[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2015 8:39 AM Title: A Weekend to Remember
I'm so glad this trip was magical for them!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2015 8:00 AM Title: Goodbyes
I had thought about the pictures being printed in Boston. So glad Carlisle didn't leave with the camera card!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2015 4:54 AM Title: Family Ties
We are ready for the winery tour too!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2015 3:45 AM Title: Similarities
Carlisle is amazing! I hope he was going to look into a job at the forks hospital.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2015 2:11 AM Title: Complete Disclosure
I hope he goes in the house and does the Girly squeal and jumps around!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2015 1:34 AM Title: The Big Reveal
Well they took it better than I expected but talk about a massive size can of worms that has been opened!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2015 1:10 AM Title: Birthday Surprises
Did Carlisle & Esme come for a surprise?
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2015 12:34 AM Title: Talking About the Past
I wonder how his parents are going to feel about them dating?
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2015 1:55 PM Title: The 4th of July BBQ
So Esme was abused! I love how this is unraveling!
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2015 1:37 PM Title: Anxiety
I want lasagne now for lunch. Is Alice their daughter? Edward is definately their son.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2015 11:22 PM Title: A Newfound Peace
Wonderful end. Glad that her parents were able to see her again finally.
Epilogue or no, TY for writing and sharing
Date: 22 Feb 2015 12:28 AM Title: A Newfound Peace
Really enjoyed reading this story, would love to read an epilogue. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 21 Feb 2015 7:04 PM Title: A Newfound Peace
Very sweet! Would love epilogue
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 6:53 PM Title: Protecting Bella
It makes me smile when you update, please do so as often as you can!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2011 4:20 AM Title: Protecting Bella
oh you guys screwed up not telling her.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2011 4:14 AM Title: The End
death was too good for james.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2011 4:08 AM Title: Fear
OMG You are killing me with the suspense....course there is another chapter to read right away. lol
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2011 4:00 AM Title: Justified Paranoia
silly girl...why would you go over there? sigh. arsehole better not hurt the baby
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2011 3:53 AM Title: Congratulations & Preparations
massages always do the trick
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2011 3:48 AM Title: All Time Low
wow he really is going off the psycho meter now.
Date: 18 May 2011 6:21 PM Title: Safe Distance
eek......always trust your instincts Bella!!! When is the next installment likely to be? Get really hooked on the longer fanfics and this is no exception :)
Date: 20 Feb 2011 10:15 PM Title: A Loss
it's been over 2 months...you're killing me here! LOVE the story & can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 9:03 PM Title: Safe Distance
ugh..... Cant wait to see how you end this m-focker
Date: 14 Dec 2010 8:06 PM Title: On the Move
glad the 'rents are ok. Hope they kill James quick before she loses the baby from stress or injury from him.
Date: 14 Dec 2010 7:58 PM Title: Best Laid Plans
poor charlie and renee..... bella is going to flip.
Poor eddie
Date: 14 Dec 2010 7:52 PM Title: The News
ugh. Why is it criminals always get the breaks......
Date: 14 Dec 2010 8:19 AM Title: Anxiety
aww its hard when your in that kind of situation to get your self back on track!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2010 12:46 AM Title: Safe Distance
I hope they can stop James!!!
Date: 26 Aug 2010 7:46 AM Title: Christmas with the Cullens
Love the story I hate James what freaky creep.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:08 PM Title: Christmas with the Cullens
I love it! I have to say I was worried that it would just be a repeat of SWTE, but I really like how you've just taken the idea and created a good story with it :)
Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 9:47 PM Title: Christmas with the Cullens
Bella and Edward are so happy now, it kind of scares me that James is looking for her!
I need more!!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:57 AM Title: Christmas with the Cullens
sneaky witht he marie thing int he bistro.
Date: 06 Aug 2010 5:42 PM Title: Christmas with the Cullens
I really panicked when the guy started calling for Marie in the restaurant, I was sure it was James just like Bella. Carlisle and Esme's present for Bella was lovely and seeing everyone so excited about Christmas, expecially Edward with his Santa hat and the antlers for Bolt, is sweet. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 06 Aug 2010 2:31 PM Title: Christmas with the Cullens
Love it!
