Date: 05 Oct 2014 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 39
What the heck was that? What in the world are Tanya and Jacob up to? And what was with Jacob pointing at Bella? It's like he was saying 'watch out, I'm watching you'. And there it is again, noises or movement in the trees, just like at Rosalie's home. Oh boy. xoxo Kelly
Date: 05 Oct 2014 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 38
That's the second time that Bella saw movement out in the trees. Who the Hell is out there? Jacob? Tanya? And why doesn't she tell Edward? Things are gonna get scary, aren't they? I really don't like the fact that Jacob will be that close to Volturi Vineyards, not to mention Tanya. Those two together are like throwing gasoline on someone and setting them on fire. xoxo Kelly
Date: 04 Oct 2014 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 32
*Argh* *Sobs* This sucks so bad for both Edward and Bella. They have to find their way back to each other! I know Bella is devistated, but she really needs to hear Edward out. Oh cripes, this is hard to read. But I love your story! xoxo Kelly
Date: 04 Oct 2014 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 30
Holy crap! Jacob may be in some trouble soon, but that won't stop him from getting to Bella. At least that's what I think. As far as Tanya goes, we have not heard the last of her, I'm guessing. Things are going to get pretty hairy aren't they? Yes. xoxo Kelly
Date: 04 Oct 2014 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 28
I knew it! I had a feeling when Edward was still up at Black Diamond and called Tanya to say that it was over, that somehow she and Jacob would end up working together to get back at Edward and Bella. What a great chapter! Edward has every right to kick Tanya off of the property, so where does she get off calling her 'son of a bitch' lawyer, Jacob Black? Argh! Poor Bella, I can't wait to see her reaction. I bet she'll be scared to death. Thanks for writing! xoxo Kelly
Date: 21 Feb 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 11
This one was almost harder to read than the Jacob chapters. Poor Bella has been through hell and back. Thank goodness that rose could talk some sense into her before she made Edward leave. I don't think he would have gone far though. It would get mighty cold in the car with it snowing but somehow I think he would have braced the elements before taking the chance Jacob could get to her again.
Date: 20 Feb 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 7
Gotta love a little sexting before bed. I like that Edward isn't rushing into anything but Bella may just explode if he doesn't act soon. Well, then again he might spontaneously combust himself if she keeps sending those messages.
See ya next chapter. I've got to get to bed since 5:00 AM is only 6 hours away.
You are the sweetest, TSM!!!! I am so glad you are into this story. I love reading your reviews. I can't wait until I get it revised. I am able to read it and actually enjoy it myself .... finally!!! Thanks for all those loverly tea cups toooooo!!!! xoxoxox
Date: 20 Feb 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Bella. Edward better start talking fast or her past and insecurities are going to break her and ruin their chances together. I can't wait to read more. Oh, guess what? I don't have to wait because the story is finished!! :)
See ya next chapter and don't worry about typos, I'm not.
Date: 19 Feb 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm pretty sure that Bella will be a screamer before he's finished with her. That was a bit of a cliffie but the anticipation for the contuation is always so worth it.
LOL ... I sooooo wish I had me an Edward!!!! I hope you like him, I know I did!!!! Thanks for the TEEEEEEA cups, TSM!!!!!! xoxoo
Date: 19 Feb 2014 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved the EPOV. He sounds like a player but I have a feeling Bella can tame him. On to the next chapter. Why haven't I read this already?
Thanks so much TSM ... I have to admit to you that I have not been able to get through this story. I am revising it, correcting the typos, grammar and punctuation. The story won't change, so please just know it's my first story, and I think you will like it. And thanks so very much for the tea cups!!!!!!!!! xoxox
Date: 12 Feb 2014 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 35
im sorry if my earlier review sounded harsh. i think i was just emotional about the split and tried to rant it off. i apologize if i sounded rude. i try really hard not to write rude reviews. sometimes i get too invested in what i read and i react poorly. just so you know, when i said "dramatic much?" i was NOT referring to your writing, i was referring to bella as the person. i tend to write reviews that express my emotions to what i just read, whether its excitement or frustration.
No worries, sailorgirl. No one liked Bella's reaction. I'm glad you like the story and I appreciate any review you want to give me. See you next time. xoxoxo
Date: 11 Feb 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 31
dramatic much? i seriously hate it when this happens. it makes girls look stupid and irrational. bella needs to get over herself. even her best friend told her that she was mistaken. edward deserves to at least be heard and explain himself.
Date: 05 Dec 2013 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 55
Ding dong, the witch is dead! Talk about karma being a bitch, I can't tell you how happy I am to see Jacob get real justice! Just a case of doing right by people being paid back in spades! Thanks for the great wrap-up! Boy do I love a happy ending!
