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Reviewer: hcullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 15

loved it cant wait till the next one

Reviewer: pumpkinmykitty Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Drooling while waiting!  Thanks!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 15

Love it, love it, love it!  Very unique and I can't wait for more!

Sarah



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Thank you!

Reviewer: saene Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 15

fantastic chapter



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Thank you!

Reviewer: kidnurse123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 15

Love the story, love the chapter!! 



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Thank you!

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 14

I really like these two and it is interesting to see a story with a actress and talk show host in love.  The separation will be interesting.



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Thanks. Yes, the separation will be quite interesting.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 15

I liked that chapter. It was sweet and had a purring Edward. lol I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



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I love making Edward purr. Thanks!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2010 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it That bastard better watch himself or edward is going to kick his ass, again HAHA update when you can thanks....



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Oh, I think Bella can handle herself. Thanks!

Reviewer: doeluvr Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 14

i am in love it is so good hands down one of the best thingds i have read



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Thank you very much.

Reviewer: pumpkinmykitty Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 14

Need more story please!!!!  Its going great!!!



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Thanks. Working hard on the next chapters.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 14

Edward and Bella are so cute together.  They practically live together anyway so why not move in together.  When you're in love like they are what's the point in waiting.

I was totally expecting Esme to be at the door. but I'm freaking excite for the Charlie visit.



Author's Response:

They are so cute. I like writing a sweet Edward. My hubby when we first got together were like that.

Oh Charlie, he's going to be fun for me to work with. *giggles* =0 J

Reviewer: ju007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 14

Love it!!!! 



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Thanks! =0 J

Reviewer: vstemler95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

I LOVED IT!!! VERY FUNNY! Can't wait for more!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: saene Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 14

LOVE IT!



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Thanks! =0 J

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 14

:)



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=0 J

Reviewer: Luminesk Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 14

Awww...she said yes. And Edward hinted at future plans and intentions too. I don't think it is too soon for them. For some couples it may be, but for these two i think it is the logical next step and very required timing. Bella is basically at Edward's house constantly anyway, and i think this was the best way to reassure each other about the relationship, especially with Bella about to leave.

Thankyou for the update. I look forward to your next installment...



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Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 14

Daddy's back and can't wait to see whats going to happen loved it update soon thanks....



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That's right, Charlie. Thanks for reading and reviewing. =0 J

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just started reading your story, it's great.

Cant wait for more. :)



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Twi-Addict Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 13

Love the story!  Can't wait for more!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 13

Damn, James did take his role too seiriously. 

Nice to see Em and Rose finally hooking up.

I wonder if Bella is so hesitant about reading the script afraid of what the role will do to her relationship with Edward.



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Not hesitant, just careful (if that makes sense). I'm sure him asking her to move in will influence her decision. =0 J

Reviewer: saene Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 13

great chapter!!

 



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Thanks!

Reviewer: ju007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 13

great chapter can wait for another!! 



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Thanks!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 13

:)



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Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved the chapter.. still loving this story.. great work....



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Thank you very much. =0 J

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 12

:)



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=0 J

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 13

Wow!  I never thought James would go that far with his role but I guess I was wrong.  I think Bella shouldn't do the movie with Felix.  If she's having so many second thoughts about it then it isn't ment to be.

Until the next Chapter!

Rhonda



Author's Response:

She's not having second thoughts about the role, just worried about her and Edward. Working hard on the next chapter. =0 J

Reviewer: citizencullen25 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 13

I'm reviewing in both places *giggles*. Excellent as usual. I want to have a drink with Hostward and Starella. They are totes sweet. Keep up the amazing work bb.



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*giggles* you are too silly. Thanks! =0 J

Reviewer: SnarkySnarky Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

GAH, why is it that i now imagine Edward with a scotish accent?

 

lovely,

SNARKY



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So hot to imagine that. When I watch Craig, I have the hardest time not picturing Robward in his place. Not a bad image. =0 J

Reviewer: Luminesk Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 13

I love the Bella/Edward chemistry when she is a guest on his show. It always seems to move their relationship to a new level. It is a great catalyst for the storyline.

James is scary as hell! Is that the last we will see of him? Can you imagine a potential guest appearance on Edward's show when the movie comes out? That would make an interesting episode!

I wish Edward and Bella would just talk to each other without fear! Bella is really holding back, and it is keeping her from making important career decisions. I think Edward is fearful as well and that is why he asked her to move in with him when he knew she couldn't give him an immediate answer and talk about it! I am very interested to see what will happen in the rest of the interview!

