Date: 31 Jul 2013 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
Yummy
Date: 31 Jul 2013 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Our Family
Great chapter
Date: 31 Jul 2013 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
Ooh la la!!
Date: 31 Jul 2013 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 31 Jul 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
YAY so happy you updated....Still love this story can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2013 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
The ring is beautiful, was there a band too if so what does it look like
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Thanks good chapter
Date: 30 Jul 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Oooo i love when edward shows his love
Date: 30 Jul 2013 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
People can be so mean. I hope things settle down for Bella soon. I wonder if Edward's day was any better. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2013 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
loved this
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2013 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
That was a sweet chapter.
Great story.
Date: 30 Jul 2013 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Just gotta tell you how much I love this story. Tough chapter for little Bella. Glad she has Edward, his team and her friends. Great job with the demanding Edward, you gotta love him! XOXO, Cheri
Date: 30 Jul 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
AMAZING :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2013 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Loved the chapter! Bullies come in all shapes and sizes and Bella experienced some of the worst out there. I loved Mike's reason for it all "their just jealous". I always tell my students that there are only 3 reasons to make fun of or bully someone: 1. Your jealous of them, 2. You feel bad about yourself, or 3. You like them I the boyfriend or girlfriend kind of may. They are fifth graders so that last one usually eats them out. Then they have to write 25 nice things about the person they picked on/bullied by the next day. It usually helps most of them start to change their ways, not all of them though.
Sorry for the long winded personal experience. Loved the chapter, especially the lemon. Looking forward to more.
Date: 30 Jul 2013 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Well worth the wait for the update. Looking forward for the next one
Date: 30 Jul 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
That was pretty rough....I'm glad Embry was there too! Thanks for giving us a new chapter on this lovely story. I know you're busy with all the OF stuff you have going on, but thanks for now letting us FF girls down!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2013 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
People are bitches. Especially high school kids. Edward will make all the dumb go away. ;)
Date: 30 Jul 2013 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
aaah i love this story more updates PPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 30 Jul 2013 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
I hope his makes him do some sole searching service some wher to learn a little compassion.
Well it guess that could have gone worse... I'm not sure how though.
Great chapter! Thanks for updating.
Date: 30 Jul 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
AW I love this story! Poor Bella! Glad her friends were understanding and have her back! Can't wait to read more! thanks for the update and please udate soon again!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Can't wait to see what else changes in their lives now that they're ''out''. Love your story!
Date: 29 Jul 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Poor Bella. Glad she has friends to look out for her. Go Principal for not letting her bullying child get away with stuff. Yey Embry.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2013 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Love. It. :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2013 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Oh yummy I want me some of this
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2013 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Damn. ....hopefully that will be the worst of it and things should calm down. I'm glad her friends were understanding, she'll need their help
Date: 29 Jul 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
Will you continue?
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
wow... même à la relecture!
Date: 03 Jul 2013 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
soo good please post more really soon.
Date: 29 Jun 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
HEY JUST CHECKING IN YOU EVER GOING TO WRITE SOME NEW CHAPTERS! lOVE THE STORY IT WOULD BE ASHAME IF IT STOPED IN THE MIDDLE!!
sINCERELY, L. JACOX
Date: 25 Jun 2013 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
Sorry for late review. I'm SOOOOOOO far behind
Glad Alice was there to calm her down. Edward is being so sweet. Great chapter
Date: 21 Jun 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
Wow... It's out to the world!! It was certainly worth the waiting! :) I can't wait for the next update! :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2013 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
Thanks good chapter
Date: 19 Jun 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
So their secret is out, I look forward to the fallout.
Have fun in Chicago!
Date: 18 Jun 2013 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
That was a wonderful time being introduce to the world
Date: 17 Jun 2013 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
;-)
Date: 16 Jun 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
such a good chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2013 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
Loved the update!
Edward and Bella are so cute together!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
:) loved this
Date: 16 Jun 2013 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
Ooo i would of had a fangirl momment. Ben would of kept his marriage secert
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2013 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
Yay. That went well. At least they were nice to her. I know not everyone will be.
Date: 16 Jun 2013 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
Thank you. What a night for Bella. I hope the aftermath is not toopainful.
Date: 16 Jun 2013 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
Well that went well...better than I expected. Thanks for writing.
Lisa
Date: 16 Jun 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
Lovely to see this update. This story is a favorite of mine and thrilled to see the world to see E/B as a married couple! Wonderful. XOXO, Cheri
Date: 16 Jun 2013 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
Most excellent. Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! Can't wait for the next installment!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2013 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
I love it!! Have fun at TFMU!! :)
Date: 16 Jun 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
That was amazing :) I really loved it!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
=) she did well, hope they wont rip her to shreds tomorrow in the press......
Date: 16 Jun 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
Amazing chapter..
Glad to see it was drama and Maggie free!! :)
Date: 16 Jun 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
Fabulous! Now the world knows. All is right with the Universe! Nice touch bringing Ben Affleck and Argo into the mix!
I really enjoy your work and hope all is going better for you now....
Date: 16 Jun 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
love it
Date: 14 Jun 2013 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Wow I just Loooooooove this story!!!
Ive been reading a lot of fanfiction but this story is definitely in the top 3!!
I can't wait to read what's next!
Can you show me how to put the story on alert?
Thank you
Sarra, Paris, France
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2013 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Yasss! Caveman Edward!
