Date: 04 Apr 2021 10:05 AM Title: Research
Loved it!
Date: 05 Dec 2020 10:50 PM Title: Little Things
too bad all your pictures are gone
Date: 29 Nov 2020 2:21 PM Title: Flirting with Disaster
wow that was fast
Date: 01 Nov 2020 11:34 AM Title: Little Things
Loved it!
Date: 01 Nov 2020 10:53 AM Title: Without You
Loved it!
Date: 01 Nov 2020 10:22 AM Title: The Great Real Estate Search
Loved it!
Date: 01 Nov 2020 9:59 AM Title: Wedding Bells!
Loved it!
Date: 01 Nov 2020 9:38 AM Title: Sixpence for the Richer
Loved it!
Date: 01 Nov 2020 9:18 AM Title: Some String and a Bag of Oats
Loved it!
Date: 31 Oct 2020 10:12 AM Title: Spooning in Forks
Poor Bella!
Date: 31 Oct 2020 9:57 AM Title: When a Stranger Calls
Loved it!
Date: 31 Oct 2020 9:47 AM Title: Positively Negative
Wonderful
Date: 31 Oct 2020 9:31 AM Title: Indescribable
Loved it!
Date: 31 Oct 2020 9:02 AM Title: Finding Inspiration
Loved it!
Date: 31 Oct 2020 8:43 AM Title: Way Beyond Empty
Loved it!
Date: 31 Oct 2020 6:46 AM Title: Someone to Watch Over Me
Loved it!
Date: 31 Oct 2020 6:38 AM Title: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing
Loved it!
Date: 31 Oct 2020 4:18 AM Title: Another Country Heard From
Loved it!
Date: 30 Oct 2020 9:41 PM Title: Buried Under the Guilt
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 30 Oct 2020 9:26 PM Title: Secrets, Questions, Lies, and a Partridge in a Pear Tree
Awesome
Date: 30 Oct 2020 5:25 PM Title: Drinking Games Sober and Shopping Sprees
Loved it!
Date: 30 Oct 2020 3:38 PM Title: Cleaning Up and Baring All
Great chapter!
Date: 30 Oct 2020 3:21 PM Title: An Officer and a Gentleman
Loved it! Poor Bella! Who broke into her apartment?
Date: 30 Oct 2020 10:50 AM Title: Flirting with Disaster
Loved it!
Date: 30 Oct 2020 10:34 AM Title: Research
Loved it!
Date: 05 Apr 2014 9:50 PM Title: Little Things
I really enjoyed this storyline;) it's cool Edward wears jewellery I'm looking forward to the sequel ;D
Date: 05 Apr 2014 7:29 PM Title: The Great Real Estate Search
I loved your drawing of the condo but I thought they would have more bedrooms, I don't understand Charlie's place though?;)
Date: 05 Apr 2014 6:40 PM Title: Wedding Bells!
Awesome! I thought that Leah would be perfect before it came up ;) I hope it happens before the end ;)
Date: 05 Apr 2014 4:12 PM Title: Spooning in Forks
OK I was right about Charlie but does Leah and Seth have different last names? How come nobody knows each other? ;)
Date: 05 Apr 2014 2:28 PM Title: Indescribable
Excellent so far, I'm so glad they talked it out ;) I love this dress you posted for this chapter but not the last one although I did like the colour ;)
Date: 05 Apr 2014 2:02 AM Title: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing
Wow when you said curve ball I hope this was the only one ;)
Date: 04 Apr 2014 11:30 PM Title: Drinking Games Sober and Shopping Sprees
Cool! So what's she hiding? A baby?
Date: 04 Apr 2014 10:43 PM Title: Cleaning Up and Baring All
I love epov as well thanks for ages but how old is Edward?
Date: 04 Apr 2014 9:52 PM Title: Flirting with Disaster
Sooo cool!!!!!! This is excellent for your first multi chapter story. ;)
Date: 07 Mar 2014 8:53 PM Title: Little Things
Lovely story,i really enjoyed it.