Date: 17 Nov 2013 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 54
Okay, one last review before I shuffle off to bed! I'm pretty sure you get that have thoroughly enjoyed this story, just from all the goofy reviews I've left you! It takes a talent to write those really great sex scenes, while still keeping us all glued to the narrative. Trust me, you have that talent, and then some! See you in the next story!
Date: 17 Nov 2013 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 52
You do realize what a pushy little broad you are, right? Telling us all how to get the reviews done and sent off to you? Never mind, it's been fun reading your author notes. Not as good as the story, but good! Poor Sandra, and poor Jenks, I hope she makes it too. That was a very nice thing she did selling the winery to Edward, for Bella. Worked out slicker than a whistle!
Date: 17 Nov 2013 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 51
I have complete faith that Bella has passed the bar with flying colors, so no problem there. She has the house remodel to keep her busy until the bar exam results come back, so that's taken care of. The only possible hitch might be the wedding. It was most unusual for Edward to ask to handle all that himself, but it's great, too! Alice asking about a group ceremony in Italy was a bit surprising. It also made me really curious about what Edward had in mind!
Date: 17 Nov 2013 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 50
You bet I'm going to read In Plain Sight, it's already in my favorites and I'm looking forward to it! It will be a bit sad to say farewell to Napa and the Cullens and all the rest. Hopefully we'll have some weddings and maybe a baby on the way before the end!
Date: 17 Nov 2013 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 49
Jenks nearly got Bella killed and only partially redeemed himself in Edward's eyes, by shooting Tanya and saving Bella from a bullett! I love that Rose told Jackson Denali to go fly a kite and scared off all his suppliers and creditors! Of course it means more security for Bella but it can't be helped! So, a marriage license and back to school! Life is good!
Date: 17 Nov 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 47
First it was Jacob, now I want so much to beat hell out of crazy bitch Tanya! Poor Bella, she's been through the wringer on this one! Did my evil old heart good when Jackson belted his daughter right across the face, Yay! Too bad about Jenks, but it kind of was his fault Bella was taken and hurt so bad! It was so neat that all the neighbors showed up to hunt for Bella, that's worth more than gold right there!
Date: 17 Nov 2013 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 46
Those two idiot twits are really pissing me off! How dare they kidnap Bella and send Edward into a meltdown! Of course, thanks to modern medicine, he's calmed down considerably! He's got everyone busy with a chore or errand of some kind, he's prayed for God to keep her safe and now all that's left to do is wait! Poor security on the part of Jenk's crew!
Date: 17 Nov 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 45
Who wouldn't just about kill to have a man like Edward? Caring, considerate, sensitive, intelligent, funny,capable, imaginative, energetic, a fabulous lover and drop-dead gorgeous to boot! See, I didn't even have to mention filthy rich! They are so lucky to have each other, just as Jasper has Alice and Emmett has his Rosie!
Date: 17 Nov 2013 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 44
Thirty-five years ago, that would have been us taking off for a road trip on our bike! I cried when we sold it! That is the neatest way to go see something there is, we just loved it! I'm so pleased that Bella finally found the courage and good sense to say yes to Edward! It's sweet that they will wait to tell the family so as not to steal the spotlight from their brothers and sisters!
Date: 17 Nov 2013 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 43
That was sweet and embarassing all at the same time! Bella really does need to learn Italian! Jasper's proposal was at least as good as Emmett's, and Alice enthusiastically accepted! I still an curious as to why Bella feels she isn't worthy of a proposal from Edward?
Date: 16 Nov 2013 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 42
Napa must enhance romance in the air, what with Em and Rose, and now Jasper is about to ask Alice! The dinner train idea Edward gave him sounds wonderful! I would sure say yes under those conditions! Yes, I saw Cosmopolis and Rob did a great job, showing those snarky critics he's more that Edward Cullen! The guy is a damn good actor, just as Kristen is! Back to the story, the Denalis are going to have a major meltdown when their stolen wine recipe sinks their business!
Date: 16 Nov 2013 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 41
Great lunch drama! Edward and Bella's big announcement, followed by Rosie's breakdown, followed by Emmett's proposal! I really love this family! The plan Edward has to take over Denali Winery is a very good one, since he's pretty certain they are going down, due to their screwed up espionage! Sreves them right, cheaters never really win!
Date: 16 Nov 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 40
In your bosse's office? You naughty girl, you!( I'm laughing as I type this!) At least it was inspirational for Angie to hear what went on in Edward's office! She couldn't wait to get home to Ben after hearing them! Quite the session, too with Jenks in Carlisle's study. I'm so glad Bella has told them all about the strange happenings she has noticed lately. The more they know, the better they can protect her!
