Date: 14 Nov 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
This was going so beautifully, I feel so bad for Bella that she feels betrayed and lied to! Other side of the coin, I'm pleased that Edward didn't try lying to Bella. That shows me he's a pretty straight arrow. Hope they can work out their differences!
Date: 14 Nov 2013 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
You asked for thoughts on the story so far? I'm thinking that anticipation is rather torturous and he's damn good at it! The two phone conversations were a lot of fun to listen to, since you could only hear one side! I'm also thinking, there's going to be one terrific dinner Saturday night, followed by lots of wonderful desserts!
Author's Response:
There is definitely chemestry between these two. I had a blast experimenting with lemons in this story. Hope you like it.
Date: 14 Nov 2013 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh yeah! What a fantasy! There is chemistry to burn between these two, I'm having a warm flush just reading about it! Look out,here comes some really good sex, I can tell!
Date: 14 Nov 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
The girls are almost as thrilled over Bella meeting Edward as she is! I hope nothing goes wrong when she googles him and discovers who he is. I wonder if he appreciates her not knowing about the family business? I knew there would be something cooked up involving all the Cullen boys and Bella and her two best friends!
Date: 14 Nov 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
If Bella's two friends show up, and Emmett and Jasper come up for the weekend, we could see some pairing up, I'm thinking! I like that Bella has made as much of an impression on Edward as he has made on her!
Date: 14 Nov 2013 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
My daughter recommended this story, and I see why! You really set the stage for what this two week vacation might be! It's the pits, what Jake and Jessica did to Bella, and she hasn't gotten over it easily, I see. Maybe Mr. Denali-man can help with that! Her wine and cheese in the hot-tub sounded wonderful, and I really laughed at the two old guys getting their eyes full when she exited said tub! I see her friends really liking this chalet, it sounds gorgeous! Tahoe is one of the most beautiful places I've ever seen, lucky girls!
Date: 16 Oct 2013 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 54
absolutely LOVED this story! :)
-Kate
Author's Response:
I am so happy you liked it tigger. Thank you so much for reading it and reviewing it. xoxo
Date: 02 Aug 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 54
Thanks for another entertaining story. I really enjoyed this tale. One suggestion. The different POV become too repetitious and I tend to skip much of it.
Author's Response:
Thanks, tululah. Yes, I have heard that and it got rather confusing. It was my first FF and I am planning on resubmitting it. Eventually. Thanks for reading. xox
Date: 01 Aug 2013 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 31
Bella is acting like an ass.
Date: 30 Jul 2013 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 31
I love this story! I've always had a love for skiing (and Edward/Bella) so this was the perfect story story for me. The whole Edward and Leah plot twist was very sad, but drama makes for an interesting story!
Totally on my favorite list!
>>LittleMissLucy <3
Date: 12 Jul 2013 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 54
Awwwwww I loved it!!!
Date: 11 Jul 2013 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 44
This is my very favorite chapter so far!!!
Author's Response:
It's been so long since I've read this I'll have to go back and see what you liked about it. Thanks so much Mitzi for reading my story.
Date: 10 Jul 2013 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 32
Maybe he does have left over feelings for her although I know he clearly loves Bella!
Author's Response:
Naw ... he doesn't. He loves Bella to distraction. Thanks for reading, mitzi37. xox
Date: 08 Jul 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
These two are absurdly adorable!!! I can't edit to see how they handle "real life"
Date: 23 Jun 2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 32
Three months Bella over what he was saying goodbye and hopefully good ridence to her....It should be blla grovaling for Edwards affection...I could see a week or two but 3 months, they she never truly loved him..
Date: 23 Jun 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 31
am so disappointed in Bella, first off she didn't even stay to ask what it was all about...then she leaves without a word..
Author's Response:
I know ... but in her defense, if I knew my BF's ex was wanting him back and I found my man holding hands with her, trust me, I wouldn't stick around either. But common sense comes afterward oftentimes. Hope you like the story.
Date: 22 Jun 2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 49
I am enjoying the story very much, as a matter of fact it has only taken me 2 days to read this far and I am a working woman with 2 dogs to take care of.
I do have one concern tho, when Bella was in the hospital after being missing for three days, where was Charlie? My boys are grown and away from home but if one of them was missing, mamma would be there not sitting on her duff at home.
Please don't misunderstand what I mean, it just seems a little strange that he wouldn't be there to look over the shoulders of the police and at least meet Edward.
Author's Response:
Has he shown up yet? :)
Date: 18 Jun 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 14
that was the funniest thing ever! what a story...
