Date: 17 Nov 2016 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 46 : High School Drama
Yeah they pissed me off here I mean Esme is really cool and had 2 simple request don't knock up her daughter and don't shame her. So yeah people park and have sex in cars but really Edward is the glove compartment to far? Come you two!
Date: 21 Mar 2015 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 66: A place to call our own
AWESOME!!! i loved this story ;) i liked the ending but i was hoping that they would have some kids before you pressed complete ;( i wanted them to have at least one girl called rayne *hehe* ;) when i began reading this i thought charlie was esmes' brother because of the colour of bellas' eyes and her being a cullen, anyway i liked that he was carlises' half brother instead ;) and i always love when edward is a masen ;) anyway thanks alot for sharing this story on here with us ;D
Date: 20 Jul 2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 1: Death and Taxes
Where ARE the characters? I'm from KY too, and when I saw Bowling Green, I kind of squeed. A lot.
Great story, btw!
You know of Bowling Green do you? I'm not in Bowling Green, but I'm fairly close. I was born and raised in Barren County and have relatives there, along with Warren County, Monroe, and Allen.
My beta told me to use what I know. There weren't any stories that related to farming and the country, so I used what I knew. Not every Edward has to be filthy rich, right? lol
I am so glad that you are enjoying my story! Thank you for reading and reviewing =)
Date: 15 Feb 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 66: A place to call our own
What a beautiful ending to a beautiful story... I have so fallen for this whole crew, your wonderful and charming countryward and your spunky yet fragile Bella, an Esme that makes me proud to be a woman and Charlie I would totally do! I loved it baby, I loved how they got married at their spot and loved even more that they will grow old there, hopefully raising a houseful of children... CONGRATULATIONS girl, love you :-)
Date: 15 Feb 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 65: I love a rainy night
Ahhh, thanks babe, you know I believe in you and this story...now this chapter was all kinds of wonderful. I absolutely LOVED their wedding and thought you wrote it perfectly. I love their love, they are just so perfect together and he was right when he told her they were meant to be! Wonderful chapter BB :-)
Date: 15 Feb 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 64: Little Shit and Flossy
I sooo loved this chapter Jen... Edward and LS just cracked me up as well as the auction. Bella is too damn funny and poor Edward needs to accept the fact that he is a pussy whipped schmuck for a girl who absolutely ADORES him :-)
Date: 28 Sep 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 63 : Misunderstandings & Multiples
Ah, thanks for all the love BB! I love you too and don't worry about last night, you were fine...
I really loved this chapter, especially Esme taking care of business with the waitress and of course their 3 orgasm inducing sexcapade was ultra hot BB!
Date: 28 Sep 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 62 : Aqua Net and Open Flames
Ahhh, I loved this chapter and it brought back so many memories for me. My god! A can a week easily, when I went out my hair was BULLET PROOF! but seriously, loved the prom, loved their interactions with one another and loved how perfect they are together...sigh... I am in denial that this is almost done :-(
Date: 21 Sep 2012 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 60 : Daddy Dearest is Dead as a Doornail
Well, you know I loved this chapter. Daddyward has me all a flutter, just the visual of Edward holding little Riley Jo and singing to her *sigh* And I am glad his daddy is dead, he was bad news and now Edward is free of the baggage that he provides. And BTW, I think I would build an alter at Edward's feet as well, just sayin'
Date: 21 Sep 2012 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 59 :Riley Josephine Whitlock
Now I have cast a protective spell over you and the girls with my brand new Cedric Diggory wand so you will be safe in NY, now whether NY will be safe from you, hmmm not so sure...LOL... You know I adore this chapter, Charlie is pure perfect... I loved him getting E&B and his whole internal dialogue about what they were doing, hehehehe... and of course, him holding the baby *SIGH* ... FAB FAB FAB!
Date: 21 Sep 2012 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 58 : Please...don't go.
Hey girl... you know I love jrPOV cause he is freakin' hilarious. This was such a fabulous chapter from start to finish and I am still kicking myself that I thought I had sent this back to you when I didn't...Ehhhh! well, at least you can blame me for the late posting, hehehehehe... Love ya girl!
Date: 04 Aug 2012 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 57:Altercations, Announcements, and Bitter Pills
Ooohhh, love, love, love... A) I loved that you were realistic with how sore someone is after their first back door lovin' session, B) I adore your Edward so damn much it makes me sick...LOL C) His daddy is an ass and needs to go DOWN! and D) I freaking love that Charlie offered his pad to Edward... I know Bella ain't gonna be the most thrilled with that though since she won't have easy access to that sexy beast down the hall :-)
Date: 04 Aug 2012 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 55:Traces of him
Oh Edward, Edward, Edward... I just love you so much. I totally understand why you were late but ya know, a quick phone call would have done the trick...LOL... Just love these two so much. Thanks Jen for the fantastic story!