James is a dirty SOB! UGH! Can't wait to read more from him and the next chap!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 1:17 AM Title: Christmas with the Cullens
I really hope James gets what's coming to him....he's pure EVIL! Though, I worry what will happen if the authorities ever find out that she faked her death. Hmmmm... Great job! I'm excited for the next chapter :) Have a good time on your trip!!
~Rae
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2010 1:01 AM Title: Christmas with the Cullens
James, run him pver with a car or push him down the stairs or something, what a jerk! Sounds like the Cullens should invest in some body gaurds to keep James away. love this story, looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 6:54 AM Title: Inevitabilities
Holly shit I was afraid of that James is one unstable fuck he needs to be youthanized put him out of our lives. I am so happy about the baby and glad that Edward is just as happy.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:20 PM Title: Inevitabilities
Well, James you should know that pride goes before a fall..and I think yours is going to be big. You are SUCH a jackass and I can't wait until you're 'taken care of.'
Love the chapter of course!!
Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:55 AM Title: Inevitabilities
dun dun dun dun dony leave us hanging for too long please - love it!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:21 AM Title: Inevitabilities
oh dear lord. carlisle dropped the picture?!?!?!?!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 2:00 AM Title: Inevitabilities
absolutely love it! Cannot wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 09 Jul 2010 6:45 PM Title: Inevitabilities
Oh shit! damn I knew that picture was going to come back and bite her in the ass! ugh! Can't wait for the next chap!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 1:20 AM Title: Inevitabilities
OMG!!! Please stop James!!!!
Author's Response:
rest assured; he will be stopped, but it might take some time...
Thanks for reading and reviewing! It means a lot!
~Fatima
Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:44 PM Title: Inevitabilities
Great chapter! I'm so glad that Edward i happy about the baby. I had a feeling that her sending that picture would mean trouble. Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
hehe everyone said the same thing about the photo...it just caused trouble, but that's all part of the story, dear :)
Thanks for reading and leaving me a review! :)
Fatima
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:22 PM Title: Inevitabilities
Oh yey another chapter! I'm so glad Bella and Edward are both happy about the baby. Oh no I knew Bella shouldn't have sent that photo.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 3:13 PM Title: Inevitabilities
Uh oh......Carlisle is going to feel awful when he realizes that he dropped that photo.... I really hope that James gets what's coming to him. He's such an awful man.
Great chapter! I'm really glad that Edward was so happy about the baby. Can't wait for more!!!!
~Rae
Date: 01 Jul 2010 7:58 PM Title: Uh-Oh
Please update soon. I like this story and I want to know what happens. Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2010 7:16 PM Title: Uh-Oh
Oh, Bella...Do you remember why they gave you the memory stick in the first place? James is going to find that picture, honey...get ready...come to think of it, James better get ready because Edward is going to take him down...
Love this story!!
Date: 17 May 2010 11:10 PM Title: Uh-Oh
I wondered if she could be pregnant when she first said that she hadn't been feeling well, looking forward to seeing if she is or not. But why did she go and send Carlisle and Esme a photo?!?! It just seems like such a bad idea considering James is still out there and thinks she's dead.
Date: 17 May 2010 8:38 PM Title: Uh-Oh
NOOOOO she sent a pic to Boston that does not sound good how will James get a hold of it. OMG I hope she is pregers.
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2010 10:36 AM Title: Uh-Oh
I hope she is pregnant!!!!
Date: 17 May 2010 7:25 AM Title: Uh-Oh
lemme guess. someone opens carlisles mail for him at the hospital, recognizes B, and starts an evil chain of events.
Date: 17 May 2010 5:01 AM Title: Uh-Oh
I had a feeling it might be something like that. Okay, I'm a little worried about her sending that picture to Carlisle and Esme. I'm thinking that somehow James is going to see it and know where they're at and come after her.....crap! I hope that Edward isn't mad if she is pregnant. I mean, I can't truly see him being upset, but stranger things have happened. I'm really excited that you updated, and I can't WAIT until I see what happens next!!!
~Rachel
Date: 17 May 2010 4:37 AM Title: Uh-Oh
im happy that she is getting on with her life and excited to see if shes preggo! cant wait till the next chatper i lvoe this story
Date: 17 May 2010 2:20 AM Title: Uh-Oh
I love the idea of Bella pregnant, please update soon.
