Date: 27 Sep 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 51
Good god, Leah just seems to keep popping up. Sucks because she still wants Bella's man. I think Edward should rename the club after Bella as a wedding gift:-) can't wait to see what e has planned for the wedding. I thing the renaming of the club, the house being redesigned and their wedding should be enough of a clue to Leah.
Date: 20 Sep 2012 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 49
Wow,interesting information especially Jenks and Lauren. Poor Bella she can't get a break, the person she thought was a friend was actually an enemy. Now to have two more people out to get her, will be interesting to see how she fairs with two bodyguards in her classes.
I thought for sure she would just marry Edward when they got the license. I think they something is going to have Bella getting married by the JP before the one year mark, then having a bigger wedding when the family is involved.
So is Denali winery going belly up? I can't imagine Aro is to happy with Hale transportation. Did he not know who Rose was and her ties to Bella?
Date: 16 Sep 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 48
I am so glad I was wrong about Jenks -really didn't want everyone to be evil. I would say it is sadto see Tanya has died, but I am not a liar....good riddance to bad rubbish.
I am so not ever trying to do the rating thing ever again......that blew up in a bad way. Lol...I thought I hit 5, so imagine my surprise when I got your response. I have come to the conclusion there are some things too advanced for me to attempt.
Now, how do we get rid of Jacob?
Jacob? Well, he's a pussy. Nuff said. You will learn about him in the next chapter. Thanks for your review, Jess. :) I understand about the teacup thing. I've been trying to review LovinRob's story for a while now and I keep screwing it up. She is writing A Dry Heat. It's a reeeeeeally good story if you are looking for something new to read.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 48
I don't know how people could handle that much trama honestly and not wake up screaming every night. I just want to read some happy sexy times for a change. hehehe
Good times coming up trbuie. I had to get the Tanya/Jacob crap out of the way. Thanks for the tea cups.
Date: 14 Sep 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 47
I have been faithfully reading all your updates for the past month - sadly my reviewing has sucked because work and rl demanded constant attention. Tanya is seriously 5 fries short of a happy meal. Good lord she is bent in the head. Glad she will be getting what she deserves. I can't wait to see what happens with Jacob because we all know he was involved somehow. I wasn't too surprised Jenks got the boot. He was a crappy little bugger and I am wondering if he was helping dumb and dumber.
The really sad thing about reading this today was it made me think well damn at least I was not kidnapped, I was only rear-ended by someone not paying attention. See, I have perspective ;)
Thanks for your review JessJess. Sorry it warrented only 2.5 tea cups and I'm worry your car was rearended. RL sucks.
Date: 13 Sep 2012 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 47
Thank god Jacob never made it there. Was he afraid because he was being watched or did they have him?
Tanya sure walked off the deep end. Hopefully she gets put in jail and not the nut house.
Bella might be near death but she can't leave Edward..........hopefully she has enough fight in her.
Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 45
I love this chapter so much, its sooo sweet and caring. I loved how they really just set things out how they would do things with school which does take up a lot of someones time, to him giving her his grandmothers ring, awwwwww, to the way they just fit so well together. Another fantastic chapter BB!
Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 44
Ahhh... for some reason I didn't review this chapter, bad beta, bad beta! You know I loved this chapter from the role play, ah yes, Master Cullen I believe I do want to play *wink wink* to them deciding to remodel the house to the visuals of all the boys and girls all dressed up and rearing to go...YOWZA... wonderful chapter BB!
Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 43
Love this chapter so much, that feast cracks me up and Bella, oh sweet Bella, never say things loudly in a language you don't know BB, hehehehehe... and of course you know what my imagination does at the mere thought of my beautiful Edward/Rob singing...GAH! puddle of goo, thank you very much :-)
Date: 09 Sep 2012 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ok that was funny shit. I was going to wait and review at the end, cuz I just started reading, but I just about spit my smoothie all over my monitor. That was good times.
IKR? I still say that's my favorite chapter. I had so much fun writing it. I'm glad you "got it". I was surprised how many out there didn't get it.
Date: 09 Sep 2012 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 46
Poor Edward, that man is going to have a break down. Bet he marrys Bella the moment he gets her back.
What did Tanya give Bella? Bet she's taking her to Denali winery, Edward and the guys should go looking. why didn't her guards see anything? Tanya off her rocker? I meand we know her and Jake aren't right but Love Jake.......really? Update soon.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 45
Hummmmm............ What are Tanya and Jake up to? Is Lauren and ex fling of Edwards or a hopeful wanna be? Can't wait until the next chapter. You jumped time on me, I was sure Tanya and Jake would be lurking around while they were camping.