Thankyou for the update. I eagerly await your next installment...



Author's Response:

Well, most likey that last she will be near him, but you will find out what happens to him. Edward would never have him on as a guest, he would kill him first.

Working hard on the next chapter. They will talk, but they are still figuring things out between them. =0 J

Reviewer: erikajo Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 13

That was so sweet :)  You are writing such great chemistry beteen E and B.



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Thanks!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 13

Ya How cute is he   Where is one of those when I want it Taken Loved it can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks....

 



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Kaytlinjane Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 12

hehe i love this story



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Luminesk Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 12

Yah - who doesn't like late night pool sex?

Thought the gang handled the situation very well.

At the moment i am more concerned about Bella taking Felix's offer and having to move to New Orleans. That will be very difficult. And of course i am still petrified of James!

Thankyou for the update. I look forward to your next installment...



Author's Response:

Yes, pool sex is very nice. I am very fond of water.

Yes, the time apart would be very hard for him. I had one reader suggest he does a week of the show on location so they could be together longer.

Yes, James, you should be scared.

Working hard on the next chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: NMBeaudin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 2

Haha, these two are a riot. I love Bella's panicky calls to the girls.

Reviewer: NMBeaudin Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well, thats certainly a way to introduce yourself. Hehe.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 12

I think Jacob needed to get this cleared up more than any of them.  They were really screwing with his life bad saying he beat Bella up.  I like the way they handled it.

Wow, six months in New Orleans.  That could be quite tricky for Bella and Edward to get time together.

At least they got to end the press nightmare on a good note barebacking it in the pool :)

*sigh* Still loving this.



Author's Response:

Hey J- Glad you are still enjoying it. That was important for Jacob to get everything cleared up. That is serious stuff. Ah, yes, New Orleans, 6 months, it will be rough on them, cause you know she is going to take the role, how could she not? But he will most likely visit and I had one reader on FF suggest that he broadcast the show there for a week. How cool would that be? Hmm, pool sex. I love water sex, um, sorry, TMI.

I'm working hard on the next chapter.

BTW-I got my banner for donating, love it, added it to my blog.

=0 J

Reviewer: bammers Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

loved it very much can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks for sharing this with us . I hope things will get better from here.....



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. They will have there ups and downs, like every couple, but I will tell you that they will not be breaking up in this story. =0 J

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 12

Wow!  I think they got the right kind of revenge against TMZ but they should still go on with a lawsuit.  Most of the time that's what happens, a celeb will file a lawsuit and then it will most likely go into litagation.

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: saene Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) great chap

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 12

I wonder how this six month shoot will affect their relationship should she decide to take it.



Author's Response:

I'll repsodn to both of your reviews. Yep, problems with Esme.

Time frame on the film, yep, that could be a problem.

Thanks =0 j

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 11

Esme doesn't know much about hospitality does she?

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wow. I wasn't expecting Esme to be a bitch.  Nice little twist there.  I'm glad Edward didn't put up with it.

Of course Edward would think Bella handling a gun would be hot :)

You've got me wondering WTF is up with what Felix said.



Author's Response:

Yes, Esme as a bitch, that was hard to write her that way. I just want her to be all sweet.

Gun totting Bella, yeah baby! Hmm, maybe she should give Edward some lessons?

Next chapter with the beta's so hope to post soon.

Reviewer: Just me Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

Ahhh,  a cliffie.  I can't wait for the next bit. And Esme.  I wasn't prepared for a bitch!



Author's Response:

Thanks. Ah Yes, Esme. That was hard to write. Next chapter with beta's so hope will be posted soon. =0 J

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

Awe, Edward is so sweet giving her a massage and spooning her afterward.  Well, if James is that intense throughout the filming, I don't see them having a problem reproducing those reactions.  After hearing hints dropped about Charlie I can't wait for him to show up :)



Author's Response:

This is a very sweet Edward. Yes, filming will be very intense when these two are in a scene together.

Oh, Charlie, he will make an appearance soon. Should make for a very interesting moment.

Thanks for reading & reviewing! =0 J

Reviewer: Just me Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 11

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)

Reviewer: erikajo Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 10

James is creepy as usual........

Reviewer: Luminesk Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 11

What what what? I feel like i missed something. I was so consumed by Esme's reaction to Bella this whole chapter, i kind of felt blind-sided by Felix's reaction. What is going on? I am very curious and intrigued. I am anxiously awaiting your next installment...