I'm anixious too. Can't wait for the next chapter. Go Go Go!
Date: 25 May 2013 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Love this story!! Please update soon! Looking forward to them coming out the wedding his parents and sooooo much more...
Date: 14 May 2013 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Oh goodddd....... fuck
Date: 12 May 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Wow! I just love this story.,can't wait til you write more!!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2013 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Ok Im hooked cant wait for the Oscars and wedding. plus I hope TED gets his!
Date: 04 May 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Love this!! Can't wait to see Bella's dress!
Date: 04 May 2013 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
Lovin this story and adding pics brings it alive!
Date: 03 May 2013 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
OMG!! Bella and Edward are amazing!! Love it! Continue!
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2013 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Wow! I'm loving feral caveman Edward. I hope he comes out to play again soon. Will he appear on Oscar night? Lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
thank you for the update.......couple of more days.......his fans are going to flip....and the women who want him are going to go balistic.....lol.....can't wait.....school should be interesting
Date: 30 Apr 2013 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
;-)
Date: 29 Apr 2013 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
love it
Date: 29 Apr 2013 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Hot damn love caveman sex
Date: 29 Apr 2013 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
great chapter
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
I'm so curious what will happen when they will come out... I don't think it will be drama-free!
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
As long as they continue to talk about their fears, hopes, dreams, etc, they will be fine against the outside world.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2013 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
He's worried that she might leave him again in reaction to the frenzy that will follow their announcement.
Great chapter.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
SO amazing ! I really loved it ALL!
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Aww I loved the chapter!! :D
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
the Oscars are going to be nuts! i hope she enjoys is and drama doesn't make it a bad experience for her.....
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Wow, Caveman or not he is friggin hot.
I really do hope it goes smoothly, their coming out, but I am going to guess, it not going to happen that way.
Regards
Fiorella
Date: 29 Apr 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Loved it :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2013 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Cant wait for the next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
WOW THAT WAS ALMOST TO SEXY TO READ SO HOT MY COMPUTERS ON FIRE. I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO THEM LETTING THE WORLD KNOW THEY ARE MARRIED.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
This aamzingly well written story is truely captivating & intriging!!! I truely look forward to each & every update always impatiently waiting for the next chapter update. Thanks for all ur hard work & dedication u put into writting this story. Your an amazingly talented writer & I definatly rate this story as a 10 out of 10!!!
Date: 28 Apr 2013 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
I cant wait till they come out together.
Date: 28 Apr 2013 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Always and forever! Love this. Can't wait for the Oscars. XOXO, Cheri
Date: 28 Apr 2013 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
good;)
Date: 28 Apr 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Thanks for a new chapter! I love that you're still working on this story what with all the other things going on for you now....She got the perfect dress and will be debuting at the Oscars. Then life will change drastically for her.....I fucking LOVE the caveman stuff from Edward....so erotic....and you tell it so well!
Date: 28 Apr 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Glad her and Char are great friends. LOVED the end too. Lemony
Date: 28 Apr 2013 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Caveman Edward... I would love some of that
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2013 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Love it
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2013 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
Edward's Dad is vile and I don't ever think there'll be a reunion with him at all. I'm not that keen on his Mum purely for the fact that Edward stated, she never stopped what was happening to him and sided with her husband. That's a major betrayal to come to terms with and forgive. I think Bella gave him food for thought though. Music class was insane, all those questions, I'm glad Bella stood up and had her say, she's becoming a lot more comfortable with her surroundings.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2013 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
Love it and Edwards father is just how I pictured him... a big ass.
I hope he has a chance to see his mum and make thing right there.
Love it as always.
Date: 09 Apr 2013 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
great story
Date: 09 Apr 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
Ugh. His father is an ass.
Date: 08 Apr 2013 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
Wow his father is a prick his mom needs to hit him harder lol.
Date: 08 Apr 2013 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
I hope Edward will think about talking to his mother. She seems willing to beg for forgivness. He could at least listen to her side. She might be scared of his father also.
Date: 08 Apr 2013 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
Awesome update!
Looking forward to next update!
Thanks for writing;-)
Date: 08 Apr 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
wow Edward's father is a total asshole and obviously thinks he did nothing wrong I hope his mom kicks his dad to the curb
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
wonder if his mom will try and contact him........?
Date: 07 Apr 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
love it
Date: 06 Apr 2013 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
Aww loved the chapter!!! Yeah Edwards dad is an ass!! :D
Date: 06 Apr 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
So great to get a new chapter! And...I'm very eagerly awaiting the release of Breach! Carlisle is every bad thing that Edward ever said about him and more! To talk about Bella in front of her in that way just smacked of giant assoholic behavior. I did, however, feel badly for his mom. I think she deserves a chance to at least see her son once more, but I guess that is up to him. Just wait until Bella's classmates find out that she is Edward's wife, not sister!!!! Oh, man, they are going to just freak about her talent. Now they assume she inherited it by being a Cullen. They will find out that it is hers alone. That will make them feel even more inferior to her.....Our Bella just shines and I can't wait for the world to find out she is married to that sexy movie God, not his sister!! And....good riddance to Maggie and Lauren! I hope that's the last we see of them but suspect maybe it's not...I love this story, can't wait for it to be finished so I can own it on my Kindle as a completed story...that's OK, isn't it?
Date: 06 Apr 2013 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
i love love love this story