Date: 07 Jul 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 54: Talking to Myself
LOVE this and you know it. Loved their light hearted fun at the movies and then doing doughnuts in the parking lot! Of course you know I don't trust James and Jacob just cause ya know he's a Jacob, LOL... but being in the dark and seeing those snow prints on the floor. I would soooo be freaking out, just like Bella is... Edward! get your ass home :-)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 52 : Dessert at the kitchen table
MMMM... sorry it took me a while. It was difficult to pull myself away from the King of Cannes. He just kept drawing me in...LOL
Now I loved so many things in here and yes, a nekked Edward cooking would have made me cream myself on the spot :-) As far as the table, isn't that like a requirement or something? Well, it works for me and that table sex was hotter than hot cause "Yes, he IS that good" And finding all the pictures in Charlies bedroom, ahhhhhh, Charlie *sigh*
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 51 : Twelve-minutes??!!
Oh girl... I love your Edward so much. I was just giggling at all his inner dialogue, and holy crap woman, that would have been the best 12 minutes of my LIFE! hehehehe... another fantastic chapter and ya know I just laughed when the school closed cause I don't know how many times shit like that has happened here in the Dakotas!
And BTW... Relay for Life is such a powerful organization... thanks for doing it lady, you are AWESOME!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 50 : Better late than Never
Oh girl... you know I have been begging for Charlie for many a chapters. I just love so many things about it. But mostly I just loved how much Charlie loved her and that he finally did something about it only to find out she felt the same way. What a perfectly wonderful chapter.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 49 : Snowballs and Footrubs
Hey girl... I can definitely relate to so many aspects of this chapter, this story. Although I didn't grow up in the country my family still spent New Years alone with Dick Clark, playing card games or monopoly and over the past 10 years it has been the snow and sledding in the winter, I still get excited when it snows for the first time... wonderfully awesome chapter.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 47 : The value of a life
Wonderful, wonderful chapter... I adore Esme and even more so now. She is so strong and wise. Of course I loved Edward's awkward proposal and that he asks for permission from Esme. That was sooooo appropriate and made me feel all warm and giddy inside *sigh*
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 46 : High School Drama
Loved this chapter.. Yes, that homecoming reminded me of some of my football games and yes, definitely saw some hissie fits in my time... AND yes, I have also been busted in various acts of disarray... YIKES! this was a stroll down memory lane, hehehehe... great chapter my friend, great chapter!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 45 : Church folks need lovin' too!
Ah Jen... you know how much I adore Esme and what she did was so right on. They were being careless. I mean Bella is a kid so she has a right to be careless but Edward's a man and he needs to think about what he wants, not just the sexual stuff but a future for the two of them. Hopefully he will be thinking about what she said and do something about it!
But the best line for me was when Esme said, "Don't shame my daughter Edward!" I mean that says it all right there. In fact I told one of my daughters boyfriends that very thing but, ya know there was some cursing when I said it :-)
Another fantastic chapter girl. This story just keeps getting better and better!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 44 : Double Wedding Ring Quilt
Okay first off I love how Bella is coming into her own. That she knows what she wants and doesn't mess around with getting her wants met. Now of course I would NEVER stop a man from giving me oral, rookie mistake...LOL...and yes I love Alice and Jasper, there is something so loving watching a man rub his hands on his woman's baby bump...SIGH... in my culture we give a quilt as well, it has a star in the front and is usually made by one of the female relatives.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 43 : Tickles and Kisses
Okay girl... you know how much I love me some Esme, especially YOU'RE Esme... She is one tough and loving cookie and am so glad she is realizing that Charlie is an okay guy... AND props to getting a little something, something Esme... You go girl... And, yes, I guess I am NOT country enough cause I still don't know what the hell chess pie is, hehehehe... Another great chapter :-)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 42 : Happy Birthday Bella...Meet Kate
Wonderful, wonderful chapter as always. Loved the Marcus Foster shout out...GO MARCUS! loved the F' You to Jake, hahahahaha, and loved the gentleness of everything after they had sex.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 38 : Full moon and calf feed
Hmmm, where to begin... well for starters, James is a bastard and deserves another beat down! and second, well, What a wonderful way to come home, to be kissed thoroughly by Edward against the side of the house. Hell to the yeah! And finally, Thank you Emmett for taking care of Bella... Great chapter Jen :-)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 37 : The Inquisition
Ah... you know how much I love Esme. I loved how she reacted to the situation. She is grieving and at this point she just needs things to be stable and right, even for a little bit. She knows what is going on and gave warning without actually forbidding it. Bella is close to 18 and she knows she cant stop it, doesn't mean she wants to see it though. Great chapter!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 36 : Just ... hold me ... closer
Mmmm... Edward, oh MY! What a yummy chapter. He was so perfect, giving her support and helping her forget, even for the moment the tragedy that she has been through. Excellent chapter Jen
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 35 : War is Hell
Esme was bound to have the talk with her and of course B&E both worrying about the other, just perfect. Another soldier down and like you I have such respect and reverence for our soldiers and what they do, so very sad. I didn't even know the character but I feel bad that he is gone *sigh*
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 32 : Confessions
Cockblocked by Mama Masen...Oh she knew, she knew her baby girl was about to get some. A mama knows...LOL... And, sigh just sigh. Now when I where my shit boots I don't get this kind of action...SO NOT FAIR! Great lemon girl, ya know I LOVED it :-)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 31 : Frog giggin'
Now, I have never heard of frog giggin but I tell ya what, I am with Bella on this. I would do it just to be alone with Edward :-) Now, I have HAD frog legs before and they were not bad at all but I guess I never realized what was involved with actually getting them...LOL
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 30: Family Ties
Ah, I just love Edward almost as much as I love Esme. She is so freaking awesome in your story girl. Now, I know it's been awhile for her so I say she needs a little action as well *wink, wink* And, Bella, oh Bella. You spunky young thang!
