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Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 35

Glad she got to visit Renee, and yea Esme, give broody Edward a kick in the pants.



Author's Response:

She needed to say good bye.. ahh I had to work in a little bit of a emo Edward somewhere!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 34

They are so cute bickering with each other :)  And those were some great Valentine gifts, so much more than cliche` flowers, candy or jewelry.  I was wondering if she was going to see her mom before the change.



Author's Response:

Yea... I love the idea that they can act like anormal couple.. I wanted their gifts to be unique and personalable!!

 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 33

Atta girl Bella, someone needs to stand up to Alice, especially since it is Bella's dream wedding to plan, not hers.

And glad that douche Mike got what he deserved - good job Edward!



Author's Response:

hehe.. I loved the idea of someone beating up Mike and well I needed a story where alice didn't always get her way right.. away!!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 32

oh my gosh, a mature conversation related to Bella's change as a vampire - Thank you!  Time to leave the cottage and back to the real world, at least you squeezed another couple of lemons in there...



Author's Response:

LOL>. you are welcome.. another thing I felt wasmissing from the books.. they never really sat down to talk about it.... in fact they never talked about ANYTHING...

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 31

That's nice they got a couple of breaks in there from all the sex [HA!]...Beyond all the lovin, what I really like about this time is that they are connectly on multiple levels [mental, emotional], not just the physical.

PS - Glad your Bella didn't freak out at the thought of marriage.  That always drove me crazy in the books that she was eager to commit life as a vampire but couldn't commit to being Edward's wife.

 



Author's Response:

Well I had to make the sex believeable ya know.. so it couldn't be non-stop.. hehe

Yea.. that irked me as well.... hence why my Bella is a bit more mature!!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 30

Agreed!  Those are some HOT lemons you wrote!



Author's Response:

I tried.. I really did!!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 29

Wowsa!  They are making up for lost time, again and again....good thing they have that cottege all to themselves so they can stay naked.



Author's Response:

LOL>. yea.. there is a lot of sexing.. I'd be embarrassed..but..naw....

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 28

All I can say is FINALLY!  So glad it's bonding time!



Author's Response:

LOL.. let the sex begin!!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 27

Good times for Bella!  She gets her own mating cabin and Rosalie apologized to her and said she was right to call her out.  Goodness!



Author's Response:

Yea.. this chapter was anice way to start their time off right.. all the stuff has been dealt with

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 26

Great chapter, that Alice is a girl you want in your corner when dealing with Charlie.  She knows how to work him!



Author's Response:

Ohh heck yea... ya want Alice in your corner.. hehe

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 1:27 PM Title: Outtake #2

OME!! Hilarious!



Author's Response:

LOL.. glad ya liked it!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 1:15 PM Title: Outtake #1

So sad, yet so beautiful...



Author's Response:

yea... I wanted you to see charlie and know he will be ok

Reviewer: sipit Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 9

Wow!!  All happening now,no going back for Edward. I too love this Edward,he's adorable. :) x



Author's Response:

he is an adorable guy.. I love him too!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 4:13 AM Title: Outtake #2

lol! too funny! great way to end it!!!

Author's Response:

Yea... got to end on a high note and what better way then with Em!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 4:09 AM Title: Outtake #1

definitely a tearjerker....;(

Author's Response:

yea.. it was.. but at least you got to see Charlie and know that he will be ok...

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 4:03 AM Title: Epilogue

awesome :) she's done so well!

Author's Response:

Yea.. the idea that all they do is HS and college just seems soo pointless.. so I fixed that!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 39

aww! Bella is a kick ass vamp! :)

Author's Response:

Yea.. I love my vamp bella.. she seems cooler!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 38

he bit her while she was sleeping???? i thought he'd at least wait till they were in the house....

Author's Response:

Well she did say she wanted it as a surprise... this was a surrpise!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 28

Holy!!

 



Author's Response:

A little hot for ya??

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 37

awesome banner! i'm so nervous about Charlie when he hears the news :(

Author's Response:

Yea.. I do feel for charlie in this fic.. he does get the raw end!!

Glad you loved the banner.. it fit soo well for that chapter!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 27

LOL! Loved the banter. So happy Em's back! :)



Author's Response:

Yea.. I couldn't let Em be away for too long...