Date: 02 Sep 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 44
Loved the way he got Bella to get over her sues and say yes. Glad she is getting a Bella house, can't wait to see what the ring looks like and what tethers say.
Bella pregnate? Tired and bitchy???? Are there going to be any suprise visitors on the over night? Is Leah out of the picture or is she gonna try some more? Would be interesting to see her face when she sees her home is no more;-)
Date: 02 Sep 2012 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 44
I love that all 3 couples are now engaged. I didn't even think about Leah designing the bulk of Edward's house. That is kind of gross. hehehehe :)
Yeah, I'm glad that Bella has a chance to "have some fun" like the other girls in designing her new home. Thanks for reading trbuie. And thanks for the teacups.
Date: 01 Sep 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
I don't know what to think of them going home, each to their prospective homes. I know it will be hard for them to be apart so much, since they've been pretty much joined at the hip in Tahoe. Then I worry about Tanya; I hope she doesn't cause Edward too much trouble. Of course my biggest worry is Jake, he lives in SanFrancisco as does Bella. I just know that s.o.b. will try and finish what he started in Tahoe, and/or get some payback on Edward and his brothers. I can't wait to see what happens next. Oh by the way, awesome lemons! Very hot! xoxo Kelly
I know what you mean, 1918. This is a very difficult part of the story you are in right now. Keep reading tho. There is a turn at the end of the road. Thanks for reading, thanks for reviewing and thanks for the tea cups.
Date: 30 Aug 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 43
Bella definitely needs to learn Italian I think Edward would think its sexy. Bella is acting spoiled, she left Edward and had trust issues so no way should he propose. She's got to much on her plate anyway. Wonder what Edward is thinking about the way she shut him out????
Cant wait until the next chapter.
Maybe she should order the Rosetta Stone!!!
Date: 30 Aug 2012 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 43
Romantic chapter... I do wish Bella had let Edward talk when they got home. She kind of shut him down. good chappie though.... really romantic... :)
Awwwwwe, trbuie. Just wait.... poor Edward. Thanks for the tea cups!!!!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm not sure either will be able to go skiing the next day, they might need to stay home and rest before heading to Napa.
Bella is going to arrive with him, that's going o be quite the surprise.
Momams....I just love your reviews!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2012 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 21
Edweirdo and Cinderbella are going to the dinner together, Tanya is going to faint!
Rose should also be an attorney, way to negotiate in Bella's behalf. Her father had no idea he was being played that way and I hope he does somethingnabout Jacob. Interesting bit of information that Jacob was seen with a Jessica in the office, could it be the same?
We have the how Jacob found her, now we just need the why.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 19
Edward lost it when he heard Riley's name, which is understandable. Good thing he snapped out of his anger and sat down to talk with Bella. They talked, but there's still plenty they will probably have to work through so it's good they can sit down and talk.
Tanya's involvement with the family is bigger than I thought and it might be risky from what Esme said. She won't like to be removed from Edward's life and the family business, I hope Edward is aware of this and prepares himself for what Tanya might decide to do. I just hope she and Jacob don't meet.
Thanks for your review momams. I have been nominated at The Lemonade Stand if you want to vote for my story. I would appreciate it!!!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
They'll need to give each other plenty of reassurance before going home. Going baclto their previous lives won't be easy and they'll need to lean on and support esch other a lot. Good thing they have the guys and girls there. Esme wants to meet them, wow, things are really going fast, but with how good they feel, why not?
Thank you for your kind reviews momams. I got a lot of varied responses to this portion of my story. A lot of which didn't like my Bella about now. But you are right on...they both have been hurt emotionally and burned at the stake. They do have trust issues and they both want to make sure what they both are feeling is real and can be trusted enough give themselves over to. Edward is easier in doing that. He really loves her. I'm glad you are liking it.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 17
They're both jealous, very much so and hot tempered, that's a risky and intense combinaion. They'll need to talk a lot, there will be tons of things that will make talking escential.
I would love to take Bella's place righ now, an be trapped by the snow.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
The meetings went as expected and a bit more. Emmett and Rose are fun and Jasper and Alice are sweet. They're having a great time and I'm thinking the guys might not be able to go back to their place, how will theyball bunk?
Date: 28 Aug 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
The haze of the previous day and how she knows herself scared Bella into thinking Edward had left, he got to see how bad she would have reacted to that.
They talked and Edward was honest and clear about things. Although I do hope they find a way for Bella to go with hm to that dinner. Maybe a call to Rose's dad could beof assistance.
