do want James & Maria to get what they deserve!

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Date: 25 Nov 2012 7:05 AM Title: In My Blood

Hot lemon

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 9:55 PM Title: Addiction

I just love the intrigue!  I think it is the evil sister Emily that is behind the whole mess...What a bitch!!  Sooo happy that Edward declared his love for his Isabella!!  I wish that I could find an Edward!!

Thank you for all your hard work in developing these characters...

Reviewer: MissTallulah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:56 PM Title: An ending is just another beginning

I loved this story! I started it on fanfiction.net and then switched over so I could get all of the story! Looking forward to reading the sequel!

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 6:25 PM Title: Stormy with a ray of Hope

Damn it! I was hoping Seth would kill James. At least he still got to shoot him. Hopefully they will burry him in the jail and he never gets out.

I just knew that officer Karl dude was bad news. I wonder if Maria will remain in the mental institution or will she weasel her way out. I don't think I would rest easy until both her and James were dead.

Yay for twin girls :) Poor Edward. He's never going to live a stress-free life with 2 baby girls.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 4:49 PM Title: Crossing the line

Carlos is quite the idiot, huh? I can see the love between Edward and Bella and I'm just reading it. He's lucky Edward didn't rip his balls off right there.

I'm wondering if the twin secret will stay between the four of them until Christmas.

James has to die. That is the only way they can guarantee he will go away. I guess the doctor's appointment is forgotten with all the crap James is pulling. I can't wait for Seth to get the chance to use his gun :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 4:13 PM Title: Thankfulness

I'm hoping Bella's dreams can also be like a warning. If they take it that way (like she did with telling Edward about James) then hopefully they can be more careful and avoid the bad outcomes.

I kept worrying about that damn office door. I just knew it was wide open for the rents to walk in on the sexing on the desk. I died laughing that Charlie was the one to catch them. Too good.

Poor Renee. It sucks that she let the papps get to her that way and blurted out the great news. At least it's out there now :)

Dinner was great. I loved that there was no arguing. Yay for the Swans bringing the peace. Oh and I can definitely see Jake hanging around the next year in a body guard capacity.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 3:45 AM Title: Smokey Mirror

I'm assuming this whole Maria in a mental institution is all part of her plan. God I can't wait for Seth to shoot her ass. James too. They both need to die.

Yeah, I can definitely see Jake being the new body guard :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 2:08 AM Title: Moving Forward

Awe, I love Jess and Em getting their promotions :)

I'll cut a bitch if she mess with Bella and the babies. Maria needs to die now.

Hmm, i think Jake would make a great body guard. What does Sam do? Could he be a possible body guard?

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 1:18 AM Title: Nothing short of a miracle

I think my hubby needs to read this chapter so he knows what I mean when I ask him to put me to bad.

Bella and Edward are so hot and sweet I just can't get enough of them :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 12:19 AM Title: More surprises than a little bit

I just knew she was pregnant. If you are puking that much and not pregnant then you need to get check out for more serious things.

You had me in tears again. I was hoping both Hannah and Jessica would survive. I hope they use Hannah's name for the baby (even a middle name) if it is a girl.

My heart broke for Em. I know he wanted to murder Benjamin when he heard all of the charges against him.

James better hope the cops keep him locked up. I have a feeling he wouldn't survive if Edward, Emmett and Seth can get their hands on him. I LOVED Bella wanting to kick Maria's ass.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 10:54 PM Title: My Strength

This was such an emotional chapter. You had me in tears reading about the hospital and home visits. I could feel Bella and Edward's emotions.

Benjamin won't get away. You wouldn't do that to us.

Bella did a kick ass job standing up for herself to everyone in this chapter. I was fist pumping all over the place :) I loved it when the Masens were all shocked wth Emily supporting Edward.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 10:13 PM Title: Can't Escape

So glad to see Emily finally got over herself. I can see Edward adding her back to company eventually if she proves her loyalty.

You keep going back to the damn shell fish allergy bit so I'm terrified that something horrible is about to happen with that.

Thank God I don't have to wait for an update. A cliffie like that and having to wait a long time for an update would drive me freaking crazy.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 9:27 PM Title: At Sunset

The wedding was perfect for them. I'm so glad you let them have that happy moment before all hell breaks loose.

