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Reviewer: Half_Blood_Princess Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2019 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 5

I had forgotten how much I really enjoy this story. This is one pairing I had never thought of before the first time I read it and I love it. It feels real the  banter etc.

Reviewer: Half_Blood_Princess Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2019 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

I thought I’d never read this story again. I’m so glad I found out where you’d gone. This was always a favorite story.

Reviewer: Snape Lover 1981 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2016 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 57

I love this story! I have read it numerous times ! 

Reviewer: muggle_minded_M Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2016 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 56

Lucky Ginny! She gets to be the metaphorical plate which the metaphorical diners Sev and Lucius are eating off of. Whew!

I really liked this. It didn't drag on, nor was it without some actual substance other than the PWP-ness. I really appreciate your creativity with smut. I think we're all sick of reading boring, in-out, grunt and roll-over sex. 

Thanks for writing! I for one really enjoyed and am enjoying this.

-M

Reviewer: muggle_minded_M Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2016 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 44

*wide-eyed blinking, stares hungrily at screen, panting slightly*

Reviewer: muggle_minded_M Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2016 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

'Well. That's an interesting visual image'

#understatementofthedecade

Ooh, also, will there be a foursome? I could totally see Lucius/Ginny and Severus/Hermione being great separate bestie coupled with the occasional really hot foursome. Pleeeeeeeeease? If not in this story, you could write a smutshot, a PWP or a related smutquel. Please? 

Anyways, LOVE.

-M

Reviewer: muggle_minded_M Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 4

'Lucius pouted' and 'What color are your knickers... I'm not wearing any' are my fav bits. 

Love this so much!

-M

Reviewer: bandgeek252 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

I made the banner :) My name is on the banner, but it's hard to read. Glad you were able to put your story somewhere else. FF.net is being a bit dumb about these stories. 

Reviewer: Malfoys_pet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2014 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 57

JUST. PERFECT. I have nothing else so say so omg hdsubrfb just so fucking perfect <33



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!

Reviewer: SlashyMcGee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 57

SEQUEL!?!?!?

Reviewer: natariigrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2013 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 57

OMG I read you stories on FF and i was looking for them on my favorites to re read them. And now i randomly find you on here!! I love your stories. Is there a sequel to this one. Maybe with kids and marriage? Is there a way to pm or such on here im new. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you found me.  I don't think there's a way you can PM on this site, but I'm back on FF.net as Bari Sax Player, you can PM me there if you want.  No there won't be a sequel to this story, it's looooong finished.  But I'm working on a new SS/HG with a kid.  It's not something I usually write, or even feel all that comfortable with, so I'm hoping it turns out okay.

Reviewer: majorcarterwannabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 57

I'm so glad you found a new home for this story! This was the story that got me into Harry Potter fanfic and I was so very disappointed when ff.net took it down. 



Author's Response:

What a nice thing to hear!!!  I'm so glad you found me again.  Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: LDR94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2012 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 41

I love that you we're able to put this on this site. Although I do have a question, maybe i'm just passing over it but didnt you use to have a one-shot that tied in with this story? hermione was out of town and the story started with ginny and lucius talking to her on computer



Author's Response:

I did.....it is now Chapter 56.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: dbg Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2012 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 57

Well done. I love the Christmas Eve scene, 17 people, 2 bathrooms and one house.

Author's Response:

Thanks!!  I'm so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Littlebigmouth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 57

Sceen late night in OKC music in background. Woman reading her Blackberry finishes story, . A wicked smile crosses her face with a wiggle of her eyebrows she shuts off the device and goes to sleep with a perfectly naughty grin on her face. End sceen.

Author's Response:

LOL. Glad you enjoyed it!!!!

Reviewer: Littlebigmouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 40

Marissa (american translation) Headache producing BITCH.

Reviewer: bleedingraven79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love this story! I'm so glad I found you! I was extremely sad when your profile got deleted. I have a friend that reads this story and I can't wait to tell her I found it. Thanks for writing it and finding a new home!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for finding me!!!  I was pretty broken hearted when it happened too!  Yes, tell everyone. I'M HERE!!! I'm reposting everything, slowly but surely.   It is a very time consuming process.  I'm also working on some new stuff too!!  Come join us here, it's a cute little site and a whole lot nicer then FF.net (bastards). no....i'm not bitter at all. LOL.

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 57

This is truely one of my favourites stories of yours, when it doesn't matter if I've read it before, yet it still delights me and keeps me on my toes then it's a wonderful read in my eyes. (Only a few authors actually manage to keep me coming back to the same books time after time) Xx



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Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 55

Severus is there no end to your talents?

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 54

I found this chapter amusing because my cat Minnie (her full name is Minion) is in heat right now and is rubbing herself against everyone and everything, she does this funny little thing wher she crawls along on her belly wiggling her bum and making a little purring noise in the back of her throat. All I could see while reading this chapter was Professor McGonagal doing the same.