The girls surprised Edward, which makes me can't wait for them to meet his brothers.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 12
We've found out about Leah. Edward and Bella have so much in common. Both closed themselves to realationships, but they did so in different ways. Neither was ideal and both have got consequences. Edward has fallen hard and wants to be there for Bella, both for the pat and the present. Right now she isn't sure about what she wants, but Edward will work on helping her figure it out. Lets see what the girls have to say.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 42
I seen Cosmopolis today and it was too bizarre. I love Robert but the movie was freaky and too many random things going on. The update was great. Tanya is going to go crazy when the wine turns to shit.
Sorry for my late response to your review cockerspanmom. Yes, I agree, Cosmopolis was bizarre. It was strange and not typically my cup of tea. But I knew that after reading the book...twice just to "get it" that it had to be strange and I really wanted to see how Rob would pull it off. And pull it off he did. He was fantastic I thought. The accent was great and his acting was beyond what I had hoped for....anyway....yeah I have to tell you the recipe part of this story is one of my favorite storylines. I can't wait to see what happens too.
Date: 27 Aug 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
YEs, there's lot to talk about, Tanya the first thing that has to be thoroughly discussed, just so this type of situations don't happen again. Edward has to tell her, it might not be the ideal moment, but with how fragile Bella is right now, anything can be taken the wrong way.
I am loving your reviews momams. You are reading into the story and not just the superficial surface. Thank you for that. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Date: 27 Aug 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
We need to find out, eventually what happened to Edward. He mentioned Leah and it seems she is connected to his pianos. Hopefully soon he will tell Bella. But for now he needs to calm down, and they all need to find Jacob.
Date: 27 Aug 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
Who told Jaob where to find Bella? And after five years! It's strange, but not good at all. Bella won't fall for him but she will feel hurt and not happy to see him. And if heis so determined, good thing Edward called up for back up.
Date: 27 Aug 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 42
I love this chapter. As always EPOV is always fun. I am so very much in love with your Edward. And ya know I really loved his conversation with Carlisle. we haven't heard to much from him so it was really nice to hear what he had to say :-)
Date: 27 Aug 2012 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
Maybe it will be today, neither will be able to resist for much longer.
Is Emmett so happy just because Edward is spending time with someone or the fact that it's not Tanya has somethng to do with it? What do Emmett and Jasper think of Tanya?
Another question, Edward siad Emmett is his older bother, that means he is the middle one. He is the CEO so he'shis brothers' boss? Why him? Well a couple of questions ;)
Date: 27 Aug 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward is also there to enjoy skiing and a break from his everyday life. A life wihich is a bit complicated now and has made him unsure. But seeing that girl has got to him more than he expected. Lets see if hegets to find her before his brothers get there.
Date: 27 Aug 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Bella needed this vacation about three years ago, maybe even more. Life was harsh with her. She has moved on partially. There are parts of life she was closed out, how mich longer can it go?
A pair of ery green eyes might make her change her mind.
I must say a four day pass might not be enough.
Date: 26 Aug 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 42
Why are you flying to Phoenix to see the movie. I love phoenix, awesome state! Want to mive there in the next 10 years but hubby aint to keen on the heat:-( Really want to know what Tanya and Jacob are up to and who was outside Rose's home and in the bushes by Edwards. We know why Tanya wants Edward, did she gave anything to do with Leah cheating on Edward? Why is Jacob so hell bent on getting Bella back after all this time? Can't wait to see how the Jasper does with the wine train:-)
Heap definitely answered a lot but leaves use with so many more:-)
Sorry for my late response.....I flew to Phoenix because it wasn't here where I live. To answer your question Tanya did not have anything to do with Leah cheating on Edward. Leah just cheated. How can you cheat on Edward??? Jacob realized that he blew a good thing in letting Bella go but has lost it between the time he let her go and now. He's a pretty messed up fella I think and clearly is going about it all wrong. Thanks for reading bab1067.
Date: 26 Aug 2012 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
Good god you write one hell of a lemon!! That almost felt real, just reading! I'm not sure there are enough words; sexy, sensual, erotic, hot, mindblowing, shall I go on? I would but I've been up all night reading, it's almost six thirty a.m. and I need some sleep. I'll be back, you can count on it!! xoxo Kelly
Date: 26 Aug 2012 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
*sighs heavily* Well damn, Bella should be happy. Now is it my turn? heehee! xoxo Kelly
Got up this morning and read all your reviews 1918. I am so thrilled that you are enjoying this story. Edward is one of my favorites I must say. He is sexy isn't he? I love your enthusiasm in reading this. It's been so fun to write that's for sure. I look forward to hearing from you.
