Date: 20 Jul 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG im in tears reading this chapter. You captured such a heartfelt moment. Great job. Keep up the awesome work.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
I should kick my own ass for not reading this story sooner. Im loving every minute of it. Great job.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2012 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 29
Aww! Great story! I loved reading it. Can't believe it is almost over. Epi to go! Can't wait.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 29
loved loved loved the chapter it gave them a great ending
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2012 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 29
I think that this chapter was perfect. You let them make love but not everything was perfect. With Bella still being a little scared, it made it more real. So many of these stories end with incredibly happy endings, which is what I like best by the way, but life is not like that. This is a happy ending but with a little more reality to it. Perfect. I will miss these two.
Maria
Date: 18 Jul 2012 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved the story from start to finish! It made me laugh and cry and just smile. Do you think you'll do a sequel after the epi?
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 28
They should have a boy. A good name for the baby would be Jonathan (god has given, gift from god). Partial to marry before baby is born & don't go back to work until after. But if waiting on marrying then go back to work before... Ok there is all of my opinions. Anxiously awaiting for this to be updated! Now I'm moving on to another of your stories!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 27
Hard for the adults to cope, even more so for a child. You're writing Bella wonderfully in conjunction with her dealing with Emma! (not to say your not in other areas)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks for not drawing it out that much! Now for the healing & the baby!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 24
All right, got my big girl panties on... Soldering on now...
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 23
On pins & needles here!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 22
Yay!! Now let's end the James drama...
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
Sounds like a wonderful vacation!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 20
All right now lets get rid of James.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
Damn... How much is Bella supposed to handle??? Die Jessica it'd be easier on Emma in the end.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
Yay new home, living together, SEX!!! Now to just get a ring on the fingers, get rid of Jessica permanently & kill off that sadistic fvck James!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is so damn stubborn!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
Crap - I so need to go to sleep & then you leave a teaser like that!?!? I must read another chappie tonight (early morning) now!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'll bet Jessica has a freaking conniption about the dance classes & heaven forbid she finds out about Emma wanting to call Bella mommy. Need to kick her ass to the freaking curb! Slorish cvnt!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
Migraines awful! I've suffered with them for the better part of 20 years.
I hope no more "running" for Bella. In fact I think these two should go ahead and marry no matter the length of time they've been together. It feels right in their case.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
I hope she doesn't push Edward away. what's up with Emmett?
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 10
Touching memorial. I know I'm late to the party but kill that heifer off. Emma will be better off. Trust me.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
Another wonderful chapter!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
*raises hand* I'm up for throttling Jessica! Name the time & place. I have no tolerance for "parents" like her.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
Absolutely wonderful first date!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm forming a line to lynch Jessica...
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow. This is fiction but sadly there are cases like this out there.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
Absolutely love when stories have Emmett in more serious types roles & still be a good ball. Love that Emma's so taken with Bella already! Love that Bella's about to open up to Edward - can't wait to read her story.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Emma seems just precious. Maybe she'll help heal Bella.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to find out what Bella's story is and to see how they get along while working together.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 28
It's so sad to see the two of them struggling line that. Of course it wouldn't be realistic if things were perfect the second she came home. Hopefully with Edward finally knowing what James did to her will help him know how to help her get past it.
It is a tough choice. It I think Edward needs a boy. I have no clue about names.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 28
That was a great chapter. Although very heart breaking in some spots, there was still that little bit of humor to break it up. I think that Edward and Bella should have a little boy. She lost Mattie, so I think a little boy would be perfect. As for his name, Um maybe Christian, Daniel, or Alexander Dante. The last one was my dad's name. Can't wait for the next update.
Maria
Date: 29 Jun 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 28
BOY BOY BOY BOY BOY BOY BOY BOY BOY BOY!! :D
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 28
I loved the birthday party. Little by little, Bella will get stronger. She's making progress. Can't wait to see what happens with Rose and Emmett!!! Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 28
I think a baby boy would be good. Anthony masen Cullen. Wait til after the baby is born to get married. Loved the presents.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 28
I think a baby boy since they already have Emma. Great chapter. I hope Bella starts to feel better soon.
Update soon :)
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 28
Let it be a girl. Names: Evangeline ( means good news), Layla (means dark beauty) or Vivian (means alive).
Date: 28 Jun 2012 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 28
I think its important to get married before bean arrives...
Date: 20 Jun 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
I get migraines as well, never had to stay in the hospital, but I'm willing to say if I'd gone to the ER with a few of them they proably would have admitted me. Those took a shot of toradol in my ass to go away.
Date: 20 Jun 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
How about a tissue warning lady! It was beautful.
Date: 20 Jun 2012 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
Emma is so cute! Do you have a picture of her?
Date: 18 Jun 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 27
Seeing Bella like that just breaks my heart. At least she has a big family to support her through her recovery.
Poor Emma. Thank you for making her a real child and not some fantasy one that we know does not exist. A normal child would have reacted the way you had her react. A fantasy child would have just been the perfect child who loves and supports and wants for nothing. Reality is a good thing in fics :)
I think they should have a boy. Emma is so used to being Daddy's little girl that I think it will be easier for her to share her daddy with a boy.