Date: 16 Nov 2013 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 39
Between the suv that followed Bella home to Napa, and the snapping twigs in the garden, I'm starting to worry! It doesn't look to me like Jenks and his minions are doing a very good job of keeping track of Jacob or Tanya! Those two mean to cause harm to Bella and Edward both! Someone needs to neutralize the nasty duo and permanently!
Date: 16 Nov 2013 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 37
Great to hear from Edward again, I agree. Not so great to hear what Tanya said about Bella, especially that "and her little dog too". That is just plain creepy, given the connection between her and Jake! I so don't want to have anything ugly happen to Bella!
Date: 16 Nov 2013 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 36
I'm totally cool with the way you did the split and reunion and am just happy they are back together where they belong! The chinese food feast was good too! I am worried that Jacob was slithering around outside Rosalie's house. If he was that could be a real problem when he finds out Bella told Matt what happened in Tahoe City and why she has a restraining order! He will take revenge if he can, that's the kind of slimeball he is!
Date: 16 Nov 2013 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 35
Different strokes for different folks, right? Something like what Bella and Edward put themselves through will affect each of us in unique ways, I'm sure. No training to speak of, but I have lived on this earth seventy-one years, and been married for fifty-three of those. Let the rebonding continue, they're so good at it!
Date: 16 Nov 2013 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 34
Oh yay!! That was some sage advice Sam gave Edward and I'm beyond thrilled he took it! Even more thrilled that Bella took that step and kept on running to him! Of all the things to faint over, I guess a little pink Hummer would be a good one! Boy I hope they have been cured of leaving each other forever!
Date: 16 Nov 2013 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 33
Try though she may, Bella isn't doing a very good job of getting over Edward. I can only hope he's having just as bad a time getting over her! God, it makes me want to bang their heads together and tell them to stop torturing each other!
Date: 16 Nov 2013 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 32
Somewhere deep down both of these prople are still wounded from what their lovers did to them, and UI guess they are neither of them quite healed yet. That's the only explanation I can think of for the way they are acting now! Sure wish they would get their heads on straight and knock off all this misery!
Date: 16 Nov 2013 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 31
I am disappointed in Bella, and not very happy with Edward, either! If this is how they are going to react to every unexpected bump in their road thay aren't the grown up people I thought they were! To have a decent relationship, you better learn how to communicate with each other!
Date: 16 Nov 2013 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 30
Tanya may never be worth a damn, but I still don't trust her any futher than I can throw her! It wouldn't hurt to have a TPO against her, for Bell and Edward both! They are going to miss each other fiercely, so hopefull it won't take her too long to settle her affairs in San Francisco and get home to Edward!
Date: 16 Nov 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 29
That is one dinner party I would love to have seen in person! I couldn't believe Tanya had so little self-respect as to tell everyone the slutty trick she tried to pull the night before! The icing on the cake was her call to her lawyer, Jacob Black, the woman-beater! Wonder how she would like that happening to her?
Date: 16 Nov 2013 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 28
I loved this chapter! Tanya is not only a bitch with an ass for an attorney, she must be clueless into the bargain, maybe even stupid! I'm not real fond of this Melissa, either! Some women should show a lot more class than they do! Guess it just isn't in them! Bella absolutely shines, with her grace and dignity and whip-smart mind! No wonder Edward loves her so much!
Date: 16 Nov 2013 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 27
Shocked Tanya's non-existent socks off to be told to vacate the premises, and have her keys confiscated! I don't think she would be pleased about Edward and Bella laughing their asses off at her, either! They better watch out, a woman scorned, and all that crap! Too funny when I picture the whole scene!
Date: 15 Nov 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 26
I knew Tanya would be up to something nefarious, and sure as the world, she's a corporate spy for her father! I hope she hasn't got her hands on the recipe, that could be disastrous! Then too, I hate cheaters and that kind of snooping is cheating on a grand scale! I was wondering about Jacob the jackass and what he had in his tiny mind?
Date: 15 Nov 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
As far as I'm concerned, Bella desreves a medal for the way she has handled Sue, Leah and the club Edward wants to sell. Loved their version of a wine tour, all except the cold concrete floor! It's great that Jazz and Em are going to build their homes for their ladies! That is so sweet and sexy! Just a thought, I get a creepy vibe from Sue's obsession with Edward, and think she may be future trouble!
Date: 15 Nov 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 24
Edward's home sounds like I could happily live there and seems to have that same effect on Bella. The meeting with his parents went really well, and I'm glad they are so pleased with Bella. The shopping with Esme was fine, except for that little faux pas at the dress shop. I felt sorry for that poor girl as Bella did. There will be further trouble from Tanya, sure as I'm sitting here. I'm just hoping the two of them can weather it together! Have I mentioned how much I like this story? Consider it mentioned!