Date: 03 Jan 2014 7:24 AM Title: Another Country Heard From
Loved it!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 7:04 AM Title: Buried Under the Guilt
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 1:49 AM Title: Secrets, Questions, Lies, and a Partridge in a Pear Tree
loved it!
Date: 02 Jan 2014 10:35 AM Title: Drinking Games Sober and Shopping Sprees
loved it!
Date: 02 Jan 2014 10:09 AM Title: Cleaning Up and Baring All
loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 29 Dec 2013 5:33 AM Title: An Officer and a Gentleman
awe! Poor Bella!
Date: 29 Dec 2013 4:43 AM Title: Flirting with Disaster
loved it!
Date: 16 Oct 2013 11:34 AM Title: Flirting with Disaster
Hot, hot, hot!!!!!!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 8:11 PM Title: Indescribable
I always think it's so weird that in most stories they have their lovers get redressed...but I was just thinking, do most people where underpants to bed?
Date: 29 Feb 2012 1:01 AM Title: Little Things
I love your story...I hope will continue it
Date: 02 Aug 2011 6:26 AM Title: Positively Negative
I just love your story! :)
Date: 02 Aug 2011 5:54 AM Title: Indescribable
Great chapter, and I loved date night. ;)
Date: 02 Aug 2011 4:55 AM Title: Finding Inspiration
So glad Esme is home...Awww, that card Edward gave Bella is so sweet. *swoon* xo
Date: 01 Aug 2011 9:26 AM Title: Way Beyond Empty
Your story is so fabulous and I thank you for writing it. I may have already said that, but it deserves repeating. xo
Date: 01 Aug 2011 9:02 AM Title: Someone to Watch Over Me
Not sure what to say. But big hugs to you for writing this story. xo
Date: 01 Aug 2011 8:44 AM Title: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing
I don't know what to say right now, other than I really love your story, so much. xo
Date: 01 Aug 2011 8:28 AM Title: Another Country Heard From
Oh lord, now what? Things are so emotional right now, I feel like crying or hiding under the covers like Edward. I hope Esme is going to be alright. This was another really powerful chapter. xo
Date: 01 Aug 2011 8:01 AM Title: Buried Under the Guilt
I didn't cry while reading the chapter, but I feel like I might now. Things are going to be rough for our couple for awhile aren't they? I'm so sad for both of them. I hope Edward doesn't push Bella away, but I have a feeling that he might, or the other way around. Powerful chapter, wow. xo
Date: 01 Aug 2011 7:32 AM Title: Secrets, Questions, Lies, and a Partridge in a Pear Tree
I absolutely can't wait to know what Bella's secret is, and how she knows Rosalie, and how Rose knows her secret. First I wonder if has something to do with Bella getting checked/monitored for cancer, or if something happened to her. I can't help but think that something is up with her physically because of the fact that she wouldn't let Edward perform oral sex on her. Then there was her reaction to Quils girlfriend being pregnant. Or I could be totally off base. I better just get to reading to find out! :)
Date: 01 Aug 2011 6:43 AM Title: Drinking Games Sober and Shopping Sprees
If only we all had an Alice in our lives! :)
Date: 01 Aug 2011 5:03 AM Title: Cleaning Up and Baring All
I was right! I knew I'd love your story, it's great! :) xo
Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:38 AM Title: An Officer and a Gentleman
Awww, I just love your Edward and Bella. Edward is so sweet. I can't wait to find out more about their pasts, and if whoever broke into Bella's place knows her, or if it was just random. xo
Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:07 AM Title: Flirting with Disaster
Nice. Just jump right in the deep end already! ;)
Date: 01 Aug 2011 3:44 AM Title: Research
Sometimes I can just tell right away; I think I'm really going to love your story. It's started out great. xo
Date: 03 Apr 2011 1:35 AM Title: An Officer and a Gentleman
oh i wonder who broke in... interesting.
