Date: 14 Mar 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 39
Hello. I love this story here! It is quite different with the Mike/Victoria scenario, etc. And I liked the anticipation of the sequel "Be Careful What You Wish For" story. I like how Angela met Bella at school and mentioned at lunch that she hoped that Dr. Cullen would adopt her. It makes sense, in an ironic way. I'm glad that you picked-up on that and decided to write these 2 stories revolving around that. Genius! Kudos for a well-written story! Thanks, Suzan Noerr
Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 39
I loved the ending and can not wait for the next story to begin. My favorite part of this chapter was Edward's talk with Carlisle when he went to get the ring. I am glad that Edward has made peace with Carlisle and realizes that he brought his pain on himslef.
I have started posting a story of my own called "Use Somebody". It is AH, but if you would like to check it out, I would love to hear your thoughts. Thanks :)
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
He said mean and hurtful things to her, and they are going to be pissed when they find out... BWAHAHAHA..
You know, it really was his fault. Jasper could have gotten himself under control once they had him out the door. It was Edward that pushed her into the damn coffee table.. yep.. it's offical.. I am pissed .. again..
but love your story..
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
OK.. I have read this before, but it was on fan ficition.. and you update so good that I wanted to re read it again.. hahaha. So I am off on a "Different Kind of Moon" journey today.. yipee. (Cause I am having writers block myself.. boo).
thanks for the wonderful story... AGAIN.. lol
See you next chapter.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 38
Wow, I wouldn't have thought about Bella's reaction to Edward changing Angela to be like that, but it made a lot of sense. He was so against changing Bella, but willingly changed Angela without a second thought. If I were Bella, I would be really hurt by that.
Date: 04 Jul 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 37
That did clear up the questions I had. I am glad Jake and the Cullens got there in time. And I am sooooo glad Bella was the one to rip Mike's head off. She deserved that honor.
Now a wedding and a new Angela...hmmm, I wonder how that will all turn out.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ah, poor Jasper. He takes everything to heart just as Bella does, and I hope she eventually finds a way to help him alleviate his guilt over the birthday fiasco. Well-written chapter - it's nice to get a glimpse into the mind of Carlisle. He was so short-changed in the books we never really got a chance to know him.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was a great beginning to the story. It always bothered me that the Cullens never seemed to truly understand exactly what they did to Bella emotionally by leaving, and having them brought face to face with the reality of it seems very realistic. I also never quite understood how Charlie could just sit there and watch his daughter waste away for four months like he did, it was one part of the saga that always rather bothered me, and I'm anxious to see where you go with the story from here.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 34
Oh my goodness! Okay, didn't see Mike doing that to Victoria, betting Bella is luring Mike away on purpose, and totally didn't expect Edward to turn Angela...Wow! Looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 33
I'm betting it's sparkly Bella! Please tell me we get to watch Mike get his ass kicked in the next chapter? Please??? We've been so good reading and reviewing. We have been so patient. Please give us what we all want sooooo badly?!?
Date: 07 Jun 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 32
Poor Angela. How are the Cullens ever going to get her out of this alive. And yes, I would love to kick Mike's ass, but I would rather see Bella do it. She has way more reason and there is the whole vampire strength thing going for her. ;)
Date: 06 Jun 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 32
Never did like Newton!!! Now I dislike him even more. Things are getting very intense, I wonder what Victoria will think when she realizes that Bella is no longer a mortal, but that she is a vampire, A newborn herself with more strength than she has. Great chapter. Hurry with more!!
Date: 23 May 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 30
Mmmmm, I love lemons! I love how Bella tempted Edward with his own words. Very hot.
I thought that was an excellent conversation they had before the lemon. I think it is so important to Bella that Edward see her as an equal partner and I am glad that Edward is not trying to keep Bella from learning how to fight to protect herself.
Date: 11 May 2010 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 29
I suppose it had to be Angela that was taken as even though Bella would have been drawn to help Lauren or what's her name, Angela has always appeared to have been a good and kind person to everyone she knows so none of the Cullens would wish for her to be harmed in any way. Wish it had been what's her name though, backstabbing false bitch!
Date: 03 May 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 28
I am getting white knuckles hanging on the edge here...love the story cant wait for you to continue...the writing is very good too ..and i like your style too.....you are not repetative as much as i have seen other authors be.....I hate when they go round and round with the guilt thing .. talk about kicking a dead horse over and over.. so your story is refreshing.