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Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 53

*Sniggers behind her hand* I know what they're up to...

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 52

Lucius could charm the birds out of the trees if he wanted too

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 49

I totally agree hun, Jason Isaacs is a sexy beast 

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 47

hehehe, but I'd rather see Lucius and Severus naked than Harry and Draco...Sorry boys 



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Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 44

I can't click Next fast enough

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 43

Be still my beating heart, Severus tangoing is just too hot for contemplation



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Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 41

Severus is right Lucius nobody is perfect, but you do come bloody close



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Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 40

*shivering with anticipation* He's just so damn sexy when he's angry

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 39

Lucius I love you too...as well as Severus ;D

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 38

Awwww *sniffs and dabs at tears* 

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 37

I still think Marissa is a bitch but isn't Severus adorable coming to the rescue like that.

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 36

DunDunDunnnn

I already knows what happens but I'm still on the edge of my seat

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 35

I would love to be in Harry's shoes watching that show ;D

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 34

The truth is out there...I love the idea of wizards being the real reason behind crop circles rather than aliens makes much more sense to me. 



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Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 33

Mmmm Jason/Lucius Lucius/Jason...Any way you put it I'm in seventh Heaven

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 32

I wanna go play in his storeroom too ;D

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 57

Yeah!  Happy Ending!  Thanks for writing this.  Lots of smut and a decent plot.  Keep writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.  Pretty much all my stories are smutty with a HEA ending. I'm just a sucker for romance.  LOL.

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 53

Such fun.  I do like this story.  One minor item:  "And it would be most helpful if you would just except them graciously."  It should be 'accept' not 'except'.

Keep writing.

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 49

I saw Season One.  Now I'll have to look for Season Two.  Another fanfic author used the bit from Season One where a woman is giving him oral sex and his mother calls.  :-)  (Michael Caffee is definitely a momma's boy - but in sort of a good way).

Ron is such a jerk at times.



Author's Response:

I can't remember if it's season 2 or 3 that has that scene, it's after his cousin moves in from Ireland and he's living with Cath.  I yes, love the sex scene when "Ma' calls?  "What am I doin'? I'm trying to have a life here Ma".  LMAO.

 

What's the name of the story?  I'd love to read it.

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 48

Nice!  I really like the interactions between these characters.  And thanks for the previous smut.  Keep Writing!  Thanks!

Reviewer: janedoh Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 51

Thanks for the boatload of chapters-the mix and match session was really hot. 



Author's Response:

My pleasure.  This is the longest story I have to transfer...once I have it all re posted, I can focus on posting all my other stories.  Glad you liked it and thanks for the review.

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 38

Nice.  I like the way the story is going so far.  Draco definitely causes some problems.  I'm just wondering if we're going to see a threesome or foursome in this story?  Just curious  Keep writing, you do it so well!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  Draco doesn't mean to cause problems, he's just not used to seeing his Dad and his Godfather like this...

 

MMMMMMMMMMMaybe.  ***insert evil laughter***

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 30

I wasn't disappointed either, good show Xx



Author's Response:

LOL.  Thanks.

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 29

*Happy dancing can now commenc* I love it when Severus is intense.

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 28

*Squeels with excitement and hurries to click the next button*

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 27

Hermione must be very strong willed to say no Lucius but I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 26

Fabulous...Lucius is amazing

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 25

Lets get ready to ruuummmble..... 

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 24

Go on Severus, Hermione doesn't bite...unless you really want her too ;D



Author's Response:

He wants her to....he just ascared.

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 23

Our big strong Slytherins protected their women, lucky, lucky females



Author's Response:

Oh yes they do and oh yes they are!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 22

Poor Severus and his need for dutch courage all need to do is listen to the lobster

 

"Yes, you want her
Look at her, you know you do
It's possible she wants you, too
There is one way to ask her
It don't take a word
Not a single word
Go on and kiss the girl

Sing with me now
Sha-la-la-la-la-la
My, oh, my
Look at the boy too shy
He ain't gonna kiss the girl
Sha-la-la-la-la-la
Ain't that sad
Ain't it shame, too bad
You gonna miss the girl"

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 21

Mmmm Lucius for dinner and breakfast, I'd certainly enjoy that menu Xx

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 25

I'm really liking the way this story is going.  And, yes, Lucius is always right.  :-)  Thanks for writing.  Keep writing - you do a great job.

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 13

Nice chapter.  I can just imagine Lucius in a black leather jacket and jeans.  Yummy!  Thanks for writing - this is a great story.