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 36

he knows how to treat his woman!!! ;)

Author's Response:

ohh does he ever!!! hehe

 

Reviewer: Teeam_Emeett_4_Lifee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 1:36 AM Title: Outtake #1

AWWWWWWWW!:( taht was sad and so cut at the same time.. what he sadi at he ending is really sad and thoughtful...it made me shed a tear!!



Author's Response:

Yea.. this was my way of showing that Charlie was gonna be ok.. what Edward did for him and how he found his closure....and started to heal!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: Teeam_Emeett_4_Lifee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 1:35 AM Title: Outtake #2

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGG this was an amazing story!!!!!I loved it fro nthe start...Great ending to !!!!!I liked this edweard and bella way better and i liked this ending way better than the original story!!I also liked how they didnt have a kid, thats one of the things i dont like about the ending in breking dawn that they had a kid..No offense to anyone who disagrees!!!



Author's Response:

LOL>. i hate Nessie.. hence why they did not have kids.. that is just ONE of the MANY issues I have with the series.

I am soo happy that you loved this story.. it holds a special place in my heart... 

Thanks for reading and showing it some love!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 24

My poor Emmy Bear! :( 



Author's Response:

Yea.. I love me some tender Emmy!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 35

Hmmm, wonder how she'll answer....lol....I love mamma Esme :)

Author's Response:

Yea.. momma Esme is a cool ass chick!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 34

She's going to say bye to Renee.....

Author's Response:

Yea.. she is.. a sad chapter.....

Reviewer: mamadog93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 29

*raises hand* I'll have what she's having! 



Author's Response:

girl.. I think we all want what she is having.. I know I do!!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 22

Yay! 

I like the ring, too. Very thoughtful.



Author's Response:

Glad that you liked the ring.. I thought it was something cool for her to give him!!

Reviewer: Teeam_Emeett_4_Lifee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 35

cant  wait to hear more!!!Keep it coming!!!!



Author's Response:

hehe I will try..... glad to see you are liking it!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 33

Alice backing down???....shocker....lol! I'm so glad Mike got what was coming to him!

Author's Response:

hehe.. yea.. I wanted to have her not always getting her way!!! Ahh mike.. he is a douche

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 32

What an experience :). I just wanna know how she will be able to go back home after she's spent all this time with Edward....

Author's Response:

Yea.. its gonna be hard for her.. but you will see how they cope!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 31

Awwww!!!! Charlie is gonna have a cow......

Author's Response:

Yea.. I do feel sorry for charlie in this fic.

Reviewer: sipit Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 8

Don't I just!! Mind it's been so long ago I can hardly remember them anyhow. I'm loving that Edward and Bella are getting more comfortable showing their feelings. Totally loving this story. :) xx



Author's Response:

Yea.. they get cozy fast... hehe

Reviewer: sipit Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 7

Wonder if Edward will be partaking of shower pleasure more often now he knows how good it feels!! :) x



Author's Response:

Hmm maybe.. who knows.. but it sure was nice of him to do that for us!!

Reviewer: Teeam_Emeett_4_Lifee Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 30

HAHA i lije this edward way better than the original one!!!hes os much more care free and not a prude!!!!



Author's Response:

Ohh yea... no prudish Edwards here!! NO SIR!! Glad ya like him!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 30

a mating sex a thon...lol, how much can Bella take before she passes out....;)

Author's Response:

hmm he is trying to be gentle.. but hell..if you were Bella.. wouldn't you try to last as long as you could with a vamp Edward?? I would!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 19

You had me at the Peter Gabriel song, "In Your Eyes"...*cue tears*



Author's Response:

yYea.. I love that song.. soo perfect!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 27

Hey!!!!   Hey!!!  Emmett and Rose coming back in time for the bonding was perfect...so glad Ms Ice Queen came to her senses and Woke the Heck up....Yay!!! Bravo!!!   Finally on to the bonding....yippee!



Author's Response:

Yea.. I knew Em wanted to be there and well Rose and Bella needed one last talk. .this time with Rose maybe a little softer!

Bring on the mating!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 29

damn, that bonding time is intense and I'll say it again...HOT!

Author's Response:

Ya may need lots of cold shpwers.. just saying!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 26

I love how you made it as a surprise to Edward as well....oh Alice is wonderful with Charlie!!!



Author's Response:

Yea.. I figured with the right kind of finagling.. Edward could get a surrpise as well!!

