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Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2011 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 23

Thats Alice being proposed to..  I love it..

E/k

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 23

LOVE!

And DAMMIT! Evil cliffie!

Evil!

Update soon, pretty please?

Reviewer: nancy123k Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2011 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 22

WOW!!! I LOVE THIS STORY. I CANT SEEM TO GET ENOUGH!!! I HOPE TO SEE MORE SOON, VERY SOON!!!! THIS HAS ME SITTING ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT WANTING MORE. DRAMA, AGNST, LAUGHS, SEXY TIMES, WHAT MORE COULD A STORY HAVE!!!! MORE MORE AND MORE PLEASE!!!!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 22

Just found your story this week and read it all in one sitting.  I love it so far and can't wait to see what happens next.  Love it

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 22

Yeah, so who is Aro King?

Thanks for the update & Happy New Year to you & yours!

Reviewer: reesessweetie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 22

when i saw that it was aro, i had no idea who that was. i even thought that i had forgotten some important details about this story. phew! i guess he hasn't been introduced to us yet

i can't believe that just because bella and jacob are seen together, and having fun at a club and dancing together, they're accusing her of cheating on edward. arghghg..can't two friends just have fun? it's so ridiculous!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 22

well Bella's breakdown was just wow! that poor girl is all over the place with her emotions. I'm glad you updated and I'm going to go over there now to check out those one-shots. thanks again and bring on Edward. can't wait for their reunion. :D thanks again bye

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 22

Excellent having you back! I was really missing this story!

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 22

Thanx for the update.  I've missed you.

E/k

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 21

;D)

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it very much and sorry i'm late thanks for sharing and update when you can.....

Reviewer: erikajo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 21

Nice lemon wedge!  ;)

Reviewer: themrsmittens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 21

lol they are some kinky bitches. lol I love it! I see its been awhile since you updated. (shakes finger at you) shame shame. lol just kidding but what a comeback. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 21

Sex on Skype...isn't technology wonderful!!!! How long before Edward makes a quick trip to New orleans?

Great inside peeks at the movie industry. I hope you keep up the detail on this side of the story as well as the wonderful lemons!

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter (if a little short)!

Please update soon!

Reviewer: twifan788 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

i started reading today and loved it.

hope update is soon...

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 20

Great job, thank you for writing.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 20

I'm having seperation anxiety enough for both of them. I just have an awful feeling about anything with the name Volturi attached! Sue hope i'm worrying for nothing!

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter

Love this story

Reviewer: themrsmittens Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 20

Oh I miss him too!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 20

great chapter

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 20

You are not getting enough reviews for how good this story is you need to pimp it out and I will put it on my profile on FF to see if it gives you more loved it and update when you can....



Author's Response:

Why thanks! It's on FFN, so I get the majority of my reviews there. I pimp on Twitter and FB, but any additional support I can get helps. Thanks. Glad you are enjoying!

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter! Is Edward planning a visit to New Orleans soon?



Author's Response:

Oh yeah! He even might bring the show there for a week!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 20

aww that chapter got me weepy. lol I loved the watch and the time message thing. too sweet. keep up the great work and I can't wait for more. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

i should give the time message props, it's a quote, but i can't remember who know

thanks, working hard on the next chapter, glad you are enjoying!

Reviewer: the twilight girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

aw this is a GREAT story<3 i love the plot and just about everything! UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!

Reviewer: saene Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 19

love it.



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 19

I just read this fic in one sitting and all I can say is wow....yeah, wow.



Author's Response:

wow, that's a ton of reading

glad you are enjoying

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 19

Great job!



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 19

Please update soon!

Great chapter, as are they all!



Author's Response:

working hard on updating!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 19

If there are pictures of them on the boat are there pictures of them on the island too? Maybe a few with little or no clothing? Bound to be something that will mess with the happy couple.

Great chapter! Thanks.



Author's Response:

nope, none from the island, there is always bound to be something to mess with the happy couple

thanks!

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 19

Hi, when I first started reading this story I enjoyed it so much because it is nice and not so filled with horrible angst, constant misunderstandings, etc.  I do like that sometimes, but sometimes you just need a beautiful story.  And this is.  But I do have to say, this chapter, not so on par with the rest.  It was like you were sprinting to the finish line.  You covered way too many scenes, and skipped right over way to many intimate moments with just a sort of quick, "we made love".  On several occassions.  Sometimes that works into the story to make time pass, but it would have made more sense if there was something significant that happened in the chapter, or a cliffie.  It just seemed like filler, not really fun to read.   I hope you take this as honest an not meant to be mean at all.  The story has been one of my favorites since I discovered it, it is just this chapter.  Thanks for writing it.



