Date: 14 Mar 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 39
Hello. I love this story here! It is quite different with the Mike/Victoria scenario, etc. And I liked the anticipation of the sequel "Be Careful What You Wish For" story. I like how Angela met Bella at school and mentioned at lunch that she hoped that Dr. Cullen would adopt her. It makes sense, in an ironic way. I'm glad that you picked-up on that and decided to write these 2 stories revolving around that. Genius! Kudos for a well-written story! Thanks, Suzan Noerr
Date: 21 Mar 2012 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 27
Yay finally, I know they have a lot to talk about, but I hope it will be much easier to do now.
Date: 21 Mar 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 8
Holy crap! I thought that phone call was Edward, and not Jacob, and Charlie dead! Jesus. I never expected that. SMH
Date: 16 May 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 39
thanks for the story i enjoyed it!
Date: 16 May 2011 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 38
i am glad she called him on it. she forgives sometimes so easily
Date: 16 May 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 35
i knew it... she lied.. it's jacob i hope he doesn't kill bells
Date: 16 May 2011 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 34
i am sure bella did it to save ang and ed.. i know she doesn't mean it
Date: 16 May 2011 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 32
poor ang!!! i hope they get to her
Date: 16 May 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 31
well i was reading this on twiwrite and then i found her finished so i am finishing up here!!
Date: 21 Mar 2011 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
Jeez...talk about heart breaking!
Date: 31 Jul 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
totaly hooked...
reduced to tears in this chapter.lol
xx
Date: 15 Jul 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 39
Actually, it's an excellent way to end one store and begin another.
Date: 14 Jul 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 39
Great story!!!! I really look forward to the sequel. Loved the prologue and how you brought out Angela's statement about being adopted by the Cullens. Really good intro for the sequel.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 37
I'm happy that Edward and Bella are together again and that Jake and Bella will still be friends.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 39
It should be interesting to see how Angela reacts and how she adapts to her new life. I hope we get to hear a lot about how things are going to Bella and Edward and about their wedding and honeymoon.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 39
Thanks for a great read! Really enjoyed it! Already have you all set up on author alert for the new story! Really looking forward to it! Can't wait!
Sarah
Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 39
I loved the ending and can not wait for the next story to begin. My favorite part of this chapter was Edward's talk with Carlisle when he went to get the ring. I am glad that Edward has made peace with Carlisle and realizes that he brought his pain on himslef.
I have started posting a story of my own called "Use Somebody". It is AH, but if you would like to check it out, I would love to hear your thoughts. Thanks :)
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
YES.. he is a big jerk.. *throws a stone at his glass house*
HUMP!!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Got to love Carlisle. So good.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
He said mean and hurtful things to her, and they are going to be pissed when they find out... BWAHAHAHA..
You know, it really was his fault. Jasper could have gotten himself under control once they had him out the door. It was Edward that pushed her into the damn coffee table.. yep.. it's offical.. I am pissed .. again..
but love your story..
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
OK.. I have read this before, but it was on fan ficition.. and you update so good that I wanted to re read it again.. hahaha. So I am off on a "Different Kind of Moon" journey today.. yipee. (Cause I am having writers block myself.. boo).
thanks for the wonderful story... AGAIN.. lol
See you next chapter.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 39
Loved it very much and so excited to read the next step for all of them....
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 39
cant wait for the sequel
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 38
awww eddie.... she is just shocked and a little sad i think
Date: 09 Jul 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 38
Wow, I wouldn't have thought about Bella's reaction to Edward changing Angela to be like that, but it made a lot of sense. He was so against changing Bella, but willingly changed Angela without a second thought. If I were Bella, I would be really hurt by that.
Date: 05 Jul 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 37
Glad the chapter ended on some romance after all the angst. Will Angela and Daddy Carlisle bond over their religious faith I wonder, or will she turn into a dirty girl and try to seduce Ben?
Date: 04 Jul 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 37
That did clear up the questions I had. I am glad Jake and the Cullens got there in time. And I am sooooo glad Bella was the one to rip Mike's head off. She deserved that honor.
Now a wedding and a new Angela...hmmm, I wonder how that will all turn out.
Date: 04 Jul 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 37
YAY Everyone is ok, the treaty is intact and they are gonna get hitched. Woo Hoo. But what happens to Angela now? She will now be the odd man out like Edward was. looking forward to more!!
