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Reviewer: EdwardCullensMate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 27

Just reread entire story love it as much as the first time.

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 27

Great chapter can't wait for more

Reviewer: Marybell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 26

I started reading this last night and only got 4 hrs sleep I haven't been able to put it down!!! I love ur story it's very well written... Looking forward to reading some more!!!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 25

Wonderful cliffhanger.  Surprised over Newton's actions and his obsession for Bella.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 26

Ahhh, I loved it.  I am so glad they have reconnected. 

I love that Carlisle and Esme gave her the family crest necklace now and didn't wait till Edward and her found their way back to each other.  It told Bella that she is as much a part of the family as anyone else with or without Edward.

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 26

so damn sweet!

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 25

I love Emmett he's so snuggly, but I just can't think of Mike in any kind of sexual relationship..Eeww..he's just so vanilla it's a turn off.

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 25

i knew it

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 24

hmmmm what could she be thinking?

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 23

stupid stupid boy

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 22

Jasper was the best one to find her

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 21

go Bella!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 20

now she's pissed

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 19

stupid boy

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 18

she really did forget

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 17

I was wondering if she'd forgotten him

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 25

I knew he would go after Angela.  Poor thing, just cause she was nice to Bella, now she is the worm on the hook.  I think Emmett should be allowed to take Mike down.  He would have the most fun with it.  Edward will be too busy with Victoria.  OR, are you gonna let Bella batle Victoria???  That would be awesome!!!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 16

glad things went well

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 15

Edward is going to get his ass kicked when Bella wakes up!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 14

oh crap

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 13

calm down Carlisle

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 12

go Bella!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 11

say yes!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 10

crazy wench

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 9

this could be very bad

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 8

oh no

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 7

woo-hoo!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 6

I can't wait for Edward to get a beat down

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 5

I can't blame him either

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

I think Charlie just might let Carlisle and Esme do what they think is best for Bella at this point

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 3

Carlisle to save the day!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

love Carlisle!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

oh wow

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 25

ugh  I knew it   Poor Angela.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 24

oh no....he's gonna grab angela.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 24

We are always counting!!!

Loved this chapter.  I am so glad that Alice stepped in.  Someone needed to stop all this self-blame fuckery between E&B.  It was never going to get any better.  Hopefully now they can find a middle ground and start to heal.

As for the bait..I wonder, could Angela Webber be the bait Mike is thinking of???

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 23

I love Edward but he needs to stop carrying the weight of the world.  I am glad Carlisle is there to force some sense into him.

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved the story. Reviewing on my phone has not been working. Can't wait for them to begin to work together against Vic and mike. Meg

Reviewer: sheilan77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 12

Sweet she finally a vampire!!

Reviewer: sheilan77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 8

OMG is all I can say...didn't see that coming, Good Job

Reviewer: sheilan77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 3

That was an intense chapter, love it

Reviewer: sheilan77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow great start ; )

 

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 22

Poor Bella.  That really sucks that she killed that trapper not realizing it was a human.  So far immortality kinda sucks for her, doesn't it?

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 22

Finallly they meet again.  I liked that Bella confronted Edward, but she does need to follow Jasper's advice and talk it out with Edward.  He made a huge mistake by acting like he was the only person who made the decisions in their relationship.  Hopefully she gives a chance to explain and forgives him.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 22

Awww, i so want to hug Jasper now, that is so sweet, what he did for Bella! Can't wait for the next chapter, hope you post it soon

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 21

OMG!!!!  That was intense and heartbreaking.  I don't know how she can forgive him.  And how will the family co-exist while they are at such odds.

I can't blame Bella for feeling the way she does and in a way, I hope Edward suffers the feeling of rejection like he inflicted upon her 6 months earlier.

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 21

I like angry Bella, but I also want to see "forgiving Bella".

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 21

Ugh, great chapter!  All the emotions she should really feel, but I hate when Edward hurts!  Can't wait for more!

Sarah

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 21

Oh no that is not good. I hope she doesn't hate him forever. Please update soon. 

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 21

What the hell that must be the new born in her but i trust you to fix this please update when you can thanks....

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 21

Yeah, Bella has a backbone and gives Edward what he deserves for once. Don't let him off the hook too easily. And if you can sneak in a hot affair for Bella with Jasper I'd be most appreciative.

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved Emmett's otter hunt, made me smile. LOL. Please write more soon.



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it....more coming soon!! :)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 19

I'm loving the fact that you have a kinda sinister plan for Bella with Mike as it will be interesting to see that plan out along with the Victoria situation and Bella and Edward. Hope you update soon!



Author's Response:

:)  Yep...Mike has big plans.....actually when I wrote him into the story I originally thought he was going to bring out the best in Vic, but turns out she has brought out the worst in him.....

Reviewer: 420bmx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 18

please finish this stoy its so good. i looking forward to the rest.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 17

Oh no, she doesn't remember him.  I can feel the angst coming from a mile away.....ugh

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 17

Nice Chapter! :-)

Reviewer: genuinef250 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 17

she dont remember him???? maybe she will never remember him... a clean slate... maybe

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 15

Addicted to this story. It's very interesting and captivating and i am sooooo looking forward to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love the update! :)

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it very much can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks for sharing....

Reviewer: SouthernBelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loving this more and more with every word! So glad to have Edward back!! :) Also glad his little "temper tantrum" is over ;-) Love. It.

Reviewer: smiley2204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

nice chapter, but now I'm really curious to know what Edward is thinking...please go on soon!

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 14

I didn't think Carlisle would take action until Edward had arrived. I also thought Bella might not want to join the family since Edward "didn't want" her. I'm interested in seeing where you'll take us next. Victoria's on a rampage.

Reviewer: soton Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 12

So glad that Carlisle was strong enough to offer Bella the chance to really join his family.  Can hardly wait for Edward's reaction!  ;p

Reviewer: soton Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

Poor, poor  Bella!  :( 

I hated that Edward left Bella in NM and although I am a huge Edward fan I really wanted to kick his ass for being so immature and self centred.  I was also angry that the Cullens' left Bella - especially Alice!

So glad that in your story Carlisle went back to look for Bella to make sure that she is alright.

Reviewer: memorylane Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

She's so lost, my heart breaks for her!  Thank god for Carlisle.  Going off the timeline in the books am i right in thinking that Edward is on his way back to Bella?

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 13

I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 12

Holy Hell!! I love it! :)

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 11

Awesome! :)

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 8

Lovely twist! :)

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 7

Who new they could be so hot?! :)

Brilliant job on that lemon! :)



Author's Response:

LOL - glad you liked it!! Have to admit...some people were turned off saying it was too much like walking in on their parents..LMAO

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love papa C's POV! :)



Author's Response:

Actually Carlisle's POV is my favorite to write...I love his character - it is so strong, calm and endearing!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Simply brilliant! :)



Author's Response:

Wow!!  Much appreciated - so glad you like it!

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 11

Love it that Carlisle has asked Bella if she wants to be turned now!

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 9

Enjoying your story so far. love the CPOV and the EPOV.

Reviewer: D2woodworth Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 11

Such a great story! Cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

:)  Thanks so much!!

Reviewer: reddog25770 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

Great story.  Can't wait for the return of Edward. 



Author's Response:

:)  Anticipation is always the best part though!! LOL

Reviewer: SouthernBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

This is soooo good!! Please update! I love this story! :-)

Author's Response: Thanks so much...glad you like it!!

Reviewer: Geeklove64 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

The story is getting stronger with each chapter.  The pacing is excellent.  Keep up the good work.  This is a great read.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!

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