Date: 06 May 2010 3:24 PM Title: A Weekend to Remember
such a great story so far!! hope to see more very soon!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 10:26 PM Title: A Weekend to Remember
Sorry I would have reviewed more but I was reading this on my iphone and it didn't work.....anyways, thank you for writing a story with some actual "meat" in it. Sometimes Bella is over the top, but I do have to remember what she's been through! Anyways, I wish you were on fanfiction.net too so I can add this story to my community and let my subscribers know all about it!
Author's Response:
hey there, actually I am on ff.net, here's my link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/~tima
If you could rec me to your community and such, that would be fantastic! I think I'm flying under the radar with this story still...
Thanks a lot for your review, and I'm glad you're enjoying!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:43 PM Title: A Weekend to Remember
Great chapter and I am so glad Bella is working to get over James in every situation :)
Author's Response:
she certainly is trying, that's for sure. It is difficult to get over something so traumatic, and I'm trying to make it realistic...thanks for your kind words! Keep reading! :)
~Fatima
Date: 15 Apr 2010 11:33 AM Title: A Weekend to Remember
What a great chapter. I'm so glad Bella and Edward found each other.
Author's Response:
Me too!! I'm happy to write such great characters!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Date: 15 Apr 2010 8:38 AM Title: A Weekend to Remember
I agree with Edward James must pay for what he has done to Bella. I am so happy that she was able to get grove on LOL
Author's Response:
He definitely does!! He'll get his...and when he does, he'll thoroughly suffer! haha!
enjoy the next chapter! More loving ahead! :)
~Fatima
Date: 14 Apr 2010 10:40 PM Title: A Weekend to Remember
I love this story! I had to get through everything before I could stom to review. Edward is completely wonderful. Bella so deserves someone like him. As for James, I truly hope he gets what's coming to him. He needs to pay. Maybe I'll just play it out in my mind where he's stuck in a room with Edward, Emmett, Jasper and maybe Carlisle too. Heehee. He wouldn't walk out of there unscathed.....if he walked out at all. (Not that our favorite boys are killers, that's not what I meant.)
Author's Response:
absolutely loved your review. It made me smile as I read it on my BlackBerry... people around me were asking what I was smiling at!!
Our boys are certainly not killers, but hey, if they were going to be, James would be the one to practice on... hehe
I'm glad you found my story! Stay tuned!
Thanks again for the review!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 7:57 PM Title: A Weekend to Remember
what a loving chapter, It was what they really needed to get their relationship cemented.
It is going to be interesting to see how you bring James back in. I was wondering when he would show back up. I know there are going to be rough times ahead for Bella and Edward when he shows up.
Author's Response:
you are absolutely correct...rough times are ahead, but thankfully, it'll be because of outside influences, not due to relationship turmoil...
I'm glad you've found my story, and I hope you continue to enjoy.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:52 PM Title: Complete Disclosure
that was very sweet and i loved it iam so glad they told each other they loved each other
Author's Response:
thanks! I take great pride in this chapter, since so much was revealed...
thanks again for the reviews!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:15 PM Title: The Big Reveal
iam glad they are there i loved it
Author's Response:
It was a great chapter to write! :)
Thanks!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:53 PM Title: Birthday Surprises
loved it they are so sweet together
Author's Response:
they are indeed. I assume you mean Bella and Edward, not Esme and Carlisle, although they are pretty sweet together, too!
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:19 PM Title: Talking About the Past
really good iam hooked edward is great and bella is a very stong person
Author's Response:
woo hoo! I hooked another one! Fantastic! :)
Thanks for leaving me all the love!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:03 PM Title: Dinner at Edward's
poor bellai feel so bad that she has to think about all the bad things that ass did to her but i like that she wants to open up to edward a little about herself and work on an us with him
Author's Response:
I like the way you put that: "work on an 'us' with him". I really like that! I think I'll use it! :)
Thanks again for the love!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:45 PM Title: Promise of Things to Come
i can't wait till esme get there i love that bella is trying with edward
Author's Response:
Yes, she needs to move on. Thanks for reading and leaving me all the love!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:42 PM Title: A Weekend to Remember
I'm so happy for Bella & Edward!