Author's Response:

HI TT

Thank you for the honest feedback. Sorry if you felt this was a filler chapter. It was somewhat of a race, but more like a race that you don't want to win, cause neither of them wanted the time to come, and it just got faster and faster the closer they got to their separation. I hope that makes sense.

I'll do what I can to make the next chapter up to par. Again, thanks for your honesty. Every bit counts.

=0 J

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 19

loved it very much as always and very excited to see what will happen next.....



Author's Response:

thanks, working hard on the next, NOLA baby!

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2010 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 18

Great job! I really love the story.

Reviewer: saene Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 18

amazing

love it.

Reviewer: saene Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

wonder who is with bella?

Reviewer: kidnurse123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 18

I love this story! I have been following it for a while. I love the relationships you have devoloped and look forward to each chapter, I just wish they were a little more often. I can't wait to read about the New Orleans house. Hopefully the wait won't be long!!

Reviewer: LaTuaCantante4ever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 18

AWW! So Sweet! I loved it!  I like how all of your lemons still remain classy. Great job!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 8

I really like this story but I think the lemons are really rushed through.  I think there is not enough detail in them and there is NO detail on EPOv of what he is feeling during the lemon which I think is important too.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow they are really big flirts huh? LOL  I love it already.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 18

Awe, nice chapter. Thanks for the update. I'm wondering where things are headed with these two love birds when they get to NY city?? marriage proposals?? How are they going to manage the Nawleans separation?? 

Hope you'll update again soon;~)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 18

well that chapter was cute, no angst present there. good job. lol I love that Bella got him his dream car while Edward was (lets face it) being a little jealous and bought her a house so he can visit her on set. I love it. its been a while but I'm still here so keep up the great work. i can't wait for more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 18

So cool that everyone showed up. I think that they had a great Christmas. I guess that Bella is going to be filming forceps months. Hopefully that time will go by fast for both Edward and Bella. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 18

loved it very much update when you can thanks....

Reviewer: siledubh Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

It was so nice to have a fun, fluffy, lemony chapter to read!  I've been mired in angsty stories also, so this is a treat!  I really like that all of these characters are very  honest with each other.  I do find having tosuspend disbelief at the thought of Jasper as a virgin  LOL-I don't think that's been done before!

Reviewer: erikajo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 18

You're doing great!  I still love this story :)

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 18

She gets a house and he gets a Porsche. Wow! That was some Christmas!

It was so sweet of Edward to fly everyone in for the holiday. Way to make points big guy!

i love how thoughtful and sweet they are with each other. this will continue..right???????

Reviewer: twimomof4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 18

Nice happy chapter. I'm truly enjoying this story. From the moment E/B got together-I loved how they didn't beat around the bush. It's great and I look forward to the update.

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 18

Man, what an awesome Christmas!  Love when characters gift cars!  Please!  Someone gift me a car with air conditioning! 

Sorry...ranting...loved it and can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: LaTuaCantante4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

Were they sunbathing naked? Cause that would be embarASSing. lol  ok I'm a dork in need of sleep, but great story so far!

Reviewer: LaTuaCantante4ever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wow.  Loved the ending on that chapter!  SO cute!

Reviewer: LaTuaCantante4ever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it! Great story so far.

Reviewer: LaTuaCantante4ever Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

So Adorable!  I'm having a hard time imagining Eddie hamming it up, but I love it!  Great job. I'm looking forward to more!

Reviewer: erikajo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 17

Awesome!  Thanks for the update  :)

 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 17

I hope that's one of the caretakers dogs;) Otherwise, yuck & scary.

Thanks for the update;))

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 17

Great job!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it!  Great chapter!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 17

OMG what is in there bed with them update when you can so loved that chapter thanks for sharing....

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 17

Thank goodness Esme seems to want to give Bella a chance.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 17

Well who did do it then? don't leave us hanging. lol keep up the great work. i can't wait for more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: arwen01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story seems to be really great! Looking forward to what's next!

Reviewer: sila1075 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: sila1075 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

great can't stop reading

Reviewer: sila1075 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 2

awwwwsome!!

Reviewer: sila1075 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great already hooked!

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 7

I always text during movies, unless I'm really into them.  I try not to, but I can't help it.  Some movies bore me to death!  I hate when my boyfriend drags me to uninteresting movies!  

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

I don't think Rosalie will be too happy about Edward and Bella being official, but I am!

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 5

OMFG!  I think its funny as HELL that Jacob is gay!!!  I'm lmmfao (laughing my moherfucking ass off).  I personally DO NOT like Jacob at all... so thank you.  I appreciate it lol :)

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 4

Omg, I love Cosmo!  And I'm thinking Edward and Bella had a love-at-first-sight type of thing.

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

I don't think Zafrina was the true cockblocker.  She was only doing her job.  Rose is the real cockblocker!