Date: 18 Jun 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 26
Yay, James is dead and Bella is home safe and pregnant. Thank God the worst of it is over. I can't wait for Emma's reaction to the baby :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oh crap they forgot field day that sucks. I am glad they are being transferred that is for the best.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 26
James was a sick fuck. But a dumb ass none the less I am glad he is dead and happy they are having a baby.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 27
Loved the chapter. It will definately take some time but hopefully they both are getting better and stronger, day by day. As for Emma, she's still so young. It's hard to understand the effects of what happened. She'll get there too. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 27
This was fantastic and made them all realize that "the norm" has been altered. I wish my hubby would figure this out. Would love for them to have a girl, let Bella keep her Mattie as the only boy. I believe Edward would be the manliest of men if he was surrounded by girlie stuff.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 27
Im thinking Edward Charlse for a baby name (grins)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more. Glad the bastard is dead and that Edward and Bella are back together.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 25
Holy crap! I had tears in this chapter. Loving your story. Can't get enough of it. Sorry for the lack of reviews. Your writing is awesome though. You can feel the emotions coming out of the characters in this chapter. I'm preparing myself for the next one.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 26
Brilliant! I love this story! I feels so real when I read it. I was so scared for Bella. Ad a baby! How awesome! Hopefully that will help Bella recover from her ordeal!! Thanks for the update. More soon please! xx
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow, what a chapter. That first part was incredibly difficult to read. I can't imagine how hard it was to write. I'm so glad it ended positively, the really needed some good news.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
very sweet chapter and got an little teary eyed. I had a good laugh at the convo between Edward and Alice:
"You're welcome, teach," she giggled. "Give my best friend lovin' and orgasms."
"Say goodbye, Alice," I said flatly.
"Goodbye, Alice," she chirped before she hung up the phone.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved this chapter very heartfelt. I liked this part:
"She's gone," he said morosely.
"She'll be back," Esme said from her spot by the bacon. "Think of it this way…you have a free babysitter while she's with her. You and Bella can spend some quality time together. If you know what I mean." Her brows waggled and she wiggled her hips suggestively.
"MOM!" Edward snapped. "I can't believe you!"
"What? I know you're not a virgin, Edward," Esme said, arching a brow. "Your daughter is a huge indicator of that."
"Ugh, I need to…Bella, let's leave the kitchen before I permanently become a tomato. Bad mother. Very bad. You should be in timeout," Edward admonished. He laced his fingers through mine, leading me down to the basement.
I also loved the end of the chapter.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wonderful story even if it made me cry.
Thanks for sharing.
=)
Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 26
I'm so happy they are together again and are expecting. Bella needs some light in her life after the ordeal she just went through. I'm glad James is I ally dead. I've never hated someone as much as I hated him! I wish he suffered more for why he I'd though.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 26
I LOVE BABIES! Thank you! This was all sorts of adorable (the ending part of the chapter). I feel awful for Bella, and the hell's she's been through. Keep updating!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well, I started this on FF and have followed you here. This is one emotional chapter...poor Bella. She's been through hell and back. I really hope that she has a therapist here now, because what she went through and the drugs she's on require good medical care. Hopefully Edward will help her heal like she wants him to, and they will be able to deal with the baggage of her past with James.
Sounds like Edward could use some healing too, so I'm looking forward to these two getting to know each other and developing a relationship!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 26
Ahhhh really. Cliff hanger much. I am soo glad that Bella is okay, a baby is the best way that this could have ended. Well James being tortured like he did bell or worse would have mad it he best but I'll take this too. Please Not too long i need more
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
You had me in tears reading this chapter. Edward and Emma both tore me up. I really lost it when Charlie joined the Cullens. He was so sweet with Emma.
I'm so happy Bella is found and James is dead. I see a long road to recovery for her.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
So excited for their baby, please don't let this whole ordeal fuck with Bella's head too much. She needs to be happy and healing for their baby.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
I wasnt expecting a baby.. but those were two hard chapters.. tears falling like a crybaby lol.. Im glad shes ok and she believes Edward and all his beautiful words!! :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 26
I am so happy with this chapter. And with the story overall. But then I have loved everyone of your stories. Truly talented girl. I even liked reading it here.
Copper
Date: 08 Jun 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 26
poor B... she's so smart and strong... so happy she go away ;)
Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 26
loved it cant believe she is prego
update fast :)
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 26
That James is one sick man! Is it wrong that I'm glad he's dead? It was hard to read about the abuse he inflicted on Bella, but knowing from the last chapter that he was dead made it possible. Thanks for not dragging it out.
Thanks also for writing Bella and Edward as such strong characters.
Tori
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh my God, I don't think I even breathed while reading that. I'm finally catching up on my updates, but I am totally dreading the next chapter. Okay, they'll get through this, they'll get thru this. I'll just keep repeating that!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 26
Yay! Such a good chapter...I'm so happy about the baby...I can't wait to see Bella and Emma reunited.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 26
did you give us one baby or two hmm. That might be another twist hehe. I am so glad you updated. It was a hard chapter to read but at least james is dead. I wonder what will happen with ashleigh. I take it you are no longer posting to the other site. ff
Author's Response:
Only one baby....apparently, the chapter was added twice when I copied and pasted it.
