Date: 07 Jun 2021 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 34
fyi: just found you and this site.. I'm not good with this computer stuff, but I am learning.. I enjoyed your story and the writing flows.. thanks for sharing. I wish I could have reviewed as this was being done, I would have encouraged you along the way.. so I am now off to find another tale to enjoy!!! HUGS!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2019 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 34
Loved it and while Edward redeemed himself (so enjoyed him getting his ass handed to him an drunning scared with his tail between his legs lol) I would t be able to forgive him either. And his girl even though she heard the story how dare her ass call Bella a bitch she had no obligation to listen to him period. Sort of wished she got a physical smack down to learn to mind her betters cunt. Love me some Peter always good to see the knowing Peter.
Date: 09 Aug 2019 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 34
Loved it and while Edward redeemed himself (so enjoyed him getting his ass handed to him an drunning scared with his tail between his legs lol) I would t be able to forgive him either. And his girl even though she heard the story how dare her ass call Bella a bitch she had no obligation to listen to him period. Sort of wished she got a physical smack down to learn to mind her betters cunt. Love me some Peter always good to see the knowing Peter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 34
Amazing,fascinating and a marvelous read!!!!!!!!!
Thank you!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 23
Yeah, she's crazy as a loon, always has been!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 22
Jasper's been mean to his mate and he really deserves her bit of payback!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 21
Jasper's such a love!!!!
Peter I an enigma!!!!!
Charlie and Tori are so cute!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm glad knows they're mates and can point them in the right direction!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
What can I say, Jasper is sex on legs!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
Bella is quite brilliant when it comes to Alice and Edward!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love protective Jasper!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
10 is for is for every chapter!!! it's truly an amazing first effort!!!!
I know it doesn't matter now but I would have hoped Jasper would have followed her to Brown!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Jan 2017 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 34
This was amazing I loved it.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you have liked my stories. :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2016 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 34
magnifique je l 'ai lu D'une traite, très bien Écrit
au plaisir de vous lire, bonne continuation
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2015 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 34
Love the story it was really awesome.
Date: 25 Oct 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thanks for the drink idea, i will have to try it sometime.
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
I LOVE mama4dukes, and am glad she is giving you tips :) This is a good story, and I am so excited to see where it goes!
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well, I would say that you've successfully made a complete jerkface out of Edward :) I am curious, and am glad I do not have to wait until the next update :)
Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 34
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank You for reading and reviewing hun. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 33
Buh Bye Malice!!!
Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 32
Good gift twists. Love Em. Such a big teddy bear. Ugh Malice is out.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 31
ooh claim your man B. Woo hoo for first hunt.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 30
hmm Freaky Bella being different. LOL
Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 29
woo hoo. Claimed and changed!!!! Lemon Dance for first lemon.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 28
oooh Get your Man B.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 27
Dayum. B is playin for keeps.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
Glad e came to his senses. Ha ha malice gets what's coming to her.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 24
Go teasing b.the date is a good idea
Date: 20 Jan 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
Gotta love esme
Date: 20 Jan 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 21
Woo hoo for her room.sounds great.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
Hmmmm shirtless Jasper.....yum
Date: 20 Jan 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
Rofl for Charlie and tori.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
Glad she was more polite talking with them the next day. Kinda stupid being pissy the first day
Date: 20 Jan 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well at least they didn't hurt renee
Date: 20 Jan 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
Had a bad feeling something was going to happen on the trip. Damn malice.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
Ah Peter~pier strikes. Glad she didn't go out with that guy.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 14
Ooh he can dance w me anytime. Ah well. Lol
Date: 20 Jan 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
Nice surprise with her mom. Awww for Jasper coming to the club.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bella def called at the right time to help out. Awww for V changing her diet
Date: 20 Jan 2014 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 10
Go Bella!!! COOL for Brown!!!
Date: 19 Jan 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
ROFL LOVE strong bella telling Whoren and Fuckward off.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
ah a nice Victoria. That's a cool switch.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
ooooh Malice and Fuckward really are meant for each other. Such wankers.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
Glad Jasper is gonna do his own thing away from Malice.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
Go Bella. Love her telling them off.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
I LOVE Peter. So Glad Jazz is working things out.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow Alice got some real nerve. Biatch. glad Rose helped her.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
Glad B stood up to him and left
Date: 19 Jan 2014 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
hmm Sounds like E needs a f'ing reality check
Date: 02 Oct 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 34
Loved it
Date: 14 Jun 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 34
Loved this story! Your new one sounds great too :) Can't wait to read it!
-Kate
Date: 04 Jun 2012 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
oh...soooooo waiting on next update!! time for some Jizzper?
Date: 03 Jun 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow!! Loved it!!
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love your story. I know I dont update after every chapter but thats because I am in a hurry to read the next chapter! You are doing great!
Date: 01 Jun 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
Go Bella!! Lovin this Bella with a backbone!!
Date: 01 Jun 2012 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter! I like where this is going!!
Date: 01 Jun 2012 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great story line. I love a good Jasper story. Good job so far.