Date: 15 Jul 2012 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 30
another great chapter, cant wait to read more..........
Date: 15 Jul 2012 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 30
bon chapitre
Author's Response:
merci
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 30
I'm glad Jacob is at least gonna get what's coming to him. I still wonder how slut Tanya knows him.... I have a feeling making the whore go away won't be as easy for them. sigh...
Author's Response:
There's a lot of Jacob/Tanya action coming up.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2012 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 30
Hopefully Bella will be safe during her time away from Edward.
Author's Response:
Astute as ever....
Date: 15 Jul 2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 29
I so love Edward's POV, gives a whole new understanding to the story and what's happening. He is so sexy and funny and just EDWARD... and that skank ho needs to go, just sayin' :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks, T. I really like writing EPOV too. Poor Tanya.....
Date: 15 Jul 2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 28
Ooohhhh, girl you know how much I loved this chapter, the dress was beautiful, Edward was perfect and Tanya was the skanky hoe she is... and Jacob...RUT-ROH
Date: 13 Jul 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 29
Great chapter! As much as I want to read the rest of the story, I love the alternating POVs. Seeing Epov is the icing to this awesome story!
~Marie
Author's Response:
Thanks, Marie. I typically do two Bellas and then Edward. I have always liked EPOV the best. It's so easy to do him. Tee hee.
Date: 13 Jul 2012 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 29
Ruh Ro! Jacob and Tanya what a lovely pair they make! They will get what is coming to them soon I hope! Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Yeah, maybeeeeeeeee. They are pieces of work aren't they. I don't know who's worse tho.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 29
Grrrr.... I was ready to find out how rapist Jacob Black became slutty Tanya's lawyer. wth are you stalling us? hehehehe :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, Jacob is in a little hot water here soon. Wonder what's up with Tanya tho.
Date: 12 Jul 2012 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 29
j'aime aussi pv d'edward
Author's Response:
J'aime ce que je peux être libre avec sa langue. C'est un personnage amusant à écrire. Je suis content que vous êtes encore lu mon histoire.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 29
Really enjoy reading epov. We get insight into what he's thinking. Can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response:
I really enjoy EPOV in the lemon scenes. He's such a good naughty boy.
Date: 08 Jul 2012 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 28
Bahahaha......Bella and Edward put that little hoouker in her place oh so well. Once again I was unable to hold in the snickers, I believe I may be committed soon - so worth it though. It really was like attack of the skanks though. It figures Jacob freakshow Black is her attorney. This should be great - can't wait for thenext update.
Date: 08 Jul 2012 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 28
Edward still has the pictures from the assault, right?
Date: 08 Jul 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh I love what you did to Tanya. That was so flipping awesome. Gives new meaning to the phrase taking the trash out that's for sure. I was so ticked that I fell behind in reading....of all times for work to be busy. On the upside, I have another chapter. Just had to share how much I lovedhow Edward handled Tanya. My hubby asked if I was ok because I actually snickered. I wonder if she got road burn from being dragged.....
Date: 08 Jul 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 28
awwww man should have known the skank was in cahoots with Jacob. Brava to Bella for standing up for her and Edward.
Date: 08 Jul 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 28
This story ROCKS! I can't wait for the ending! Then i can read it again without have to wait for updates :) Great job!
~Marie
Date: 08 Jul 2012 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh my gosh! I can't believe, but should have expected, that that shanks lawyer is Bella's attempted rapist. Oh no.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2012 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 28
oh no. Tanya really is that stupid. She really thinks that she will win. She just made a fool of herself in front of a room full of people and all those people just heard that she was not welcome onto the property. Any judge would throw the suit out. She is as dumb as a box of rocks. Can't wait for the next chapter. I like strong Bella.
Date: 08 Jul 2012 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 28
And the evil forces team up...will Leah join in next? Looking forward to what happens next!
Date: 08 Jul 2012 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 28
Of course Tanya has to be represented by someone equally sleezy. I just like how you have Bella standing up for herself. Its a nice change from a lot of the stories where she is the old insecure, shy Bella. At this rate, she will make a find attorney. There should be a final courtroom show down between her and Jacob.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2012 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 28
Mon Dieu quelle salope cette Tanya et en plus son avocat est Jacob !
Je crois qu'il va y avoir de la bagarre entre lui et les Cullen.
Merci.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2012 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow wasn't expecting Jacob to be her attorney. The dinner was going so well until Tanya showed up.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2012 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 28
How the hell did the skank even know to pick/choose Jacob Black as a lawyer? That is some twisted shit! I hope security arrests her. hehe
Date: 08 Jul 2012 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 28
No, i hate cliffys, omg i cant wait to read more........... great chapter btw....... lol, sorry forgot my manners.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 27
Ahhhh, loved so much in this chapter! The winery stuff is freaking awesome, never knew all that stuff and of course the bit of history was fantastic, the best under the oak tree sex, yeppers, check :-) And yeah, skanky hoe Tanya, this woman has some serious issues... another fantastic chapter girl!
