Date: 02 Nov 2016 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 63
Just reread...and cried all over again...in all the same places.
This really is a stunning piece of work
Thank you again. T
Date: 20 Sep 2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 63
This was so amazing! I've really loved it. I wish there was more!
Date: 18 Sep 2016 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 23
I loved this chapter!
Date: 18 Sep 2016 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
I know, right? I always feel so awful for Jacob; he was basically the perfect guy and his only crime was that he wasn't Edward. And I love Edward, I really, really do (all the more in Edward/Bella fanfiction), but a part of me will always choose Jacob, too.
Date: 17 Sep 2016 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait to read this story!
Date: 24 Feb 2016 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 63
Thank you for writing and sharing your story. I don't usually read angst so it has taken me a while to get around to this, but I'm so glad I finally did--it was wonderful. I'm looking forward to the possible future take as I feel like I need just a little bit more to feel complete.
Date: 16 Jan 2016 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 63
What an amazing, brilliantly written story! I know that you probably won't see this, as I've join the party way after it finished. Seriously though this story totally blew me away.Thank you so much for sticking with it when you were having such a tough time.
Date: 21 Oct 2015 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 63
WOW!!! AMAZING!!! story ;) very understandable ending ;) thanks so much for completing and posting it on here because i 1st read up till it was on hiatus on ffn and i didn't finish it on there but 'yay me!' i hope your rl is treating you well i'm going to read the extras' of this now ;D
Date: 12 Aug 2015 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 56
and here i thought edward was so smart
Date: 12 Aug 2015 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 53
uh oh, i think wisp's temper may be coming out soon
Date: 12 Aug 2015 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 49
my stupid internet connection wouldn't let me leave comments, kept kicking off-line when i tried. i tried to comment and rate each chapter even with a smiley just because i appreciate all your hard work
Date: 10 Aug 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 22
wonder if i said "ow" it'd get the kids to do laundry? lol
Date: 10 Aug 2015 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
what a sick creep
Date: 10 Aug 2015 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
hope James doesn't get off easy with this deal
Date: 10 Aug 2015 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 12
aww i hope getting her a pet doesn't backfire
Date: 10 Aug 2015 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
poor edward, he's trying to tow the line isn't he? damn that dr for putting those thoughts in his head
Date: 13 May 2015 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 17
I write the same way, with out outlines. Just a vague idea of where the story should go. I think it is more exciting that way. Like I truly am going on the journey with the reader. I really love yoyr story here.
Date: 05 Mar 2015 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 63
Hello, Cris, I want you to know that your fiction WISP has been voted the 3rd best fiction of 2014. Here is the link : http://twifanfictionrecs.com/
Congratulations ! I voted for WISP every day.
This fiction is fantastic, and certainly one of the best I have ever read.
Take care of you.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was the most touching story i've read on this site and on fanfic! I cried in so many parts and smiled at many more. Thank you for sharing this amazing story. :) Despite the 63 chapter length, I powered through too quickly because I was absolutely addicted to knowing what was next for Wispy.. I mean Bella now.. and Edward.
I cannot express enough gratitude I have for your writing. Thank you, thank you!
xx
Date: 29 Dec 2014 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 63
Wow. I absolutely loved this story. Thank you for writing it.
Date: 21 Dec 2014 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 63
This was such a wonderful story! Thank you so much for writing. There is only one section in the story that i was disappointed with, "They'd decided not that long ago that it was best they did not have children." While I understand at that moment in time they were no where near ready to have children, but to close the door so firmly when Bella was still in her early 20's seemed a but too final for 2 people who always came through so much. To see how much the characters came though in such a short time and not think that 10 years down the road they might be ready to have children was a bit odd. That aside, your writing and story telling is wonderful. Thank you again for sharing your gift. Regards, Ruth
Date: 26 Nov 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 63
Wow! I'm sad to see this come to an end but am glad the way it has come to an end! Can't wait for some futuretakes
Date: 25 Nov 2014 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 63
Thanks awesome chapters awesome story
Date: 24 Nov 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 61
What a great Thanks giving gift to receive, the completion of this story!;-))
Date: 24 Nov 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 63
What a great wrap up. I cried my eyes out. Haha
thanks so much for writing.
Date: 24 Nov 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 63
I have been reading your story from the start. It was wonderful, heart-breaking, happy and sometimes overwhelming. This is what makes a great story. Best of luck in the future.
Date: 24 Nov 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 63
Ohhhhh what a sweet ending! Thank you so much for completing this story and not abandoning it. You creating such a wonderful story that was at times horrifying but ultimately beautiful and triumphant. I look forward to seeing what the future holds for Bella and Edward.
Date: 23 Nov 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 63
Oh my you have made this such a wonderful story. Simply incredible. I can't wait for the next installment.
Date: 23 Nov 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for writing this wonderful story. Sometimes I found it very difficult to read, I'm sure it was more difficult to write it. Looking forward to future out-takes.
