Date: 26 Jul 2012 5:10 PM Title: Breaking the News
Great chapter. Update soon
Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:37 PM Title: Breaking the News
Awesome
Date: 26 Jul 2012 10:22 AM Title: Breaking the News
It's a beautiful chapter. Glad that Faith got what she deserved. Can't wait for Edward to go all Daddyward for his kids.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 9:58 AM Title: Breaking the News
Thanks for update sooooo love this story :)
Date: 26 Jul 2012 7:50 AM Title: Breaking the News
j'aime toutes vos histoires
Date: 26 Jul 2012 4:38 AM Title: Breaking the News
Yes, I can't wait for more!!!!
Date: 26 Jul 2012 3:21 AM Title: Breaking the News
I loved the update and finally Faith is getting what she deserves. Finally. Great chapter.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:13 AM Title: Breaking the News
Yay!!!!! Glad faith is caught and Edward is finally home safe and everything is starting to return to normal !
Xoxo
Kitty
Date: 26 Jul 2012 1:08 AM Title: Breaking the News
great chapter. i missed this story. more please :)
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:53 AM Title: Breaking the News
Loved it. CAN'T wait for more.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:32 AM Title: Breaking the News
looking forward to more
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:06 AM Title: Breaking the News
:-D loved the chapter....bye bye Faith.....hope you make lots of new friends in your home for the next undetermined amount of time
Date: 19 Jul 2012 10:23 PM Title: My love My life
Hey! I've been following you since FF and I have to say that I still love your writting as much as before =D!
But I just wanted to tell you about the french you're using =) I don't reproach you anything but since I'm french myself I just want to help.
"you own me" = je t'appartiens/ tu me détiens (but the first is better)
"my little love"= mon petit amour (you traduct little as "not much" thats why you have "peu")
and you keep on using "vous" but they are married and a married couple will never use "vous" it's too formal so you have too use "Tu"!
Voila! Hope I helped
Date: 17 Jul 2012 5:17 AM Title: A Nightmare
gaahh!! i hope you'll post super soon! i hate cliffie :( oh and i hope you will kill eric in the end, i hate him i want to choke him to death *can i?*
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:23 PM Title: My love My life
update soon pleeeeease!!
Date: 14 Jul 2012 2:03 AM Title: Home
iis this the end of the story? :( if not... :D update sooon!!!
Date: 10 Jul 2012 8:24 PM Title: Home
OMG OMG OMG OMG sooooo cute!!!!
please update soon this story is just so adorable. btw what happenned to orlando?
Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:02 AM Title: A Nightmare
I'm so glad I finally managed to log in to TWCS (my pc was having hiccups) the tension of not being able to tead to the finish was killing me.
You're good Emotion Masen!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 9:57 PM Title: Home
omg omg i so wanted to die (wink*) if u didn't update soon ^^
i am such a stalker, even followed u here, i so hate fanfiction.net rules that they make up.
can't wait to read more, thanx :)
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:50 AM Title: Home
awesome chap! The family is all together, the way they should be!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:55 AM Title: Home
Loved it. Read it on Fanfiction and then on here to read the Parts that were left out. Can't wait for more.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:09 AM Title: Home
keep writing...I really truly love your story :)) the plot, lemon, character, was amazing.
thanks for making this awesome story!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:43 PM Title: Home
I really love this story .. and those idiots at FF are losers bcoz removing the lemons just hurts the story ..
Loved this Chapter.. it's much more intense and meaningful here..
Date: 25 Jun 2012 7:50 PM Title: Home
Gosh, you made me cry. lol. I loved the chapter, I thought it was outstanding. Cant wait for you to tell us what's becomming of those two evil jokers, and ms. power hungry. Gosh I want to type more but I,m so scatterbrained at the moment haha.