Author's Response:

Thanks. Nope, all will be revealed in the next chapter.

Thanks =0 J

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2010 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 11

great chapter... Esme seems like the typical mum there huh? Just what you would imagine a mum in hollywood would be...

curious about felix.... can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi TSO

Thanks. That was actually hard to write, Esme with a sour attitude.

The next chapter almost done and should be on it's way to beta's quickly. Pimping TWCS on all my stuff on FF, and the numbers are growing, crazy stuff.

Thanks =0 J

Reviewer: eternally addicted Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

I am laughing because Ireally don't mind the fact that Jake is gay. At least he won't be a problem in their relationship. Of course I know that doesn't mean that no one else will, but it rules him out.

Love the story so far!!



Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad you are enjoying. I hate making Jake a bad guy and hate even more when he is competition.

Keep reading! =0 J



Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad you are enjoying. I hate making Jake a bad guy and hate even more when he is competition.

Keep reading! =0 J

Reviewer: eternally addicted Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hmm,Would love to be in her shoes. can't wait to see how the dinner goes.



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Wouldn't we all. Oh swoon!

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting storline, keep on writing



Author's Response:

Thanks. Definitely a special story for me to write.

Thanks for reading and reviewing-hope you enjoy the rest of what is posted.

=0 J

Reviewer: Luminesk Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 10

Yeh, i can kind of understand why i should be more scared of James now. He seems to be one nasty piece of work. I am sensing an ultimate showdown between him and Edward, where the overprotectiveness will come out over Bella.

Oh...and i want to be the one receiving that full body massage. Can't wait til the test results come back so we can have some water action ;)

And also looking forward to Bella meeting the parents.

PS - Edward and Bella should just officially move in together already!

Thanks for the update. I look forward to your next installment...



Author's Response:

Thanks. So glad that you are still enjoying.

James will have a show down, but not sure who with yet. Still fleshing that one out.

Oh, Edward's parent, should be very interesting.

Moving in is coming, just keep your panties on.

Working right now on chapter 11 and 12 at the same time. Hope you won't be disappointed.

Thanks for the review. =0 J

Reviewer: nikkiwindland Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

wow bold bella..i like...i cant wait to read more of this story

Reviewer: lady-janine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey you :)

Who can't understand Bella regarding Edward - he is a cutie, more than that.

And how they flirt and tease each other - sweet :P

Your style to write is very funny, i like it a lot.

I love shows like that also, we have in germany some of them too :)

but I know the American ones are better :P

Love of greetings, Jay :)

Reviewer: siledubh Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 6

I am really enjoying this story.  It's so much fun after the last few angsty stories that I have been reading.  Now if I can just figure out how to set up an alert when you update!



Author's Response:

Thanks. So glad you are enjoying the story. I'm trying to keep this light. Once you add to favorites, it will automatically alert when I update. And if you add me to your favorite authors, it will alert you when I add new stories. Hope that helps.

=0 J

Reviewer: siledubh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 6

I am really enjoying this story.  It's so much fun after the last few angsty stories that I have been reading.  Now if I can just figure out how to set up an alert when you update!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 9

:)

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh wow, their quite the pair LOL, Bella can't seem to keep it together

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ha, that was funny... the whole show was them hitting on each other

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 9

I knew their annonymous bliss couldn't last forever.  I had a feeling with Edward sneaking off to meet Bella without Rose's help would end up with lots of paps around.

I'm kinda worried about James really getting into character.



Author's Response:

Yes, they can't hide forever. It was someone in the bakery that tipped off the press.

You should worry about James. But that is coming up.

So glad that you are enjoying. I just love the readers here on TWCS. I've been pimping this out to everyone.

=0 J

Reviewer: liverpoolfc4lyf Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

hey i use to read this story on fanfic and i just wanted to confirm did u delete ur story?

 

this chapter was magnificent as always and i am looking forward to more!

 

 



Author's Response:

No, not deleted. Doubling my efforts and starting to move my stories to TWCS due to all the problems and policing on FF with smut stories. More of the heavier stories are having issues, but you just don't know when it will trickle down.

Still working on this story, we have lots to cover. Catching up TWCS to FF side, getting close.

Thanks for reading and please come back! =0 J

Reviewer: Luminesk Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thankyou for updating so quickly again. I am feeling very spoilt. Sometimes when authors leave so much time in between updates, i completely forget what happened in previous chapters, and end up going back and skim reading most of the story. But with your constant updates, this story stays at the forefront of my mind - like a movie i am watching that i keep putting on pause because i have to go do the dishes or something domestic like that!