Date: 03 Jul 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 37
I'm gitty now ... i cant wait for edward and Bella to get married and do the honeymoon thing *sigh*
Date: 03 Jul 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 37
I'm actually a little teary-eyed here; great chapter...although I think Mike got off too easy :-)
Date: 03 Jul 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 37
Loved it very much and glad things are how they should be update when you can thanks.....
Date: 03 Jul 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 36
AHH!! I need more!!!! :)
Date: 03 Jul 2010 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 36
hope angela will be ok
Date: 03 Jul 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 36
I am a little confused. Is this chapter happeing at the same time as the last one? And if that is the case, did Jacob find Bella in the meadow because of Carlisle's call or just by luck?
Date: 03 Jul 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 36
very good story keep up the good work
Date: 03 Jul 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 36
So does this chapter happen "during" the last chapter or was Jacob already in the meadow without the Cullen's for warning? Can't wait for the next chapter!
Sarah
Date: 25 Jun 2010 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think Bella should have stayed human
Date: 25 Jun 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 35
Oh shit! The wolves are here! What is Jacob going to do about the new and improved Bella?
Date: 24 Jun 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 35
woo hoo.. Let Jakey take care of Sleezy Mike
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 35
Poor Edward! I want to go comfort him. I hope Jake will rescue Bella from Mike!
Date: 24 Jun 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 35
you are so NOT funny, Please hurry with an update you are just plain mean LOL
Date: 24 Jun 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 35
Arghhhhhh you did it again. LOL.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm glad to see that Charlie relented and is letting Bella live with the Cullens, and I'm looking forward to seeing how she interacts with the rest of the family when they arrive.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
Good chapter. It was nice to get Esme's point of view and watch Bella continue her path back to semi-normalcy.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter. It was nice to see Esme so involved right from the beginning and that Bella is making an effort at coming back on her own.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
Bella's thoughts were so piognant they actually made me tear up, empathizing with her feelings. You have quite the way with words, bringing your characters to life in a way that readers can easily identify with.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ah, poor Jasper. He takes everything to heart just as Bella does, and I hope she eventually finds a way to help him alleviate his guilt over the birthday fiasco. Well-written chapter - it's nice to get a glimpse into the mind of Carlisle. He was so short-changed in the books we never really got a chance to know him.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was a great beginning to the story. It always bothered me that the Cullens never seemed to truly understand exactly what they did to Bella emotionally by leaving, and having them brought face to face with the reality of it seems very realistic. I also never quite understood how Charlie could just sit there and watch his daughter waste away for four months like he did, it was one part of the saga that always rather bothered me, and I'm anxious to see where you go with the story from here.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 34
OMG! I am dying right now. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 34
ok this just has to be a ploy from Bella so she can try and save mike and teach him the cullen ways .. at least it better be LOL
Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 34
Oh my goodness! Okay, didn't see Mike doing that to Victoria, betting Bella is luring Mike away on purpose, and totally didn't expect Edward to turn Angela...Wow! Looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 34
OH shit, Edward just bit Angela. Bella has a plan to take care of Newton, but what is it and why is Edward not trusting her?
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 34
I thought this was a E/B story? Ugh, I am not a Newton fan by any means lol
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 34
Oh crap! Angela is going to kick Edward's ass when she stops burning!
I would bet anything that Bella told Mike to take her away so neither of them would feed on Angela.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 34
of course bella is going to draw the psychp away
Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 33
Bella I assume or maybe they turned or kidnapped someone else she didnt know about
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 33
Short but sweet, the stories really moving now.
Date: 14 Jun 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 33
ugg my fingers are getting tired hanging on the edge ...plzz update soon
Date: 13 Jun 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 33
I'm betting it's sparkly Bella! Please tell me we get to watch Mike get his ass kicked in the next chapter? Please??? We've been so good reading and reviewing. We have been so patient. Please give us what we all want sooooo badly?!?
Date: 13 Jun 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 33
Hmmmm....Bella? Glad they talked Bella out of going in alone. Great chapter! Next should definitly be an interesting one!
Sarah
Date: 12 Jun 2010 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 32
Of course I wanna kick Mike's ass. I always wanna kick his ass! The idiot! GAH
Date: 11 Jun 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 32
Oh Angela help is coming. It hopefully will work out. Mike's an ass. Can't wait for the cullan's to hand it to him. Right before Bella rips his head off. Meg
Date: 07 Jun 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 32
Poor Angela. How are the Cullens ever going to get her out of this alive. And yes, I would love to kick Mike's ass, but I would rather see Bella do it. She has way more reason and there is the whole vampire strength thing going for her. ;)
Date: 07 Jun 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 32
found your story today and just finished .. ugh what a place to leave off.. I need more :)
Date: 07 Jun 2010 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 32
Mike needs to get beaten up with his own arms and Victoria needs to be told exactly how Mike feels about. That once again the men that was suppose to love her wanted Bella even more.
