




Date: 22 Jun 2022 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love love your stories .....
Date: 22 Jun 2022 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love love your stories .....





Date: 11 Feb 2022 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have always loved this story, so very glad to find it on here, thank you for sharing your creativity!





Date: 11 Feb 2022 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have always loved this story, so very glad to find it on here, thank you for sharing your creativity!
Date: 11 Feb 2022 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have always loved this story, so very glad to find it on here, thank you for sharing your creativity!





Date: 25 May 2021 1:02 AM Title: Outtake #1
good finish for Charlie





Date: 18 May 2021 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 22
very nice





Date: 18 May 2021 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 22
very nice





Date: 18 May 2021 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 21
If you truly love someone you choose them because ultimately parents die and leave you





Date: 11 May 2021 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love this edward





Date: 09 May 2021 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
some nice subtle changes from the original





Date: 09 May 2021 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
some nice subtle changes from the original





Date: 23 Jun 2015 12:21 AM Title: Outtake #2
AWESOME!!! i LOVED this story even the second time of reading ;) thanks so much for posting it on here for us ;D





Date: 05 Sep 2014 10:17 PM Title: Outtake #2
OMG I can just picture it.
TY for writing and sharing
Date: 05 Sep 2014 10:12 PM Title: Outtake #1
Poor Charlie. Glad he has Sue and Marie. lots of fishing in his future? lol
Date: 05 Sep 2014 10:09 PM Title: Epilogue
LOVED the part with her tearing off Skankya's arm. Nice view of the family and its travels and adventures.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 39
nice to see a normal change for Bella. Yey for first hunt
Date: 05 Sep 2014 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 38
hmm thought there was a mystery POV? Maybe I missed it. Poor Carlisle.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 37
woo hoo for Wedding and him teasing her.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 36
Glad she agreed to go to prom.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 35
Good Plans. Glad she went to see Renee and she had good advice for a change.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 34
what a nice V-day. Glad Charlie hasn't been pushing the Jake stuff again.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 33
ugh Newton is pathetic.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 32
Glad they are talking things out. Alice is gonna have a cow. LOL
Date: 05 Sep 2014 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 31
awww sweet proposal
Date: 05 Sep 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 30
ooh yummy chapter
Date: 05 Sep 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 29
So wonderful that she is wanting to learn all about his past.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 28
wonderful first time. you get a happy lemon dance for that
Date: 05 Sep 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 27
Glad Rose is back and being a nicer person. Love this more self assured Bella
Date: 04 Sep 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 26
glad the dinner went well. At least he seems to have gotten over the Jake thing....or so I hope. aww for the cottage.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 25
Glad he got Em to call her. Awww for Bella's mate moment
Date: 04 Sep 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 24
LOVED IT. Glad Rose got put in her place.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
ooh Mate Moments.... I can imagine some interesting possibilities there. Rose needs to get over herself.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 22
what a sweet gift and gesture she made. Rose can have her opinion, but she doesnt need to be a biatch about it.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad she is thinking things out. I do agree with Carlisle about her taking care of people and not many taking care of her
Date: 02 Sep 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 20
ugh Hate that Charlie is so pushy about Jake. Go Smexy Bella!!





Date: 02 Sep 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
aww wonderfully sweet chapter. At least Charlie smiled.
Date: 01 Sep 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
Glad the are talking things out. yummy little lime and ILY's
Date: 01 Sep 2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
Glad they are talking things out. Also glad that E told Em about Rose's attitude.
Date: 31 Aug 2014 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
soooo Glad Bella told her off. What a nasty biatch
Date: 31 Aug 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
Em def needs a filter. Glad carlisle and Jasper were there at least.
Date: 31 Aug 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
ROFL for Jessica getting sacked down. OMG Em you are so evil sometimes.
Date: 31 Aug 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
Well that went well. Wonder how long till Billy comes a knockin now.
Date: 31 Aug 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
ugh Always hated how Charlie tried pushing her to Jacob, esp after the forced her to kiss him with his whole "fighting until your heart stops breathing" crap
Date: 31 Aug 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wonderful birthday. hmmm wondering if she had a visit from Billy or Jake?
Date: 31 Aug 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 10
Of course Rose would be the negative Nelly. Great word on the project and the geo caching was a great idea.
Date: 31 Aug 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loving this Edward. Alice is a meddler but she's being a good meddler thus far.
Date: 29 Aug 2014 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
Awww so sweet they are getting to know each other better.
Date: 29 Aug 2014 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
Glad E has someone to talk with.
Date: 29 Aug 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hmmm sounds like someone needs to have a talk with fig newtons parents.
Date: 29 Aug 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
Lol for bubbly Alice. Naughty girl hiding her thoughts.
Date: 29 Aug 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
Interesting pov. Love how much she notices. Ugh for Jessica. Hate girls like that.





