Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 17
Your story was surely different and a lot of fun to read! A most unusual condition you visited on Bella, by the way! I'm off to read the outtakes now!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm so glad the newborns and their maker are no longer a problem, that has to be a relief to the family. The amazing thing was Demetri and Leah! Who knew a Volturi guard and a female wolf would imprint? It didn't hurt my feelings when Felix killed Alec and Jane was demolished, either!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
Good thing vampires heal from horrendous injuries like Bella's! Also a good thing Masen is a tracker, so he could help rescue Aunty Alice. Loved hoe Jasper ripped off the head of that vamp that tried to steal Alice. It was great to see the wolves help out in the reacue, too. Now they all need to find that red-haired witch and kill her!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
Bella is doing really well, being around her dad. The whole family is prepared to accomodate her "condition", especially Edward. Those nomads are going to be a problem, I can tell.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, that was quite a resolution to the whole treaty deal! Charlie knows about his grandson and Bella being a vampire and the wolvws have to look out for the family! Talk about poetic justice!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
That's my girl! Bella wakes up hungry for Edward before she's hungry for blood! That was a different gift for Masen to have, tracker instead of shield or mind-reader like his parents. It's good that everyone is healed and in good health again. It was a close thing for a while. Jacob damn well ought to be guilty over what he did!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
It figures, Carlisle being the peace-maker that he is. There definitely should be some severe punishment for what Jacob did to everyone, including the child.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
Several things come to mind. Tanya being the one to help Edward and not being slutty about it was a nice sueprise. The baby being saved by Kate's shocking it was cool, and it being a sonwas great. Now, if Carlisle was in time to save Bella, then all we have to worry about is finding Jacob and killing him! The dumb bastard almost killed the girl he supposedly loved and broke the treaty to boot!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
That sneaky little Alice! Whatever she has to do , I guess!
Date: 08 Mar 2014 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
One puzzling thing was why Alice would spirit Bella away until the baby is born? Does she plan to handle all this by herself, with no assistance from Carlisle, or Edward? Curious, curious!
Date: 08 Mar 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
The way Bella kept pushing Edward's boundaries, these dreams are probably close to what she may have wanted!
Date: 08 Mar 2014 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
More interaction in real life seems to mean more in her dreams, too!
Date: 08 Mar 2014 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
You did okay as far as I can tell, not being any better at imagining than the next one! Bella sure has been having amazing dreams!
Date: 08 Mar 2014 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
Who's to say that Bella didn't have similar dreams of Edward? Just looking at him might bring those very things to mind!
Date: 08 Mar 2014 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
See? Practice makes perfect! You keep writing these dreams and pretty soon your face won't be red anymore!
Date: 08 Mar 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
So, all this a dream , or a series of dreams, correct? The girl has a vivid imagination, I'll give her that!
Date: 30 Jan 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 17
Who wants a cure anyway?
Date: 30 Jan 2011 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 16
OK that was an unexpected twist.
Date: 30 Jan 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
Is there a cure for Bella? Hope not.
Date: 30 Jan 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
I must admit I liked that Jacob imprinted on their daughter. I miss that.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
That's all that is ever on her mind, not that I blame her.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 10
This is moving so fast.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
Tanya? I find it hard to believe he isn't insisting they get married right away.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
So he let's her think she's dreaming? Wow
Author's Response:
Thnaks for reading and reviewing! as for what he thinks read dreaming of edward outtakes. it fills in the gaps. Thanks again!
Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
Could her dreams be any more vivid?
Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
He's been in her room every night. He has to hear more than his name.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hope this goes beyond his no sex rule. Talk a bout frustration.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
And a change of underwear.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
Dreams can be so much fun.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love dreams like this!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
this was great I could not stop reading forgive not reviewing each chapter but this was great thank you for sharing....
Kasi~
Date: 20 Jan 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
awesome ending got mixed feelins on this glads its over for now you can spend all your free time writing my favorite story be my sub but i will miss this story what a ride
Author's Response:
Thank you for following it to the end. It had its time to run, but now they need a happily ever after. there are still the outtakes to finish up. but they to will end soon. they are currently up to chapter 13 of this story so it's not far away. Be my sub is still my favorite to write. I am so happy you like it too! Nails233
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2011 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
So hot! wow!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2011 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
I loved it a very good wrap up .Iloved it and I really love your other stories as well can't wait to read anything else you come up with lol xo
Date: 07 Jan 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
It is really really good, as Ive said I love the smut. I am a true smut girl.. I love it and charlie was so awesome.. I love the fact that edward propose doing the actually act.. Meli
Date: 02 Dec 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
this is such a great take on the story with some really unique and fun twists! I think you should absolutely come back and finish the story...I see it has been awhile since you posted. I loved the Singer Connection and the other singer story and know you can do justice to the finish of this one too! Thanks for sharing your talent!