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 54
What a beautiful story! That story is definetly at the top of my list as favorite stories! Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story!!
melissa
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2013 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm back! It feels like it's been forever! I loved the chapter of course, just like the previous 24! I don't know which creeper will show up first, but I can't wait to find out! I have to get to bed, but I'll be back. :) xoxo Kelly
Date: 16 May 2013 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
I freakin loved this story!!! Read it in 2 days!! Also enjoying your other story too! Love it
Date: 16 Mar 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 22
I LOVE this story so much I never stop long enough to write a review...so, here I am taking a moment though I really want to hurry along to the next chapter...all I can say, is I HOPE you are going to try to publish this...it is awesome!!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, no matter how often ... it's always appreciated. Glad you like the story.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
I am LOVING your story!!!!! It is so funny, sweet, clever, and romantic! Thank you!!!
Date: 11 Mar 2013 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have been meaning to start this story for some time. I passed it on to my sister who raved about it! So, here I am, beginning what seems to be a great story so far!!!! LOVE your writing style and all the details...as well as the glints of what is to come!!!! :)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad to hear you are reading it and like it. I still love to receive reviews for Black Diamond. I might have to read it myself one day. It's been a while. Thanks again InHarmony. Let me know what you think about it once you get into it.
Dishie
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 54
I really enjoyed this story. I read In Plain Sight first and love it so decided to try this one as well.
Thanks for sharing ypour time and talents.
Date: 09 Jan 2013 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ch-ch-chugging along in your story. So far so good. :)
Date: 06 Dec 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 54
OOh Greece sounds nice. I wanna visit there someday. Yummy railing time.
Glad the other girls had such a nice wedding. Honeymoons sound good too.
ROFL for Billie Jean and picking on pinkie.
Aww what a cool way to tell him. Sam is too funny
awww three kiddos. Sweet.
TY for writing and sharing with us all
Date: 06 Dec 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 53
Waiting is always the hardest part. YEY for passing (although we knew she would).
Wow Esme and Carlisle gone for that long???? awww
Tahoe at Christmas is beautiful.
Glad Sandra is getting better.
Nice volunteer idea. and the decoration donation
Sue...LOL delusional cougar huh? ROFL for Rose sticking it to her.
Cool idea with Charlie!!! aww Low key and Family only....just like she wanted. Cool dress. aww sweet ceremony. Love that they had it under the tree.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 52
Glad E is going to take Jackson down soon!!!! LOL for Bella and her sling. Love Jasper getting her so involved. aww sweet email.
WOW Swan wines?!?!?!
I think a triple wedding would be sweet but I can understand E wanting something separate.
Feel sorry for Sandra....Oh wow Sandra is sticking it to jackson in the end. Good for her. bella is such a sweet person.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 51
Glad B is taking her studies so seriously. Gotta love Rose.
hmm Why doesn't E just rename the place??? Wow three days of testing.
Yey for remodel!!! hmmm massage..... I may have to go get one soon.
Tom seems cool. House plans sound really nice. ROFL for RPats. LOL for pouty Alice. Shamwow.....ROFL.
Ugh Leah again????
Date: 06 Dec 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 50
Woo Hoo Graduation!!! Yey for working for E. reasonable condition to it too.
Glad Charlie is there now for her. Ah so Charlie did come to the hospital. Good to know. Good talk with E at the winery.
yummy phone time and after.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 49
At least Jake is in jail for now. Wow Jenks needs to be more than fired. Pussy could have told Edward and Carlisle this and they would have helped Sandra at the least.
Damn and I wanted to like Lauren. There is another accessory to a crime to be in jail. Jenks could cut a deal but Lauren should be in jail too.
Where is Charlie BTW? Would have thought he'd drvie in when she was kidnapped?
Aww poor Carlisle feeling guilty. Dayum Rose made sure Denali's were even more of paraiahs. Go Rose.
Well at least Lauren was kicked out of school. Sandra needs to press assault charges and get Jackson out of the picture. Glad the school is going to let the bodyguards stay with her in class this time.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 48
Glad the hospital is letting E stay with her. YEY for her waking up. ringer....lol.
What a load of crap on bail. Surprised Jackson would bail him out. Holy Crap....Skankya got into the hospital and up to her room??? security sucks.
Glad B is calm enought to deal with that psycho. Well at least Jenks was finally useful. Ridiculous that they gave bail without notifying the victims.
Glad b is ok and Skankya was such a lousy shot.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 47
Stay strong bella. She just trying to work you up. well at least the Skank left food/water.
Stay strong E. Skankya or her dog will screw up soon. How in the hell did she get on property and back off again so quick? she turning into a bat? Jeez.
grr Hope someone breaks Skankya's arms and legs. poorB
Oh Edward, dont be mad at Billy. At least Jackson is finally disgusted with his useless excuse of a daughter. jenks should have be gone ages ago. He was pathetic.
