yes finally! lol I think that was a crappy cliffhanger but that just leaves me wanting more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Very sweet! And Edward's response is?

this was a great chapter!

the story is so good! i love emmett and his story was so sad! their family is so sweet and caring! i cant wait for hte next chapter!

these two never seem to get it right!

thank you for up dating . i was starting to read a;; 22 chapter yesterday night when i find out you up date new chapter here,

last three small 2 line sentence you have mis-spell : you wrote wood instead of would . just want to let u know

he wood look over at me and smile before he looked down at his plate

wow way to leave it like that! lol I loved the talk between Em and Bella but now its Jazz's turn and it doesn't look like its going to be good. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Some days the worst words in the world are: "We need to talk."

Such a sweet date. I bet he was hoping to call it that and she obviously didn't even realize what it was. Very nice. 

crazy crazy crazy couple. lol I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

poor bella you are a little fast in these chapter 10 and 11 and love and confession all three guys are feeling about rape emmm

so she confess like that emmm i really love it if u put more prietly confess from bella to charli or edwar alone emmm but itsnot m story to tell

I just read the  chapter 7 and you've already gotten me hooked.I'm just curious as to have very dark things are going to get. I see that I have a lot of chapters to get through

i just started this story and its really really good. Your writing is amazing... It's like you are in Bella's head but also the reader is aware of what she is oblivious...


Somebody told me about this story and that I should read it

I love your story! It's one of the best that I've ever read. One thing I really enjoy is your unique plot, it makes your story that much more addicting. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I love this chapter, hell, . It's great, and i love it.

I am glad Bella is starting to open up more in therapy.  It is hard but the Peter is only pushing her just enough to help her open up right now.  I am happy to see how comfortable Bella is with Edward and he seems to be able to read her very well.  Knowing not to push her into talking by filling the three hour car ride home with him doing most of the talking.  It was sweet hearing Bella does love Edward but I know she will be shocked to find out he does love her as well when the time comes.  I know I felt the same way that no one would love me because of my past and I believed it for years.

In art therapy she will paint him flying through the air in his red underwear and cape! That's a picture he won't want Emmett and Jasper to see!

awwww.  naptime

aww Edward's in LOVE!! that's so cute. I love it. I liked Emmetts story too and Jasper's as well. I can't wait to see what actually happened to them. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

i love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope its up soon.

How is it they can't understand that although she may look beautiful in an outfit, if she is not comfortable the beauty won't shine through?

That's been an ongoing problem I have with Alice. Pushing cause she believes she knows fashion and what will look best on an individual.

I am glad to see Peter is not pushing Bella to tell him everything.  I had a therapist do that to me and I was as scared that I didnt want to go back.  It is good to see her talking with Peter.  I hope group therapy and art therapy will help Bella open up.  Great job.

Love how Edwards reaction is to talk and act like a man would have ages ago

awww Edward just had to beat everyone didn't he? lol I love it. that chapter was cute and nice touch with Felix being alice's brother. I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Fantastic. A good first day at therapy. I like how he jumps around and it throws Bella off a bit. I think it somehow makes it easier for her to answer. 

Wow...I have read the first two chapter, and you have got me totally hooked.  I'm really curious about what happened to Bella, and why the Cullen's are so drawn to her.  It seems like they know what she is going through at the moment.  They keep reassuring her that they won't hurt her.  I can't wait until the mystery is uncovered.

I'm off to read the next chapter now.  Until then...

Jennifer

Good job! Seems like everyone is getting more comfortable with each other.

awesome. i wish it didnt stop there.

I remember being sick to my stomach as well when I talked to my therapist the first time.  I was scaried of what they would think of me or what would happen if they found out I was talking.  I hope she will go in even if she doesn't talk today.  I am glad to see she is finding comfort it Edward.  I can remember nightmares like that but I would just wake up in a full sweat and would not go back to sleep the rest of the night because every time I closed my eyes I would picture the dream again.  Awesome work I cant wait to see what will happen next.

Normally I don't review until I've read all posted chapters, but I just had to say that this chapter moved me to tears. I have tears streaming down my face. It takes an incredible writer to evoke that kind of emotion in a reader. You've done an amazing job on this story.

love this story

It is nice that she if finding her voice again thanks to Emmett he will help bring it out LOL

awesome chapter. cant wait for the next one.

Aww that was such a nice chapter.

this was an awesome chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope its up soon.

I am so happy to see Bella opening up to Charlie.  It will help in the long run.  I know because it was my mom that helped me deal with my past.  It is what brought us together in away because I was a daddy's girl.  I like to see her opening up with Edward as well.  Along with all of her friends and new family but it will take time for her to feel some what normal in her own skin.  I cant wait to see what will happen next.

OMG Lauren is such a bitch.  I hate it when people judge rape victims without knowing the whole story.  I had a whole church turn their backs on me without knowing what really happened.  Awesome job.

Nice mystery cliffhanger you gave us there.  Powerful stuff.  The end only proving how easy it is for a victim to place self-blame and doubt on themself.  Nice work!

Did you hear she killed someone? hahahaha. Oh dear. Those rumors... 

Lauren is just an awful human being. 

Good chapter. I like the response from her teachers. 

So now we know Esme's story too. Such a wonderful woman. 

Good job!! Not sure about the whole Charlie moving in thing but ehh, I'll go with it. 

I hope to god it is Edward behind her.

i loved the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. two updates in one day. im happy!

Somebody slap that bitch!!

Omg, Lauren is such a complete Bitch! I swear if i ever met someone like her i would have to try very hard not to slap her lol.

you used my phrase..."busted out laughing" are you from the south?

I'm glad I made you laugh!

stab her. just stab lauren in her black hole she calls a heart...

i love this story. when i read the part where bella was telling her dad what happened it made me cry and think about what if that happened to me and i thought and know that my dad would be like charlie :)

Maybe they aught to do some medical tests to be sure her stomache is physically ok.