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 27
how much more skanky can Tanya get??? I'm happy that Bella didn't let this get to her and stood up for what was hers.
Amazing story. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 27
I am addicted to this awesome story! :D
Author's Response:
Thanks, Rie. What a nice compliment. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 27
OMG. Tanya is crazy! Love it.
Author's Response:
Tanya is bonkers, man. What ever did Edward see in her?
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 27
Bon chapitre !
J'aime quand Tanya est jetée dehors !
Merci
Author's Response:
Attendez jusqu'à ce que le chapitre suivant! Elle ne reste pas à très longtemps. Merci d'avoir lu mon histoire et je vous remercie pour vos commentaires.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 27
roflmao, that shit with Tanya, omg. lol. loved it by the way, cant wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, jamiebaker. I have fun writing Tanya that's for sure.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 27
i'm glad that tanya got embarrassed a little for her skanky stealing ways.... can't wait for her to be put in her place even more. :)
Author's Response:
Does she show up for the dinner anyway?????
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 27
I was correct when I thought Tanya was next to show up. Wonder what else she has planned. Good to see Bella is Enjoying her time with Edward and learning new things.
Author's Response:
Yes, you were Cami....and she doesn't go lightly either. She calls for backup.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 26
Hopefully Tanya wasn't able to get to much information.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 25
Love it. I think Tanya is the next one we are going to see.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 24
Edwards family is really nice.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 23
Really like Edwards point of view also.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 22
Happy to see they are enjoying their time together.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved that everything is working out for them. Happy to see Bella will be joining the dinner and won't be separated from Edward for a while.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 20
Fun to see they are continuing at a different location.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great to hear Edwards perspective.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
Too bad their vacation is almost over.
Author's Response:
Funny you say that because everyone said the same thing. I even said the same thing when I had to send them home. But stick with it.....very interesting stuff ahead. Thanks for the tea cups cami.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 17
Happy to see everything is better between them.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 16
Cant wait for Monday.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
Excited the girls have joined the party.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
Sad to hear about Edwards backstory. Similar to Bella's.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 11
Talking is a good idea.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
With time she will be ok.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 8
Can't wait to see how Edward handles it.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
It's good to see that they talked.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Good to see Bella is asking questions.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
Funny to see the interaction between Edward and Emmett.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
Good to hear from Edward.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
Happy to see they had a fun day.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great to hear from Edward.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hopefully she will meet him again.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 26
I think I fell in love with you. I'm loving it!
Author's Response:
Classic.... :) I'm glad you are enjoying my story. And thanks for your reviews.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
Tanya the Skank Bitch Whore... okay, that was probably a little harsh, No? okay good cause she is. And Leah, WTH woman, what you wanted him to wait around for you and pine over you forever? not a chance! Another great chapter girl :-)
Author's Response:
Yeah, she is a bit of a hoe bag isn't she? And we aren't done with her either. Thanks for your review Lovinrob.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Niiice, I was hoping she run into Rob ;) LOL. Hope to read you soon!
Love.
Issis
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 26
another great chapter, cant wait to read more.....
Author's Response:
Thanks jamiebaker. Thank you for reading my story and thanks for reviewing. Lots of good stuff coming up.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 26
I wish Tanya, Leah and Jacob would all jump off a cliff together. hehehe
Author's Response:
Yeah, the cliff at La Push? Thanks for reading trbuie.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 25
Hey girl... I just realized that I didn't review this chapter...GAH! Leah is a b tch in the first order, she may THINK she can get Edward but he has fallen completely in love with Bella. Loved it and can't wait for more :-)
Author's Response:
Yeah, she rears her ugly head later on too.....Thanks for your review as ever, beta pants.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 24
Ahhh, I loved their time at Lake Tahoe but am excited to see where this goes now that they are out of their bubble! Great chapter girl :-)
Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
Fricking Frick Frick Frick! you know how much I love EPOV, it just makes everything BETTER especially lemons :-)
Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 25
Normally I am only a partially violent person, but for Leah I would make an exception. I know Bella could take the little skank though... Just sayin....
Edward is such a tease. I really need to quit reading your updates at work, people tend to wonder why I appear flustered.
Author's Response:
Thanks, JesJess. That right there was the best compliment. I read at work too. My trick is I go in and print out the chapters then they think I'm reviewing legal documents. Piece of cake!! Thanks for your review and I'm glad you enjoy my story.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 25
great story, started it this morning, cant wait to read more.... C u next time u update.....
