Date: 12 May 2016 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
I absolutely love this story...glad I finally found it again..must be the fourth time (?) I've read it...love the writing too....thanks!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 32
quite a funny little story but the ending was a bit ridiculous ;) btw if they've been talking for a year and a half how come she didn't know about him being adopted? i'm looking forward to reading the sequel now ;D
Date: 22 Jun 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 32
Love the beat down on SkankRen
TY for writing and sharing.
Date: 22 Jun 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 31
yey for promotion. What a skank. Fraternization is a big nono. guess Skank never got the memo from the army. LOL
Date: 22 Jun 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 30
Busy night. wow. em is too funny
Date: 22 Jun 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 29
awww sweet ceremony
Date: 22 Jun 2013 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 28
woo hoo Wedding coming up!!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2013 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 27
aww sweet little proposal.
Date: 22 Jun 2013 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 26
I'll ignore my knowledge of the military for this promotion part. LOL
Jessica...what a skank.
Date: 22 Jun 2013 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 25
they are too cute together.
Date: 22 Jun 2013 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 24
Woo hoo Sweet first time!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 23
Mike is so pathetic. They are too cute together!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2013 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 22
Sweet chapter and first kiss
Date: 22 Jun 2013 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 21
Glad the girls aren't letting her mope. Woo Hoo for sweet reunion. What a wonderful surprise!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2013 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wonderful way to meet the 'rents!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 32
An Army Captain does not get promoted to Lt. Col. The next step would be Major.
Date: 17 Jun 2013 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 32
oh i had so much fun readng this story
it was a hoot. so love bold no mess bella
love a man in uniform
love and look forward tot he sequel
Date: 16 Jun 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 32
Are you making a follow up to this amazing story? I hope so I would love to read more about these amazing characters and the big extended family they seem to have all created from the ashes of more than one broken family.
Date: 14 Jun 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 20
Esme is definitely decorating the house for Edward and Bella.
Date: 14 Jun 2013 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 26
whoa ..our man does not waste time does he ...hope she takes it all in ...I would faint
Date: 14 Jun 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 31
Loved the story!! Can't wait for the next part!!!
Date: 14 Jun 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 32
Love that the army wants bella
Date: 13 Jun 2013 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG OMG! so sorry didnt see the new chapters! lol thanks
Date: 13 Jun 2013 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
Omg! Really loved reading this story! Please update soon so looking forward more! :-)
Date: 13 Jun 2013 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 32
Omg so excited!!!!!! How soon till the sequel is up???!!! I need to know what's gonna happen!!!! Loved how Bella kicked skank r us's ass it was hilarious!!! Omg they're gonna have babies!!!!! Hopefully four!!! Can't wait for the sequel!!!!!!!
Date: 13 Jun 2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 32
I loved it! So the skank finally went down!!! lol
Date: 13 Jun 2013 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
love it and look forward to more
Date: 04 Jan 2013 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
I am loving this story. Short but very sweet. Can't wait for the next chapter! :-)
Date: 02 Oct 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great story so far can't wait to see wat happens next update soon
Date: 09 Sep 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
LOVE THIS SO FAR! HOPING TO READ MORE OF IT LATER!
Date: 05 Aug 2012 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
Awww I can wait for the next up date
Date: 20 Jul 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
Are you going to continue to post on this site? I am having a real hard time with my account on Fanfiction. I noticed that this story is finished on fanfiction, I LOVED it, and you said to keep alerts on for the sequel. Thank you!
Date: 19 Jul 2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
i´m waiting impatiently for the next chapter(s). i love your story!!
lg malina
Date: 25 Jun 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved her present. Now they've made promises to each other. He just needs to come home now.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
Bella is going to die when she finds out that the house she watching being built is really her house!!! I wonder what her birthday present is??
Date: 24 Jun 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it!!!! He sooo incredibly sweet!! B
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
I adore this fic! Happy when I find new installments, thrilled with Edward's promise ring.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
oh my i love it.
love the fact that she is sending him pics of what will be their house, and she doesn't even know.