Yea.. Alice and Charlie were a hoot!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 28

i need a fan and a cold drink....whew...HOT!!! keep on bonding ;)

Author's Response:

Yea.. this is the intese sexy times.. can ya handle it??

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 27

it's time, it's time!!!...lol wow, i'm shocked about Rose, i thought she'd still be a bit standoffish....

Author's Response:

I wanted my Rose to come to her senses.. I think it is within her reach if she could get past all her bitterness...

glad you liked it!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 26

talk about an added temptation...lol

Author's Response:

yea.. there are temptations all over the place!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 13

*fans self*

That has to be seven of the hottest paragraphs (at the end of the chapter) that I have ever read.

Whew!

 

Absolutely beautiful!



Author's Response:

HEHE.. I am glad that you loved it!!! It was a very sweet.. but sexy time!!

Thanks!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 9

Wow! My heart is pounding like Bella's!! 

Loved this chapter! 



Author's Response:

Soo glad that you loved it!!!

makes me smile!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 25

goodness, this is sooo good!!!! okay i'm spoilt and I know it...ready for more......please!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL.. its ok..feel spoiled.. its all good!!

Hope to have more soon!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 24

wow!!!  your my hero, you are the first eriter to ever fully focus on what Rose did to Emmett and yet it was just rather skimmed over, just because he looked like little Henry, and it would be a waste for him to die.... well it was never addressed how Rose did sulk over how her life didn't progress in a natural way, so she could have children... In this Rawking version You give Bella voice and back bone to share her observations of what Emmett must feel...by Roses words and actions...wow this is good.



Author's Response:

WOW... I am.. like... wow.. that... speechless!!!

Thank you!!!! You laid all that I was trying to accomplish.. I felt that soo much was glossed over and that Rose was given a pass due to her past.. and to me that is BS!!!! So this chapter was purely all I felt that needed to be said... glad that you loved it soo much!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 23

oh geez, what is gonna happen now...love this story...



Author's Response:

Glad that you love it!!

Makes me happy to hear that!!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 25

Oh, these mating moments are not terribly convenient, are they?  So they will disappear when the claiming is completed?  In that case, Christmas can't get here soon enough!



Author's Response:

Yea.. the mate moments kinda sucked!!!!

Yea.. they will disappear when the mating is complete!!

Ohh I know you will love christmas!!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 24

Wow!  That was quite the confrontation, sounds like it was a long time coming (poor Emmett).  I have always thought Rose was a bit of a hypocrite in canon just because she can't have a baby then every human woman should aspire to?  Good for Bella!



Author's Response:

You hit the nail on the head.. my thoughts exactly!! I wanted to call Rose out on how she treated Em and her crazy ass thinking!!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: mamadog93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 25

I'm completely enjoying this and ready for more! 



Author's Response:

Aww.. you make me happy.. hope to have ore later.. hang on!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 22

I loved Bella's explanation for Charlie that she was the one person she loved the most!



Author's Response:

Aww.. I thought it was an easy way for her to explain what she was feeling!!

Thanks!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 21

this is so good sorry I have missed reviewing some chapters, but know this....I LOVE THIS STORY and your take on Bella and Edwzrd's connection or the Mating bond for our ever so special Vampire's is very intriguing indeed....



Author's Response:

Aww.. no probs.. I love what ever reviews you can give!!!

So happy that you love the story.. it was a blast to write it!!!

Glad you like my little twist.  I thought it was a something cool!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 18

now that's a meadow scene!



Author's Response:

Yea..Iknow.. I loved it.. one of my fave scene of the whole story!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 25

I felt so bad for Em.....:-( hopefully they can work thru this, freaky mate moment....will she have many of them?

Author's Response:

Yea.. I always felt as if Rose never appreciated him.. ahh those pesky mate moments.. naw..there wont be too many!!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 23

Finally!  The scent change is here, can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

We are getting closer... hang tight!!

Reviewer: mamadog93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 22

This is awesome!



Author's Response:

So glad that you love it!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 24

Wow !!!! And this is human Bella ....Vamp Bella will be like an F5 tornado and a Category 5 hurricane rolled into one.......

Author's Response:

Ohh Ilove how you characterize her.. and I would have to agree.. heh.. she will be one kick ass vamp!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 23

Good, this is a happy time in their life, don't let one sour puss bitch mess with their happiness ...