I must say, i am very suprised that Edward and Bella thought they could go out to breakfast incognito! And not at all suprised that their cover was all together blown. But the media circus so far hasn't been that bad, and they took positive steps with it by appearing on ET. I worry what the backlash will be at home though.

Also concerned about the meeting with Felix - something just isn't sitting right with me.

I eagerly await your next installment...



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm lucky that I have a lot of chapters so I can get them out there quickly on TWCS. And I try to keep the turn around time a minimal.

Well, NY is a busy city and sometimes you don't pay attention to what is going on around you. Someone at the bakery tipped of the press. Blacklash won't be bad with press, but what about the others in their lives?

I'm actually working on Felix right now, he isn't bad, think of him like Martin Scorsese and Leo relationship.

SPOILER: It's James that you should be worried about, but this is coming up in the next few chapters.

Glad you are enjoying. =0 J

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 8

:)



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Thanks! =0 J

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 8

You definitely didn't let me down.  They are so cute with their teasing and banter.  My heart melted when he showed up at her hotel room door :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! I like a heart melting Edward.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 7

Poor Bella and Edward.  I remember feeling that way when I first got engaged to my husband.  There's nothing better than that feeling :)



Author's Response:

There is no better feeling. I had that feeling with my hubby when we first got together. We are still passionate too, even after 16 years together.

Glad you are enjoying. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Luminesk Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 8

Thankyou for updating your story so frequently - i feel very lucky.

The lemon was sweet. My only criticism is that i didn't want to stop reading it. The physical build up between these two has been intense...i just wanted to read more and more.

It is so heart warming that Edward can't stand to leave her and flies to New York to be with her. I remember that first part of a new relationship, when you can't stand to be apart from one another - it is the best feeling, and you are portraying that really well in this story.

And how adorable is Alice? I just want to bundle her up in a hug!

Thankyou for the update. I look forward to your next installment...



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm lucky that I can update frequently because I already have these done on FF, so I can catch up to TWCS.

Glad you are enjoying. Yes, that is a great feeling in the beginning stages of a relationship.

I hope to only get better at lemons, they are harder to write than I thought. Funny thing, real life doesn't translate to the written word very well.

Thanks =0 J

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 7

loved it

Reviewer: Luminesk Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 7

That was just a tease to end it there. Can't wait to read your next chapter. I am anxious to see if their relationship will be discovered by the press.

And, i loved the idea with the ties. It's cute and funny.

Thankyou for the update. I look forward to your next installment...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Next chapter will be tomorrow.

Reviewer: Chloe Fluer Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love watching Craig too and so far I like this story as well.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: erikajo Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter!  What is your tattoo of?



Author's Response:

Thanks. I have just the word Twilight abut 2" wide, same font as the books and movie, on my right hip. Working on my next one. If you google twilight tattoos, you will be AMAZED at what you find-there is this one out there-full blown image of rob as edward with apple in hand-huge-on the calf. Crazy.

Thanks again!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 6

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks. Somehow a simple and sweet review makes me smile. Glad you are enjoying and reviewing every chapter.

Thanks =0 J

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 6

They are so cute together.  Rose doesn't waste any time getting to the tough questions :)  Hopefully the press won't make their relationship too hard.  This has been my fluffy feel-good story to read.  I just wonder how long the happy will last.

I'm trying to be good and not run to FF and read everything there.  I want to review as I go here.  Anyway, another great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm trying to keep this light and fun. There is so much angst out there and I write some of it too, and it is hard to write, so fun is nice for a change.

I know-it's hard to run over there and read-I shoud have it caught up soon, chapter 10 is with my beta's rightn now.

Thanks again! =0 J

Reviewer: agosbac Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoy this chapter!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it! =0 J

Reviewer: erikajo Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 5

Fun story!  I am really enjoying it  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad you like it!

Reviewer: Luminesk Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 5

Those moments in the bedroom were so damn HOT! And i just about melted when Edward said he didn't care what they did as long as he had Bella in his arms.

Can't wait to read about the baseball watching day. Sounds like fun (and normal).



Author's Response:

So glad that you are enjoying. Yes, I love those hot sweet moments. We will get to my first lemon eventually, and I think I have gotten a little better since then on writing them. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

=0 J

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 5

:)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 5

OMG, don't run and hide.  I love gay Jake.  It's a brilliant move.  I love that he outted her Edward Cullen collection.