I'm guessing Jane is evil?  In SM saga she fucking creeps me out.  Ugh, I really don't like her.

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 2

Ooooo, Bella didn't follow orders.  I bet she sleeps with Edward :)

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Omg, I would've been so embarrassed if I said what Bella did!  You know with the "I need you" thing.  I probably would've passed out!  

Reviewer: twimomof4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 16

I read this story today and think it's so cute. I love how they jumped right in without thinking twice, hopefully this continues this way with no angst. I also count on something being said when she goes on the show, and was happy she finally got out the ILY to him. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 16

I can't believe she told him like that.  It will be interesting to see how he responds .  I imagine he's shocked.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 16

Hay your gone forever I thought you died than you leave us with that at the end

Its like when she shares a stage with him she gets courage out of no where loved it update when you can thanks.....

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 16

AWWWW!!! nows a fine time to say something. lol I'm sad you had writer's block but so Glad you are over it. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 16

Great job!

Reviewer: 4padfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 16

James and Jane darn Bella just can't catch a break.  And Jasper is a what...oh wait till Alice finds out.  The Twister known as Alice will knock him for a loop.  And Perfect way for the first I love yous...awwww moment. 

Reviewer: 4padfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 15

Not going to interrogate him my foot, that would be a perfect outtake the dad interrogation.  Or the first scene from Edwards POV.  No no no James is back. 

Reviewer: 4padfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 14

And the new movie role is in place.  Excellent.  DUM DUM DUM Charlie has arrived in the building.  Ruh roh.

Reviewer: 4padfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oww. Cant Caveward go off on the psychotic one also known as James?  The script arrives.  I absolutely loved the end of this chapter.  What a perfect way to keep the show involved in the story.  Did the tie tree ever get delivered?

Reviewer: 4padfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 12

Caius Ferguson how funny!  And the twists just keep coming.  Excellent use of modern techology (TMZ) and then the sweet revenge over the air waves.  And thank you again we are back with a wet Edward in the pool. 

Reviewer: 4padfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 11

Yes, Edward again with the swimming.  Well sort of.  What on earth is going on with Esme.  And another cliffhanger.  You enjoy doing this to us don't you.

Reviewer: 4padfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 10

Pool.....Water....Edward....darn wait I want to go back there.  Scary scene with James but every story needs the tension so okay I'm ready.  Wait no I'm back at the wet Edward in the pool. 

Reviewer: 4padfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 9

Nothing more sexy that a man unwrapping a gift for you or from you while you are wrapped in his arms.  I hope you keep everything a fresh and interesting as you have so far. 

Reviewer: 4padfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh yes...Can I run to my door to see if Edward is there?  (sighs) Nope you stole him again.  Keep up the outstanding work.

Reviewer: 4padfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 7

A perfect chapter which covered a large amount of time, but was still very interesting, thowing in several little snippets of information.  Then those evil seven little words that caused such a cliff hanger.  Two thumbs up!

Reviewer: 4padfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 6

Hummm Edward tied up. Yep my brain froze there.  YES YES I'll be your girlfriend!  Keep up the excellent story.

Reviewer: 4padfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 5

My name....my name....nope can't remember it.  Oh yes...its Belward. 

Reviewer: 4padfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

Allrighty then.  Just enought to go hummm.  What is the Bella/Jane/Alec issue, but then a very hot-t photoshoot.  And then everyone is at the edges of our seats waiting for the next chapter.

Reviewer: 4padfoot Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

Man can anyone else feel that tension.  Keep it up!

Reviewer: 4padfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 2

Bella's inner fan girl is in heaven.  I say take the big girl panties and throw them where no one can find them and admit to being a felony kidnapper.

Reviewer: 4padfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

  Outstanding beginning!  Can see where you could take this in several different directions.  And as someone who works third shift and sees a lot of the Late late show, I am very interested on where you take this.  Keep it up.

Reviewer: doeluvr Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 16

that was a good way to finish off the chapter i liked it

Reviewer: baby were epic Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

Please update faster ! I totally love it :)

Reviewer: cshorte Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 15

Really liking this story!!! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: eternally addicted Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

I think that Edward should propose at midnight on New Years Eve.  Hope James isn't a big issue!!! great chapter hurry with next one!!

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great job! I love it.

Reviewer: reesessweetie Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

i just wanted to ask if your chapters here is exactly the same as on ffn. you didn't edit anything out on ffn, did you? because if so, then i will need to reread it for a third time...



Author's Response:

exactly the same here darling =0 J

Reviewer: Twi-Addict Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 15

Thank you for posting, can't wait to read more!  I think Jasper is just being a gentelman and he wants to make their first time really special.  Maybe plan something for the two of them to ring in the New Year together.

As for Edward and Bella's New Years.  That is a really hard one.  Something different - maybe central park?  Something private and romantic.

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