Author's Response:

I think most would agree with you!!!

Glad to know we are of the same mind!

 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 16

***Rawr like a wild lioness***  Geez Rose can we say tact... I am so glad to hear someone put Rose in her place in regards to her loathing of being a Vamp and how little disregard she shows for Emmett with such vial comments!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yea.. I really wanted to gove voice to things I felt were missing in the saga.. it just always felt off to me... I felt that no one ever called Rose on her shit and well..that never sat to well with me!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 22

That was a beautiful sentiment at the end concerning Charlie .....wonder how they'll do it

Author's Response:

Glad ya liked it!!

I always felt that Bella brushed Charlie aside.. or if she gave it serious consideration.. we never saw that I wanted to see what that would look like!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 21

Tough decisions ....but im hoping she's leaning towards deciding for her heart

Author's Response:

It was a tough choice and I was of the mind that SM glossed over it.. I wanted to see Bella sort it all out!!!

Reviewer: Teeam_Emeett_4_Lifee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 25

damn i like the new and feisty bella!!Someone finally put Rose in her place!!cant wait to hear more!!



Author's Response:

Ohh you are not alone in that sentiment.. lots loved that Bella had her say and it was about time!!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 20

That one hot date!  Question on the mating bond - how long does this scent thing take?  Is it this long for all couples, or is it longer than normal due to her being human?



Author's Response:

Yea.. I love their dates!!!

As for the scent thing.. there is no average time.. depends on the bond!!

With her being a human..its different than 2 vamps who bond..

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 18

I like that he fessed up on the idea of her being a vamp and what she would lose.  He did forget to mention that if she remains human, he will follow when she dies.



Author's Response:

Yea.. I liked that canon Edward was honest.. even if he delivery was off.. this Edward was more calm about it all.

As for if he would follow after.. I am sure he would have.. he just didn't let him sel think of that!!

Reviewer: god of princess Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 20

love it



Author's Response:

Glad that you are loving it!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: sipit Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 6

He is VERY cute. I'd hate such a possesive guy in real life but in fiction i ADORE him. :)  So let's hope Mike got the message loud and clear and keeps away from them both. 



Author's Response:

Aww.. he is. And he is not all THAT posessive.. let the bond cool a bit and you will see... but yea.. lets hope Mike got the message!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 16

Glad that Bella shows no fear to Rosalie, she needs to get over it and mind her own business 



Author's Response:

Yea.. Bella had no problem putting Rose in her place.. yea!!!

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 15

Rules for the mating bond...someone should have laid out those rules from the beginning, ont you think?



Author's Response:

True.. bit then a mating with a human is not something that happens often.. so.. its a bit unusual.....

Thanks!!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oops, not a good time to get caught :)



Author's Response:

hehe.. I know.. I am soo mean!!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 11

I don't know why Bella was ignoring him, but my guess is something to do with that darn Jacob Black :)



Author's Response:

Hmm could be..... darn Jacob!!

Thanks!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 20

hmm, wonder if her scent is changing along with her bravado.....?

Author's Response:

Hmm that would be a interesting thing.. but I think her bravado was always there!!!

Thanks!

Reviewer: Teeam_Emeett_4_Lifee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 20

OMGGG i fucken love this story... And i love this Edward way better!!!He has such a abeteer attitude!!!keep it coming!!!!!



Author's Response:

Aww.. I love you love for this story..makesme smile!!!

I think this Edwardis pretty cool as well!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 19

yeah, but i love me some sappy ;)

Author's Response:

Glad ya like the sappiness.. hehe

 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 18

that would have made an awesome outtake scene for the movie...lol

Author's Response:

Aww... what an awesome compliment... I love this meadow scene... *sigh*

Thanks!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 17

good, they needed that talk....

Author's Response:

Yea.. they do a lot of talking in this story..something I feel is missing from the books.. ohh well!

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 16

oh my damn! Bella was awesome! but you wanna talk about a pissed off vamp when Edward finds out what Rose said....LOOK OUT! and poor Em, i hope he's not hurt when he finds out what his bitch wife said....omg and Carlisle too, WTF is wrong with her???

Author's Response:

Yea.. lots of people love this one... they wish that this would have happened in the book... *sigh*

Glad you liked it!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 15

that's cause he's focusing with all his willpower :D

Author's Response:

hehe.. he does have good concentration!!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 14

what a way to be interrupted!!!!....:( but if it's for the best.......

