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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2015 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

:) Loved this

Reviewer: Gennell Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow!  I am from East Tennessee, and I found the dialogue hard to read.  It must have been even harder to write.  lol!  I understood the meanings of words of course, but I kept trying to hear the words in my head, and the pronunciations were like a fingernail on chalkboard!  Thankfully MOST people in East Tennessee do not still talk like that!  Anyway, it was a sweet love story that I think also expresses that not all criminals are created equal.  They were just trying to survive, making money the only way they knew how.  I would have loved for them to get to Kentucky and actually be creating a life together, but it was a one-shot I know.  I enjoyed it. 

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love a story with a happy ending.

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Thank you for reading!

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