Thank God Emily didn't cause too many problems. I just hope Carlisle and Esme talk to her to find out what's up with her and Maria.

Okay, now that the happy is done let's move on to the angst. I have a feeling I'm about to want to do some serious ass kicking on James and Maria and all the others that are trying to ruin Edward's life.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 5:40 AM Title: I hate her I hate him

Oh hell! They both have MAJOR PSYCHO exes. I can't believe Emily was working with her. WTF was she thinking doing that to her own brother. Hopefully that phone conversation gets her ass in gear and she tries to get Maria caught.

I get that a big rack will distract a guy, but seriously, WTF was Jared thinking. I have a feeling if Jessica talks then Jared will be out of a job.

I want Seth to swoop in and get a chance to use his gun on both Maria and James.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 5:21 AM Title: Amazing, Astounding, Mind blowing...speechless

Oh yeah, there is definitely no better way to wake up :)

Yay, they are engaged. I say no time like the present so they should go for and get married now.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 3:50 AM Title: Enter the Madness

I loved that Bella stood up to Allistair regarding news about Edward and his company.

I have a feeling Seth is ready to pop a cap in James's ass. I know I'm ready for it to happen.

Yay for the new investigators. They are definitely doing their job.

I died laughing at Em taking ballet. That was greatness :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 3:16 AM Title: My Relationship under a microscope

I'm so glad Edward is not trusting the Volturi right now. I like the new investigators so far. Of course I have no reason to not like them yet.

I get where Emmett is coming from but honestly he pissed me off a bit in this chapter. I thought he knew Bella well enough by now to trust her. I just love how he didn't like the tables being turned on him and Rose. I have a feeling Rose will be highly pissed at him when she hears about this.

Hmm, I wonder if Seth and Hannah could have a little love connection :)

Yeah, very nice and juicy lemon. That was hot.

I really hate Jane even more. Were you trying to be evil pulling the cigarette bit with her? I surely can't see her putting up with Maria saying crap about Edward being hers if she was the mystery POV. I loved Edward telling Jane that he was going to marry Bella. In your face biotch!

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 2:11 AM Title: Addiction

You are such a tease with that Mystery POV. I want to beat the crap out of Aro now.

I love Bree and Esme. They are awesome.

Going to London was an awesome idea. You had me worried. I just kept waiting for Bella to walk in on something bad in London and cause some serious angst. Thanks so much for not doing that to us :)

The I Love You was amazing along with the love fest following.

Seth is awesome. That is all.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 1:29 AM Title: So It Continues

That was one hell of a start to a chapter. Me likey :)

Emily is a b*tch. Can she please get a few more black eyes from Bella?

Benjamin is on my last nerve too. I don't know if he is up to something or he's just pissing me off because of the crap he spews about Bella.

I really like Mac and his wife. I hope we see more of them around the family gatherings.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 12:46 AM Title: The It Couple

LOL, of course Emmett would walk in on them like that. Too good :)

The interview was great. I loved how cute they were. I can't wait for that issue to hit the newstands.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chaos

I loved Esme throwing out the bad seeds. It was sad one was her own daughter but it needed to be done.

Now you've got me wondering if Eric might be up to no good as well. Dear God, that family is full of crappy people.

I loved the shower scene. It was so sweet to see Bella step up and take care of her man like he needed. It was also nice to see the two of them connect on that level. Yeah, the I love yous better be coming soon :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 11:28 PM Title: A family affair

Wow, that is one dysfunctional family. Most of the Masens need a swift kick in the arse. I love that Bella didn't take any crap from anyone.

You had me wondering who the hell Heidi's son would be. I can't believe I didn't think about grandpa Edmund. I think it's time for Esme to kick her own sister's arse.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 10:31 PM Title: In My Blood

I was finally starting to like Benjamin until he opened his mouth about Bella. Seriously, man, you just complimented Edward about how is doing with the business. Do you not think that maybe Bella has something to do with that?

That was just perfect for their first time. Thank you so much for taking it to a Narrator POV. Great job :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 9:41 PM Title: Just the two of Us

I'm dying to k ow what Edward told James. I guess since James can't keep his mouth shut that B&E will be official in the news in the morning. 