Vaughn
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:47 PM Title: Home
Soooo happy to see them reunited. I hope we get to see what happens to Orlando, Eric, James and i hope they catch that no good Faith. I was so worred when i saw complete on this story. I am so happy that you have chosen to complete this story. I am totally addicted to your story. I cant get enough of this Bella and Edward. I adore them. I am so happy to see that your review numbers are going up. You had so many on ff and when you came over here it looked like the people who enjoyed your story did not follow you over here. I thought that maybe some of the harsh criticism you have received from some reviewers regarding your grammer, spelling and punctuation, had made you decide not to finish this story. I dont care about the errors in this story because most of the time i know what you were trying to say and it takes nothing away as far as i am concern. You are not being paid for this. You are doing this in your free time and i am very very grateful. So dont let the critics get you down. You are a very talented writer and a great story teller. Your characters are very powerful and they feel real to me. Keep up the great work and i am looking forward to your next update because i am not ready for this wonderful story to end.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:18 PM Title: Home
Is this story really complete I really hope not I love it
Author's Response:
No it's not complete that was actually an accident selecting that it was complete sorry for the confusion.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:37 PM Title: Home
Loved it! I noticed you marked the story complete. Was that an oops or is that truly the end??? Should we expect another adventure with these two? Considering the baby hasn't been born yet and Faith is still floating around it leads me to believe there is more to come. Plus it takes at least three to make a series, true??
Author's Response:
No the story is not complete that was actually an accident marking it as complete I hadn't noticed until I read the reviews. Sorry for the confusion.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:33 PM Title: Home
OMG! Steamy sexy hotness! *fans herself*
That was an intense chapter and I loved it!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 12:27 PM Title: Home
Aaas home, with the lemony goodness they needed and we needed.... And now another wedding, you just can't get enough of dem weddings huh!!!!!!!
Now it is time for Edward to SLOW THE F:k down and do all,those things with his family. And might I say, enjoy life a bit more huh........now what Emo, Erics trial.......Ethan's birth and a wedding. Can't wait!
Awesome chapter but you've left me wanting more!!!!!
AGAIN! Luv ya chickiexxxoooxxx
Date: 25 Jun 2012 10:23 AM Title: Home
This made me cry! Words can't describe how much I loved this!
Im so glad that they are going to renew their vows, I was just thinking that they should! It would be beautiful! I can't wait!
I'm glad Edward is going to spend time with his family too and that he cleared Emmett's concious if you will.
This was just so beautiful!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:13 AM Title: Home
oui oui oui j'ai adoré
Date: 25 Jun 2012 8:25 AM Title: Home
Still loving this story - loved the kids' homecoming too! Can't wait to read the baddies' comeuppance ... LOL :)
Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:03 AM Title: Home
great chapter, more please :)
Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:02 AM Title: Home
Reading the first part got me emotional but as I read through I felt the relief of Edward getting back home. The last part is happiness...a whole family together again! Hope we get the trial next? Or have Faith caught up to join in the trial?
Date: 25 Jun 2012 5:04 AM Title: Home
Enjoyed it immesely...... love the reunion.....Thanks for writing!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 5:03 AM Title: Home
He is home!! So what happened to Faith?? I hope they beat the crazy bit@h down!! Love the story!!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:44 AM Title: Home
Girl I love this story. I'm glad Edward is home. Where do we go from here? Did they catch Eric and the rest or are we going to see them again?
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:33 AM Title: Home
loved the chapter
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:17 AM Title: A Nightmare
Please find him.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:59 AM Title: When the storm hits
No way!!!!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:56 AM Title: The Awakening
Is this the final chapter? Coz it said is complete?
Date: 24 Jun 2012 3:33 AM Title: Revealed
Great chapter! Poor Edward can't even trust family.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 9:22 PM Title: No secret is a secret forever
What a chapter!!!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 8:58 PM Title: My love My life
Idon't understand how this story only has 30 reviews! I am spellbound by it and can't wait for more! Awesome!!!!!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:08 PM Title: Family First
Glad everything turned out okay.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:49 PM Title: My family makes me better
Loved Bella's classy attack on Faith.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:39 PM Title: A happy family is an earlier heaven
Ethan is already taking after Edward. Loved it!!!!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 1:42 PM Title: The mind of the enemy
Wouldn't surprise me if his crazy woman friend was Faith.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 1:21 PM Title: Surprise!
This is simply awesome!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:08 AM Title: Fate is more than a 4 letter word
The kids are too cute!!!!!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 12:16 AM Title: In a Bubble
If I could just stop everything in my life and just read this story it would be soooo awesome. I love it!!!! I hope you are working on future chapters because eventually I'm going to reach the end of what you have written.