Author's Response:

yea.. I know.. I am such a meanie!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 15

wow...interesting take and way of showing this unique connection our couples have ....... very interesting...cant' wait for more and thanks again for all the chapters today.....



Author's Response:

Aww.. I am glad that you like it... I wanted something different.... I hope I was able to do that!!!

Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 13

:D so happy for them!

Author's Response:

Yea.. these two are soo sweet they will give ya a tooth ache!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 14

lol!!!  what a rude awakening, if you catch my meaning of Awakening.....evil chuckle!!!



Author's Response:

Ohhyou are evil.. heheh and I like it!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 12

and this is why Jacob Black has no redeeming qualities in my eyes, i can't stand that immature little brat!

Author's Response:

hehe.. which is just how I wanted him to come off as.. hehe.... good thing hes not around in my story!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 11

what? what happened?: did she notice something????

Author's Response:

Ohh my Bella is a smart one... kinda like the book one!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 10

can you clone him????? please???

Author's Response:

Hmm I wish I could.. but I'm not that smart!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love the way you describe the connection..it's like it's emotional, just just sexual in nature, but I would presume, that is another aspect of the claiming..this is very good...such a well written story



Author's Response:

You are very right.. its more than some sexyual aspect.. it is a bone deep conection. Its like knowing you find your soul mate and having it confirmed... it is a very emotional thing...

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

oh, interesting....i wondered if that was where she had been....yep, now she's gonna find out huh!?!



Author's Response:

Hmm find out what?? hehe... You will have to read on and find out!

Thanks!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 11

this is so good...



Author's Response:

Aww.. I love it that you are liking it so much!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 9

Love it!!! i want her to say it to him too :) hmmm..what would happen if one of the Forks skanks tried to hit on Edward with Bella standing there??? would she be all possessive too??

Author's Response:

Hmm that may come in a later chapter.. hold on!!

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 9

oh I love this Edward too!!!!



Author's Response:

Yea.. I know.. he is dreamy!! *sigh*

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

Enjoying the story. Can't wait for more.

 =)



Author's Response:

So glad you are loving it.. this Edward makes it easy to do so!!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: sipit Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 5

OHHH  Edward's feeling 'Stirrings'!!! ;)  I can't wait to see how that works for him.  Loving it. :) 



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Reviewer: sipit Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 4

I thinik we're all infatuated with Edward Cullen!! And what a wonderful feeling that is.... Nice to read BPOV,though i am really enjoying EPOV. Great story. :) 



Author's Response:

*sigh*

Yea.. we are all in love with him!!

I'll surprise you with a Bella POV every once in a while!!

The majority of this will be in EPOV.. it is his story!!

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: sipit Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 3

I love him too!! :)  it's getting more and more interesting. Loving it. :) 



Author's Response:

Aww.. another Edward lover.. he is so darn sexy in this one!!

Reviewer: sipit Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 2

Just dropping off some love for you. (((( Love hug)))) Great second chapter! AND so they meet.... :) 



Author's Response:

Soo glad that you loved it!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: sipit Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

I think its brilliant!! I've not read a vamp story in a while. I read The Ripper by LisaHeartofDarkess but that's because she's one of my fave authors. Otherwise i don't do vamp but have to say i really enjoyed this first chapter. Loving it. :) 



Author's Response:

Ohh Her stories are good!!!

Glad you are liking my little spin on Twilight....

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved what u have so far on this story. It's captivating and I sooo love this Edward and Bella.  I'm glad he isn't the moody brat like in the original Twilight series. I'm glad he isn't put his walls up to keep Bella away. Thank you so much for this story and I can't wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

Aww.. glad that you are enjoying it!! I took what I liked about the series and left the crap I hated.. so gone is a bella with no self esteem and gone is a totally emo Edward!

Glad to see you like the changes!

Thanks!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 8

Things are getting warm in here...lol! damn , where was Edward when i was in school ....lol

Author's Response:

Yea..I hear ya... I wanted an Edward in my school and bio classes like they have!

Thanks!

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 8

These two are so epically cute together it's unreal love love loving it :D xxx



Author's Response:

Yea.. I love when they are together.. they are cute and sweet.... 

Thanks for reading!!!

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