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Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 39

ooops

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 38

loved it

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 29

facepalms*

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 28

the entire town is crazy - including the kids!!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 26

here we go

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 24

smmmmooooth bastard!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 21

aaahh - so mystery solved!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 20

oh my - that image is funny!

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 48

OMG I loved this one. I almost fell out of my chair laughing a few times.

Reviewer: tds88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 29

Bahahahaha.

Reviewer: tds88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 27

OMG that's fantastical! It sounds like something my grandma would do.

Reviewer: tds88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 21

Hmmm, never the background story that I thought she had.

Reviewer: JessJess76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 27

Let me start off by saying your story has made my day. This chapter did me in, so much so that I almost spewed my Dr. Pepper all over my computer. I can't wait to go read the rest. Sex advice from the elderly did me in. Thanks for that laugh.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 18

loved it

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 17

smooth bastard indeed, sigh

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 16

more!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 15

yes!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 14

serious Edward? hmm

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 48

Loved it!!!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 13

Now that's a back story that I'd like to hear

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 12

they sound adorable

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

loved this summery of the womenfolk

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 9

cute kids - whose are they

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 8

she's got it so baaaad

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 7

um - quite a way with words the TER - I may be drooling a little.... just saying...

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 6

this is priceless

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 5

oops

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 4

Esme sounds awesome

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 3

oooh I would love to read this in 'full length form'. I'm so greedy!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

I don't know how I missed this, but yay for me!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 48

Horney, I'll say! They have enough to film a remake of the Brady Bunch. One more (including parents) and they'd have a baseball team. Lol
Very endearing story. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 47

Chuckling, At least he can admit his stupidity.

Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 48

I loved it!  I would have killed Edwardfor throwing away my birth control pills.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 46

Awe, happy little family.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 45

Skinny dipping, WooHoo!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 44

It's a second wedding for both. Simple and family only is perfect.
No honeymoon, Bella's being ridiculous. The pool is a nice touch though.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 43

Yea, she caved!
Alice is going to pout.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 42

Home birth. Bella's lucky she had competent medical attention.
Laughed at Edward getting soaked by his new born son.
Name?
Carlisle can't help he's the delivering doctor and grandfather to the little guy.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 41

I guess someone felt the need to make him pay for his transgressions. Lol
Will Bella change her mind about marriage?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 40

Once and done....fertile myrtle!
Hope Aiden gets his brother.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 39

Yeah, wondered when reality would set in.
Now the baby watch is really on!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 38

What no ribbed ticklers for protection? Hehe.
Ten years, wow. No wonder she had a tough time resisting his advances.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 37

Boudoir banter.....these two crack me up!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 36

His brain is short curcuiting. Lol.
Mr. Winkey and Ms. Veronica.....LMAO!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 35

Why would Edward try to put the breaks on?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 34

Smart little whipper-snapper isn't she.
Poor Bella finally got a taste and had to give it up to corral her youngins.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 33

She knocked herself silly when she tripped.
Saved by the bell, or unfortunately interrupted?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 32

That's right, make him work for it.
The chase has intensified.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 31

Such aggressive behavior Bella. At least it gave her a opportunity to touch him!
Baby watch, Haha.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 30

Poor Edward. What a scare. Kids gave no idea how wacked out parents can become when they take off on their own.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 29

What is with these old ladies and their sexual appetite? Lol.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 28

Did some one encourage the kids to broach the subject of combining their families? Was it Emmett, trying to get back at Edward?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 27

Even I would have freaked out after being accosted by little old ladies, strangers non the less, tring to inform me of ways to improve my sex life on a non-first date with the towns most eligible male. Edward should be attempting to remedy this. Not cowering in fear.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 26

The vultures are making their move to feed off all the gossip.
It's funny how men have a false sense of how good their grilling expertise is.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 25

Edward just offered up Emmett to Rose on a silver platter. Family is great.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 24

They are messing with her head!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 23

Did Emmett want her to puke all over him, lol?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 22

Why would Bella need protecting?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 21

Bella has a rather interesting past.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 20

Cackeling.....Alice Cooper!
Soooooo funny!
Little Caitlyn waving beauty products in the air, playing hide and seek. Great visual.
Wow, small town life.
I hope Bella realizes that she will now become the target of all the women of said small community.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 19

Chuckling, I adore this bold Bella.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 18

That was awesome! Great banter between Alice and Bella.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 17

Wonder if the kids caught any of this interaction. If so, mom will get a razing for sure. Lol.
He is smooth.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh my, kissing his ass gas so many connotations!
You will have to sing, Bella?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 15

I knew she was fighting the pull of his charms but how could she not see his intent was in earnest.
Family night at the bar. Sounds interesting.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 14

I think Edward's outward appearances are a mask for the hurt he has experienced, but Bella has not put two and two together.
Maybe he will show her his mature side now that he understands her hesitation to let him in.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wow, six weeks of brushing him off. Now that's will power; or maybe just stupidity!
Cobwebs, lol!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 12

Perceptive children aren't they. Haha

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 11

How old is Edward?
Bella is hilarious in her reporting of how Edward is perceived by the female populous of this tiny community.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great chapter.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 15

Great chapter.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 14

Uh oh....

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 13

Great update.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 12

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 11

Great chapter.

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 20

This story is hysterical.  Love it.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 6

Haha. Great update.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 5

Great update.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 4

Great chapter.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

Are these two brainyacs twins?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 9

Sounds like Aiden is more than a handful.
Why is Bella on her own?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 8

She is so screwed, and not in the physical sense. Bummer for her!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 7

Beautiful imagery!
Bella sounds like a gonner!
Now Edward's turn to gush.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 6

Love it, BB gun wound in the ass!
Isabella appears to have the backing of the Cullen women so far.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 5

This sounds like a great way to meet the newest member of a small town community.
They are both still arguing, how bad can it be?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 4

This seems to be told from Esme's POV. interesting.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 3

Here comes the family.
Chatter boxes like the rest.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 2

Ah, a little background on Edward through the eyes of nosey neighbors and his loving mother.

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