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Reviewer: Twipotterlover2244 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 7:01 PM Title: Epilogue: Where there is love

Great story. Sad to see it end

Reviewer: zoba20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 9:51 AM Title: Epilogue: Where there is love

awww that was really the perfect ending for the story ^^
i so loved reading it and resisting the inevitable.

can't wait to read more of the daily grind, i saw the pm u sent and i am so excited.

thanx, you truly are an amazing writer, not just words, just the truth ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 7:34 AM Title: Epilogue: Where there is love

:) loved this story

Reviewer: nanie057 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 6:56 AM Title: Epilogue: Where there is love

c'est toujours un plaisr de lire vos histoires alors merci

Reviewer: Milica Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 5:29 AM Title: Epilogue: Where there is love

Outtakes. Outtakes! Please? :))))))

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 4:55 AM Title: Epilogue: Where there is love

Oh this was awesome! I hope we get to see the second honeymoon on a future take.

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 3:03 AM Title: Epilogue: Where there is love

Love it!!! I am going to miss these two.

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:48 AM Title: Epilogue: Where there is love

Great epilogue. With the future outtakes it would be nice to fast track it like you did at the start of this one.

Hope to hear more of the life of this family.

 

:)

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 8:50 PM Title: Trial and Error

If this was writers block, u may want it more often!!! Wow-this was awesome!!!
Pls update soon!!!
P.S.: I luv ur Seth!! :)

Reviewer: stressmaster Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2012 4:01 PM Title: Surprise!

great chapter!

Reviewer: Dawn Leon Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 5:17 AM Title: Trial and Error

Aaawww! It's sad Elizabeth had to die for Eric to open his eyes and his hatred had killed the only person that love him.

Reviewer: nicky901n Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 9:52 PM Title: Trial and Error

Holy crap! I know you warned us but wow...you must have eaten an angst burger before you wrote this.  It was awesome!

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 1:36 AM Title: Trial and Error

Intense is an understatement. You had by heart pounding and my stomach in knots through the entire chapter. I guess that speaks well of you as a writer that you would have such a profound impact on your readers. I'm so glad she and the baby are alive.

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 4:09 AM Title: Trial and Error

Such a beautiful chapter. Cried a little in places through the chapter. RIP Aunt Elizabeth and welcome to the family baby Elijah.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 11:39 AM Title: Trial and Error

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Twipotterlover2244 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 3:26 AM Title: Trial and Error

Great chapter. Update soon!

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 7:25 PM Title: Trial and Error

intense chapter, more please :)

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 7:20 PM Title: Trial and Error

I did not see that one coming. I thought he would try something, he was too sure of himself. But to have killed his mother? That was crazy!

Reviewer: Nath72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:49 PM Title: Same day another Masen and Cullen?

Hi, just want to tell you how much a love your storie.  Hope you wont be offended but i'm french canadian and some of your translation are not accurate.  Since you offen use the term '' peu aime'' (little love) i will tell you that the right translation is ''petit amour'' ... i know that sometimes translator dictionnary are not very good so hope you wont be offended.  Keep up the good work ... i really love your style. 

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:48 PM Title: Trial and Error

OMG I cried , I cried like a baby! Thank God that they were able to save both.. That damn man, I seriously hope that Orlando makes him his bitch in prison or better yet, kills him in prison!!!

BUT I knew that when Liz kept asking for forgiveness in the begining of the chapter, I knew something was going to happen to her, deep down, something major. BUT i wont lie, I thought she was going to shoot his ass in the court room!!

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:32 PM Title: Trial and Error

Loved this chap cnt w8 4 nxt update x

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:31 PM Title: Trial and Error

Love it!!! Glad Bella and the baby are okay.

Reviewer: zoba20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 1:13 PM Title: Trial and Error

i loved the chapter so much :( but i hated that elizabeth died !!!

thanx so much for updating, can'ät wait to read more

Reviewer: xena Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 10:06 AM Title: Trial and Error

wow so intense and angsty! loved it :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 6:19 AM Title: Trial and Error

:)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 5:23 AM Title: Trial and Error

holy crow  Exceptional Chapter

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 4:55 AM Title: Trial and Error

great chapter, I am glad the bastard will go away for a long time..sad about Liz.