Author's Response:
meeeee too!! :) :) Trust me, it was such a relief to write this chapter!!!! :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:55 PM Title: The 4th of July BBQ
i loved it iam so glad she talked to him i hope she finds out soon that hyis parents helped her
Author's Response:
Wow, all this love is making me giddy!
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:39 PM Title: Anxiety
loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:01 PM Title: Welcome to Forks
loved it
Author's Response:
I can see that! ;) thanks.
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:37 PM Title: A Cross Country Trip
loved it so very good
Author's Response:
thanks!! Glad you're enjoying!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:23 PM Title: A New Friend
loved it .it brought tears to my eyes esme is the best
Author's Response:
I agree!! She is definitely some kind of awesome. :)
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:04 PM Title: A Way Out
loved it james what a sweet guy carlisle rocks
Author's Response:
Carlisle is a great guy to write about, I must say.
Thanks!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2010 12:49 PM Title: A Loss
i really liked this first chapter James is avile evil man I hope he gets whats comming to him .Poor Marie(bella)
Author's Response:
I agree. He definitely will get what's coming to him, but it's going to be a while yet...
Thanks for reviewing!
~Fatima
Date: 03 Apr 2010 12:47 PM Title: Goodbyes
I like the story : ) Esme and Carlisle are wonderful, I can't wait to hear from them again.
I've got a little present here for Bella ; ) So she can remember her amazing hometown! ....
http://s608.photobucket.com/albums/tt161/Schneephoenix/?action=view¤t=CIMG0825.jpg
Author's Response:
awww thanks!! Beautiful pictures!! I'm sure she would get all teary-eyed at seeing them! :)
And thanks for reading. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2010 2:11 PM Title: Goodbyes
I would have never thought about the memory card being a possible threat.
Can't wait for their trip!
Author's Response:
It would definitely be, if those pictures fell into the wrong hands...
I also can't wait for their trip! And I'm nearly done writing it! :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Date: 01 Apr 2010 1:26 PM Title: Goodbyes
Really enjoying this story.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad!! Thanks for taking the time to let me know! It means a lot! :)
~Fatima
Date: 01 Apr 2010 7:55 AM Title: Goodbyes
So thankful for the chapter it was great the closness that Esme and Carlisle feel for Bella is so strong they are wonderful people. Been so excited for this trip. Dont get lost now ok
Author's Response:
Definitely looking forward to the reaction I get from the next chapter, since it'll be super long, and super exciting! ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Date: 01 Apr 2010 4:51 AM Title: Goodbyes
I so want Carlisle and Esme to move back to Forks!
Author's Response:
hehe you know, I had never thought of having them do that, but a few reviewers planted that seed in my mind, and now...hmmm...ya never know !!
Thanks!!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2010 9:54 PM Title: The Big Reveal
Oops, Esme...
Well, perhaps everything will be ok anyway :)
Author's Response:
you tell me! ;)
Things will eventually be ok...
Thanks again for your love! :)
Fatima
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2010 9:45 PM Title: Birthday Surprises
I love the name Bolt :) What a sweet dog :)
Edward is so sweet...and gorgeous and hot...mmmmm.....
Good chapter of course :)
Author's Response:
I loved it, too! I loved that movie, so it made good sense...
hehe of course he is hot! :) he IS Edward, after all! :)
Sooo sorry about only replying to these reviews now...I didn't see them until just now!!
Hope you're still hanging in there!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2010 9:33 PM Title: Talking About the Past
*lets out breath* I thought the shiver had to do with...well, you know...I know it's coming...*bites nails*
Author's Response:
hehe sorry! not just yet...hope you're still hanging in there...James is coming...gimme a few more chapters to bask in the love before bringing the ass*ole back...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2010 9:26 PM Title: Dinner at Edward's
You know, I think of SWTE everytime I hear a Wagner piece...
Yay for Bella tleling him more of what happened!
I have a very bad feelign though...
Author's Response:
hehe hopefully you know by now that the feeling was unfounded...maybe in a few chapters....