Date: 06 Jun 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 32
just kicking his ass is too good for him
Date: 06 Jun 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 32
Never did like Newton!!! Now I dislike him even more. Things are getting very intense, I wonder what Victoria will think when she realizes that Bella is no longer a mortal, but that she is a vampire, A newborn herself with more strength than she has. Great chapter. Hurry with more!!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 31
I bet they send those pics to Bella
Date: 31 May 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 31
nothing good is what they are up to!!
Date: 30 May 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 31
Fun fight practice ... love that Bella took down Em.
Poor Ang ... hope those pics don't work Bella up too much. She needs to keep her wits about her.
Date: 30 May 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 31
I feel so bad for Angela. The nicest girl in Forks doesn't deserve this. I hope Bella kicks both Mike's and Victoria's ashes. Then her and Alice can dance around the ashes. I love that visual! LOL ;)
Date: 24 May 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 30
I so loved the memory she had of their kiss in her bedroom. Looking forward to them getting Victoria and having some more lemony goodness. Hurry with the next chapter!!
Date: 23 May 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 30
Excellent scene. I love that Edward is building back Bella's trust in him.
Would love to see more input from Jasper and Carlisle.
Date: 23 May 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 30
I love this story can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 23 May 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 30
Mmmmm, I love lemons! I love how Bella tempted Edward with his own words. Very hot.
I thought that was an excellent conversation they had before the lemon. I think it is so important to Bella that Edward see her as an equal partner and I am glad that Edward is not trying to keep Bella from learning how to fight to protect herself.
Date: 22 May 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 30
Yum I love the way you think update when you can thanks....
Date: 11 May 2010 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 29
I suppose it had to be Angela that was taken as even though Bella would have been drawn to help Lauren or what's her name, Angela has always appeared to have been a good and kind person to everyone she knows so none of the Cullens would wish for her to be harmed in any way. Wish it had been what's her name though, backstabbing false bitch!
Date: 10 May 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 29
Poor Angela. I wonder if the Cullens will get to her in time or maybe be forced to change her to saver her. Hmmm, that would be interesting.
Date: 10 May 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 29
Bella is doing exactly what they hoped she would
Date: 10 May 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 29
aww poor Angela.
Date: 10 May 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 29
Oh no that's so sad, poor Angela. Hope you update again soon
Date: 06 May 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 28
This is probably one of the most interesting twist I've read. I like it when it's unpredictible. Amazing job, please hurry. I am hanging on a limb now. Thx
Date: 06 May 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 28
I've really enjoyed your story. I can't wait for the next chapter. THANKS!
Date: 03 May 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 28
I am getting white knuckles hanging on the edge here...love the story cant wait for you to continue...the writing is very good too ..and i like your style too.....you are not repetative as much as i have seen other authors be.....I hate when they go round and round with the guilt thing .. talk about kicking a dead horse over and over.. so your story is refreshing.
Date: 03 May 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh man, anything that has Alice that freaked out can not be good. I am surprised that she hasn't seen anything about Angela being missing yet.
Another excellent chapter!
Date: 03 May 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 28
I'm glad that Bella is holding her own against Edward and not immediately submitting to him as usual. Can't wait to see what Evil Newton and his Ginger Princess are cooking up against the Cullens. MWAHAHA
Date: 03 May 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 28
It can't ever be easy for these two
Date: 03 May 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 28
Wow, the hits just keep on coming for them don't they? Lol! Hope you update again soon
Date: 03 May 2010 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 28
Ugh can we just castrate mikey and behead vikki. LOL
Date: 02 May 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 27
Haha Emmett is so gonna take the mick for Bella marking Edward lol. Nice!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 27
Even thou this story is 27 chapters it moves pretty quickly. Bella seems to forgive so easily. Good read!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 27
woo-hoo!!!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 27
LOVED IT!!!!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 27
Yes, you made us wait for this, but that was a good Bella/Edward lemony moment.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 27
That was a very tasty lemon. I love fiestly Bella especially when she pinned Edward to the bed and later when she bit him. Very hot!