Thanks for the shout out for TMH!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 29: A man at the head of the table
Well, you already know that I adore Esme. She is a strong woman and I respect that but even strong woman can use a man around. Charlie is a mighty good one indeed and me thinks he's a bit sweet on Esme as well :-)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 28: Cut and Spike
'This litle innocent farm girl is turning into a hot little tease and she is gonna be the death of me' Ah, Edward I think that about sums it up... Great chapter and loved the visual of the tobacco patch :-)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 21: It's NOT nothing!!
Ah Jen... James will forever be etched in my brain as an evil person. Mostly because of all the dang FF's I read James is always so dang evil that it is just how I see him...LOL... And, Edward...better stow that twitchy palm, sounds like he is about to go all postal on someone...LOL
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 20: Just Ease Into It ...
You know that is such a perfect image. Edward and Bella on the swing, her head in his lap while they just swing...Beautiful just BEAUTIFUL! and thanks for the compliment about TMH... YEAH! I was able to post the next chapter
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 18: No regrets??
Okay... you already know how much I adore Esme. That woman takes shit from no one and runs a tight ship. She is freaking AWESOME! And, yeah... to being able to upload and review. It went down before I could review this chapter :-)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 17: Drunken Tongues
Ahhh, Edward is to good! I love how in this chapter he really comes to terms with how he feels about her, knowing he shouldn't feel the way he does but feeling it anyway. Edward... You are a good man!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 16: The Kegger
Oh Bella, Bella, Bella... Oldest trick in the book. Our place was 'The Vineyards' ... Those were the days my friend... Anyway, I think Edward should have taken a Xanax before heading out cause he is wound TIGHT!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 14: Just....admit it...
Ah Edward... Yes, this here is why she did that...you thinking about her when you could be thinking about me *wink, wink* okay, okay... I'm bitter. I don't have an Edward lying awake thinking of me this way AND the team I was rooting for LOST! you sent me back luck Jen... AIN'T FAIR!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 11: Time to man up.
Okay... Esme so ROCKS! I just love her tough as nails mama hen flogging the damn fox. You go woman! hey wait, did I say flogging, hmmmm, that reminds me of flogger, hmmmm, and that reminds me of FIFTY! GAH...I am toast :-)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 10: Oh no he didn't!!
Oh how I love Edward already... he is the cutest thing, he needs to accept that its hopeless. He's in trouble!
And thanks for the shout out for Role of a Lifetime...As much as I love TMH I am really looking forward to writing the new one.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 9: Did he really just ask that??
Ahhhh my young padwon, you are quick to learn you are, hehehehe... Thank you so much for the love. You just like my sexy lemons don't ya, well don't ya...hehehehe... Now, back to the lecture at hand... OMG! I need to quit with the music references... I love that Esme made em all go to church and Alice looking all guilt ridden... and ya know, my girl Amanda has a thing for bare feet so yeah... Oh my poor Edward, me thinks someone is about to open up a can of wup ass!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 6: Hold on to that grease gun!
Ahhhh, countryward has found a home... at last! ITA Jen, we take too much in life for granted. People don't wake up one morning and say, hey I think I will be homeless! Thanks for the reminder :-)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 2: Powder Blue Chevy
"Could I be anymore backwoods?" hehehehe... hell no but what the hell is wrong with that? and, hmmmm, maybe I need to reconsider staying in my pajamas all weekend with no makeup on thing I got going on...LOL