[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2014 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it! Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed this one :)
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
Awww, a happy ever after, the best way to end. I've really enjoyed this story, you're the only author that can make me like Jake and that's saying something as I am firmly Team Edward with Jasper a close second, lol.
Thanks for sharing.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the reviews, I'm glad you enjoyed the story and liked my Jake. He was my favourite at the time although I moved over to Team Edward eventually :)
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
Awww, everything's working out for them and the band. I'm so glad that Seth got to sing and with a little help from Jasper he got over his nerves.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 15
Awww, they're moving in together. I'm really happy that both Paul and Rose have changed their attitudes towards Jasper and Jake. Now we need to find someone for Alice.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 14
Jasper!!!! You can't kill him off, Jake wouldn't survive. Poor Leah, at least she'll heal really quickly.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2014 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
Well I wasn't expecting that, at all.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Paul's such a dick. I think he may be like that for the rest of his life. I'm so happy for Seth, his dreams are just starting to become reality.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
Urgh! Someone should put Rosalie down, she's so damn rude. Will the newspaper article lead Jasper's parents to him or is there enough distance between the two places that they won't see or hear about it?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2014 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
Uh-oh! Jake's just opened a whole other can of worms, the rest of the band might not be too happy about it but they can't expect him to live a secret life forever. I'm glad that some of the guys, at least, are okay with Jasper.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
I actually thought the talk with Paul went well, as well as it could have, it could have been so much worse.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
Damn, that was hot! I love that Jasper's made Jake's breakfast for him, it's just such a normal thing to do for him given the vampire/wolf situation, of course it's so sweet too.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well he really did make his decision, although I think he'd already made it beforehand. What's Paul going to do now, will he insist on Jake choosing between the band and Jasper?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my God, so he did play him - a little bit. Now the big question for Jake is whether he can trust him again. Maybe Jasper should put on a sort of display for Jake so he can begin to recognise the feeling when Jasper uses his talent.
Jane x
Author's Response:
Hi Jane, thank you for reading and reviewing this story. Glad that you're enjoying it so far. There is more drama ahead, but also sweetness :)
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2014 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well, Rose is her usual vile self. Jasper shouldn't have waited so long to feed, I hope him turning up means that he wants to be with Jake and he's not come to dump him because he feels guilty for what he did.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Jasper. Why has he let himself get so hungry? Was it because Jake didn't turn up when he said he would? I hope he doesn't turn him away and turn down going to live with the Cullen's, they could help him so much. I'm so glad that Jake's dad is so supportive knowing what Jasper is.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
Is Jasper using his empath power on Jake, does he even know he has a power. Embry has some valid concerns but I don't think Jasper's playing Jake.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2014 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
Jake is so taken with Jasper, so taken that he treated Jasper as a normal boy. It's sad that Jasper had to leave his family like that, they'll wonder and worry about him for the rest of their lives. It's a shame as well that Jasper ran off like that, I hope Jake can find him soon.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've never read anything with a Jasper and Jake pairing but I like this and I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
That was an unexpected, but really sweet, pairing. :) They seemed to fit together so well. You tweaked canon, but not enough to be too noticeable.
Thanks so much for writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading this one, I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 20 Jul 2012 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
great chapter !!! thank you for sharing
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, I'm happy you're enjoying the story :)
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really like this story! Can't wait for more. Love Jasper and Jake pair
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for reading and taking the time to review, I appreciate. Glad to hear you are enjoying the story :)