Date: 03 Apr 2011 1:19 AM Title: Flirting with Disaster
okay that was quick
Date: 03 Apr 2011 1:01 AM Title: Research
sounds like it is going to be good
Date: 13 Feb 2011 12:46 AM Title: Little Things
Wonderful chapter, lvoe your story !!!!
Date: 29 Dec 2010 1:37 AM Title: Little Things
How awesome is it that they are going to get married on the anniversary of the day that they met! That has to be the fates smiling down on them that they got that date and the place that Bella wanted to get married at.
Author's Response:
That was a fun little thing to work out and it works in with a few other plot points...thanks again for all the reviews!
Date: 29 Dec 2010 1:02 AM Title: Without You
It is amazing that Bella and Esme got the whole condo furnished in a matter of days!! I am jealous it took me years to pick out what I wanted in my house and I don't think that I am still happy I need a new living room set!
Author's Response:
When you have a future MiL like Esme and unlimited money, you can do a lot!
Date: 29 Dec 2010 12:34 AM Title: The Great Real Estate Search
They got their condo!! I wonder how much they are going to have to rein in Alice and Esme??
Date: 28 Dec 2010 11:47 PM Title: Wedding Bells!
That is an amazing gift that Leah is willing to give them by being a surragate for them. I was cracking up at some of the conversations while they were dancing and I think that Alice might make Edward and Bella an Aunt and Uncle in the not so distant future.
Author's Response:
OMG, you did it again! Do you have AgoodWITCH radar? I need you when I have a writer's block? Seriously, i flove you! I had fun with those dances and the surrogacy is something that will continue into the sequel as you saw.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 11:27 PM Title: Sixpence for the Richer
It is finally time!!!! YEA
Date: 28 Dec 2010 11:07 PM Title: Some String and a Bag of Oats
I am sure that was a nightmare for Jasper! It was funny for all of us though.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 10:45 PM Title: Spooning in Forks
That was really sad! it was really glad that Charlie and Bella got to see each other one more time and that she found out that Charlie didn't blame her for not staying with him after her mother died and that he got to say how sorry he was for treating her the way that he did.
Author's Response:
This for me was an important thing because i'm all about the family you choose vs the family you're born into and for her to move forward with the Cullen's she'd need to resolve her issues with her father and it was the only thing that force Charlie to reach out to her after all this time.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 10:25 PM Title: When a Stranger Calls
Is is Charlie trying to get into Bella's life now after he has caused so much dammage already?
Author's Response:
Maybe...hehehe, you seem to call me on a lot of my things. You're good!
Date: 28 Dec 2010 10:12 PM Title: Positively Negative
The dresses for Alice and Jasper's wedding are beautiful! It is nice to see that Edward and Bella are trying to take things slower than they were.
Author's Response:
I wanted that to be a slower burn this time...and planning these weddings were my first two and i had them planned very early on, knowing that it wouldn't be happening for E&B until the sequel.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 9:41 PM Title: Indescribable
They are so good together I really hope that they get a llifetime of happiness.
Author's Response:
That's the plan, lovie...
Date: 28 Dec 2010 9:10 PM Title: Finding Inspiration
Edward finally asked her out and that card was a great way to do that.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 8:45 PM Title: Way Beyond Empty
That was sweet that they have a song about Bella even more amazing was that she got up on stage and sang with them.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 8:25 PM Title: Someone to Watch Over Me
That is so sad. I really hope that when Esme wakes up she is he and remembers her family. It is good that they have each other to lean on because it is sad when a family doesn't come together to help each other through something like this.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 6:30 PM Title: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing
I really hope that Esme is going to be ok!! It was really sweet that Bella came to make sure that they were all taken care of even if her and Edward are figuring out things right now.
Author's Response:
Bella knows what they are going through and she couldn't sit by and let them suffer, even if Edward and her are having issues, she loves that family and wanted to be there for them.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 6:14 PM Title: Another Country Heard From
Oh no there is something wrong with Esme!! I hope that she is ok!! It is good that Leah went to talk to Edward because it gave him more insight into Bella!