Reviewer: Gemini18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 4:05 AM Title: Trial and Error

Loved it

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 3:40 AM Title: Trial and Error

Really intense! Eric is a devil! I'm just so sorry that someone has to die in this update.

Reviewer: silviafarro Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 3:02 AM Title: Trial and Error

omg I love it.....

Reviewer: mar76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:31 AM Title: Trial and Error

no it cant end you have to keep going.

Reviewer: skelley62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:29 AM Title: Trial and Error

Great chapter.......sorry to see Aunt Liz die, but glad that Eric may finally see the error of his ways....thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Vampqueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 1:44 AM Title: Trial and Error

Sad that Eric's mum had to die, but at least Bella and the baby are ok

Reviewer: eddie lover Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 11:46 PM Title: Damage Control

uhhhhh yeah probably erick, i dont know! but how much can these affect them? the interview was great, so finally the damn world can understand them!!no more crazy papparazzi I hope! I hate them, make me remember papparazi movie!!

 

Reviewer: lil_ms_tran Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 3:33 AM Title: Damage Control

loved it

keep going

can't wait to read the next chapter

Reviewer: eddie lover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 10:33 PM Title: The mind of the enemy

faith! easy there are few choices, victoria, jane, faith and matilda. matilda just want edward, as jane too who also have a past with edward then wouldnt with orlando. victoria like james, really why will he make contact with his cellmate when he can directly with james, then faith have everything planed, been with mac knowing he will have money, planning everything hating bella AND edward, and there it goes orlando asking were she find the money... HEY I AM GOOD WITH ANALITIC, hehe I may work for the cia

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 11:23 AM Title: Damage Control

looking orward to more 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2012 11:27 AM Title: Damage Control

Faith being dead, hum...great she had it coming.  the interview was killer, B and E rock.......

Reviewer: emmettcullendisorder Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 7:42 PM Title: A Nightmare

Hey I love your story and can not wait for an update. I followed it over here from fanfiction after I read the part before this story. I was wondering if you knew how to get email updates for your story. Anyways update soon please.

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2012 10:24 PM Title: Damage Control

Ahh so this is the death and I shouldn't be worried? I thought it was going to be faith but I didn't know. I think she took her own life. Ah but eric was saying he wanted her gone....hmm

I hope the interview doesn't hurt their case! I love that Bella is momma bear and they explained the situation from thei view! 

 

Love them!!

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2012 9:13 PM Title: Media Madness

I heard somewhere that there is going to be a death in here and it's not who we would want. Bella and Edward don't get killed do they? I'm so worried! 

Im glad that the media's stories aren't true! They need to lay off them!! 

I love this little family! Worried about Eric tho...

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 6:20 PM Title: Damage Control

I didn't see that coming.   Nice cliffy. 

Reviewer: swimmergal1207 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 8:49 AM Title: Damage Control

Wow I totally did not expect that!! Now I seriously cannot wait for more!! Amazing Job!! Update real soon!! Please and thank you very very much! Xoxoxoxoxoxo

Reviewer: carrielg Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 4:07 PM Title: Damage Control

Loved the interview, so great how they responded to everything and then the paparazzi not yelling at them because of what Bella said was priceless.  I had a feeling Eric would find a way to get Faith killed thanks to his pov last chapter.  I really hope he gets what is coming to him-he is a sleaze ball and deserves to be killed some how lol.  I can't wait for the next chapter, I love the story and your writing.

Reviewer: vereen72 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 3:18 AM Title: Damage Control

I enjoyed the chapter very much. I like how you have them so in love with each other after how long they have been married and 3 and a half kids later. I hope you update again soon. Great Job. 

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 10:44 PM Title: Damage Control

nice chapter, more please :)

Reviewer: Rebelliouscullen93 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 10:06 PM Title: Damage Control

Loving it more please :D

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 6:56 PM Title: Damage Control

The interview went great. I'm not surprised about Faith since Eric was hinting around about eliminating her. And, we know he did it!!!

