Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 34
Alice will help him, but I am sure she will read him the riot act first!
Author's Response:
ohh yea Alice.. a little mother hen to bella
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 33
She has to beat this!
Author's Response:
she is trying
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 32
I am glad he is starting to think straight again. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
yea he needed time for the shoick to wear off
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 31
I am so glad the Brandon's took over to help Bella. They are giving her every fighting chance. Thanks!!!
Author's Response:
yea.. they are her family of sorts
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 30
He has to find her and talk her. I know it is a shock for him, but no more then it was for Bella.
Author's Response:
makes ya want to push Edward to start to run after her.. right
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 29
Snap out of it Edward!!!
Author's Response:
yea.. he is a bit stunned.. not what he expected
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 28
So they cross paths.... I am sure he will want to be there no matter how hard it is. I really hope she lets him. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
ahh we know that they have seen each other.. let the fun begin
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 27
I hope it is him and I hope she does not push him away.
Author's Response:
hold onto hope
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 26
It is going to be such a shock if he sees Bella there, but at least he could be there for her.
Author's Response:
ohh there are lots of shocks coming up in this story
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
Don't give up Bella.
Author's Response:
yea. I think Bella needs some hope!!
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 24
I have a feeling that fate is going to make their paths cross sooner then he thinks.
Author's Response:
hmm fate is a wonderful thing!!
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 23
This makes me cry. She has to get through this.
Author's Response:
yea.. hankies are soo needed to read this story!!
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
I know he doesn't know that Bella is going through something right now. I just hope he gets to her in time.
Author's Response:
that is all we can have is hope....
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh no...
Author's Response:
i am soo bad with the cliffies
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
He is such a sweet man!
Author's Response:
Yea.. I like this Edward
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
Ok...I was guessing she was pregnant. Now I am worried that is not it. I hope she is okay.
Author's Response:
ooppss did I make ya believe she had a bun in the oven???
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am guessing she is going to get the shock of her life when those tests come back????
Author's Response:
hmm you maybe right!!!
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
I am glad she wrote him a note before she left. I understand she doesn't want them both to be left with a tearful goodbye. They are both going to have to have faith they will cross paths again. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
It was all about this one night. just to enjoy one night and the future.. whatever happens.. happens!
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
He has to find his way back to her. I love it! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you are liking it!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:24 PM Title: Bella's Epilogue
What a way to end it!!! hahaha Dammmnnnnnn!!
Author's Response:
hehe I figured after all that BS..ya needed some lemony goodness!
Thanks for reading all the cool reviews!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:23 PM Title: Edward's Epilogue
Awww Adoption!! They sure do have big hearts!!
Author's Response:
Again.. trying to not go the routine way!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 65
Aww didn't expect him to shave his head for her....
Author's Response:
Yea.. I thought it was a fitting way for him to show his love!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 64
Glad he let go of his sister's ghost. That right there was his downfall. Can't wait till he meets up with Bella after this.
Author's Response:
He needed to let go of Lizzie.. once he did that.. he could be the man Bella needed!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 63
Oohh my heart is beating double time!!
Author's Response:
Yea.. I bet!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 62
Let's see what kind of inspiration hit him!! Glad he removed his head from his ass!! ;)
Author's Response:
Yea.. I know and so does he!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 61
Hopefully that she is in remission!!
Author's Response:
keep your fingers crossed!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 60
He won't be back until he makes up with Bella!! lol
Author's Response:
He's got some shit to do.. give him time!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 59
I love Jasper... *sigh
Author's Response:
I second that!! *sigh*
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 58
Thank God Esme stepped in!!
Author's Response:
You got to love Momma Esme!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 57
Stubborn stubborn Bella... Her hurt manifested into anger...
Author's Response:
yea.. yea.. but part of me think she is justified!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 56
Damn! So glad Emmett is there!!
Author's Response:
Em to the rescue!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 55
I feel really bad for her...
Author's Response:
Yea.. me too!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 54
As much as I love him, he doesn't deserve to have Bella in his life. If he can't stand by her during her worst, then he sure doesn't deserve her best. Just a little something from MM. ;) Oh I know that he has repressed feelings from his sister passing away and he can't deal with the thought of losing Bella. But he should have never gone through with any of this unless he was sure.
Author's Response:
I agree with you.. this is where that denial he was under comes back to bite him in the ass.....now he needs to fix it!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 53
I figure she is thinking that it would happen that way...
Author's Response:
Yea.. or something like it!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 52
He certainly snapped under pressure... Poor guy..
Author's Response:
Yea.. he kinda did... *shakes head*
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 51
Oh Nooooo!! I hope she recovers quickly!
Author's Response:
Buckle up!!! It will be ok.. just breathe!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 50
Your A/N's scare me... hahahaha
Author's Response:
Ummm sorry??