And no. I'm not posting on ff.net anymore. All of my stories violate the TOS. So, I'm here and at AO3.
Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 26
Ahhhhhhhh!!!! and all the cigarette burns... jeesus. That was an intense chater, but in some ways i think her recovery and seeing her struggling with her life with Edward will be more intense and harder to stomach.
A BABY!! how will Emma react to the news? How will she cope with Bella's abduction?
Can you say clusterfuck?
Waiting loyally,
Tori (torisurfergirl)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 26
This chapter really made me cry and man I feel so bad for bella. I'm really glad that she survived the ordeal and that she stayed strong through what james did to her. I love the end result. I can't wait to see what emma's reaction will be to the news and what they tell her with what happened to bella. I'm can't wait for the next chapter. you did awesome with this story.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 26
I so didn't exspect that! But it was a great chapter, I loved it! :)
Date: 08 Jun 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 26
Good Chapter......
Date: 08 Jun 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 26
Ok that was weird. A double post? No, don't need or want to kill you. It was perfect. G
Ad James is dead.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh my.. They are having a baby, that is so awesome:)
Loved it, can't wait for more:)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow. I can't wait to see more.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 26
James is just pure evil but I'm so glad she was able to get away from him when she did even though she was drugged. I loved the ending of the chapter. Good job.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 26
Yay! A baby! Thank you for not dragging out her time with James, he's where he needs to be, Hell!
Love your stories and glad that the ffn drama didn't take you away from those of us who stop whatever we're doing to read your stories.
Crazy mad love for you and the merry mix of stories you share!!! Until next time
Author's Response:
God, I couldn't imagine dragging Bella and Edward through another chapter of angst. that would be downright cruel. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 26
James is an asshole, and I'm glad he's dead. I hope he burns in hell. I'm so glad that Bella is pregnant. I can't wait to read whats going to happen next. Please update soon.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 26
loved the chapterl ooking forward to mroe
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it! Cant wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 25
You are evil but at least you didnt mae us wait for next chapter for bellas rescue. Good chapter.
Date: 07 Jun 2012 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
This story has been so beautifully written and true to life, especially this chapter. I say this as someone who has buried their own baby (my first son, Scott, was stillborn 5 years ago), you've captured the spirit of the day beautifully. Thank you for not shying away from talking about Mattie, for letting Bella grieve for him even though it had been 3 years since she lost him, and for Edward suggesting to have a memorial service and burial for him, even though there was no physical part of him there to bury.
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Tori
Date: 07 Jun 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 25
Omg woman go back and put a tissue warning at the top of the chapter. You had me tearing up.... Great chapter I'm glad the kidnapping wasnt dragged out in multiple chapters :) update soon.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2012 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 25
Woman, I was just an sobbing wreak yesterday after reading this chapter that I could not even review. I was so heartbroken for both Edward and Emma that I could barely breath. You just know how to get me to cry. Thanks. Something I just need it. I hope that Bella is fighting to get back to Edward and Emma and the rest of her FAMILY. This chapter was truely amazing.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 25
i found the new chapters at last x
Date: 06 Jun 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 25
I had to follow you here. This story owns me! My heart seriously hurt reading this chapter. I can't imagine what Bella's chapter is going to do to me.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 25
SSSOOO Glad I found you here :) I almost flipped when I saw you were moving sites :) I just wanna keep reading pls update soon Love it :)
Date: 06 Jun 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 25
GEEEEEZ! Way to leave us all dangling - what a heart wrenching chapter. I am not looking forward to the next one but have to know how she escaped, your writing brings everything to life so I can only imagine what you have instore for us hahaha. Loving this story as always - thank you for sharing it (now I found you here :) ).
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2012 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 25
Josie,
As sad as the situation with Bella is, I really enjoyed this chapter. It was very well written and seemed pretty realistic. By pretty realistic I mean exactly what would happen if this were an episode of Criminal Minds. I am well aware that Criminal Minds is fictional television, but the writers do their research and have hired a consultant from the BAU who says that the show is very similar to real life. So I guess technically your story is actually pretty realistic if I'm comparing it to Criminal Minds. You've obviously done your research. And FYI, Criminal Minds is my favorite show, so your story being compared to it is high praise coming from me.
Much love,
Mandy
Date: 06 Jun 2012 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 25
Good Chapter.....
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2012 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 25
great chapter....poor edward, emma and charlie....please update soon, can´t wait to see how bella does....
Date: 06 Jun 2012 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 25
I hope Bella is not hurt that badly and will have too much of a setback but Edward will be there to help her. great chapter as always
Date: 06 Jun 2012 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 25
I was worried that the update system from this site wouldnt work, but it did. Wow emotional rollercoaster all over it. You give the mexican and latin america soap operas a run for their money with your plots woman! Hey I was in polyvore.com the other day and saw wedding bands with the music symbols and i tought of this story and their wedding. you should check them out! :-)