Nice job on your first BJ, Bella. I just love how close they are getting :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 9:02 PM Title: Damn Insecurities

Edward is learning the hard way, huh?  I loved Bella punching Jane. That was awesome. I'm glad I was right when I thought Edward was calling security for Jane. I just Bella Hadley that play out. She would have been so happy to see Jane escorted out by security. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:35 PM Title: Meeting the Parents

Great first meeting of the Swans. I do love be some papa bear Charlie :)

I died laughing when Emmett Sean for the shore rather than face Charlie's inquisition. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 2:29 PM Title: You give me something

I am just dying for them to go public and get it over with. 

Oh hell. Maria is about to start a bunch if trouble huh?

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 1:55 PM Title: Giving Titles

Yay. Samantha is gone. I hope she doesn't pop back up. She is just bad news. 

I bet there is no better feeling than making one of people magazines most beautiful people and powerful CEO cum in his pants. Score for Bella:) 

i hope Edward is ready to meet the chief. I have a feeling that could be quite entertaining. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 1:29 PM Title: Taking care of business

I just love how it feels like you ate listening to me and dealing with my questions (lol, yeah I know this is already complete). Yay for Bella speaking up about Vic. That do needed to happen like 5 chapters ago. 

Why do I have a feeling James left Vic after seeing how awesome Bella looks in love and thinks he will try for her again. 

I love demoting Vic and making her answer to Jess :) yeah it is time to get rid of Samantha. I have a feeling she thought she would wiggle her way into his bed. 

Anyway, loving this story and see another day of neglecting the family and house cleaning to read it. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 12:33 PM Title: Revealing the Truth

I'm a bit nervous with Emily knowing about Bella. That cannot end well. 

Okay, the bug reveal went way better than I expected. So glad they both got the chance to air their dirty laundry and not find out via the papps. I want to know when Edward will find out that James is married to Victoria. 

They were so cute at the end if the chapter. The awkwardness was so realistic. I love it. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 11:32 AM Title: Unofficially Official

Every time I think Edward has gone overboard with his temper you surprise me. I totally get why he was upset with Samantha over lunch but dumping it on her chest was a bit much. I was surprised Bella didn't get more angry with him over it. 

I didn't realize Bella didn't know Victoria was the PR rep for Masen. I'm surprised she hasn't put two and two together yet. Now I wonder why the volturi background check on Vic hasn't revealed her relationship with James. That was interesting that quil is so buddy buddy with James. I have a feeling embry is going to run his mouth and James is about to get the scoop of his dreams. 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 12:53 AM Title: Establish

Finally!!! I'm so happy they have both pulled their heads out of their arses. My fingernails are bitten down to nubs nervous over the James reveal.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 12:01 AM Title: Defying Gravity

Edward just can't catch a break. If it isn't someone in his company screwing him over, then his sister is doing it. Emily deserves everything that is come to her.

The anticipation of the big James reveal is still driving me crazy. I just know Edward is going to use it as an excuse to say Bella is just like all the other women.

I was cheering when Edward punched Mike. He so deserved that!

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 11:14 PM Title: Pretending

The faxes and emails were too cute. Yeah, right. There is no way they can be just friends. I wonder how long they will let it go before they give in.

Very interesting about the dreams :)

James needs a good arse kicking. He's slimy and will only cause tons of trouble for these two.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 11:11 PM Title: Getting to know you

I just love these two :)

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Date: 17 Nov 2012 7:31 PM Title: Distractions

I so want Rose to shove Jane in a dark closet and kick her arse. That could be quite enteraining :)

Awe, Bella had Edward texting. How sweet. Yes, Edward, Bella is a distraction, but a good one.

I'm still nervous about the big reveal of Bella's ex. Will Edward have Em check her out and find out that way?

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 6:49 PM Title: Just Friends

Now you've got me anxious for the whole Edward finds out about Bella and James to hurry and get here because I know he is going to blow up.

Oh yeah, Emily is definitley behind a lot of crap going down at Edward's company. I just know he is behind the strike. I think she wants to be in control of everything and wants to see Edward and the rest of her family with nothing.

I love Jake! Thank you for giving me a Jake I can love and not despise. Most authors don't do that. I want him to meet James in a dark alley and beat the hell out of him and get away with it :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 6:08 PM Title: More than Infatuation

I wonder how long B&E will be able to resist the pull they are feeling.