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 63
Loved this story. Looking forward to reading the futuretakes
Date: 23 Nov 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 63
Crying here, not sure if they're happy tears for little Wisp or sad tears for this amazing story ending. Feel Wisp has been a part of my life for a very long time. Truly hope to see more outtakes (loved Disneyland) or dare I suggest sequel... Would really like to see Felix get his due. Regardless of what you decide I would be thrilled to read anything you are willing to share. I have said it before but you are an amazing storyteller and I am honored to have been allowed to read your words. Thank you and I hope that this is not goodbye. Wishing you all the best. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 23 Nov 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 63
I can not begin to tell you the enjoyment this story has given me since its inception! You never shied away from the truthes of life and yet have us a dramatic, warm, overwhelming love story. Not just the love between Wisp and Edward, but all forms of it : Mother/ daughter, sister/sister, big brother/ beloved little sister, friend/ to friend, and even devoted professional helpers/ to their charge - oh! And let's not forget Pet! The instinctive love exchanged between a loving, intelligent pet and her devoted human! How fitting that it was Pet who began Edward's path to finding Bella again! Thank you for this magnificent journey through the human mind, spirit, and soul! It was outstanding!
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 63
I wish Felix was found but I like the ending. I would like to think the futuretake would really happen.
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 62
How frightened Bella must have been when she stole the car and ran like that. That was actually rather clever.
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 61
This was such a hard chapter. Poor Bella and Edward.
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 60
I'm so glad you are finishing here too. I think I've been reading this from the beginning. I recommended the story on Twilight Fanfiction Completed Stories. I think it's a wonderful story. Thanks for a great heartbreaking and heartwarming love story. I for one love the ending. Don't know if I wil review until the end on TWCS as I as rereading the whole thing on my reader right now too. Thanks again.I know this has been very difficult to write.
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 63
Oh, I don't want it to be over! This story grabbed me from the very first chapter. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I look forward to future takes!
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 62
This is so sad!
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 63
This story was awesome! You did an excellent job!
Date: 17 Nov 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 17
EReaders are wonderful things. They bring our fantasy worlds and knowledge and entertainment with us where ever we go. They have one glaring failure in this instance, however. You tend not to review and that's a sad thing.
I recently starting reading this story (and may have to 'acquire' it again from this site as opposed to FFN where I believe I originally got it) and have yet to review. This is due a great deal to the Kindle and partially to circumstance. Some of that circumstance? I haven't wanted to stop and take the time to review.
I'm finding fresh, new approaches with your story though the premise may have been attempted by others. Your characters have certainly captured my attention and I'm enjoying the depth I find in them. Thank you for giving Rose true believability and 'genuineness' for lack of a better word. This chapter was particularly poignant and showed her in an excellent light.
I'm off to continue reading and just had a chance (and wanted) to let you know how much I'm enjoying this. Your story has quite the reputation in this fandom and it is well deserved.
Thank you for all your hard work,
Ginger
Date: 12 Oct 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please update soon. I read this story in one day. Wonderful writing. Can't wait for more.
Date: 03 Oct 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 59
Thanks good chapters
Date: 03 Oct 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 59
It amazes me how writers create new worlds so different from our own, such as twilight, Avatar, Star Wars, etc. but what's more amazing to me is when a writer creates people so complex and every aspect of that character is brought out. Creating a world is not as challenging, I would imagine, as creating a mind, a body. I would imagine a sort of God complex comes over a writer in regards to their characters. You create this life, how it looks, how it moves, how it thinks. I wish I had the talent that you and other great writers have.
Date: 03 Oct 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 59
I'm glad that you're here. I reviewed on fanfic sorr not here too. Are you not updagting there any more(not that I blame you) I'm ohtobeyoung there by the way. I don't care where you update just so I find you. Love this story. Thanks. Gland she's growning up.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 59
OMG! This is the worst place for me to run out of chapters! This is such an interesting story- i don't read fanfiction as much as i used to but this is the one that i still read, even when some times i think i might not like it anymore i start reading it again and you have me hooked. I'm really excited to see where this story will go!
Date: 01 Oct 2014 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 59
Wow, talk about putting it out there. I can't wait to read more.. This has been awesome reading all these chapters, I've missed these characters. Thanks for writing.
Date: 28 Sep 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 59
i think that Bella could be a kidnapped heiress from Europe who is found by her family and wisked away. meanwhile, edward realizes how much he misses her and loves her romantically. a couple of years later after she receives all the help multibillions could help, she becomes a "normal" confident young lady who meets edward again. at first, bella would be aloof but nice to everyone including edward, but as edward puts his heart on the line and confesses himself, she finally sees that she does still love him.
this story is so hertbreaking...you have tackled a monumental task of tackling this and doing a great job..
can't wait for the next update...ty
Date: 28 Sep 2014 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 59
What a fine kettle of fish we have here! Poor Edward and poor Bella. Both stuck in confused feelings and uncharted territory. I love that Bella is able to communicate better and is blunt and demanding. She's grown so much and it's a credit to Edward and everyone else's involvement. I think we all knew this was coming it's just so incredibly awkward. I'm not sure when you'll give us another update, but I'll be waiting! I appreciate your commitment to finishing this story. So many people are quick to abandon their work, so take your time we'll be here awaiting the next installment!