Author's Response:

And shades....don't forget the shades.  Mmmmm.  thanks so much for the review.  I'm so glad you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: janedoh Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 25

Poor, poor Severus. At least Hermione will be taking matters in hand! Can't wait to see the Weasley response as well.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!!  Yeah, Hermione won't have any trouble setting old Severus straight,

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 20

*Does an embarrasingly uncoordinated happy dance at the sight of Severus*

 

You are so lucky you didn't see that :D

 

Sexy Severus Yum! 



Author's Response:

Oh but I soooooo wish I did!!!

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 19

Kill him? Never! We're just going to keep you as our slave :D

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 18

The shame of only being number88 on the Forbes list...Lucius must try harder Xx

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 17

I love the imagery of Lucius getting ready Xx



Author's Response:

Yes, I picture him with damp hair, wife beater, black tux pants on, but open with the suspenders hanging down and I just..................grrrrrrrr.....squeal!!!!

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 16

*sighs happily* 

If I smoked I'd be reaching for a cigarette right now. ;D



Author's Response:

LOL..I smoke and I smoked quite a few re posting that...I actually tweeked it a little and fixed a few things I didn't like.

Reviewer: metamorphmagus_chick Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was my favorite story on fanfiction. I read it all once and was in the middle of reading it when again when it was deleted. I just wanted you to know that I googled this to find you. :) I love your Harry Potter stories. Can't wait to read this all again! 



Author's Response:

Awesome!!  And that worked??? That's great.  I hope other readers can find me.  Thanks for the news and the review.

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 15

Poor Draco I think he needs to have his mind obliviated



Author's Response:

He needs to get over himself, Daddy's hot and sexy!!!!

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 14

I could make him feel good too

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

*grins* 

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 12

Awww Draco is such a Sweetie Xx

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 11

Mmmm Angry Lucius in a vest..... Yummy Xx



Author's Response:

And barefoot....don't forget barefoot.  grrrrrrrrrrr.

Reviewer: janedoh Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 15

Woo hoo--enter SS and HG!



Author's Response:

Soon, very soon.  Thanks you so much for the review!!!

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 10

This story is developing nicely.  I like the character development - especially of Lucius.  Thanks for writing.  I can't wait for more chapters.

M



Author's Response:

They are all written, it's just a matter of adding them.  It shouldn't take too long. =)  I'm so glad you are enjoying it.  Thank you so much for taking the time to review and let me know.

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 10

"You've probably noticed, I'm a man who can get hard if the wind blows in the right direction."

 

I love this sentence....



Author's Response:

Well I did make him really, really, really horny in this story.  Just like I like allllll my men.  LOL.

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 9

Naughty Lucius! I think a spanking is in order, go straight to my room.



Author's Response:

He can't.....he's already locked in mine and I ain't given up the key.

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 8

Ooh the thought of Lucius in a loin cloth....Mmmm



Author's Response:

Mmmmmmm. yes.

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 7

The bloke should come with a warning

 

CAUTION! CLOSE PROXIMITY WILL CAUSE DAMP KNICKER SYNDROME WITH OTHER POSSIBLE SIDE AFFECTS SUCH AS WEAK KNEES, LOSS OF SPEECH, DRY MOUTH/EXCESSIVE DROOLING AND LOSS OF INHIBITIONS.



Author's Response:

Yes....he should.

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh, I can't wait to read the rest of this story.  I don't usually like Ginny, but this is a good story.  And we get SS/HG too.  Nice!

Keep writing - it's good stuff.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  So glad you like it.....oh you definately get quite a bit HG and SS!!!

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 6

a talented linguist, it makes you wonder at how good his other oral skills are ;D



Author's Response:

Exceptional, his tongue gets a lot of practice. LOL.

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

With every reading it just gets better. Xx



Author's Response:

Stop it, you're making me blush.....(not really, don't stop, I love reviews!! but they do always make me blush.)

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 2

What can I say? You know that I love this story. Xx

Reviewer: herroyalgoddess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm going to enjoy reading this again, it's one of my favourites Xx



Author's Response:

LOL...I'm kinda having re reading the chapters as I post them too!!!

Reviewer: janedoh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

I followed you over from fanfiction.net after finding Snape's Story there. I am using this opportunity to read some of your other stories as you post them. I am enjoying this one, though GW/LM is not a pairing I usually read. Thanks for leaving us a breadcrumb trail to find you, and I look forward to reading more of your work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review and for following me.  How'd you like that breadcrumb???  I hope more people are able to find it and know what it means. Spread the word if you can.  LOL.  I am slowly but surely reposting all my stories, here and on AFF, but it's a slooooowwww process.  I lost ALL of my final edits on Snape's Story, so I am going to have to edit all the chapters again before I post them and I just haven't had a chance to yet.  But don't worry..it WILL happen, hopefully before the end of June.   I'm just not looking forward to doing a re edit and Im still pretty upset that I even have to.

Don't forget THIS story also includes a SS/HG pairing and they get quite a bit of "smut" time.

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