Wow, Emily is quite the b*tch. I could totally see her using Paul to embezzel the money.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 4:52 PM Title: The Interview

Okay, I definitely say Victoria is the leak in the company. I just have to wonder who else is in on it. You've got me thinking Royce could be part of the embezellng. I'm still keeping Laurent on the radar. We haven't really heard enough from him for me to decide.

I love how Bella doesn't back down from Edward. That is definitely the kind of woman your Edward needs.

I have a feeling my Saturday is going to be spent reading this entire story and not getting anything done around my house :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 4:04 PM Title: The day that changed their lives

Wow, that started with a bang. After reading that it sounds like Victoria might be the leak. You've got me hooked and I can't wait to find out who is screwing over Edward's grandfather's good name and the company.

I like your fiesty Bella. It looks like she needs to be fiesty in order to put up with Edward. I can just see the drama unfold once he realizes who her ex is.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chaos

J'ai hâte de connaître Mac!

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Date: 18 Oct 2012 12:20 AM Title: A family affair

Magnifique!

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 10:50 PM Title: In My Blood

wow!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2012 10:09 PM Title: Just the two of Us

oups!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2012 9:44 PM Title: Damn Insecurities

wow

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 9:43 PM Title: Meeting the Parents

lol

Reviewer: stressmaster Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 5:09 PM Title: An ending is just another beginning

love love loved this story.

Reviewer: stressmaster Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 2:06 AM Title: More surprises than a little bit

loving this story i'm so glad i found it.

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 4:14 AM Title: Just the two of Us

that was HOT!! i love that he's being so careful and sweet with her. bella will know beyond the shadow of a doubt that edward really treasures her.

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 4:52 AM Title: Revealing the Truth

whew! i thought he would have a heart attack when she finally confessed about james. this was much better than i expected. :)

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 4:15 AM Title: Establish

awww, sometimes edward's a real sweetheart. :)

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Date: 10 Oct 2012 2:28 AM Title: Distractions

i'm looking forward to this coffee date. :)

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 11:52 PM Title: The day that changed their lives

wow, you packed a lot into that chapter!i'm glad james is out of the picture already. bring on the interview.

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 7:46 PM Title: The Interview

Oh my GOOOOOOOOOOOD, Edward is such a DOUCHEBAG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I love Bella in this!

Reviewer: redhed0103 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 2:32 PM Title: Distractions

I love your story. Can't stop reading.

Reviewer: Bigma Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 8:36 AM Title: Getting to know you

Still reading and looking forward to the next chapters. I'm glad your story is already complete.

I've noticed when Edward mentions Jasper for the first time you used the last name Withlock and on subsequent chapters his last name is Hale.

Reviewer: Bigma Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 12:07 AM Title: The day that changed their lives

Nice and engaging.

Reviewer: carrielg Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2012 1:41 AM Title: Meeting the Parents

Love this chapter...I was hysterically laughing about Emmett

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 7:38 PM Title: The Inevitable

I just love your Bella, she is a Bad-Ass. I love that she is a fighter. The only time I've ever seen her like that. I wish we could have seen more of it.

E/k

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2012 6:35 PM Title: Naughty and Nice

YAYY!!!! EMMETT!!

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Date: 28 Aug 2012 4:34 PM Title: Stormy with a ray of Hope

You always get me. now Johnathan, what a loss...boohoo!!

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 6:26 PM Title: More surprises than a little bit

NOOO!! NOT HANNAH, I liked her. yayy we caught James, now its time for Maria.

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 2:46 PM Title: At Sunset

YAYY!! and AWWW!!
E/K

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 7:53 AM Title: I hate her I hate him

DUH DUH DUH!!
E/K

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 5:43 AM Title: My Relationship under a microscope

This chap forced a review.....
The saboteur IS FUCKIN JANE??!!!!!!
E/k

Reviewer: Jeno85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 3:24 PM Title: My Relationship under a microscope

Jane is a smoker????

Reviewer: bookonabeach Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 6:34 PM Title: An ending is just another beginning

Thanks for sharing, Looking forward to the next one.

Reviewer: salisavannah Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 7:33 PM Title: An ending is just another beginning

GREAT STORY...CANT WAIT TO READ PART 2!!!

