Date: 08 Jun 2013 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 24
Nice place to leave it, I guess. I'm sure Bella will say yes to Edward's proposal and they'll marry before she starts her masters program. I see them having a very happy life together for many, many years. You just had a special touch with this story and it was one of the best I've ever read, thank you !
Date: 08 Jun 2013 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm so glad they got all that out in the open , talked about his misgivings and her certainties. Had a feeling his background had some sadness in it. It was so touching when he told her he's never had a happy day in that house until she arrived!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yes, Mr. Cullen is definitely a tease, so it's a good thing Bella can hold her own with him. They both seem to enjoy each other's wit and sense of humor. Now if she could divine if her feelings for him are reciprocated, all would be well.
Date: 07 Jun 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
I kind of wondered if Bella might not be a vegetaian, as you never wrote her eating some of the delicious meats she prepared for her boss. He really is a sweetie, buying that bicycle for her to use. No wonder she hugged him in thanks! Interesting that he hugged back!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
So far so good. Bella really made points with that rhubarb pie, how nice that it was her dad's favorite, and her employer's! By the way, your meal descriptions are making me hungry, think I'll go make lunch! The uniform deal was surprising, in a way.
Date: 07 Jun 2013 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
That went pretty well for the first day of work. He doesn't seem too bad of an employer, so far! Since he really liked his dinner, that's a good sign, as well as the offer to lend books. The little misstep about staying in the kitchen seemed to be no big problem.
Date: 05 May 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 25
Such a cute story. My favorite part of fanfic stories is the time from boy-meets-girl to the time when they realize/admit they have feelings beyond friendship. You wrote it so well...the slow build-up between these two. Then you did a great job with the unleashing of their passion. The title was perfect. I like the way you finished it.
However, I could also enjoy a sequel, if you get the urge one day to revisit these two. Thanks for writing.
Date: 29 Jul 2012 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for this delicious story. The UST was off the charts (my kind of slow burn, indeed); Edward was just the right combination of mysterious, dominating and possessive (without crossing into creepy or pathological); Alice was lively, not crazed; and Bella managed to be sweet but not sacharine, smart and indepedent without being jaded. You write so well that I never found myself wishing there were more characters or environments introduced. You have my sincere gratitude for not creating some ridiculous, melodramatic calamity from left field that they must overcome; instead, you trusted your characters' internal conflicts to be enough... yet another sign of a superior author. So again, thank you very much for one of the best reads I've enjoyed in quite some time. And if I ever get to enjoy meals similar to dinnertime chez Cullen, I will never complain about slaving away at a hot stove again.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 25
I can't put into words how much I enjoyed reading this wonderful story! I was hooked after the first chapter and couldn't stop reading it till I was finished. Will there be a future outake (fingers crossed)? They are such a lovely couple and so in love and age is only a problem if you let it. The old say "Love knows no bound" is so true with this couple. I will truly miss reading this. Thankyou
Date: 01 Jul 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 24
This story really held my attention and I have loved reading it again. Thanks for sharing this wonderful tale which has become one of my favourites ever.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 23
I love your Miss Swan and Mr Cullen so much, I'm going to be reading this over and again so many times !
I'm glad they get to be happy together and no, they don't need more drama in their lives. I wouldn't mind visiting them in a few years time, once Bella has finished college, just to see how they are doing and how she fits working for a living, into her life with Edward and both of their families.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 22
You capture an incredible sensuality in the beginning of the chapter through the medium of food, moreso than I've ever read in any stories even those about the restaurant industry.
I'm eager to see what happens when Bella can't devote her full attention to satisfying her job description. It's easy to "say" but will it be enough?
Date: 25 Jun 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
The dynamic of this relationship still has some strange undertones.... We still don't know what Mr. Cullen really does for a living besides what he's told Bella and I'm sure there will be firworks when his brother realize their relationship.
Could make for an interesting plot line.....
Date: 24 Jun 2012 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
Ok I didn't want to revise till I was done reading all if what you had. Claps all around...lol. I love this one. At first I thought he was a dom but looks like hes not. Even though I think he still might be hiding something. But this is a great story. Please keep posting. Sad how ff.net keeps kicking you guys off. But its our awesome story to read.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
Heartachingly sweet. I so want them to be happy. And our next barbecue WILL have mango !
Great chapter, thanks
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
How do I love thee. I luv your Mr. Cullen like I luv "Popeyes Chicken". heehee. U are offically my fic luva. The fast updates and smokin chaps, will keep me happy. Goodnite Mr. Cullen.
p.s. If bella comes up missin, I swear I wasn't involved. but I'll take her job. lol
Ha! That'd certainly be an unexpected plot twist - a character offed by a reader. Hmm.