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Reviewer: Twipotterlover2244 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 5:10 PM Title: Breaking the News

Great chapter. Update soon

Reviewer: tinarandal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:37 PM Title: Breaking the News

Awesome

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 10:22 AM Title: Breaking the News

It's a beautiful chapter. Glad that Faith got what she deserved. Can't wait for Edward to go all Daddyward for his kids.

Reviewer: sweetmeadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 9:58 AM Title: Breaking the News

Thanks for update sooooo love this story :)

Reviewer: nanie057 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 7:50 AM Title: Breaking the News

j'aime toutes vos histoires

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 4:38 AM Title: Breaking the News

Yes, I can't wait for more!!!!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 3:21 AM Title: Breaking the News

I loved the update and finally Faith is getting what she deserves.  Finally.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: mlavelle85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:13 AM Title: Breaking the News

Yay!!!!!  Glad faith is caught and Edward is finally home safe and everything is starting to return to normal !

 

Xoxo

Kitty

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 1:08 AM Title: Breaking the News

great chapter. i missed this story. more please :)

Reviewer: Gemini18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:53 AM Title: Breaking the News

Loved it. CAN'T wait for more.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:32 AM Title: Breaking the News

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: NyteSki Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:06 AM Title: Breaking the News

:-D loved the chapter....bye bye Faith.....hope you make lots of new friends in your home for the next undetermined amount of time

Reviewer: Jaymili Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 10:23 PM Title: My love My life

Hey! I've been following you since FF and I have to say that I still love your writting as much as before =D!

But I just wanted to tell you about the french you're using =) I don't reproach you anything but since I'm french myself I just want to help.

"you own me" = je t'appartiens/ tu me détiens (but the first is better)

"my little love"= mon petit amour (you traduct little as "not much" thats why you have "peu")

and you keep on using "vous" but they are married and a married couple will never use "vous" it's too formal so you have too use "Tu"!

 

Voila! Hope I helped

Reviewer: vanzalicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 5:17 AM Title: A Nightmare

gaahh!! i hope you'll post super soon! i hate cliffie :( oh and i hope you will kill eric in the end, i hate him i want to choke him to death *can i?*

Reviewer: lulu_ren123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:23 PM Title: My love My life

update soon pleeeeease!!

Reviewer: dipannitasaha Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 2:03 AM Title: Home

iis this the end of the story? :(    if not... :D update sooon!!!

 

Reviewer: movover Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 8:24 PM Title: Home

OMG OMG OMG OMG sooooo cute!!!! 

please update soon this story is just so adorable. btw what happenned to orlando?

Reviewer: Riam Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:02 AM Title: A Nightmare

I'm so glad I finally managed to log in to TWCS (my pc was having hiccups) the tension of not being able to tead to the finish was killing me.

You're good Emotion Masen!

Reviewer: zoba20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 9:57 PM Title: Home

omg omg i so wanted to die (wink*) if u didn't update soon ^^

i am such a stalker, even followed u here, i so hate fanfiction.net rules that they make up.

can't wait to read more, thanx :)

Reviewer: nicky99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:50 AM Title: Home

awesome chap!  The family is all together, the way they should be!

Reviewer: Gemini18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:55 AM Title: Home

Loved it. Read it on Fanfiction and then on here to read the Parts that were left out. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: cullen9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:09 AM Title: Home

keep writing...I really truly love your story :)) the plot, lemon, character, was amazing.

thanks for making this awesome story!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:57 PM Title: Home

ohh no epi!

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:43 PM Title: Home

I really love this story .. and those idiots at FF are  losers bcoz removing the lemons just hurts the story .. 

Loved this Chapter.. it's much more intense and meaningful here.. 

Reviewer: vaughnrocks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 7:50 PM Title: Home

Gosh, you made me cry. lol. I loved the chapter, I thought it was outstanding. Cant wait for you to tell us what's becomming of those two evil jokers, and ms. power hungry. Gosh I want to type more but I,m so scatterbrained at the moment haha.