Poor B.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 46
Yummy start to the morning. Least she doesnt have to worry about traffic holding her up. LOL.
grrr Skankya. Krystal is gonna be fired for sure. WTF!!!! Skankya is an idiot if she thinks B will believe anything. ugh Jake.
Hmm so eddie thinks its Jake....which I guess in a roundabout way it is. At least Jenks is watching Jake like he should be, but Krystal should have been right outside the classroom door and went to the bathroom with her.
Poor E. Glad everyone is there to help him. Smart move with the school thing. Nice to have a family pulling together.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 45
Glad they are talking out this stuff before school starts. LOL for E bribing the hotel manager.
YEY for ring and telling the family. I say have a triple ceremony, then the guys can all have the same anniversary and help each other remember. LOL.
Hope Lauren is on the up and up. Glad E and B are making time for themselves too.
Denalis are going to try to start a war when they find out they are in bankrupcy.
calm before the storm indeed.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 44
Milkmaid....ROFL. To be honest, I like the sound of Alice's house better,
Those two really needed to talk it out. Glad she said yes. Like the idea of gutting the house and making it about them though.
Helmet should be mandatory period, just like seatbelts. Macho BS aside.
LOL for eye fucking Rosie. Em is too funny.
Bike trip !!!!!!
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 43
She should take advantage of the drive for homework and studying. ooh naughty ms giovani. YEY for Jazz and Alice. Our two kids do have a little growing up to do.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 42
Thats cool that Billy did the work. and keep it secret too. the train was a great idea. Yeah dont thing we've seen the last of Skankya and her Pet.
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 41
Love the study. Woo hoo for moving in. Ya know she needs to be their council. Yey for marriage proposal.
Ok off to bed. Read more in the AM.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 40
hmmm is Jenks just incompetent or is someone paying off his crew. Although I suppose they (denali) could have a hidden tunnel out of the house???
lol for Ang.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 39
oooh Jenks is soooooo fired. Who has been watching E & B if not skankya and jake?
yummy lemons.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 38
hmmm so skankya or jake in the bushes.......or someone else since Jenks is supposed to be watching those two. hmmm
Author's Response:
Loving your reviews, lady. Jenks really drops the balls a lot doesn't he? Glad you like the story. Look forward to hearing from you considering what's coming up.
Dishie
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 37
hmmm little dog huh? does she mean Jake? does that stupid woman acutally think she cares about Jake? E needs to put up and electric fence to keep out the skank. Ang is so sweet
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 36
glad matt is the professional. Oooh Jakey is gonna be pissed about that new job he wanted. Yummy phone time.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 35
think they still need to talk things out more but yey for getting back together. Wow he didnt freak over a male tutor.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 34
Glad Sam was able to knock some sense into him.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 33
she is such a doofus. and of course she had to pick a male tutor. Surprised she went to the bbq
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 32
sorry E but lunch was a BAD idea. but bella is overreating too.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 31
ugh damn she overreacts so quickly. gooberhead
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 30
yummy play time. Was wondering when she would have to go back for a bit. Hopefully nothing happens. she should have made the report when it happened but ah well.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 29
Loved his POV. Mr Meyer know how the bread is buttered huh?
Date: 05 Dec 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 28
oooh Daddy Denali is not happy huh? LOVE showing Bella not backing down from skankya. oOOOh Jake is her lawyer.....well that figures. Scum working for Scum.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 27
aww the tree is a cute addition. Wow skankya is really pathetic. Daddy is probably really pushing her. Glad E thought about checking out her keys. Love protective bella. ROFL for Rebecca yanking the sheet away.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 26
oooh skankya is a coniving thing aint she. Her and Leah need to both jump off a cliff. Biatch.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 25
Ugh now we have to worry about Leah too? ugh get her and jake together. Let them cheat on each other.
Glad the girls are all there. Esme and Carlisle seem like cool parents.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 24
wonder welcome to his home and the 'rents. Rebecca seems sweet.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 23
ooooh yummy seeing it from his POV too
Author's Response:
Hey theladykt... just wanted to check in with you. I've been watching and reading your reviews all day for each chapter. It's been fun for me going through this again with a new set of eyes. I love that you are having fun with this story. Thanks so much for all your reviews. I love every one of them. :)
Dishie
Date: 05 Dec 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 22
Yummy chapter. Ugh for neighbor sue. love the piano and the chair.