Edward and Bella are so cute together.  It looks to me like he likes her just as much as she likes him.

I can't wait for the meeting between all of the friends :)



Author's Response:

Thanks. Yes, I love a gay Jake and a happy Jake too.  It's hard to read a story when Jake is the bad guy. They are very cute together. Alice and Rose are going to be tame compared to Charlie. Who will appear much later down the road.

Glad you are enjoying. I'm looking forward to reading your stories too!

=0 J

Reviewer: Luminesk Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 4

I want to see those photos! I knew Leah would have taken a shot while they interacted together.

I am worried about Jane and her past wwith Bella. Does she have stalker tendencies? And what of Alec?



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks for reviewing all the chapters posted so far.

To answer some of your question.

Jane is just an agressive reporter who had done Bella wrong in the past, they rub each other the wrong way.

Alex is Jane's photographer and has gotten too close to Bella, stalker paz, and she had a restraining order placed to keep him at bay.

Yes, Leah did get some great shots, I would love to see that with the real Kristen and Robert. So yummy.

Instant attraction and all. Just think, even though someone might be a big movie star or tv or stage star, they are still human and have all the same insecurities that the rest of us have. Rose and Alice help her stand grounded, but like our canon Bella, this Bella is oblivious to the fandom that she has, but she appreciates her fans. You will see this later.

Thanks again for reviewing! =0 J

Reviewer: Luminesk Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2010 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

Who's Jane? I hear creepy horror movie music start in the background!

Reviewer: Luminesk Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2010 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

WOW - These two don't play around do they? They are jumping straight in the deep end.

Oh, and i love that although Bella is a massive star, she still has to ring her best friends during the date for advice, encouragement and support. It makes the character feel very real.

Reviewer: Luminesk Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

I saw the rec for this story on TWCS and am so far loving the premise for this story. It's a very different situation to anything i have read yet in the fandom world. Can't wait to keep reading...in fact, i think i might get onto that right now...

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2010 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice start!

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 4

That was quite an interesting photo shoot.  I love that Leah got those awesome shots of Bella and Edward.  I wonder how Edward will react to them when he sees them.

Bella, dear, I think Edward was ready for bed before he even picked you up.

I'm really enjoying this story.  Thanks so much for sharing it with us :)



Author's Response:

Thanks. More to come. Posting about ever other day to catch this up to the ff side. Working on chapter 10 as we type.

=0 J

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

It seems obvious that Edward is just as into her as she is into him.  I wonder if he's had a crush on her for a while too.

I love that Bella is a giggling 12 year-old when it comes to Edward.

I can't wait to find out what the reaction to Jane is all about.



Author's Response:

Thanks. There is more to come. Glad you are enjoying.

=0 J

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

LOL!  What's the use of a plan if Bella's gonna throw it out the window?  Thanks so much for the great laughs while I'm at work.  They are greatly appreciated :)



Author's Response:

Glad to make you laugh. I have a lot of fun writing this story as well. Smiling till my cheeks hurt.

=0 J

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like this first chapter.  The banter between them on air was great.  I just love it when Bella's internal filter doesn't work and she gets word vomit.

Can't wait to see how things go on their date.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad you like it. Yep, that's what I'm about, word vomit. Happens in my daily life, in my head of course. Sometimes it seeps out, anyway. Thanks.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 2

HAHAHAHAHA...Alice and Rose are going to be pissed...hahaha

 

GREAT JOB



Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad you are enjoying.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

THIS IS GOING TO BE FABULOUS...so different and great..

 

The spoiltone rec'd this to me, and I am thrilled that she did.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks. Yes, she read the story on FF, which is up to chapter 9 at the moment. Glad you like it. Still stunned that you guys are reading my story. You guys are great. Love you stuff. So happy to be apart of WCS. Yeah!

 

=0 Jennifer

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2010 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am totally loving this story as you know..

 

Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh that naughty Bella.  Where is the damn car.  LOL.  Can't wait for another chapter.

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA



Author's Response:

Thanks. Working on getting this posted quickly. Thanks for reading and reviewing. =0 J

Reviewer: erikajo Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 2

So far so good :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Jokris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

LMAO!  I love it!  I want to know how the dinner date goes! 



Author's Response:

Thanks. By now you should know. Working on getting this posted quickly. Thank you for reading and reviewing. =0 J

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

ohhh... can´t waith for your next updat.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Working on getting this posted quickly. Thanks for reading and reviewing. =0 J

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