Thanks again for your review!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2010 9:19 PM Title: Promise of Things to Come
I know how scary it is for Bella to take a risk like this...I also know she won't be disappointed :)
I am wondering how she will react when she finds out that Esme and Carlisle are Edward and Alice's parents...hmm...
Author's Response:
hehe I love reading your reviews because you always question things and wonder aloud about things, and speculate! LOVE IT! :)
Thanks, as always, for your reviews!
~Fatima
Date: 31 Mar 2010 6:39 PM Title: Goodbyes
I wondered if it was a good idea to be taking all those pictures of Bella just in case James managed to get a glimpse of them so I'm glad Carlisle thought to give them the memory card. I can't wait for the next chapter and their weekend away.
Author's Response:
hehe I know, he thought of that just before leaving...their weekend away will be well-worth the wait!!
Stay tuned!!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2010 3:42 PM Title: Welcome to Forks
I am so glad Bella gets to maintain a sense of normalcy and that she still gets to teach :)
Yay for her new digs!!
Author's Response:
Yes, I wanted to find a way for her to maintain her independance, and that was the easiest way. Thanks for reading!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2010 3:41 PM Title: A Cross Country Trip
Wow...the lengths Esme and Carlisle have gone to...there ARE people that are that good in real life :)
Great chapter of course :)
Author's Response:
yes, it seems extreme, but after you read the later chapters, you know why they feel like they need to help her before it's too late...
Thanks!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2010 3:40 PM Title: A New Friend
Whoo hoo! I am so glad Marie...oops, Bella is getting out of that hellhole :)
Author's Response:
hehe careful of the slip! I'm sure Carlisle and Esme need to be careful of that slip, too!
Thanks!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2010 3:39 PM Title: A Way Out
I knew James was a callous bastard, but still...sheesh.
Thank goodness for guardian angels like Carlisle and Esme...
Author's Response:
Indeed! I think everyone agrees that they are guardian angels!
Thanks for reading!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2010 3:38 PM Title: A Loss
I'm glad I found this story...I wasn't sure, but I'm glad I gave it a chance because I really like it.
Of course, I would like to jump into the story and beat the ever loving tar out of James...but who wouldn't? :)
Author's Response:
hehe you aren't the first (or last) to tell me that you want to kick the crap outta James...hehe
I'm so glad you found my story, too! And I'm glad you gave it a chance...perhaps I need to fix up the plot summary to lure more people to take a chance on this thing!
Thanks, though!
~Fatima
Date: 15 Mar 2010 12:07 AM Title: A Loss
Hey, I just start to read your storie and besides the ass of James, I am sure I will like your storie. Your style to write is great (I am from germany)
I have to read the next one ;)
Love, Jay
Author's Response:
Well, thank you from Canada! I'm so glad you found my story and you're reading it! :) And your English is very good! XD
Take care, and thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:30 PM Title: Family Ties
Great story, I'm hooked! I'm so glad Bella and Edward have found each other. I'm guessing it won't be long until James comes back into the story because things seem to be going so well for Bella at the moment that it can't last. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're hooked! That was my intent! (insert evil laugh here)
James will come along and spoil their fun, but not before they get even closer and things are even more fantastic for them...
Stay tuned...
And thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 12:10 PM Title: Family Ties
oh wow! wow wow wow!!!
this is awesome - loving it!
cannot wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
awww thanks for your review! I'm so happy you like it THAT much ;)
Thanks for reading and sharing your feelings about my story. It means a lot!
~Fatima
Date: 25 Feb 2010 1:16 PM Title: Family Ties
this is really good cant wait to see when james comes back in the picture
Author's Response:
thanks a lot for sharing your feelings about my story. It means so much to know you like my story!!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Date: 25 Feb 2010 1:41 AM Title: Family Ties
im so glad that she is falling for edward and is letting him in ... cant wait to see waht happens next ! keep them comming
Author's Response:
I was extremely happy to write that, let me tell you!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima
Date: 24 Feb 2010 6:45 PM Title: A Way Out
James is a monster.
Author's Response:
That he is. Thanks for reading!
~Fatima
Date: 24 Feb 2010 6:45 PM Title: A Loss
Very interesting.
Author's Response:
thanks! Glad you think so!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Fatima