Reviewer: zoba20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 6:30 PM Title: Damage Control

i so loved this chapter ^^ and i can't say i am sorry for what happened to faith she had it coming, it was probably eric's doing.

thanx for updating :)

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 4:36 PM Title: Media Madness

Eric is evil!!!

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 11:17 AM Title: Damage Control

Wow xx

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 10:18 AM Title: Damage Control

LOVED their inrterview!! I didn't thought that it was posible for me to love them more but I do!!! hahahaha... they are amazing!!!! and eid Eric kill Faith?? What will happen now?? Will only Edward's testefy by enough??? Can't wait to read more...

Reviewer: Vampqueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 7:37 AM Title: Damage Control

For sure it has Erics name all over it!

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:27 AM Title: Damage Control

hell yes i think eric is to blame for that crap!!! unless it was some fan thats locked up thats obssessed with Bella and Edward and they think they must avenge Faith's crime against her since Bella did say she thought what she got wasnt justice lmao.. that would be hilarious!!!

Reviewer: skelley62 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:20 AM Title: Damage Control

Great chapter

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 4:53 AM Title: Damage Control

Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: mar76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 4:27 AM Title: Damage Control

i feel the drama coming. of course eric is in on it. as long as there together they can overcome. i really love both stories. i have reread resisting the inevitable so many times. love it now dont take to long updating

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 11:37 PM Title: Media Madness

Love it!!!!

Reviewer: shaynap Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 10:39 PM Title: Media Madness

please tell me eric does not get away with this tell me they find more evidence on him and that if he does get to bella that she shoots him and ends his misery once and for all i cant wait for tomorrow I hope we get more details involving the trial

Reviewer: zoba20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 10:20 PM Title: Media Madness

weeee u updated ^^. i am so happy, can't wait to read more!!!!!

thanx!

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 8:57 PM Title: Media Madness

LOVED IT!!!! I totally love how Edward and Bella are with each other!!! I could read fluff about them forever!! I love the character that you have created!!! Thak you so much for sharing it with us!!

So what will happen with Eric??? Will he manage to hurt Bella??? Or will he go to jail?? Can't wait to read more...

Reviewer: Dawn Leon Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 4:56 PM Title: Media Madness

As so you're going to torture us some more with Eric then huh!? Lol!!!!

Reviewer: sweetmeadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 4:16 PM Title: Media Madness

Thanks for the update, love this story :)

Reviewer: Belindella Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 9:22 AM Title: My love My life

Hey, the Lemonade Stand banner you have is in violation of the rules. Big time. Teens scrolling for M rated (and under) stories don't need to see sex and oral sex. Perhaps if you put it somewhere readers can see it AFTER they've clicked "yes, I'm over 18"?

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 8:43 AM Title: Media Madness

Really enjoyed it xx

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 5:11 AM Title: Media Madness

 Great chapter. Looking forward to the next part of the story

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 2:53 AM Title: Media Madness

looking forward to more

Reviewer: mlavelle85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 2:22 AM Title: Media Madness

Eric is a pig!  Fucking hope he is burned alive !!!  But suer cute moments with Edward and Bella. And totally excited for More tomorrow!!  Worth the wait'

 

Xoxox

Kitty

Reviewer: Vampqueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 1:58 AM Title: Media Madness

Damn Eric, i hope he meets with an 'accident', before he gets a chance to hurt Edward and his family

Reviewer: brebre123h Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 9:42 PM Title: The Perfect Day

hope u finish

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 9:43 PM Title: The Perfect Day

I love this story and that silly rabbit too.

Reviewer: parash Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 12:36 PM Title: The Perfect Day

Aaaah so good,

I missed ya!

More...... Yeah needy I am!,

Reviewer: bookonabeach Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 7:27 PM Title: The Cullen's

I like the simple, domestic scenes but know a story needs more than that to keep it good. Well done and thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 12:54 PM Title: The Perfect Day

It was perfect. So sweet. 

Reviewer: ladtwi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 10:15 AM Title: The Perfect Day

it was very good for me lol

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 12:04 AM Title: The Perfect Day

nice chapter, more please :)

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:07 PM Title: The Perfect Day

Brilliant chapter. Definitely made up for being late as you said. The kids are soooo cute and them letting Queen Elizabeth out all the time is just hilarious. It was also great that they got to have a family day and had fun. Looking forward to the next chapter. :) 😃😜💋😜😃

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 9:11 PM Title: The Perfect Day

Great chapter!!!!