Author's Response:
Sue cracks me up...skanky thing. I looooove the piano. The chair bit was for a friend of mine who digs that kind of kink. Glad you like the story.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 21
awww for Cinderbella. Oh Wow Rose's Dad. Didnt see that coming. Was expecting it to be Jessica somehow. Shouldnt he be fired or demoted or something?
Yea for going home with E for awhile.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
grrr what is Jake up to and who is feeding him info???? ggrrrr. Yummy lemony times. Happy Rose offered B to move in with her.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
oh Em....naughty naughty. glad E talked Esme down a bit. Yummy times too.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
oooh yummy lemon time. Happy dance
Silly overreacting kids. they need to learn to talk better,.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
hope things go ok with them. Still have a feeling Skankya is going to cause a problem.
Yummy mini lemon at the end
Date: 04 Dec 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
wonderful talk. oooh em and J have it bad huh? Glad Jackass.....I mean Jake... actually went back to the city this time.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
OMG em is a trip
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
glad they talked it out. Yey for girls getting there
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
Skankya is gonig to cause more trouble I think.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
ugh skankya again. He really needs to throw her to the sharks. sigh.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
a police report would still be better as proof to get him dis-bared. Hmmm so ratted out by someone or followed..... wonder which. Wonder why he took 5 years too?
Yey for the three musketeers.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
oh no Poor B. F'ing Jake.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
oh Jake what a jerkoff. Wonder who told him where she was? Sucks glad Sam was there to help e out. yey for boys coming early.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
rofl for sexting!!!
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 6
Sue is pathetic. Ending Oh B you really are touchy huh? great day otherwise.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
rofl for Em and Rose on the phones. Dayum starting to get HAWT
Date: 04 Dec 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great seeing things from his POV.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
oooh yummy first kiss. Glad the girls are supporting her.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
ugh skankya as always trying to get her claws in. cant wait for all out kiddies to meet each other.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Welcome to TWCS. Got this recommended on one of my FaceBook groups.
LOVED the vomit!!!! hee hee for flashing the old men.
I used to live in Vacaville and have traveled to Tahoe many a time in the 80s. Loved Skiing back then.
Author's Response:
So sorry I am just now responding to your review. That vomit thing was so funny. I just got back from spending a week at South Lake Tahoe. So beautiful up there. Glad you are/read the story. I hope you liked it.
Dishie
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2012 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 54
I totally agree this story was amazingly written, for 4 nights and part days i stayed up to read this. Simply stated Xcellent
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 53
I loved how you involved Charlie in the plans, everything was so xcellent.
i really love those special words for the vows
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 51
This story is sooo special to read, I'm grateful to have the net to read it fully and i love every chapter
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2012 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 35
i like how you wrote them back in
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2012 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 31
well i think they really need a break and WOW
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 29
well that clears up some interesting things going on in my mind
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 27
looks like bella has some enemies Leah Tanya
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 54
So amazingly good!!! Couldn't stop reading, well almost stopped when Bella was being crazy and went to stay with Charlie, but stuck with it. Couldn't get it out of my head and had to finish. So much drama, excitement and giggles. All the lemonade was good too!:) Thanks for sharing such an enjoyable story. Sad its over. (I wish you could have let us know about Jasper/Alice and Em/Rose's family members as well.) Great story! Loved it! And I want an Edward Cullen like the one in this story, too!!! Gawd, so awesome!
Hugs, Stephanie
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
thanks for clearing up alot
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2012 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow you had me at your rec in the last story
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
Well first I have to say that I'm sure that the 'dog' Jacob will show up again, but I wonder if we'll see or hear from creepy Sue. Hmmm. I love your Esme and Carlisle, they are too cute! I can't wait to see the whole family together, they seem so close knit. I love how insatiable Edward and Bella are, that's exactly how it is in the beginning, and hopefully for life. :) I'm so happy with where things are right now, it's so peaceful and happy. But I am prepared for what is inevitably coming down the road, I think. xoxo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 23
Damn! I've missed these two so much! I'm on fire! ;p I feel like I haven't read your story for so long! I think I'm reading too many fics at once. I'd never abandon you! I love your story too much. xoxo Kelly
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 54
Im so sad it is over and I am so sad it took me so long to read it great story Thanks so much. LOVED IT
Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 53
That was so sweet my teeth hurt lol. I loved that Charlie married them
Date: 11 Nov 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 52
I am so sad for Jenks he did it all for love what would Edward have done for Bella I just think of that I hope Sandra will be ok.
Date: 11 Nov 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 51
I loved it put Leah out on her ear I hope she got the message that time. I wonder what Edwards idea for the wedding the triple would be great.
Date: 08 Nov 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 50
It was good for Charlie to visit but better when he left for Edward lol. What did Charlie want to go out with Bella for