Vaughn

Reviewer: Ms G Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:47 PM Title: Home

Soooo happy to see them reunited. I hope we get to see what happens to Orlando, Eric, James and i hope they catch that no good Faith. I was so worred when i saw complete on this story. I am so happy that you have chosen to complete this story. I am totally addicted to your story. I cant get enough of this Bella and Edward. I adore them. I am so happy to see that your review numbers are going up. You had so many on ff and when you came over here it looked like the people who enjoyed your story did not follow you over here. I thought that maybe some of the harsh criticism you have received from some reviewers regarding your grammer, spelling and punctuation, had made you decide not to finish this story.  I dont care about the errors in this story because most of the time i know what you were trying to say and it takes nothing away as far as i am concern. You are not being paid for this. You are doing this in your free time and i am very very grateful. So dont let the critics get you down. You are a very talented writer and a great story teller. Your characters are very powerful and they feel real to me. Keep up the great work and i am looking forward to your next update because i am not ready for this wonderful story to end.

Reviewer: Nothing Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:18 PM Title: Home

Is this story really complete I really hope not I love it

Author's Response:

No it's not complete that was actually an accident selecting that it was complete sorry for the confusion. 

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:37 PM Title: Home

Loved it! I noticed you marked the story complete. Was that an oops or is that truly the end??? Should we expect another adventure with these two? Considering the baby hasn't been born yet and Faith is still floating around it leads me to believe there is more to come. Plus it takes at least three to make a series, true??

Author's Response:

No the story is not complete that was actually an accident marking it as complete I hadn't noticed until I read the reviews. Sorry for the confusion. 

Reviewer: xena Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:33 PM Title: Home

OMG! Steamy sexy hotness! *fans herself*

That was an intense chapter and I loved it!

Reviewer: parash Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 12:27 PM Title: Home

Aaas home, with the lemony goodness they needed and we needed.... And now another wedding, you just can't get enough of dem weddings huh!!!!!!!

Now it is time for Edward to SLOW THE F:k down and do all,those things with his family. And might I say, enjoy life a bit more huh........now what Emo, Erics trial.......Ethan's birth and a wedding. Can't wait!

Awesome chapter but you've left me wanting more!!!!!

AGAIN! Luv ya chickiexxxoooxxx

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:23 AM Title: Home

This made me cry! Words can't describe how much I loved this! 

 

Im so glad that they are going to renew their vows, I was just thinking that they should! It would be beautiful! I can't wait! 

I'm glad Edward is going to spend time with his family too and that he cleared Emmett's concious if you will. 

This was just so beautiful! 

Reviewer: nanie057 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:13 AM Title: Home

oui oui oui j'ai adoré

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 8:33 AM Title: Home

LOved it

Reviewer: sweetmeadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 8:25 AM Title: Home

Still loving this story - loved the kids' homecoming too!  Can't wait to read the baddies' comeuppance ... LOL :)

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:03 AM Title: Home

great chapter, more please :)

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:02 AM Title: Home

Reading the first part got me emotional but as I read through I felt the relief of Edward getting back home. The last part is happiness...a whole family together again! Hope we get the trial next? Or have Faith caught up to join in the trial?

Reviewer: skelley62 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 5:04 AM Title: Home

Enjoyed it immesely...... love the reunion.....Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 5:03 AM Title: Home

He is home!! So what happened to Faith?? I hope they beat the crazy bit@h down!!  Love the story!!  

Reviewer: TwilightFann1969 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:44 AM Title: Home

Girl I love this story. I'm glad Edward is home. Where do we go from here? Did they catch Eric and the rest or are we going to see them again?

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:33 AM Title: Home

loved the chapter 

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:36 AM Title: The Awakening

Yay!!!!!

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:17 AM Title: A Nightmare

Please find him.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:59 AM Title: When the storm hits

No way!!!!

Reviewer: Himemalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:56 AM Title: The Awakening

Is this the final chapter? Coz it said is complete?

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 3:33 AM Title: Revealed

Great chapter! Poor Edward can't even trust family.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 9:22 PM Title: No secret is a secret forever

What a chapter!!!

Reviewer: mjmcea Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 8:58 PM Title: My love My life

Idon't understand how this story only has 30 reviews!  I am spellbound by it and can't wait for more!  Awesome!!!!!

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:08 PM Title: Family First

Glad everything turned out okay.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:49 PM Title: My family makes me better

Loved Bella's classy attack on Faith.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:39 PM Title: A happy family is an earlier heaven

Ethan is already taking after Edward. Loved it!!!!

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 1:42 PM Title: The mind of the enemy

Wouldn't surprise me if his crazy woman friend was Faith.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 1:21 PM Title: Surprise!

This is simply awesome!

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:08 AM Title: Fate is more than a 4 letter word

The kids are too cute!!!!!

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 12:16 AM Title: In a Bubble

If I could just stop everything in my life and just read this story it would be soooo awesome. I love it!!!! I hope you are working on future chapters because eventually I'm going to reach the end of what you have written.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 5:31 PM Title: Getting to Business

Gotta love Bella!