Date: 26 Aug 2012 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm sorry, but I forget what the rest of this chapter was about after hearing Emmetts story. I'm laughing my ass off right now! xoxo Kelly
I love Emmett. "Except you, Rosie. I'd do it with you." Love that!
Date: 26 Aug 2012 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 12
Whoa, I can't believe that Edward and Bella were both cheated on. Not that cheating is good or anything, but damn those two have so much in common, they really do belong together. I have to say it again, 'I love your story and your Edward and Bella'. xoxo Kelly
Date: 26 Aug 2012 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
I could not love your Edward more, he is the sweetest man...I love your Bella too, she is kind of fiesty and strong. They are both a couple of romantics at heart. Speaking of heart; I can't wait to find out what happened between Edward and his ex, Leah. Well I'm anxious for Bella to listen to the explanation of the phone call between Edward and Tanya. I'm wondering if she'll become a problem at some point in your story, that would suck. But she might, I think she'd like to sink her claws into Edward. I can't wait until Rose and Alice get there and watch the sparks fly when they see Emmett and Jasper, and visa versa. xoxo Kelly
Thank you Kelly. He is sweet isn't he? He loves his Bella. Hopefully by now you have read what happened between Edward and Leah. He got his little heart broken. :(
Thank you Kelly. He is sweet isn't he? He loves his Bella. Hopefully by now you have read what happened between Edward and Leah. He got his little heart broken. :(
Date: 26 Aug 2012 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
Bella is so lucky to have such good friends in Rose and Alice. Edward is also so lucky to have such great brothers who are really there for him. I'd bet that they all would die for each other.
You said not to worry, that Jake would get his. Hell yes! Karma is a bitch, yeah?
I can't wait for the drunken, suits optional, hot tub party! xoxo Kelly
Date: 26 Aug 2012 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Eeeek! I was on the edge of my seat, that was so intense! Thank god Bella was able to text Edward, and he and his brothers got there just in time. Oh that dirty rotten bastard Jacob! He really messed Bella up. I can't believe that after five years the dumbass would come looking for her to try and get her back. I think he has to have a screw loose. Now on to the next chapter to see why Bella doesn't want them to call 911, I'm confused by that. xo Kelly
Oh, and how could I forget that Jake got away! Now what? I bet he'll try and get to her again. Edward will no doubt stick to Bella like glue until Jake is caught. Cripes, I'm gonna be on edge until I know that he has been taken care of!!
Date: 26 Aug 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh fuck! I had this weird feeling he'd show up, but I thought maybe I was being paranoid. I can't wait to see what happens. Now I'm wondering if Tanya will show up too! She did call Edward seven times tonight. He needs to take care of his 'situation' with her and fast. xo Kelly
Date: 26 Aug 2012 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 42
That answered several questions indeed. Jacob is still an ass and I loathe him. Tanya I think is criminally insane. sigh..... Have fun watching Cosmopolis. I'm so jealous. It's not being shown here in Norman Oklahoma, Tulsa or Oklahoma City. I hope I don 't have to wait until DVD release.
Yeah, I think Tanya has lost it. I saw Cosmopolis twice yesterday. OMG Robert was pure perfection. BTW....I have a daughter that lives in Tulsa! Isn't Norman the tornado capital?!
Date: 26 Aug 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
I've got my bottom lip between my teeth just thinking about the two of them getting all hot and sweaty. On one hand, I think they will probably end up in bed before Edward leaves for home. On the other hand though, I have to wonder if Edward will stick to his thought that it's too soon. Oh hell, who am I kidding here? I'll bet they won't be able to keep their hands, and what not off of each other. ;) I already can't wait to see how things go once they have both left Tahoe. xo Kelly
Date: 26 Aug 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
My heart just breaks for Bella and her trust issues. I can't blame her a bit, but like her girls tell her, she needs to get on with her life. I know, easier said than done sometimes.
Edward is not only sex on legs, but he is so sweet to Bella. I hope that since hearing about her past with Jake that he will be understanding of her reactions. I guess I'll see.
I love your Edward and Bella so much, I can hardly stand it. I'm serious! I am thoroughly in love with your story too! xo Kelly
Thank you so much 1918. It pleases me that you are enjoying this story. I love my Edward too. If only he truly existed for all of us. I hope you continue to enjoy this story. Thanks again.
Date: 26 Aug 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love your story so much already! I have the biggest grin on my face as I'm reading, and I'm giggling like a school girl. *how silly!* There aren't that many stories that pull me in right away, and are so damn fun to read, so thanks for writing! xo Kelly