Date: 28 Sep 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 59
update update update update update update update update update update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 27 Sep 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 59
Oh my I love this story. Please please please don't keep us hanging for long.
Date: 27 Sep 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 59
update soon
Date: 27 Sep 2014 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 59
Amazing! Please update as soon as you possibly can, I'm an emotional wreck right now.
Date: 27 Sep 2014 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 59
Wow, big change in W...Bella. Not sure who to feel more sorry for, Edward or Bella. As always love this story. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 27 Sep 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 59
Oops. Got these already. Were you teasing us? Lol
Date: 27 Sep 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 59
Wow. Leaps and bounds-no wonder Edward is feeling the whiplash. I cannot wait for more!
Date: 27 Sep 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 58
for chapter 59....he is going to break her heart if Tanya stays the weekend and she has to leave....I wouldn't be surprised if she ran away when she is at Esme's
Date: 27 Sep 2014 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 58
This one left me crying.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 55
Oh my God, that is so incredibly sad. Poor Wisp.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 59
Wow this is an excellent story.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 59
Tanya doesn´t deserve anything, she´s selfish, and finding out that Bella is able to talk now will only make her trye and persuade Edward to get rid of her, I hope something happens (not really bad) that makes Edward open his eyes to the real Tanya, he doesn´t even love her, i remember him saying and telling her that they were not good together, so why is she even sleeping there, why is he even having sex with her, it just leads her on, as much as i hate Tanya Edward isn´t being fair towards her either...Eward needs to wake up, maybe Bella should stay with Esme or Rosalie for a while, maybe helping with the baby might make her feel helpful, and her absence will make Edward realize she is more important to him than just the girl he rescued
Date: 10 Jul 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
Something tell me that Charlie is the Key
Date: 16 Jun 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 49
For some reason my page has not shown updates so I haven't read this since around chapter 45 and I just happened to check and see allll these updates and I've started back. So glad i checked cause I have really missed it.
Date: 03 May 2014 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 53
Welcome back!!! So excited to see this update in my inbox!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 53
Not sure Tanya visiting is such a good idea!!! Trouble ahead.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 53
Wow, I have missed these characters dearly. I really love the way you write. And to all the haters that you get reviews from just hit the delete button. No one needs that kind of negativity in their lives. Keep your head and the post coming ;-)
Date: 26 Apr 2014 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 53
Thanks for the updates, love to find out how this will turn out. I can't help but imagine that if someone broke in to jail & killed James that it would be a piece of cake to get into a cabin & get Isabella. Go thru a window. I would also think if they are worried about James talking they would be worried about her doing the same.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 52
How does a prison not have cameras that would show someone from the outside coming in?
Date: 25 Apr 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 53
thank you for the update..I'm not sure if letting Tanya come to the cabin was the right move...we will see how Wisp reacts to Tanya presense...until you post again
Date: 25 Apr 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 50
enjoying the updates.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 49
Your back!;-D))
Date: 24 Apr 2014 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 49
Great to have wisp back. Xx
Date: 24 Apr 2014 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 53
I would be glad to have some news of you, to know that you are better, and if not, to know how I can help you. You have my support. And your fiction is amazing, you are very talented. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks good chapters
Date: 24 Apr 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 53
As a LMT, I appreciate the disclaimer!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 50
Thank You, Thank You, Thank You for finally updating!!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 49
I'm so happy Wisp is back! Thank you so very much for continuing! She is. A treasure!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 49
Wow, thanks for the update! I have missed these characters.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 53
I love this story!!! You are a great writer!!! Don't give up!!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 48
I simply love this storyline! You can't help but wonder how Wisp and Edward will survive all of the horrors that are slowly being revealed. You are such a prolific writer, and you breathe life into your characters and all the nuances of their lives. I BREATHE Edward's concern and Feel Wisp's pain. These characters are so amazing.
Date: 24 Jan 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 48
Please finish this story! It's amazing and I loveeee it!
Date: 02 Jan 2014 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 48
Oh no, that's another complication in an already totally complicated situation. And he dreamed about Bella :) At least, I hope it was Bella, I hope Wisp gets to that point. I just hopw that the rest of the dream wasn't foreshadowing... they're suppose to find the tatooed man, not him find her! I hope we get an update soon :)
Date: 25 Sep 2013 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 48
Update soon please! I miss them!
Date: 03 Aug 2013 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 47
Amazinggggg I love it up date soon
Date: 13 Jul 2013 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 48
love it
Date: 10 Jul 2013 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
Uh oh! A kitten??! Oh my...this will be interesting cuz said kitten will need a collar...& a litter box...food/water bowls...possibly a leash...