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 4:59 PM Title: An Ordinary Day

Maybe a large object will fall on her head. Faith has got to go!

Reviewer: Ms G Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 2:55 PM Title: The Awakening

I have finished the first one and i am all caught up on this one. I loved this story so much. I loved how E&B love each other so desperately and passionately. I hope they catch that cow Faith soon. I am truly addicted to your story now. I notice that when this story was over on FF that it had a lot of reviews but when you were force to move it over here, you have very few reviews. I wonder why. Well anyway i love your stories and i am looking forward to reading much more from you. Please update soon.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 12:47 PM Title: Another day another Masen, or Culen

Priscilla is just plain inconsiderate for inviting Jane. Faith needs to get her mouth taped shut. Perhaps she will mess up and gets taste of what the papparzi can do. Ugh!!!!

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 2:03 AM Title: The Cullen's

Sounds like Mac and his wife might cause problems.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:23 AM Title: My love My life

Nice light chapter.

Reviewer: bafy16 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 11:27 PM Title: Same day another Masen and Cullen?

I just LOVE this story.. I mean, I've been in love with Edward and Bella since the very beginning of Twilight and everything, but reading about them in a variety of situations is just exciting.

Reviewer: marzu Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:28 PM Title: The Awakening

wow..so he´s finally safe thank god.. i think that bella should go after faith..ruin her..i would do that..that woman is a monster..so update soon please

Reviewer: Nothing Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 6:22 PM Title: The Awakening

i really hate why that you had to change sites. ffn is going to lose a lot of writer but i want you to keep wright. you are very good. the only thing i dont like about this website is that it dont not have a good mobile screen for it. update soon thankx :)

Reviewer: browneyes152- Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:45 PM Title: The Awakening

Yeah. Edward is back and Eric and Orlando have been caught. Now on to Faith. I think Bella should be the one to handle her. I can't wait to for the next chapter. Those three are finally going to get what is coming to them.

Reviewer: albear10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 6:24 AM Title: My love My life

i loved this story on ff but this website won't let me get past chapter 1. I don't know what is wrong with it.

Reviewer: Himemalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:45 AM Title: My love My life

I'm sorry about ff.net forcing you to take it out. But I'm glad that you post it here and continue. Thank you 

Reviewer: Ms G Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:32 AM Title: My love My life

Angie 509 i am having the same problem. I log in and as soon as i click on my favorites it keeps kicking me out or it tells me i am not authorize for this function and i keep getting the age consent thing too. I am trying to read this story and i cannot even get to chapter 1. It keeps going straight to the reviews. I am very upset because i wanted to read this sequel. I wish the author would put it on another site because i have been having trouble with this site for two weeks now.

Reviewer: Angie509 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 1:01 AM Title: My love My life

i love this and i read it on ffn, but for some reason this site isnt letting me go past chapter one, for this story, and for It takes two. i dont understand why i press the age consent and its not letting me go past chapter one, and i've tried everything. do you have any reason why it would do this?

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 10:48 PM Title: The Awakening

Can they die a slow painful death .. better yet can they go to jail & become some1s' B**CH .. Wishful thinking !!

Reviewer: yvonnev Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 7:17 PM Title: A Nightmare

Loved it, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Muse Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:04 PM Title: My love My life

J adore, waiting for the next chapters.....

 

Reviewer: nanie057 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:58 PM Title: A Nightmare

j adore 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 3:37 AM Title: A Nightmare

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: alexabrandoncullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 8:05 PM Title: My love My life

Amazing story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading!!

Reviewer: just4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:10 PM Title: A Nightmare

I LOVE IT

THNKS FOR ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER

HAVE THEY REALLY FOUND EDWARD??

IT SEEMS TOO EASY SO I'M SURE IT'S NOT THE END OF THE DRAMA

Reviewer: Marcela Preisser Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:10 PM Title: A Nightmare

Looooveee this story!!!Can't wait for the next chapter!!!Pleaseee hurryyyyyy!!!lol

Xoxo,

Marcela Preisser

Reviewer: xena Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:23 PM Title: A Nightmare

I am trying to put your story in my fav so I can get alerts when it is updated but the site won't let me....:(



Author's Response:

Go to your edit pereferences and check off that you would like to recieve an email when your favorites update. You should be alerted then. Also if you are friends with me in my facebook group I will always post there when I update. 

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