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 49
She needs to communicate with him and vice versa. Bella can't shoulder this whole thing by herself... *sigh
Author's Response:
I know.. ya kinda want to shake them both!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 48
He needs to express his fears to somebody. Can't be good to keep that pent up!
Author's Response:
Ohh no... it isn't a good thing!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 47
I'm glad she is letting that wall go a bit..
Author's Response:
Little by little she is!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 46
Oh Edward is right..
Author's Response:
Every once in a while.. that happens!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 45
Aww I hope she realizes soon that he really wants this!
Author's Response:
Shes got some shit to work out.. but she will get threre!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 44
Aww sealed with a kiss...
Author's Response:
Sweet isn't it??
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 43
And so the "talk" begins!
Author's Response:
Yes it does.. hang in there!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 42
He is either naive or just plain optimistic. Who knows...
Author's Response:
I think a little bit of both.. with a small dollop of denial!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 41
It's easy to understand her fears. It's only logical.
Author's Response:
Soo very very true!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 40
I'm glad they are giving him the time he wants. I would have been pissed if they didn't.
Author's Response:
LOL>. well its agood thing that they were ok with it!! hehe
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 39
I can really understand her trepidation... It would be stupid to tread lightly.
Author's Response:
yea.. her thoughts and fears are based in some truth and reality!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 38
Go Kate!!
Author's Response:
yea.. I love Kate.. she rocks!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 37
*sniff sniff* is right..
Author's Response:
You gonna be ok???
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 36
Awww my heart hurts! Edward is a good man!
Author's Response:
Ohh soo sorry your heart hurts.. it will be ok.. hang in there!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 35
You just love your cliff hangers don't you! ;)
Author's Response:
Yea.. I kinda do!!! I'd say sorry. but I'm not!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 34
At least he is trying. Any other man would have run away for the hills.
Author's Response:
So very true.. speaks ot the connection they have
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 33
She needs to have faith but I can sympathize with her. Her fears are real.
Author's Response:
So very very true... she needs some faith!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 32
Oh he is a confused mess.. But find her he will!!
Author's Response:
Yea.. he is a confused mess.. but you are also right in that he will figure it out!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 31
I hope they see eachother soon rather than later.
Author's Response:
hmm we will get there.. give Edard some credit.. hes crafty!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
Poor Edward...
Author's Response:
Yea. you do kind of feel for him.. he has no clue what is going on!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 29
Ohhh no...
Author's Response:
Yea.. intense ins't it!!??
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 28
OMG!! *Bites nails
Author's Response:
hmmif ya need a hand to hold.. I got 2!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 27
OH MY!! Who is it!!??
Author's Response:
hehe.. dont ya hate cliffies like that!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 26
So Edward went through a tough situation in his life and he is about to encounter another one...
Author's Response:
Hmm that is a good summary... it is a bumpy ride!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm so sad for her and I don't even know what she has...
Author's Response:
Its ok to feel sad for her.. you will find out soon!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 24
I feel like he should hurry on his search for her!
Author's Response:
it will get there.. hang on tight!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 23
Now I'm freaked out about reading life or death matter.
Author's Response:
hmm I got a blankie you can hide under!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 22
But... But.. he needs to find her! lol
Author's Response:
Ahhh he does.. does he?? we will see!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
Now I'm nervous!
Author's Response:
I would be as well.. I'm soo evil!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
Awww he really is hung up on her!
Author's Response:
I think the feeling is mutual!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm guessing pregnancy... but then it has only been a month so who knows...
Author's Response:
hehehe is all I am gonna say!!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:45 PM Title: Edward's Epilogue
love it
Author's Response:
So glad that you did!!
Thanks!!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:58 PM Title: Bella's Epilogue
I found your story this week and as with most drabblish types, I just couldn't find a way to stop reading long enough to form a review worthy enough to share. Now that I have reached the end, I am having a hard time forming a review per se. I think it is best for me to just say thank you. Thank you for sharing your imagination, your heart and for conveying truth in words. I read Fanfics as a form of escape from my own story. Although the circumstances are unique to me the telling and emotion your words have brought forth, I think, have added to my own healing. If nothing else the title song by the pretenders has now replaced my former homage to my first and only love, which I lost this past year. The story of strength and love reminded me that I did what was in my heart for 30 years and in the end I was still sanding by my partner with all that I had. Thank you again. I will remember this experience for some time to come.
Author's Response:
I have re-read your review several times.. and each time I feel anything I could say in response would pale in comparision.
So let me say that your words are why I write.. to convey something that hopefully will touch you in some way... that I did.. well it is the highest compliment I could ever get.
That I could aid and add to your healing.. well then.. kudos to you for finding something that pulls at you.
This for me was a story of 2 people and how love can change and transform you.