I'm so glad you like but be warned, there's a bump in the road coming up.
Date: 15 Nov 2013 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 22
Show you the love, indeed! If those two show each other any more love, they'll both pass out! I can see you plant the seeds for future pain for these two lovers, and I say, shame on you! I can sense that various people will try to seperate them and danger could stalk them, and God forbid they may even leave each other! I hope like hell I'm wrong, but have that sinking feeling that things are too good between them now!
I love you taking me through this story through your eyes. It's been so long since I've read it and your reviews make it a fun trip. I am an HEA kind of girl, remember that!!!
Date: 15 Nov 2013 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow! What an astonishing turn of events! Rose's dad feels so awful for inadverdently causing such anguish, pain and suffereing! The offer of finishing her law degree and a position after is wonderful! Going to Edward's for a couple weeks is pretty great, too! Rose and Alice are terrific friends, having moved Bella into Rose's place so she wouldn't have to fuss with it!
Date: 15 Nov 2013 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 20
I nearly fell out of my chair when I read the part where Jacob called Bella and scared her half silly! Edward handled that like the executive he is, so Bella got a glimpse of that other Edward. I'm tickled that they are going to the house in Stateline and then moving Bella into Rosalies' when she goes home!
Date: 15 Nov 2013 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for Edward's point of view, I see he's as much in love with Bella as she is with him! I got a kick out of his mom's phone call. She is thrilled he;s found someone . I can kind of tell she'll be wanting grandbabies soon!
Date: 15 Nov 2013 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
It's magic here for them, nothing like their real everyday lives, sort of a moment out of time. I have my fingers crossed and am hoping it doesn't become so difficult for them. I know that's something worrying them both! From the sound of the phone call from his mom, she's fairly happy he's met someone. Hopefully she feels the same way about Jasper and Alice, and Emmett and Rose.
Date: 15 Nov 2013 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 17
Another roller coaster day with these two! Talk about whiplash! It certainly was sweet of you to finish the chapter with our loovers in the tub, all happy with themselves and each other! I'm glad they finally gave in to their mutual passion! It was as good as I thought it would be!
Date: 15 Nov 2013 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 15
Frankly, I'm now amazed that Edward can restrain himself around Bella! She's made it more than evident that she wants him, and he sure acts like he wants her, too! Yet, here's the other brothers getting some loving and not Bella and Edward!
Date: 15 Nov 2013 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 14
Emmett's story was so grossly funny that I had to laugh, even if I didn't particularly want to! What a goofball he is! I just knew he and Rose would be an instant couple as would Jasper and Alice!
I'm so glad you liked it in a sick kind of way. I was cracking up while I was writing it. You are getting close to the first lemon. I hope you like it.
Date: 15 Nov 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
Why is it that guys like Edward only seem to live in stories? Lordy, but the man is damn near perfect! Just ask Rose and Alice! So glad he cleared the air about Tanya. He should also tell her about Leah, too! If anyone can empathize, Bella can!
Date: 15 Nov 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
This story deserved to be nominated! Hope it won/wins something! This has been some emotional rollercoaster of a night, for sure! I wouldn't quit reading this right now unless I was about to die, I am so hooked! I think I love Edward and Bella both! Throw in Rose and Emmett and Jasper and Alice and I'm all good!
Date: 15 Nov 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
In an odd way, that was one of the sweetest chapters ever! I have tears in my eyes as I type this, just thinking how much Bella's friends love her and how much she loves the Cullen boys for what they saved her from! I really hope this turns out as well as I think it will between Edward and Bella. It's good so far and I really, really want justice for Jacob, or against him, whatever as long as he suffers!
Date: 15 Nov 2013 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh Bella, please don't let that bastard get away with what he did to you!!! That was so close to being the end of her I can't believe it! Rape would have been a given, but Jake could have killed her into the bargain! I sincerely hope you wrote a proper punishment for that creepy son-of-a-bitch, one involving a severe beating and a long stretch in prison!
I did! Trust me. I have an outtake depicting his punishment!
Date: 15 Nov 2013 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
Hoping like hell that Jacob doesn't get anywhere near Bella, as Edward is probably right about how that would affect her emotionally! Between the them, the Cullen brothers will most likely be able to handle him. What a total jackass Jacob must be, looking to get Bella back and slobbering all over someone else!
Date: 14 Nov 2013 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
The girls are all atwitter now they know who Edward is and have seen his brothers online! As I said, this Saturday dinner is going to be lots of fun to read about! The big moment for Bella and Edward is coming closer and closer! Can't wait, it may well be epic!