Author's Response:
Leah is all about Bella being happy and she knows that despite his issues, he's good for her as long as he can be there fore Bella. We'll get to Esme in another review...
Date: 28 Dec 2010 5:28 PM Title: Buried Under the Guilt
That is so sad that she had her future ripped away from her when she was 20. I have cervical cancer and endometriosis running in my family which sometimes makes it hard to have children. I was blessed to be able to have one but now have problems that will probally make it hard to have children later on. I really hope that they talk to each other and work things out.
Author's Response:
My mother had cervical cancer, which is why I first thought about it...I've always been worried about having it before I could have a family...that was the birth of this story. I've had some amazing people tell me their stories and I appreciate you sharing yours.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 5:08 PM Title: Secrets, Questions, Lies, and a Partridge in a Pear Tree
It really is a small world that Rose and Bella know each other. I wonder what secret she is keeping from Edward.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 4:50 PM Title: Drinking Games Sober and Shopping Sprees
How amazing are they that they are buying her a whole new wardrobe for christmas!
Author's Response:
Alice is definitely going overboard and bringing the family along with her, but its a sweet thing after what she's been through.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 4:21 PM Title: Cleaning Up and Baring All
That is sad about all of the stuff that got taken from her apartment especially her engagement ring. I really hope that she doesn't get that mad about the fact that Edward told Alice about her coming to christmas.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 2:37 PM Title: An Officer and a Gentleman
That is sad that someone broke into Bella's apartmant but it is a good thing that she wasn't home. What is Edward going to do now that Bella fired him from working at the bar.
Author's Response:
Okay love, I'm gonna comment on most of the reviews but not all, mainly to answer or chat about things you bring up! Thank you though for taking the time to review every chapter.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 6:13 AM Title: Flirting with Disaster
I wonder what Leah said to her to let her guard down enough to have sex with Edward in her office.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 5:19 AM Title: Research
That is funny that Edward came in there looking to do research and got a job!
Date: 26 Oct 2010 2:04 PM Title: Little Things
It's a great story, but the ending seems a bit abrupt. You see everything fall into place, but it sort of hangs at the end. I did enjoy it and there were some really great funny parts. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Author's Response:
i was bringing the story of them finding each other to a close on a content note. The sequel picks up where this leaves off, following them as they get married and begin to build a life together, please check out The Family You Make to see the story continued. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the honest opinion...this was my first fic and my endings have become much smoother since then.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 6:24 PM Title: Little Things
Great story
Author's Response:
thanks, hope you like the sequel too...its a WIP! I appreciate the love~
Date: 11 Aug 2010 3:07 AM Title: Research
Okay. seriously. wish there really was a bar like this. I've danced ballet for 17 years and I could use a place like this. Good story!
Author's Response:
Glad you're liking it so far!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:01 PM Title: Little Things
I really loved this story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I hope you like the sequel, "The Family You Make" as well!
Date: 18 May 2010 11:18 PM Title: Research
I came across your story in the most recent section, and it was a great story and I am currently enjoying the second story. Keep up the great work.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:12 PM Title: Little Things
really enjoyed the story!!!...now im off to read the sequel!!
Author's Response:
Wow...thank you so much! I hope you like what's coming~
Date: 07 Apr 2010 6:35 PM Title: Flirting with Disaster
Great chapter... HOTness all around
Author's Response:
Yup...no angsty will they/won't they in this one!
Date: 07 Apr 2010 6:25 PM Title: Research
This is great for a first fan fic. I can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
wow, thanks! I can't wait to hear what you think of it!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:45 AM Title: Without You
I love the furniture! Please get these two in the same city and room soon, ok?
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the reviews and you'll see them together again net chapter!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:32 AM Title: The Great Real Estate Search
I love visuals!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:32 AM Title: The Great Real Estate Search
I love visuals!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:18 AM Title: Wedding Bells!
Wow, so much to take in. I loved it all, and that's all I'm gonna say for now!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:07 AM Title: Sixpence for the Richer
Love Angela's dress!