THANK you for your kind words.. they are now dear to my heart!!!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 56
Not hating on Edward. I can see where he's coming from; he's in self-protection mode. We all do it sometime or another, buuut he needs to get his head out of his ass and I have a feeling that good ol' Emmett is gonna help with that quite, umm, abruptly... Loving the story!
Author's Response:
Aww.. nice to hear ya dont hate on Edward. You are right... there is areason for his feelings and reactions.. namely Lizzie and unresolved feelings there.. I have a feeling Em will give him the kick start he needs!
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 50
I really love this !
Author's Response:
So glad that you are loving it!!!
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
They are beautiful together. I am so glad he makes her feel safe. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
I felt they had a beauty together as well.. its like similar energies..
Thanks!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
Bella lost so much at such a young age. I am glad her grandma could be there with her so she could stay in her childhood home. It is sad, but she seems to have grown into a wonderful person. Great job..thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Yes she has..but it has made her stronger!!
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
:-)
Author's Response:
Thanks..
Date: 07 Jun 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 12
:-)
Author's Response:
Aww.. :) back at ya!!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am glad they were honest with each other about what they are feeling and not wanting to pass this chance up. Great job..thanks!!!
Author's Response:
With chemistry like theirs..yea.. they would be crazy to pass it up!!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love that kiss and the reference to my girl. He knows what he wants. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Ohh does he ever know what he wants.... things are getting hotter!!!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am loving these two!
Author's Response:
yea.. they got a unique chemistry!!!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am glad Edward doesn't use his fame to get girls and then walk away. He obviously feels something for Bella. I can't wait to see where it goes. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Nope.. he is not the man-whore type..... hehe
Date: 07 Jun 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love it!
Author's Response:
glad that you do!!!
Thanks!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
Opps... I hope Edward can recover from that. Great job..thanks!!!
Author's Response:
I am sure he can.. but it may take some charm!!!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
Sounds good to me!
Author's Response:
I like the sound of that!!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
Maybe he wants to invite them up so he can sing Happy Birthday to Bella himself! :) Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
LOL... now THAT is an idea!!!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
I hope that is Edward watching her!
Author's Response:
Hmmm you will have to read on to see!! *winks*
Thanks!!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love they are in a band together. Can't wait to see how Bella and Alice meet them. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
It seemed the best way to get the gang all together!!!
thanks for reading!!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds like a great birthday to me. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Yea.. I think its a good birthday as well!!!
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sweet, sad heartbreaking but also leaving me with a little bit of hope ! The way you set the scene in so few words is amazing !!
Author's Response:
Never lose the hope for this story.. it will get ya thru. Thank you for your sweet words.. they do make this all worth it!!!
Thanks for reading!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 35
Okay, you were right the chapters you just posted made me cry and very sad for Bella. I would have never guessed cancer. Edward's loss and thier similar circumstances is genious. I also have to say your penname suits you. Witchy, the cliffy was evil. Since this is drabble style, I was just flying through the updates and bam! "Hello Bella". My heart stopped when there wasn't a next button. I really look forward to seeing the next chapter! Thanks for posting! Cheers!
Author's Response:
So glad that you are caught up in the emotional ride that is this story....... it can be sad and sexy and heart breaking all at the same time!! I have up to ch 35 posted... go check it out! I am pleased that you have falllen in love with this story.. it was a wonderful story to tell.. and we have so much to get thru!! Thanks!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 24
Awww Man...the suspense of not knowing what ails Bella is killing me. I guess with Edward's return everything will be revealed but, it doesn't make it easy to wait. Thanks for the updates! Look to what comes next.
Author's Response:
I will be loading more chapters today... I hope you will like!
Nope.. Edward's return will make it all complicated.. you ready!!??
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
That's so sweet! I loved it...
Author's Response:
So glad thatyou loved it!! Makes me smile!
Thanks!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 16
I really enjoyed this story. I felt them coming together as well s the want raw need. I can't wait to see your vision of how they come back together. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
That is all I could ask for.. that you feel that connection between them.. this was an exercise in trying to write an emotional journey and if I got you to feel some of it.. its worth it!
Thanks!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
He definitely is the dreamiest!!
Author's Response:
Yea.. I know.. I just want to kiss him!!
Thanks!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
The scene was very good! Not to gory or out done!
Author's Response:
Gory??? where would the gore come in?? Hmmmmm Glad ya liked it!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awww heartbreaking
Author's Response:
Ahhh yes... the seperation... and this is the tame part..hehe
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
Uhhhh no words... On to the next!!
Author's Response:
Need an ice bath???
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my... hehe
Author's Response:
Ohh my is right... these two... burn bright dont they!?
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
Too hot in the hot tub!! hahaha *SNL reference ;)
Author's Response:
Ahh that must be why I didn't get it!!! hehe
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella is already in trouble!!
Author's Response:
I think they both are... tee heee
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
Break the rules Edward!! lol
Author's Response:
I am sure he will!! hehe