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Reviewer: Jessa7635 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2018 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 2

Damn I would have been calling him every day all day emmett is hot f the book. Yummy emmett you could do all the places and positions with him damuun 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 33

WAS WONDERFUL

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 7

WOW

Reviewer: princesspewo Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

I thought she was being safe and then she is having sex without a condom? I hope your story does not continue down this unsafe path, gross!



Author's Response:

It's fanfiction, std's and unplanned pregnancies and such don't exist unless I want them to be. It's not reality.

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 31 Epilogue part 2

Wow!! This ended up being so much more than what it appeared to start out as. While the first chapters had me panting, the latter ones had me crying! Loved the epilogues!!!
Thx!

Reviewer: rarasnake Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

I don't review much but I just felt that I had too... A tissue warning needed to be issued for Chapter 30... I literally cried like a baby and had to stop several times, just so I could continue reading the chapter. I was so thankful for the next chapter to come... Your writing is wonderful and I can't wait to read the next story.. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: MissVicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 2

And by compairison, SUPER MeGA HAWT!!

Reviewer: MissVicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 17

Had  been wondering if was dream, bc, well, huh.....

Reviewer: MissVicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

EWWWWEHH!!!

 Just ewwww!

Reviewer: Spm_0726 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 33

Okay so I had to read this all the way through before I reviewed. I don't know why, but I did. I just couldn't stop reading. It's now 4am :( but it was SOOOOOO WORTH IT!!!!;)

So andyway, I wanted to hurt you there for a minute in the epilogue. I thought she had died and i was freakin out here. lol You had me fool which i love. not much fun about predictable and yours wasn't. Great job.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 33

I've never met anyone with Lupis or delt with a patient with Lupis before. This has been an interesting approach to life with such a disease.
The wedding out-take was a great touch.
Was very entertained by your story.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outtake 1

Nice out-take!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 31 Epilogue part 2

You twerp, you had me believing that Bella's disease had taken her from her boys.
So the party was for her homecoming?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 30 Epilogue

Sure, you just had to make me cry!
Their time together was too short.
Who said life was fair.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 29

A very heart felt apology but a little to late to prevent the pain it caused both of them.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 28

Sweet reunion!
The part Emmett played is very important in both their lives.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 27

Amazing how some accepted what they had done was for mutual gratification and not as though they were being used.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 26

Was it the good Doctor?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 25

Can't blame the guy!
Bella, you knew all along what delaying they inevitable would feel like. Wonder if this level of stress will put her back in the hospital?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 24

Now that's the bomb I've been waiting for. How much destruction was left in its path way?
Bye Edward.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 23

Wow, that is not something one should keep from their fiancé. Nor is her book. This might be a hood time to hash this out as they discuss why she has been symptom free for quite a while.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 22

That's not your topical way to win the future mother-in-law over.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 21

Sex in the parents house always has an air of excitement to it.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 20

Confession is good for the soul Bella. It's difficult to maintain a romance let alone a marriage when a part if you is being eaten alive from fear of exposure.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 19

Option two would be the best for all involved, but Bella is being a bit selfish.

The cabin sounds like an amazing design.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 18

Awe, the I Love You's have been spoken.

The book is still looming over Bella's head though.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 17

Is Edward toying with her or did she steam the whole orgy thing?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 16

The other three......Jacob, Rosalie and the good Doctor Carlisle?

The book needs consents from all the participants!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 15

Health issues manifesting themselves induced by intensely stressful situations. Poor Bella. One had to presume all would not be rosey for the duration of her research.
Hope Alice grants the Major a reprieve, taking him back.
What will it take for Edward to gain Bella's trust? But Bella needs to come clean as well.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 14

Interesting turn of events!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 13

Will Alice bring her new boy toy? How ackward will it be when the Major shows up with Alice? Or will all four want to play together?
Funny how Bella really caught Edward off guard in her fake police uniform.
Need to keep reading.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 12

Heavy into role play and kink.
How's the book coming along, Bella?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 11

Is she ever going to tell him he is part
of her research and will probably have a few chapters dedicated to his sexual prowess?
Bella seems to get off more when it's rough.
When will they talk about Rosalie?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 10

I think Bella and Edward need to talk a few things out!
At least she is only thinking that Jacob will be just a friend from now on.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm sure that is not the last time we will hear from James.
Jacob wants round two.....not sure Bella has it in her, maybe she'll give him a second go.
Glad Alice spilled the story.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 8

Emotional attachment was bound to occur at some point in her dalliances that presented with such strong sexual connections.
I think Bella will be surprised when she discovers the true form of connection between Rosalie and Edward.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wow, Bella seems to find all the sexually driven and very creative men. Well, except for the teen with the mini peen. Poor Mike, haha.
She gas learned a lot about Edward, far more than any of the other experiments.
Will Edward feel used when I discovers the topic of her book or help her continue to live a healthier life through frequent explosive sex?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 6

He sure was handy, at just the right time!
That gives new meaning to the term 'head banging' against the wall. Lol

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow, the Major has some stamina!
Bella should be hobbling like she just rode a horse for days. Lol.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 4

Is it creepy that Dr. Carlisle Cullen keeps souvenirs? As he was showing Bella the different rooms I think he was already creating a scene to play with her.
So much for the actual statistics relating to her physical health before, during and after her sexcapades. The research for this book is turning Bella into a sex addict.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 3

Saw that one before it took Bella by surprise.
Chalk another experience up to not having the proper tools to record her vitals. When will she get to use her heat sensors and audio recording set-up?
Must read on!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 2

How on earth do you top that? What does she have in mind when she says she needs to up her game?
That was some mighty fine pounding provided by Emmett.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

This has the makings if a laugh fest written all the way through it!
Her poor new car....and she didn't even get to experience the big 'O' in exchange. She was robbed! Lol. All for the sake of science. Research can be highly over rated! Haha.

Reviewer: po3a Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 32 Outtake 1

Your an amazing writer and I love this story:)

Reviewer: myself_27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 33

hi it looks like chapter 12 and 13 are the same chapter - please can you check and let me know if anything missing as i love this story



Author's Response:

Sorry about that. I fixed it. I uploaded them all on the same day and must have messed up. Thanks for letting me know.

Reviewer: vanquish13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 6

:)

Reviewer: vanquish13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 4

:)

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