Reviewer: bennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:12 PM Title: The Perfect Day

Awesome

Reviewer: belwardkarmin Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 2:48 PM Title: The Perfect Day

awwww!

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 2:47 PM Title: The Perfect Day

You really made up for everything!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 1:41 PM Title: The Perfect Day

lookjing forward to more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 1:25 PM Title: Breaking the News

:)

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 11:56 AM Title: The Perfect Day

That was so good and beautiful!

I'm glad they got to have family time.

Queen elizabeth is such a crazy animal! Glad Ethan could help out!

I love this family!

Fingers crossed Bella doesn't have the baby in the courtroom!!

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:03 AM Title: The Perfect Day

I loved this chapter .. they're amazing together and their kids are just adorable .. Please update soon .. I love this story

Reviewer: skelley62 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:00 AM Title: The Perfect Day

It's always perfect.....thanks for writing!

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 9:28 AM Title: The Perfect Day

Good chapter.....

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 7:57 AM Title: The Perfect Day

If you dont get nominated for some award for having the PERFECT edward... then i swear i'll cry and then die! Your Edward is my Dream edward.. the love he has for his wife and kids, the protective side, everything that is him.. is puuurrfect.. plus the hot sexin he gives bella... i swear my computer screen fogs up everytime.. your edward is a delicious morsel[or however you spell it] i myself love me a scruffy edward.. the five'o clock shadow or the week without shaving face.. sure smooth faced edward is handsome but gaah..

Reviewer: Tayaboo72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 7:34 AM Title: The Perfect Day

They so need to get a dog like a German shepherd or a lab ..but loved the chapter update soon

Reviewer: sweetmeadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 7:22 AM Title: The Perfect Day

Yep!  Thanks for update, love this story :)

Reviewer: zoba20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 7:13 AM Title: The Perfect Day

awesome chapter, funny about the rabbit ^^

kiah is really smart acting like that :D

Reviewer: lil_ms_tran Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 7:09 AM Title: The Perfect Day

loved it

keep going

can't wait to read the next chapter

Reviewer: Dawn Leon Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 5:36 PM Title: Breaking the News

I thought Faith was justa bitch when Mac was announce publicly he was a Masen. I didn't imagine she was that despicable. Wow!!!

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2012 3:14 PM Title: Breaking the News

Ugh!! Pls update soon!! This is so good which is why I normally don't read stories that are not complete!! I'm not too patient & I always fear they'll never get completed.

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2012 12:17 AM Title: Family First

My Female Suspects list: Faith. Victoria. Matilda. Jane. *(I'm really hoping Sofia is clean!!)
Male partner suspects: Chad w/Victoria - Which is why she wanted to know if anyone knew of her visits...like James.
Break-in suspects: Royce. Faith using Mac's keys. Matilda. Chad for Victoria.

Am I close??
:)

Reviewer: vereen72 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 5:07 AM Title: Breaking the News

God I love your writing it's going to suck when you finish both this one and It takes two. I was wondering if you have any plans to start a new one if you haven't already? Also I thought you did a great job on how faith was set up and arrested. Although it would have been nice if Bella would have punched the crap out of her knocking her butt out instead of slap. Can't wait to read the next chapters on both stories. 

Reviewer: zoba20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 10:34 PM Title: Breaking the News

omg i so can't wait to read the next chapter ^^

thanx for updating

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 9:55 PM Title: Breaking the News

I loved this!

I'm so glad they got faith! She's such a Cow! Also glad they cleared Mac in the press!

I just love them!

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 7:40 PM Title: Breaking the News

OMG THIS WAS ABSOLUTLY AMAAAAAAZE!!!!!

Reviewer: Ms G Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 1:06 AM Title: Breaking the News

Thank you for the update. I love this wonderful story. Cant wait to read about Daddyward. Thank you for all of your hard work and for continuing with this story. I love everything you write and think you are amazing.

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