Loved the ring and all of it.
thanks for the updates. looking forward to more.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yes!!! I love time jumps;) how many months??? Those thirteen mos need to pass quickly. I can't wait for them to meet face to face. Don't get me wrong I love the emails and he is so freaking cute w the house and the promise ring. I just want to melt with them two. I just hope that nothing bad happens to him or anything like that. C u soon. Thanx for updating!!!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
Can't wait for more!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 19
aww :) SO amazing.... can't wait for the time jump!
-Kate
Date: 23 Jun 2012 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
I liked the little longer chapters as well
Date: 23 Jun 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved the part about the ring. I am now wanting to read more to find out what you have up your sleeve for this amazing story. I can't wait until the next time that updates are published.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
Perfect! She is clueless.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
i can't wait to see what happens next!!! love this story
Date: 23 Jun 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
I can't wait to find out what Bella is going to say to Edward buying a house..I love it
Date: 23 Jun 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
That is a great present from Edward to Bella!!!!!
I can't wait for them to see each other in person!!!!!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
i wanna a edward
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
He is sure moving along!!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
hehehe I don't think Bella will get it till the pool aqnd dojo go up
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm really enjoying this story. I really like how she is watching the house being built without knowing Edward is having it built. I look forward to her finding that out and meeting Edward face to face.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh dear the sweetness overload in this chapter nearly killed me but what a way to die hehe xxx
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
how sweet are these two all these i do's and excited expressions love it
Hugs xxxx
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
awww sweet birthday. happy dance
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
AWWWWWWW:)
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
Aw, SO amazing! LOVED IT!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
OH WOW...SO amazing :D
Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ahhh love love loving it hehe this plan to build Bella's perfect house is great and I'm glad this Jacob is nice and not about to steal eddies girl he isn't right ? Xxx
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
That house is going to be awesome!!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
love me some edward hmmmmm
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it!!! Hmmmm I wonder if those words are " Will you marry me?"
Though he might want to wait and ask in person!!
But I would say yes a million times!!! Lol
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hahahaha, payback is a bitch, Jasper! He's probably going to be a little leary about eating Bella's baked goods again. It seems that Bella and Edward are quite taken with each other even if they've only met through their letters. It's pretty romantic, if I say so myself.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
I just recently found your story, Love it! I am looking forward to more chapters
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
wow! Amazing.... that house will be beautiful! :)
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
I figured Bella would be pleased when she saw the pic of Edward. :) I can't wait to see how she replies to his letter.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
so we've moved forward in time and are on course for Bellas birthday can't wait
Hugs xxx
Date: 23 Jun 2012 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 17
Lol!! Boy is Jake sneaky!!!!! I love her dream house!
Loved it!!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
I knew that was what Bella was up to. I think the pics and letter are great! So, Edward is surprised how hot Em's sister is. I sure the pics and letter are going to be viewed many many times by Edward. LOL
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved the letters from the boys. Didn't Jasper think he would get caught in his little white lie? LOL Edward's letter was sweet and I pretty much know what Bella has in mind with the pics. :)
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
Bella's a real sweetheart. I will tell you I love anything in EPOV. :)
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like it so far :)
Date: 22 Jun 2012 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 17
she has a very well formed view of what she wants and isn't Jake a sweetie so nice of him to make her future home ala bella
Hugs xxxx
Date: 22 Jun 2012 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
hehehe jake rocks something tells me she will get the idea when the house of her dreams starts going up...or at least get a hmmmmm out of her.
Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm not too sure that Jake was as slick as he thinks stains points I think he was a bit obvious but u might hav planned it that way but maybe Jake and Bella r always like that in this story xxx
Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
Can I firstly just say awwwwwwww I mean like epic awww he is giving her a custom house oh my this boy is good xxx
Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
That was incredibly sweet I love that Bella cried and that the girls can defend themselves damsels in distress can get annoying lol xxx
Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
I didn't like what was said I loved it the birthday gift was fab xxx
Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
I'm so glad I was busy when u updated this so part 3 is already here Nd I don't have to wait hehe xxx