Author's Response:
Thanks, Jamiebaker. I'm glad you are reading my story. I really appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 25
I really like this story. I like that this Bella isn't like some other stories where she doubts Edward or herself. She is standing up for herself. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks browneyes. I'm glad you like my story. My Bella is no shrinking violet that is for sure.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 25
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks, aussieKay. Glad you are reading and thanks for your review.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 25
Quite the array of adversaries. Bella is amazingly trusting.
Author's Response:
Yes, she acquired two through Edward alone. Just jealous, bitchy women wanting our Edward. Well they can't have him. Pffffth so there.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 24
J'aime beaucoup cette fiction !
Merci poiur ce bon chapitre.
Author's Response:
Date: 25 Jun 2012 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 24
Now here is the deal. Most of the time savy business owners don't ask about people by name that they have not seen for 3 years. They wait and ask around the question. how is Edward, what has he been doing? ETC.
Author's Response:
Date: 24 Jun 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bloody hell woman!!!! I just spent all day reading this wonderfully awesome story....and....damn is all I can say. I am so glad ff.net went insane or I might never have come over here and found you. I seriously pouted when I saw I was all caught up.
Edward and Bella are hot as hell together, good lord I haven't cooled down yet. I can't wait until the gala - can't wait to see Tanya get taken down by the girls. Anyway, I need to go cool my happy little arse off now - I can't wait for more. I am addicted.....so fricking addicted.
Author's Response:
Date: 24 Jun 2012 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more green eyes!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 23
Damn! That was fucking amazing!
Author's Response:
Thanks rolsiepolsie. Sorry so late with my reply, but thanks for reading and I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Date: 18 Jun 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 22
Enjoying your story. Love Napa and I also have some fond memories of skiing Tahoe. Squaw Valley was most definitely our favorite too!
Author's Response:
That's awesome. I grew up in Reno and Tahoe was my home away from home. I'm glad you enjoy the story and thanks for reading it.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice chapter. BTW NC-17 means no one under 17 and under.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh good lord... woman, you know you killed me with this chapter... "Lemon tree oh so pretty and the lemons taste so sweet" ... Okay, now that I have changed my panties I am good to go :-)
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 22
Can not wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Sorry for being tardy, but thanks for your review and I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wonderful story, I'm glad that Bella is finally getting to finish school and spend her time with Edward till school starts. I can't wait for Bella to meet Tanya and seeing what will go down. I'm hoping that Jake screws up and gets his ass thrown in jail. Just so you know if your reading the story and are on chapter 20 and hit next it doesn't take you the next chapter (chapter 22) but to a blank story page. I really am looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you JaMarie for the heads up on the Ch 20 thing. I am working on getting it fixed and I appreciate your review and thank you for reading.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMG. I love this story. Tanya better not mess it up.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry I'm tardy crazykatwp, but thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you love the story. Tanya is a little bit of a trouble maker isn't she?
Date: 15 Jun 2012 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ahhh, these two are too much...LOL... but I love em' ... so Rosie's pops was the culprit *tsk tsk* for a lawyer that was a dumb move, he had to basically do what he did regarding the job and school cause Bella would have had a legitimate case against him. Great job on that! and can't wait for dinner with the fam :-)
Another fantastic chapter girl and, hmmm, did I mention how much I love EPOV? cause I do, hehehehe
Date: 15 Jun 2012 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 21
great story so far
Author's Response:
Thanks drasticdee....I'm glad you like the story.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow Tanya is going to cause all sorts of issues for a lovebirds isn't she!? And of course Jakeass is still out there too!
I hope Bella just pops Tanya one if she gets mouthy!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review LilCullen. Yeah, Tanya is a bit of trouble maker. Stay tuned.....
Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
Okay the Riley deal is like the Tanya deal sort of. Everyone is getting jealous. Be honest and listen to each other.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
I think as friends she needs no more explanation about Tanya. No sex though. He can go home and get that from the gal he has the arrangement with. So friends is all we can be. I would not do this drama thing with him It is unfair.
Just let it be. If he is really interested in Bella he will correct that situation. If not forget about him.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
she should have let him call the police. A report needs to be written. I know you hate to mess up your vacation, but you need to have this documented for later!... of course he wont give up.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
Yeppers what did I say?? Well he may not thing much of Tanya but he thinks enough of her to keep her around to screw and parade around at functions..
Date: 13 Jun 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
his side of this.. Playboy sounding.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 3
confirmed Batchelor with Tanya hanging on him. So.. she shows up she will make a scene. Bella will be back to Jacob/jessica feelings. Not good.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oui Je crois qu'ils vont être proche tous les deux.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Coucou ! C'est un super chapitre, j'aime beaucoup cette rencontre entre Bella et l'homme aux yeux vert.
Date: 07 Jun 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
I always LOVE Edward's perspective on things. And of course your Edward is so fuck hawt, what's a girl to do. LaLaLaLOVED it!