Reviewer: salisavannah Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2012 6:55 PM Title: My Relationship under a microscope

ALL I HAVE TO SAY ABOUT THAT LEMON IS...OH MY!!! LOVED IT!

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 8:44 PM Title: In My Blood

Loved the narrator POV!!!! Wish more writers would do that! :)

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 12:36 PM Title: The Interview

:)
Looks like this is going to be a fun read!!

Reviewer: Jabsjb Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 4:43 PM Title: The day that changed their lives

This was an awesome story and very well written!!  I stayed up very late at nite because I could not put it down.  Great job and I look forward to your other stories. 

Thank you

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 11:58 PM Title: An ending is just another beginning

I freaking loved the story. Thank you so much and I can't wait to start reading the sequel!!!!

Reviewer: babylou23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2012 8:16 AM Title: An ending is just another beginning

Just read this all the way and loved it, I can't wait to start the next one :-)

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 7:36 PM Title: The day that changed their lives

Love the plot bunny!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:44 AM Title: An ending is just another beginning

hmm not sure about there being a sequel, but lets see what u got!!!

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 11:04 AM Title: Stormy with a ray of Hope

Ohhh i was hopeing for boys!

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 8:27 PM Title: My Relationship under a microscope

i am noy sure Jane is the person bhind it but i noticed the throw in with the cig's.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 6:25 AM Title: An ending is just another beginning

James is in desperate need of therapy! Great story. I love how you kept Edward and Bella a strong team and didn't have Alice as a rude controlling person. Looking forward to the sequel.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 6:08 AM Title: The Inevitable

So glad Maria is history!

Reviewer: sparkledamnu Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 9:23 PM Title: Just the two of Us

I just have to tell you I am truly enjoying your story.   I have been reading on my Kindle Fire and just now got back on TWCS to make sure I left you a review. 

I am enjoying your story line very much.  I can't wait to see if Bella can truly tame Edward somewhat.

Thanks for writing for our fandom.

Elaine - sparkledamnu on twitter    Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:10 PM Title: Naughty and Nice

So glad there is a sequel because I'm not ready for it to be over either.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 7:58 PM Title: Stormy with a ray of Hope

Glad this chapter ended on a happy note.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 7:29 PM Title: Crossing the line

James is delusional and sick.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 7:06 PM Title: Thankfulness

Love it!!!

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:19 PM Title: Smokey Mirror

Yes, I agree their lemons are definitely hot!!! Great story so far.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 1:23 PM Title: Moving Forward

Love the twins but physco Maria has to go.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:49 AM Title: Nothing short of a miracle

Who knew bedtime stories could be so fun!!!!

Reviewer: sparkledamnu Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 5:16 AM Title: The Interview

I feel we're in somewhat of a cat and mouse game between Edward and Bella.  Can't wait to read a little interaction between them.  I love a snarky Bella!!!

I really like the double entendres and the way you "turn your words" to get the effect you want in a sentece.  So few can do that!!! 

Thanks for writing!!!!!  And I'm enjoying reading on TWCS.  After all my favs and alerts have played out I may never go  back to FFN!!!

Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter   Sprkle Damnu Phillips on FB

Luv the suttle connections you are beginning to form in the regular grouping.  Quite different!!!

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:56 AM Title: More surprises than a little bit

James is just as crazy as Maria.

Reviewer: sparkledamnu Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:17 AM Title: The day that changed their lives

Really well put together first chapter -- so much going on.  Really set the stage for wherever you plan to take this.

Loved the response Edward had to Bella without physical interaction. 

I love completed fics and hope I remember to review each and every chapter.  Your fic promises to really keep me hitting next very fast.   :D

Thank you for writing for our fandom.

Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter   Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:53 AM Title: Can't Escape

Yeah, awesome lemons but killer cliffy!!!!

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 8:33 PM Title: Addiction

Hot chapter! I'm thinking I've got my earlier guess at who the guilty party is.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:18 PM Title: In My Blood

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Ms G Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 7:47 AM Title: Establish

I am so happy they are getting close but i see a big storm on the horizion and it is Hurricane Edward. Bella needs to tell him about James and about the money she received from James as a result of the lawsuit. If he finds out from anyone but her, it is going to be really really bad. He already has trust issues and when he finds out it was Bella ex that sued him and she did not tell him about it, Bella will be in trouble.

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