Date: 06 Dec 2016 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it, but still wanted to cry! Why not just change Jasper? I get it, but still. So sad, even though it's romantic. I wish it had a happier ending.
Date: 27 Dec 2013 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love what you did here. This was amazing.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your positive comment. Much appreciated :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2012 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
It was beautiful. At the end, all I could think was will he change Jasper or, may be, end his own life after their last meeting so that he could follow him.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I left the ending open, so the reader could make up their mind what happens, but with time travel, you don't know how previous/future actions affect events. I hope they find a way to be together forever.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG I bawled my heart out at this story. Beautiful yet heartwrenching to the nth degree.
Author's Response:
Aww ... sorry Yvonne. I shed a few tears as I wrote it, too. I left the ending open so the reader could come to their own happy conclusion if they wished. I have been asked by several people to write an epilogue which will give it a definite happy ending. I may just do that in the future.
Sue x
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh God *sobbs* I knew what to expect because I have seen the movie and it made me cry so hard but it still didn't prepare me for this... I have to keep thinking: Will Edward change Jasper? Will he take the risk? You probably won't continue the story or write a sequel, will you? :(
I loved, loved the story. Thank you for sharing it, it was amazing :)
Lucy
Author's Response:
Hey Lucy
Thank you so much for reading and then reviewing - it makes the hours of writing all worth while!
Yes, the story is sad but my ending hopefully allows the reader to come up with their own happy conclusion. I have been asked many times to continue the story - I probably will one day but not in the immediate future. I'm so glad you loved my story and thank you once again for your kind words.
Sue