Author's Response:
It's funny you reviewed, i am going over the entire story tonight fixing my errors and getting it ready for its finish. I don't leave anything unfinished, I hate when writers do that to me. and i still have to finish edward's outtakes which is on my profile of what he and the others went through during these moments. it will round off the story in its entirety. Thank you so much for reading my work and i hope you continue to enjoy it. Nails233
Date: 26 Sep 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
wow a lot of convenient things happened. Hot how Edward had to take her in the middle of a game lol..I almost forgot about her condition.
Date: 19 Sep 2010 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
now that was unexpected good chapter
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 16
omfg!! cant believe u just did that with leah and demetri!! rofl!!
btw: too bad its the end :'(
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've just started reading this story and I am so glad that I did
Date: 19 Aug 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 15
wow that a ride of a chapter so good
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thank you!
Date: 17 Aug 2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for the update- I love your writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! More to come soon.
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
no this can't be almost over sad panda i love this story its so good but i will be on the look out for your new story
Author's Response:
Its called Be My Sub. I hope you do check it out. Thanks for Reading and Reviewing!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
Baby Masen was such a helpful little one.
Author's Response:
Yes, he was, but I dont think he is done yet. They still have that pesky Victoria to take care of. Thanks for giving it a shot!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm really liking this story & can't wait to read more! Thanks so much for the great writing! :)
Author's Response:
Sorry it took so long to review. I was on vacation with no wifi! I am so happy you are enjoying it! Thank for reading it.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
i want to get to know masen! (screams) how does his power work. whats he like as a baby? i want more bonding time with masen and when are you going to update again?
Date: 08 Jul 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
Well done! I like your take on our favorite characters!
Definitely looking forward to what comes next!
Author's Response:
Thank you for giving it a chance. i got the idea from twilights deleted dream scene. When someone asked me to continue i couldn't say no.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 14
glad you updated really enjoy this story its so good great chapter can't wait for more
Author's Response:
thank you for reading it. the next chapter wont take so long!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
So Edward was real? Pity that Bella slept thru all that action!
Author's Response:
yeah i know if it was me i'd remember!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hmmmm...are the dreams really happening? I love the demanding Edward!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
I think Edward is on to all these dreams!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
She has got to be worn out from all this activity in her dreams! I want an Edward in my dreams!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love her vivid dreams!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
love the first chapter! I am not sure is everything is a dream, or if some stuff is real, but it's a great story!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
i loved it i can't wait to see what happens next with the nomads and the rest of the story love it
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading it!
Date: 11 Jun 2010 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
glad you did that was good great chapter
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! thank you for all your reviews! more to come really soon.
Date: 10 Jun 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
aww. I dont believe she'll sex someone else up though as she cant control it at all. I think she is just like that with Edward right? lol
nice update
Author's Response:
I think we can all agree Bella should only lose it with Edward! thanks for all your reveiws!
Date: 10 Jun 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
phew.. hot..
Date: 12 May 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
that first i do agree with Edward gettin reveng is nets the answer second hot hot lemon love forest vampire sex update quickly
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
loved it i hope bella rips jake a new ass for hurting her and her family
Date: 13 Apr 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
awww nice. scary at 1st but lets see how Bella turns out.
Date: 13 Apr 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 9
I wonder who it is..
Date: 07 Apr 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wtf who is it i hate cliffys great chapter
Author's Response:
yeah sorry about that got a little carried away and ended up writting 3 chapters for this story in one day. my beta already has the next one and i will hopefully have it tomorrow or tonite if shes really fast! i hope you like an intence story because when the idea hit me i hit the laptop! thanks for reading! michele
if you want a hint: no story would be complete without this character!
Date: 26 Mar 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
That was great is that a real thing cause damn
Author's Response:
yes it is! i goggled sexsomnia and its real, and it just fit perfectly!
Date: 26 Mar 2010 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
Finally some plot great chapter
Author's Response:
sorry had to build it up before the story got going
Date: 26 Mar 2010 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
U think she figure it out by now
Date: 26 Mar 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
Good as always is there going to be some kinda of plot soon other than hawt dream sex
Date: 26 Mar 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow wish these were my dreams
Date: 26 Mar 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
Damn thats some hawt dreams
Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
More i demand more of this story great
Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hawt as always good chapter
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
loved it very good
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
that was to short got to be longer
Author's Response:
yes i agree the next chapters will get longer as the story goes on, in the begining she still doesn't know anything but she gets it in ch 5 which starts the night of the port angeles events! so there will be more to write into it. it was hard in the begining since they weren't talking and she had no clue to what he is.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hawt hawt great chapter