Date: 20 Aug 2017 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both
Loved it! Hope you continue to write!
Date: 23 Aug 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both
That was awesome! Just what I was looking for. I've met Jackson at a 100 Monkeys concert. He is even more sexy in person. And perfect to imagine doing all of this with :)
Date: 13 Aug 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both
OMFG!!!!! Can we say H-O-T!!!!!
Date: 10 Aug 2010 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both
mmm...all i'm sayin
Date: 18 Jul 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposal
Lol, I have a couple Jasper stories you might be interested in. That's pretty mcuh all I write now.
Author's Response:
Oooh, Hale yeah!! Are they posted on here or somewhere else? You can email me the link(s) if you want -- twilightmom2009@yahoo.com. I'd love to read them!!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both
-sigh- Jackson... Yummy, naked Jackson... -sigh-
Author's Response:
I know, right?!?! How much better can you get than that? I'm sorry if I offend any person on Team Edward/Kellan/Jacob/whoever, but I am Team Jasper all the way to the end. That's the main reason I wrote this story. I couldn't find any fan-fic out there that satisfied my Jasper craving, so I took matters into my own hands. I am assuming you enjoyed, so I thank you so much!!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 4 - In the Shower
Mmmm, Jackson. -sigh-
Date: 20 May 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both
That could not have been any hotter! WOW! You really know how to write an erotic scene. I'm impressed.
Author's Response:
I am so glad you liked it!! This was the first sexual story that I've ever written and I am glad that I have gotten so much positive feedback on it. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both
Fanfuckingtastic Missy. I think I am in need of a towel and definitely a new pair of panties. H-O-T.
Loved this line as it gave me a little giggle given the context: "I can feel Jasper poking me in the back..."
Author's Response:
Do you know how many pairs of panties I went through writing this? OMG, I had to write this at night after my husband and kids were asleep because of the naughtiness it contains.
As for that special line, I had to throw it in there like that because for some reason, I could just hear it coming out of Bella's mouth. Couldn't you?
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - In the Shower
Yum-oh! I love the little bit of pre-sexing girl on girl loving we get here. But nobody got an O. How sad. I hope they make up for it in the bedroom.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Hanging with Jacob
Mmm... Jacob without a shirt.... I'll be over here for a little while thinking about that.
Good job with this chapter. Made me smile.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Making Her Decision
It was a good reprieve between smut. You know, we need some plot sometimes.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposal
I love this line: "Kiss me...down there," I whispered. hehehe. So cute. I also like how unbelievably non-canon your Edward is. I doubt the series version would be anything close to this understanding. Talk about jealous,
Date: 15 Feb 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both
Very nice plot ! Great lemons, it's too bad the story is over...
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you so much!!! And who says it's over? I might write a sequel!!
Date: 14 Feb 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposal
Great beginning !
Date: 14 Feb 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both
Yeah I am sooooo FREAKIN' JEALOUS!! LOL Great little story!! Too bad Edward didn't join in! LOL ;o}
Author's Response:
Have you ever been to the site twilighted.net? I tried to get them to use this story, but they thought that it was a little too far out of character. However, one of the betas suggested that I include Edward. I've been thinking about adding him in there. Would it be a good idea? Maybe One Night with Bella 2.0?
Date: 12 Feb 2010 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both
really really hot jasper..... like your story by the way ;-)
Date: 11 Feb 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both
Hot hot hot. Lucky Bella!
Date: 05 Feb 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both
yummy. Jasper is so hawt
Date: 04 Feb 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both
Jackson is pretty damn hot just as that chapter was! I am glad I found your story!!!
Date: 04 Feb 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 4 - In the Shower
Yummy yummy yummy!!!!!!!!!!! Need I say more?
Date: 04 Feb 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposal
This is definitely interesting! I have to read more
Author's Response:
Go ahead, all the chapters are posted. It gets better!!
Date: 28 Jan 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 4 - In the Shower
hmmmm yummy so far. I'm so team Japser myself.
Author's Response:
Ah, Team Jasper. The things I could do to that vamp. Mmm...
Date: 28 Jan 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposal
not bad. I was just thinking that this was a post vamp thing. Just in my mind. Not a bad thing at all.
Date: 28 Jan 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Hanging with Jacob
hmmm cant wait for next chapter
Date: 28 Jan 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposal
hmmm before the wedding and her still human..... not what i was expecting
Author's Response:
Is that bad? When I decided to write this, I really wasn't thinking about any of that. I just started writing.
Date: 27 Jan 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposal
UM...WOW. I LOVE IT!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! You are my first review on this story!! Yay! I just want to let you know that it's a short story. I am writing another one, a little more drama than good old-fashioned smut, and I'll get it on here soon. Well, posting the 2nd chapter right now. Have a great day!
Amy.