Date: 22 Jun 2012 5:31 PM Title: Getting to Business
Gotta love Bella!
Date: 22 Jun 2012 4:59 PM Title: An Ordinary Day
Maybe a large object will fall on her head. Faith has got to go!
Date: 22 Jun 2012 2:55 PM Title: The Awakening
I have finished the first one and i am all caught up on this one. I loved this story so much. I loved how E&B love each other so desperately and passionately. I hope they catch that cow Faith soon. I am truly addicted to your story now. I notice that when this story was over on FF that it had a lot of reviews but when you were force to move it over here, you have very few reviews. I wonder why. Well anyway i love your stories and i am looking forward to reading much more from you. Please update soon.
Date: 22 Jun 2012 12:47 PM Title: Another day another Masen, or Culen
Priscilla is just plain inconsiderate for inviting Jane. Faith needs to get her mouth taped shut. Perhaps she will mess up and gets taste of what the papparzi can do. Ugh!!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2012 2:03 AM Title: The Cullen's
Sounds like Mac and his wife might cause problems.
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:23 AM Title: My love My life
Nice light chapter.
Date: 19 Jun 2012 11:27 PM Title: Same day another Masen and Cullen?
I just LOVE this story.. I mean, I've been in love with Edward and Bella since the very beginning of Twilight and everything, but reading about them in a variety of situations is just exciting.
Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:28 PM Title: The Awakening
wow..so he´s finally safe thank god.. i think that bella should go after faith..ruin her..i would do that..that woman is a monster..so update soon please
Date: 18 Jun 2012 6:22 PM Title: The Awakening
i really hate why that you had to change sites. ffn is going to lose a lot of writer but i want you to keep wright. you are very good. the only thing i dont like about this website is that it dont not have a good mobile screen for it. update soon thankx :)
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:45 PM Title: The Awakening
Yeah. Edward is back and Eric and Orlando have been caught. Now on to Faith. I think Bella should be the one to handle her. I can't wait to for the next chapter. Those three are finally going to get what is coming to them.
Date: 18 Jun 2012 6:24 AM Title: My love My life
i loved this story on ff but this website won't let me get past chapter 1. I don't know what is wrong with it.
Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:45 AM Title: My love My life
I'm sorry about ff.net forcing you to take it out. But I'm glad that you post it here and continue. Thank you
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:32 AM Title: My love My life
Angie 509 i am having the same problem. I log in and as soon as i click on my favorites it keeps kicking me out or it tells me i am not authorize for this function and i keep getting the age consent thing too. I am trying to read this story and i cannot even get to chapter 1. It keeps going straight to the reviews. I am very upset because i wanted to read this sequel. I wish the author would put it on another site because i have been having trouble with this site for two weeks now.
Date: 18 Jun 2012 1:01 AM Title: My love My life
i love this and i read it on ffn, but for some reason this site isnt letting me go past chapter one, for this story, and for It takes two. i dont understand why i press the age consent and its not letting me go past chapter one, and i've tried everything. do you have any reason why it would do this?
Date: 16 Jun 2012 10:48 PM Title: The Awakening
Can they die a slow painful death .. better yet can they go to jail & become some1s' B**CH .. Wishful thinking !!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 7:17 PM Title: A Nightmare
Loved it, can't wait for more.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:04 PM Title: My love My life
J adore, waiting for the next chapters.....
Date: 06 Jun 2012 3:37 AM Title: A Nightmare
looking forward to more
Date: 05 Jun 2012 8:05 PM Title: My love My life
Amazing story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading!!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:10 PM Title: A Nightmare
I LOVE IT
THNKS FOR ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER
HAVE THEY REALLY FOUND EDWARD??
IT SEEMS TOO EASY SO I'M SURE IT'S NOT THE END OF THE DRAMA
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:10 PM Title: A Nightmare
Looooveee this story!!!Can't wait for the next chapter!!!Pleaseee hurryyyyyy!!!lol
Xoxo,
Marcela Preisser
Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:23 PM Title: A Nightmare
I am trying to put your story in my fav so I can get alerts when it is updated but the site won't let me....:(
Author's Response:
Go to your edit pereferences and check off that you would like to recieve an email when your favorites update. You should be alerted then. Also if you are friends with me in my facebook group I will always post there when I update.