Date: 28 Aug 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
Aww I like this less broody Edward. Have a feeling Fig Newton is going to get annoying pretty quickly.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
Glad Esme and Carlisle talked to him. I like the changes you are doing to the traditional Twilight.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful start. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Date: 20 May 2014 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 12
Charlie should mind his own business. Bella don't love jacob got over it.
Date: 04 Jan 2014 5:36 PM Title: Outtake #2
That was awesome! Great writing.





Date: 18 Jun 2013 2:09 AM Title: Outtake #2
What a way to end a story!! I have loved this soo much. I have literally laughed and cried throughout. You have done an amazing job. Off to see if you have any other awesome stories. :)
Date: 24 Feb 2013 2:58 AM Title: Outtake #2
Fantastic story I loved it!!!! I am glad for once to see a story based only on the Cullens and not the wolves and Volturi!!!!
Author's Response:
Aww..... sooo sweet.. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!! I also like readiing stories where the wolves and Volturi are nowhere to be found!!
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 27 Jul 2012 1:46 PM Title: Outtake #2
Lololololololol, oh my, Em is really something else. Love he way he makes everyone laugh, I know I did. Loved this story. Sad about Charlie hurting so much but you can't live your life for everyone else, you have to live for your self and it does hurt someone in the process. Been there, but mine worked out for the better in the end.
Can't wait to read another one of your stories. Thank you for a great story.
Author's Response:
Yea..count on Emmett to send this story off with a bang!!! He sure knows how to make an impression!! Yea.. Charlie'e chapter was sad.. but.. you know he is gonna be just fine!!
Thanks you for reading!!
Date: 19 Jul 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
That was so delicious innocent but so erotic at the same time! Damn!
Author's Response:
I think that is the best comment anyone has paid this story.. thanks!!





Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:23 PM Title: Outtake #2
I couldn't hav picked a better ending myself that was fab I laughed so hard I actually cried hehe xxxxxxx
Author's Response:
Aww.. soo glad that you loved it... thanks for reading and all the great reviews!!!





Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:14 PM Title: Outtake #1
Wow a Charlie POV was unexpected but very good I loved the bits from Bella's journal xxx
Author's Response:
Yea.... I wanted the readers to know that Charlie was going to be ok...
Glad you liked it!!





Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:12 PM Title: Epilogue
I know I probably keep saying this but it's so unbelievably sweet this was a lovely place to do the epilogue from and I also thought the bit about Tanya was fab again go Bella !!! Xxxxx
Author's Response:
Yea... I just loved the idea ofher ripping her arm off too funny!!
Glad you enjoyed it!!





Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 39
That was wonderful I love that Bella has her Cullen crest and that the transformation went so well naturally these two would get it on after the first hunt hehe xxx
Author's Response:
Ohh I ust had to sneak in some vamp sexing.. hehe
As if Iwould let her not have her own Cullen Crest





Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 38
Wow my thoughts r shock I know the change would happen when Bella wouldn't expect it but right then wow just wow xxx
Author's Response:
Yea.. I had to make it unusual.. something you haven't seen before....





Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 37
The banner is lovely :D
That was a wonderful wedding absolutely fabulous hehe xxx
Author's Response:
Glad that you loved their vegas wedding..... and their wedding night.. hehe





Date: 23 Jun 2012 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 36
I do I do hehe !!!! Xxx
Author's Response:
Nice to see you still liking it!!!





Date: 23 Jun 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 35
Awww not so smooth there Edward but incredibly cute hehe xxx
Author's Response:
He cant be perfect all the time.... can he??





Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 34
Ummm very interesting and a lovely valentines day :D xxx
Author's Response:
Glad that you liked it... a little couple time!!





Date: 21 Jun 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 33
Love love love love love it's everywhere and I am absolutely loving that xxxx
Author's Response:
Can you feel the love tonight?? hehe





Date: 21 Jun 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 32
So overwhelmingly sweet I may need to take a quick break to calm myself hehe xxx
Author's Response:
Take all the time that you need!!
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 31
I kinda wondered about when we was gonna pop the question that was beautiful xxx
Author's Response:
Aww. .. glad you liked the proposal... it was sweet...





Date: 21 Jun 2012 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 30
From cock-blocking to possibly the longest sexing I've ever read xxx
Author's Response:
hehe... I had to make it all worth the wait!!





Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 29
Oh dear god do mind if I borrow Edward or Jasper or possibly Emmett to sort out the problem that chapter just caused me hehe xxx
Author's Response:
hehe.. sure why not.. just return them...





Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 28
Still here still loving every minute xxx
Author's Response:
Aww.. so glad you are loving it!!





Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved that last bit oh just thinking for Edwards fingers makes me gooey hehe xxx
Author's Response:
hmmm makes ya wish to be bella...





Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 26
Yes I guessed right :D xxx
Author's Response:
heheh good to hear!!





Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love Em and Bella's relationship and thank goodness they got through Bella's first mate moment xxx
Author's Response:
Yes.. they survived the first one.. can they survive more? I love how Em and Bella interact..





Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 24
Aww poor Emmett but go Bella for sticking up for him xxx
Author's Response:
Yea..I love their relationship and dynamic...





Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 23
Things aren't getting good things are getting great xxx
Author's Response:
Awww.. soo glad you think so!!





Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh gosh almost in tears again that was incredibly sweet and I totally understand y Bella took so long to think about it I find in annoying reading Bellas that just make the decision so quickly without rly thinking about it xxx
Author's Response:
exactly my reasoning for having her actually consider whether she wants to be changed.... it is a big choice... glad you liked it!!





Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 21
The chat with Carlisle was wonderfully illuminating :D xxx
Author's Response:
Ohh yea... learned alot in that chapter...





Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh I am loving this girl more and more she is so clever hehe xxx
Author's Response:
Ohh yea.. Bella is one smart cookie....





Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yes incredibly sappy but good sappy :D xxx
Author's Response:
yea.. I still love it!!





Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh my goodness hot and sweet at the same time how do u do it girl hehe xxx
Author's Response:
lots and lots of practice.. err editing





Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
Me me me!!! Can I get a piggyback ride ? Hehe
On a more serious note I love the chat they had while Edward was running its nice to see them discussing stuff and progressing in their relationship xxx
Author's Response:
Yea.. we allwant a ride.... I think that they didn't talk enough as adults in SM's.. they talked at each other but not too each other





Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh my god human girl power this Bella rocks !!! Xxx
Author's Response:
Yea..I am soo proud of hewr in this chapater





Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love him to and I have this new love Jasper too after this chapter I'd love a Jasper like this one xxx
Author's Response:
Yea.. Jasper is a good guy in this one.... I always felt he was too harsh on himself in SM's version





Date: 21 Jun 2012 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh no epic cock-block darn it !!! Xxx
Author's Response:
Yea.. I know.. I am the queen of cockblocking in this story





Date: 21 Jun 2012 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well that wasn't as messy as I thought it might be it was positively lovely and sweet :D xxx
Author's Response:
Don't fret.. things wont linger for too long.. I kept it nice a fluffy..





Date: 21 Jun 2012 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Go Bella go Bella kick some vampire ass btw Jacob=uber annoying go Bella for putting up with that xxx
Author's Response:
Yea... my Jake is just as annoying as he came across to me in the books...good thing he doesn't last...





Date: 20 Jun 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh dear that's not good xxx
Author's Response:
Hang in there... it will all work out!!





Date: 20 Jun 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
Reading this just makes my heart sore although if I'm honest I kinda agree with Edward when he got angry about the meeting I get that his family r excited but they do seem to push him a bit much owell life can't be perfect eh xxx
Author's Response:
Yea... I think his family is just sooo happy for him.. they want to make sure everything goes well... soo they mean well. hehe





Date: 20 Jun 2012 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh my goodness oh my goodness that was the most amazingly sweet kiss ever !!! Xxx
Author's Response:
Yea... I have to say that I am in love with this first kiss..... makes me swoon!!
Date: 15 Jun 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 39
Yea, Bella is a vampire now, so she can now experience real sex a la vampire style (sounds exhausting for this human)
Author's Response:
I have to say.. I like my vamp Bella better than SM's... shhhh dont tell
Date: 15 Jun 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 38
Must be pretty morbid to watch your own funeral. I am not sure I could have handled that, but at least her journal will give Charlie some closure. So, I assume the Bella was surprised to be bitten in the car. She did ask to not know when it was coming, but even I wasn't thinking on the ride.
Author's Response:
Yea.. I myself know I could never handle being there like she did. Honestly, I think for Bella it was her punishment.. it was the one way she could truly see what she left behind. While the memory my fade the older she gets as a vamp.. she will at least for a while..know what she did. You are right... she didn't want to know and I though a car would be different and no one would see it coming!!
Date: 15 Jun 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 37
Poor Charlie, that Edward is stealing his baby girl...I am glad they told him. I am ready to see what the plan is to fake her death, but the wedding was fun too! And the wedding in Vegas ended up being Alice-approved!
Author's Response:
Yea... this where everything goes down.... Bella wanted Charlie to know she was serious about him!!
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 36
Love it, they can't turn down the Limo sexin'! Question, I know your story didn't go there with the love triangle with Jacob [thank you for that], but is there any connections with the werewolves in this story? They have been awful quiet lately... I was wondering if they freak out about Bella dating a vampire and maybe becoming one some day.
Author's Response:
I dont think anyone could turn down limo sexing!!
Ah the wolves they are a non-factor in this story.. it is all fluff and sex.. hehe