Date: 05 Mar 2024 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
I really wish you would finish this story. Your writing is fine but your story telling is amazing.
Date: 28 May 2023 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
I hope one day you will update the story
Date: 16 Jan 2023 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 27 Apr 2021 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it
Date: 27 Apr 2021 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next
Date: 21 Mar 2021 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it!
Date: 21 Mar 2021 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it!
Date: 21 Mar 2021 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it! I don't like Sculpicia!
Date: 20 Mar 2021 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it
Date: 20 Mar 2021 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it!
Date: 20 Mar 2021 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it!
Date: 20 Mar 2021 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it!
Date: 20 Mar 2021 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it!
Date: 20 Mar 2021 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it!
Date: 20 Mar 2021 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it!
Date: 20 Mar 2021 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it
Date: 20 Mar 2021 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 20 Mar 2021 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it!
Date: 20 Mar 2021 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it! They are so cute together!
Date: 20 Mar 2021 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it! Poor Bella! I don't like Detective Black!
Date: 19 Mar 2021 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it!
Date: 19 Mar 2021 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it!
Date: 19 Mar 2021 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it!
Date: 19 Mar 2021 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!
Date: 19 Mar 2021 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 19 Mar 2021 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Date: 19 Mar 2021 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Date: 20 Apr 2020 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 16 Apr 2020 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
I really don't like Elizabeth and Tanya!
Date: 16 Apr 2020 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
I really don't like Tanya! Loved it!
Date: 16 Apr 2020 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it! Poor Bella! I don't like Black!
Date: 15 Apr 2020 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 15 Apr 2020 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Emmett is hilarious!
Date: 15 Apr 2020 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 07 Jan 2019 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
Please update and finish story. Thanks
Date: 07 Jan 2019 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
Please update and finish story. Thanks
Date: 24 Aug 2017 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
One of the best stories I have read. I couldn't put it down. Can't wait to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 13
i bet it was aro wife lol
Date: 08 May 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm so very sad that 20 is the last chapter. Maybe one day you will get time and inspection to finish. While I wait I'm going to pretend Aro's wife told someone maybe Tanya of their dinner and she ratted them out. I like that idea. Elizabeth id's shocked loved Bella them. Everyone lived happily ever after. And Bella and Edward have 4 children.
Date: 08 May 2016 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
I really enjoyed that chapter and I'm still'll very suspicions of her nasty sister in law
Date: 08 May 2016 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love how even though she is insecure she still stands up for what it's right. I bet Aro wife is the culprit. I wish I could remember but I guess this is exciting too. I also love that James is good and trustworthy
Date: 08 May 2016 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
Such a great chapter. Just remember some people suck. This is the second time I'm reading it. I live this story.
Date: 07 May 2016 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
I live them together. They are so goods for each other
Date: 06 May 2016 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm really enjoying the story
Date: 01 May 2016 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 20
I have just re-read this story and wanted to let you know that I think it is wonderful and sincerely hope that you will be able to finish it.
Date: 19 Apr 2016 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 18 Apr 2016 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter! Loved it!
Date: 18 Apr 2016 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it! Go Edward!
Date: 17 Apr 2016 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 19 Feb 2016 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 20
Love an miss this story!! Hope it continues!
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2015 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
I really hope there is more on the way!!! I have a feeling Liz and Scilly may be out the door soon....and I can't wait to see it!!!LOVE IT!!!
Date: 23 Jun 2015 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Are you going to complete this story?? Really hope you do.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2014 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
just checking in .... i see i'm not the only one hoping you will pick this story back up. PPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAAASSSEEEEE
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
Sorry you never finished it, well worth reading.
Date: 04 Oct 2014 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm really enjoying this.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
I thought what she said was completely beautiful.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
Black she has felt with worse than you. Bella will give you nothing. This is her family she is probably the strongest Linc. She knows what she would lose'. You can tell she will die before she will willfully go back to that! Black is a moron...
Date: 02 Oct 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
It's nice to she has a family now. I bet she will fight with her life to keep it. Wonderful chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
hi! i love this story :) i happened to find it through facebook when someone else was asking for help locating which story an event came from. it sounded good so i had to check it out, so so glad that i did! i know that it has been over a year since you have updated this story but i was wondering if you plan to continue and finish it? i very much hope so. or if you have it finished somewhere else i'd love to know, i already looked over at ffn.
thank you for the great story line. it's nice that the sexual parts are not taking over completely
~danie
Date: 22 Sep 2014 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
just found this love it are you going to finish it
Date: 23 Jun 2014 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
will you be adding to this story? I hope you do
Date: 29 Apr 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 20
love it
Date: 23 Apr 2014 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
This is amazing! I love it and I hope you update soon! The plot is great and the way you write is awesome! YUCK BLACK! I love how you've written the relationship between Bella and Edward, the way all the characters are written is just fantastic. Thank you! Hope you update soon!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2014 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
oh i just love this little story of yours...
hope to see a update soon :-)